Finals: JTR vs One Way
DO OR DIE ____________________ Battles set Monday Verses Due Friday Midnight (ET) Voting closed Sunday Midnight (ET) Line Limit- Min 10 lines, Max 20 lines _____________________ |
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20 lines... open wide :)
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I don't care, I havn't started yet.
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Y'all musta thought I was joking when I said I was winning this. Time to make you take me serious.
You need to learn how to rap, study is better Your verses are a Clump of lard... like the nutty proffesor Plus ya girls pussy had sooooooooo much hair and stank lethal When I took off her thong I got scared & ran from the fuzz like black people No racist! I'm a great Chef, rapping with a spatula and making you play dead Cuz it's over easy to cook this guy when I crack his egg head Familly jewels? You aint never had a bitch play with yo treasure Cuz no girl wants to FM like they enjoy AM radio better Wack rapper, you couldn't handle the ripper A fan of your raps? Hahahaha, we'd rather be a fan of the Clipper's Damage the critics, you don't kiss a crotch or get a muff in ya mouth If you ever tried to give a girl a locust you'd just end up buggin her out That means his girl is unsatisfied, jack deprived of flawless eatin An she's never been gladheateher like Romans fighting in the Coliseum I got the best writtens, fans love me cuz my text rippin When it comes to One Way? I didn't know it was possible to be liked less than Meg Griffin Your head splittin, no chicks would get with him and my flow's better Fuckin virgin, I can tell that unisexe like hair dressers that style both genders Lemme get scientific, this pedophile travels coast to coast In hopes he can catch a buoyancy his privates cuz that's what floats his boat I always had this. |
When Jack gets women they seem to all resemble Pewee Herman
Don’t matter, his dick is so small he has sex but remains a virgin He’s a spineless herb, I don’t take him as someone that can hurt me I wouldn’t expect to see J son unless it was around Friday the 13th It makes me laugh how this fuck is still gloating like he’s dope Even I know we’re only here because this tourney was a joke Call me a ninja, cause I’m bred to kill samurais if you ask me Last time you were in reach of the belt, your got your ass beat You’re a homo in hip hop dude, so really you aint stressing me There’s only one thing harmful about you, and that’s your std’s Well it’s going to be a wake up can when he fails to drift by me But how dope can he possibly be to advertise a battle with fly-E Growing up for Jack meant coming out of the closet, as a gay Jack in a box?…..something you don’t see too much now adays His trash talk is irrelevant, cause he aint been swift from the start He’s a bit rough around the edges, even more so after I rip him apart He’s a scam with weak lines, it takes him days to prepare such The last time he went off the top, was his forced army haircut This kid trying to sound smart only leads to Hysterical laughing He’s such a stupid bitch ………… he could give speeches for miss America pageants |
You need to learn how to rap, study is better
Your verses are a Clump of lard... like the nutty proffesor nah son, this was gay. too simple and really not a good concept to work with. poor opener. Plus ya girls pussy had sooooooooo much hair and stank lethal When I took off her thong I got scared & ran from the fuzz like black people No racist! ran from the fuzz like black people... i've seen that type of concept flipped way better. this was too predictable. I'm a great Chef, rapping with a spatula and making you play dead Cuz it's over easy to cook this guy when I crack his egg head the wordplay was average, execution was ehhhh Familly jewels? You aint never had a bitch play with yo treasure Cuz no girl wants to FM like they enjoy AM radio better ehh, this was just weaksauce Wack rapper, you couldn't handle the ripper A fan of your raps? Hahahaha, we'd rather be a fan of the Clipper's its too, iunno.. weak, lol. it lacks any kind of creativity and just comes across as ass Damage the critics, you don't kiss a crotch or get a muff in ya mouth If you ever tried to give a girl a locust you'd just end up buggin her out wordplay was aight, punch ok That means his girl is unsatisfied, jack deprived of flawless eatin An she's never been gladheateher like Romans fighting in the Coliseum nah son.. i flipped the gladiator wordplay like 5 years ago and it sucked back then, it still sucks now.. its waayyy too forced. I got the best writtens, fans love me cuz my text rippin When it comes to One Way? I didn't know it was possible to be liked less than Meg Griffin i don't like it, you had the setup.. but the execution of the punchline was just overly simplistic cheese Your head splittin, no chicks would get with him and my flow's better Fuckin virgin, I can tell that unisexe like hair dressers that style both genders the wordplay is too forced, the punch was ok.. but if