Redragon vs **~SynText~**
 

Rules:
1.No crew votes
2.No hate votes
3.No d/r votes
4.5-7 bars
5.dont matter who goes first
6.1 round
7.Explain votes
8.No fresh newbie votes
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Keystyle
 

Don't feed.......
Picks up mic
Your gonna get shot;kid your gonna get tossed//
I'll put your eyes in the back of ur head so you can't look FORWARD to this loss/~1~(oh)
You must be a geoligist cos you touching me like feeling da equator//
He's a chronic masterbater...but the only one you make 'breath hard' is Darth Vador/~2~(oh)
Like Hookers not getting paid kid i don't give a fuck//
You winning??But you addmitted you sucked!!!/~3~
Any style like bruce lee;face it b;i'll str8 rip ne mc//
Battling me is like 'not shaving' you won't bare face me/~4~
crack-and-speak get ready for-this-defeet(defeat)//
Kid you must be Sun sensitive cos you cant handel this heat!!/~5~
I “Spit Flames” at “High Temps” Scorch da Brow's and Bars off ya Man,
Cremate u with Hot Line's then take ya Ashes and "Charge ya Fam"/~6~(God)
"Clinical" the way i "Operate" on "Open Hearts" and such,
when ma Biblical Scripture leave ya’ll playin "[b]Harps" at Dusk![b]..../~7~(damn)
Drops mic
Uppin for you
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its over this kid salivates more wackness then porno girls after a hot date....
Final play like shakespear seeing his last theater when Playing Russian Ruollete~/~
Syn gotta be sickness cause this kids lamer then yahoo kids trying to BEAT the Net.....
Desease ya PET syn intellect is spitting on statues like Steven Kawkins Vet~/~
You gotta be kidden to spit writtens its ok cause after the first line they oppose you....
Your scripts ROTTEN on desktop and after 2 months you spit
DEcOMPOSING shIT FOOL~/~
your a true sick kid with sickly split skin from trying to battle syllables with SYN....
hahahahahah you wacker then frate party with no girl with you like (time for masterbation~/~
i leave a battle i get ooohhhhhhh and awwwwwwww crowd in a aAPPLAUSE.....
you leave this batlle real equiped pussy strapped up with TAPE and GAWWWWWSSS


theres ya ten with no fancy shit to try to sway votes hahahahahahahahahahaha
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Alright 0-2 text votes 0-1 poll votes....plz look at the punches i had more and i thought punches won battles.Whatever uppin
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"I'll put your eyes in the back of ur head so you can't look FORWARD to this loss/~1~(oh)"

that was bitten.. not exactly the same line but the same exact concept.

aight this is how i see it...................i see a lot of peeps working on thier verses making sure its good to tha eye(dragon)...........theres no need jus gotta have the hardest punches.....(syntex).....also a flow......(both)

so ma vote goes to=syntex.......punches always gets it for me

hit this up..............cheers its a shit battle tho

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81869

good battle heres my breakdown

wordplay=tie,both had good wordplay, keep it up
vocab=syn, win this one, but both had good vocab, syn just had better usage
creativity=syn,he didn't use played lines, red your shit was tight but some of your lines i have seen before, you flipped'em nice but lost points for not being creative enuff, my opinion
punches=syn=agree with lyrical on this one punches win battles, no need to do anything fancy, that is for newbs, both had nice punches but i think syntex edged you out n punches in this one
flow=syn,again cuz red your lines weren't even and kinda choppy ya know, syn had a basic flow and a good ryhme scheme throughout his entire verse
multis=neither, had multi's its cool though, both kept a safe flow and focused more on punches

favorite line=syn
your a true sick kid with sickly split skin from trying to battle syllables with SYN....
hahahahahah you wacker then frate party with no girl with you like (time for masterbation~/

was really feelin his line, nice punch,not too fancy but got the job done
personals=neither, no personals in this one, both needs to work on personals, they win battles and shows its not prewritten

vote=syntex[b/], nice battle but syn gets my vote, red got skillz just needs to fix a couple of little things to get better
honest vote guys [b]please respect it and dont bitch about it
good luck to both
holla

SINCE YOU PM'D THIS NO ONE IS ALLOWED TO VOTE FOR REDRAGON WHO ALREADY VOTED WHO INCLUDES:
Tonya~Montana
Auspicious
C_Drama

ALSO MASTA C & AB0MINATION GAVE VERY CRAPPY VOTES SO POLL WILL BE 2-0 IN SYNTEXT'S FAVOR

IM RESETTING REDRAGON'S POLL VOTES & CLEARING ALL FREEPOST

-BROOKLYN

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Brooklyn.. Calm Your Shit Down.. Have Sumone
Check My God Damn Pms... Dragon Never Pmed Me..
I've Been Peeping This Kids Shit Since He Started..
Hes Just Underatted And I Haven't Seen Him Battle
In A Long WHile.. So Put My Vote Back In There Damnit

^^^Word...he's just getting votes cause he's mod...and thugwhyte speaks the truth...let the poll back to what it was,i dident know any of those guys that voted for me accept him^^and i diden't Pm him or anything..If you want to leave it that way then do it.If he gets the win outta this,kid you diden't really beat me,cos you got newbie votes

this is how i see it...styles were kinda whack
i don't like the quotes dragon
n i don't like the stretched lines either

dragon's verse tho was ight... kinda personal n hit well
syn here... started off really strong... hittin hard like whoa...kinda
then like afta line 5 or so... it became really whack... like whoa
that aaaaaaawwwwww shit n so on didn't float...
well it was close... but ya i think dragon has got it...
both could improve some n all.

^^Thanks kid,i wasen't trying he isn't on my level....But anyway upping the hell out of this shit 3-2 him.....
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well..I wished I was pm'd..I want to be in some controversy..just kiddin..anyway..I say Reddragon got this this..easily..I liked his punches better,but I think that lil note after some of your lines is kind of gay..talkin about "oh" and "god"..dont do that next time..some of the lines were stretched..but thats ok..I understand what some folks be going thru..they will have a good punchline in their head but it be hard to get it out....

syntext..no hate..but I just wasnt feelin your verse..it could have been better..I never seen any of your other battles..but you need to improve..some lines were really..wack..but..all this typin dont really matter..cause I cant vote:(....I'm just givin my opinion..peace..

can someone hit up the battle in my sig?..thanks..

Alright thanks for the vote.Too bad you can't poll vote though i want to get this battle over with.Uppin for poll votes.....................
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^^Thanks for the vote.......2-2 in the poll votes uppin............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .....
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