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Soul Theory 11-03-03 12:31 AM

Syntax Mastery vs. Mind Theory
 
Read the rules and the schedule.

The sample is posted. Good luck.

Soul Theory 11-03-03 12:45 AM

This should be good . . . in . . .

Syntax Mastery 11-03-03 07:01 AM

checkin in...

i knew you would do this..

cuz of the mackie thing...lmao

Soul Theory 11-03-03 08:48 PM

^Lol, I did the match-ups randomly, it was just a coincidence.


Anyway heres my beat.

"Don't Leave"

www.soundclick.com/akademikbeats

Good Luck.

Syntax Mastery 11-05-03 09:15 PM

LO
http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...?ID=671457&q=Lo



HI
http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...?ID=671457&q=Hi


info on page.

INsanity 11-05-03 10:57 PM

Mind Theory:

DAMN!!!! lovin it soooo much, the vocal cut sounds soooo amazing especially how its pitch shifted higher, sounds like a Kayne beat excellent work all i can say lol, damn i've only listened up to 1:30 lol great work man

Syntax Mastery:

like the cinematics in the intro. lol the way u did this beat and the last weeks beat reminds me of some micheal jackson music video lol. I like the way u made such a mellow sample kinda sound like a serious gangsta beat during the verse. The chorus was live but then again it was straight from the song.

this was a very close battle damn

vote---->Mind Theory damn amazing work. but word this was a clsoe battle big ups to boht of you

DEL the funkee 11-06-03 01:00 AM

theory- this is a very nice beat, its dreamy and surreal... you chopped the sample up nicely, I didnt care much for the hook but i think the rest of the beat more then makes up for it

syntax-nice, like this kid said.. you came hard on a soft sample, i wasnt expecting that...sick ass intro, overall very well rounded...

ima have to go with mind on this..... he just chopped the sample up so well and used different elements nicely, close and good battle

vote: mind theory

AlcaTrakz 11-06-03 03:39 AM

OK my honest opinion, i Talk to both these cats on aim so its a straight vote

Mind:

Your bassline is OVERKILL....its drowning out the song....it sounds not correct with the beat....to me....the chop is lovely...definitely...you chopped the hell outta it...i dont think this snare goes with the feel you was lookin for...

and the thing is...this is EXACTLLY what was expected for this sample...the kaybe west type jumpoff..


Syntax:

HBO intro...grimey.....WOW......rediculous....flipped insane...this is crazy....sounds like some ..wow...i cant explain....

amazing job

overall syn got this..

loved both beats...

Vote : syn

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Phate 11-06-03 09:01 AM

Mind Theory - Sounds beautiful, with the real nice vocal cuts. My only real observation is u should drop/fade the lyrics quiet sooner. i think it be tough for someone to rap over the vocal custs.

SynTax - Ye...intro was nice. Beat was aight, didn't find it as clear but that's prolly cus of the addition of vocals. the flip was nice. bass maybe a bit loud. chorus was tight.

Vote - Mind Theory , the beats were both dope but I felt Theory did more work wit the sample.

on a side note u'r boys r fuckin smooth mc's Syntax.

BLACK FLAME 11-06-03 06:08 PM

nice shit mind theory I must say you flipped the hell out that sample. I wasn't feeling the bassline and that fitlered vocal part tomuch but the shit was ill nevertheless

syntax lol@ hbo intro gangsta shit. I like this beat you flipped the hell out thisshit.chorus is gangsta

Vote= syntax for a more rounded off beat .

Nicejob both of you though

Emerge 11-06-03 07:00 PM

mind-this was definitly hot as hell nice choppin left and right bass line was a lil too much but it was still sweet vocal cuts insane um yup nice beat

syn-wow! how did u get that out of the sample?? nice bassline you flipped this crasy nice roundness to it...but dont spit on ure shit though its annoying:mad:

vote-syn for more original and creative flip of beat

much much props to both

Syntax Mastery 11-06-03 08:40 PM

thats not me...thats Anonimus, dope dude indeed.

MR. LEGEND 11-06-03 11:11 PM

MT: I feelin it yeah you flipped the sample very well. The drums are good.

SM: Fuck you you rapped I can't here the fuckin beat. J/K jackass you used the samp on a hook? Thats really crab man, ok drop, you need some soul man. you just a rhymin phasode.


Vote-mt

Syntax Mastery 11-06-03 11:26 PM

wtf^

wow@your bitter ass....bullshit

you need to learn tthe fucking physics of production... you took away from me cuz i USED THE SAMPLE LIKE WE ARE FUCKING SUPPOSED TO DO!



MR. LEGEND 11-06-03 11:34 PM

nah nah son, he used the samp better than you, you took the easy way out, anybody coulda made a dope ass beat and threw the samp in for a hook. But my mans blended everything in nice. Don't get me wrong pimpin' it was a nice drop, real cinematic and shit. I didn't really under stand the intro, what was he tryin to do look at some broad so he wack off? I mean you reeeeeeally wanted a peek huh.