you would've executed it in a way so as not to forced the wordplay it wud've been savage Lemme get scientific, this pedophile travels coast to coast In hopes he can catch a buoyancy his privates cuz that's what floats his boat rofl, good closer. what the hell. josh just DID NOT turn up for this battle. you started with some really weak ass shit. honestly, I'd say this verse just wreaks of a no-show 5 minute keystyle. there was a severe lack of any real creativity. that typical josh humor was missing and the execution of punches in general was simply lackluster. its like you didn't care or something. i don't get it. you talked like you was gonna stomp the comp in this, then you got to the final and drop straight ass. you had nothing in my eyes until the locust shit, then after that you fell off again. then you finished with a solid closer. its like the closer was nice and if the rest of your verse matched that for quality you probably would be the guaranteed winner. =============================================== When Jack gets women they seem to all resemble Pewee Herman Don’t matter, his dick is so small he has sex but remains a virgin i get where you were going, it didn't come off for me though. He’s a spineless herb, I don’t take him as someone that can hurt me I wouldn’t expect to see J son unless it was around Friday the 13th I actually liked this. the flips on his name have come fast and heavy and this one just seems fresh to me. i don't recall ever seeing it, but I have the feeling it has been done on him. its fresh in my eyes, so cool shit. It makes me laugh how this fuck is still gloating like he’s dope Even I know we’re only here because this tourney was a joke too simple. relevance was good. but you killed the effect of the punch with poor wording. Call me a ninja, cause I’m bred to kill samurais if you ask me Last time you were in reach of the belt, your got your ass beat lol, its funny because its true You’re a homo in hip hop dude, so really you aint stressing me There’s only one thing harmful about you, and that’s your std’s nah, this was garbo and I think you know it Well it’s going to be a wake up can when he fails to drift by me But how dope can he possibly be to advertise a battle with fly-E it was a good attempt, but didn't come off for me Growing up for Jack meant coming out of the closet, as a gay Jack in a box?…..something you don’t see too much now adays hell no, this is MEGA PLAYED His trash talk is irrelevant, cause he aint been swift from the start He’s a bit rough around the edges, even more so after I rip him apart nah, I don't like this types of punches He’s a scam with weak lines, it takes him days to prepare such The last time he went off the top, was his forced army haircut its kinda ok, doesn't really strike me as a banger but it has potential This kid trying to sound smart only leads to Hysterical laughing He’s such a stupid bitch ………… he could give speeches for miss America pageants nah, weak ass closer well its hard to know if one way came with the good shit here because he dropped after josh and lets face it, josh's verse was just poor in every sense of the word. I thought you had a bit more of a personal vibe to your verse and you tried to be a bit more creative and in a couple of punches it came off. overall your consistency let you down. your verse had a few ups and downs. still though, you had a couple of nice hits. the J son flip has a sense that its been done before.. but in the spirit of things, I let it slide because it was fresh to me. you should lose points though for that jack in the box shit, GODDAMN!! the fly-e shit and haircut shit had potential, nothing more. that reach for the belt shit was cool because of the truth behind it. I gotta say that for me you got this because you seemed hungrier for the win. overall, this battle was fucking garbo. too many wack punches for it to be anything special. sorry for the harshness. josh just came with nothing, which is a shame because he could've walked this battle had he really tried. one way brought enough to win and gets it pretty handily for just being the more creative and aggressive of the two. VOTE: ONE WAY |
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oneway, is there a rule that only participants of this tourney can vote? we should just make it that anyone on this site who isnt an herb can vote, and then post the link in lyracist lounge asking for some honest votes.. close it by next monday.. |
word, do it up for sure, if it's a legit vote it shouldn't matter who it comes from, unless it's a bunch of random new peolpe that show up all the sudden to vote, they can fuck themselves.
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^ indeed my friend, read the bold. :)
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i'll vote on this if it dont matter if i was in!thats why its so inactive cuz no one on this site votes on anything hardly.
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lol more people need to stop saying that they will vote, and actually just vote.
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calm down my young friend heres the vote...
You need to learn how to rap, study is better Your verses are a Clump of lard... like the nutty proffesor Plus ya girls pussy had sooooooooo much hair and stank lethal When I took off her thong I got scared & ran from the fuzz like black people No racist! I'm a great Chef, rapping with a spatula and making you play dead Cuz it's over easy to cook this guy when I crack his egg head Familly jewels? You aint never had a bitch play with yo treasure Cuz no girl wants to FM like they enjoy AM radio better Wack rapper, you couldn't handle the ripper A fan of your raps? Hahahaha, we'd rather be a fan of the Clipper's Damage the critics, you don't kiss a crotch or get a muff in ya mouth If you ever tried to give a girl a locust you'd just end up buggin her out That means his girl is unsatisfied, jack deprived of flawless eatin An she's never been gladheateher like Romans fighting in the Coliseum I got the best writtens, fans love me cuz my text rippin When it comes to One Way? I didn't know it was possible to be liked less than Meg Griffin Your head splittin, no chicks would get with him and my flow's better Fuckin virgin, I can tell that unisexe like hair dressers that style both genders Lemme get scientific, this pedophile travels coast to coast In hopes he can catch a buoyancy his privates cuz that's what floats thought you would have come more harder a few good punches, the gladheateher punch was definatly the best in there for me.the only thing that was missing was hard hitting personals which would have made this! vs When Jack gets women they seem to all resemble Pewee Herman Don’t matter, his dick is so small he has sex but remains a virgin He’s a spineless herb, I don’t take him as someone that can hurt me I wouldn’t expect to see J son unless it was around Friday the 13th It makes me laugh how this fuck is still gloating like he’s dope Even I know we’re only here because this tourney was a joke Call me a ninja, cause I’m bred to kill samurais if you ask me Last time you were in reach of the belt, your got your ass beat You’re a homo in hip hop dude, so really you aint stressing me There’s only one thing harmful about you, and that’s your std’s Well it’s going to be a wake up can when he fails to drift by me But how dope can he possibly be to advertise a battle with fly-E Growing up for Jack meant coming out of the closet, as a gay Jack in a box?…..something you don’t see too much now adays His trash talk is irrelevant, cause he aint been swift from the start He’s a bit rough around the edges, even more so after I rip him apart He’s a scam with weak lines, it takes him days to prepare such The last time he went off the top, was his forced army haircut This kid trying to sound smart only leads to Hysterical laughing He’s such a stupid bitch ………… he could give speeches for miss America pageants a good all round verse,but some punches not as hard as they could have been.but this was backed up with some real nice personals.the best ones were the ninja one and the fly e one. to say this was a final it wasnt the best ive seen thought JTR could have come wayyyy harder cuz ive seen him do it before.just lacked a little. v/one way |
ill let it count, but you need to learn how to vote a lot better... that was wack
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better than no vote right? we all dont have that much time like nick to break everything down :rolleyes: |
I know, dont worry bout it man, it is better then no vote. Im just nit picky when it comes to league and tournament votes
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what, you don't have 10-15 minutes to vote on a final? |
well some people dont even have two minutes to vote!
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youve wasted a lot of time freeposting. and you should be able to read 2 verses and vote properly in under 10 mins, you obviously have enough time so you must just be lazy.
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i am going to change it later! just thought i'd get a quick vote down for you! jeez no one on this site is ever happy. :cussing:
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hahaha, no one on earth is happy any more.....word due, I'm thankful for it was ust shooting down your excuses.
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close this and take the win, I stopped caring bout the tourney when I realised civil was bouncing anyways otherwise I woulda put more effort in this, props to you though oneway, nice verse man
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Don't worry, I only voted for one way because he asked me to. :thumbup:
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it's w/e, when I saw you, spul and mimesis all bounce out the tourney I was bout to be like "fuck that..." and leave too cuz of that and cuz there was a lot of no-shows and it didnt seem like a serious tournament anymore, but I just stayed in it hoping for the chance to battle final or boberic cuz they talked a lot of slack when they came to RV.. and then I did get to battle them.. and beat them.. final twice :)
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and ultimately, you forced final into exile... dope shit :)
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he's gonna come back to find out that he lost ANOTHER tournament
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