Syntax Mastery 11-06-03 11:35 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by MR. LEGEND
you need some soul man. you just a rhymin phasode.


thats the part that gets me....thats SO fuckin hater-ish


why the fuck does your vote count again?

Syntax Mastery 11-06-03 11:40 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by MR. LEGEND
nah nah son, he used the samp better than you, you took the easy way out, anybody coulda made a dope ass beat and threw the samp in for a hook. But my mans blended everything in nice. Don't get me wrong pimpin' it was a nice drop, real cinematic and shit. I didn't really under stand the intro, what was he tryin to do look at some broad so he wack off? I mean you reeeeeeally wanted a peek huh.



you dumb shit.....


the sample is playing throughout the entire song...NOT JUST THE HOOK...
I completly changed the sound of it...use your ears...

you see man...thats what THE FUCK i mean....

if you don't follow the horse off the cliff your the outkast... GAYNESS...

MR. LEGEND 11-07-03 11:26 AM

Quote:
Originally posted by Syntax Mastery


thats the part that gets me....thats SO fuckin hater-ish


why the fuck does your vote count again?


Fuck you punk, you can't take a little critisism?
Ok I can see, you put a lot of time in it, and you thought it was the hottest shit right, but then Im sayin that son won. That shit happends man, ask anybody on this muh'fucka, I am anti hater. Your rhyme sounds like spoken word over the beat with no emotion, or regard for the beat. You got to ride the beat, feel that shit and blend that shit so it fits perfect. So many cats on here comprimise that to come up with a catchy punch or wordplay, and forget about the beat.

I ain't hatin son, don't ever accuse me of hatin I'ma tell it like it is always.

Shit I even voted for phate, who you guys say beat me last round! With that slow offbeat crap he put out. Ok I took the L , and came back, I didn't cry.

You reversed mixed up, and beat the sample up so much that I couldn't even tell it was the sample. Good Idea, bad break...

Soul Theory 11-07-03 02:32 PM

Legend, thanks for the props, but please explain your vote more clearly. If not I won't count it.

MR. LEGEND 11-07-03 05:16 PM

I voted on everything else why do I have a problem here?

There isn't any basic rules or names or categories to really judge. You guys are not new to this, so your sounds are both nice.

When MT's shit came on it sounded good and I was like yeah he did that shit. He incorporated the sample and made a hip-hop track FROM the sample. It was tyte rollin' it it just sounded good dog. BETTER THAN SM!
When SM shit came on I was like WOW! it's some shit finna come on now, then it went blank, then this dude is talkin about "one more look baby". I'm like wtf? Is he a peeping tom whackin off or somethin? nevermind, the beat dropped and I'm not recognizing any trace of the sample AND he's RAPPING OVER THE BEAT (Somethin I got stung for last round). Then comes the chorus and the sample is finally evident, and I'm thinkin what a cheap way to go.

there.... I don't care, I don't even know why son would even think I was hatin'. He didn't even vote in my last battle...

anonimus 11-07-03 05:22 PM

uhhh mr legend...if you would have saw the name of the track you would realize it was a stalker...and the story was from the perception of the stalker...

and I was saying "just one look...thats all we will need" meaning a connection...it was a topic bruh...

and I think I rode the beat quite nicely...even tho it was something I wanted to do over but time constraints with the deadline kept me from doing it...it was a spur of the moment type of thing syn asked me to do...

it was monotone because I was trying to show sincerity in the words...with the undertone of madness in the low pitch voices...

and honestly, after listening to what YOU sound like...its obvious why you wouldnt like my shit...but, before you tell someone they dont ride a beat right...you might wanna check your own shit and make sure its on par...for real man...

critics man...

Syntax Mastery 11-07-03 06:55 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by MR. LEGEND

Your rhyme sounds like spoken word over the beat with no emotion, or regard for the beat. You got to ride the beat, feel that shit and blend that shit so it fits perfect. So many cats on here comprimise that to come up with a catchy punch or wordplay, and forget about the beat.

..



first off...thats not me spittin....

i would ruin your life within 8 bars



secondly... i did vote on your last battle. I think you came horridly wack over a mediocre beat, that was mixed ugly. which is why i said i didnt like it... not because you rapped over it PERIOD.... your voting against me cuz 1. you want me to put the sample out in front of your face so your little brain can hear it... 2. i got someone to spit over my shit, and im not gettin "stung" like your wack display of high pitched fecal matter.... which = you having a extra lil bit of hate towards me cuz i can get props for doin somethin you got shat on for....

its not my fault either that you have no clue how to absorb imagery and storys in a song.... "wahts this dude talkin about? man, whats he jerkin off?".... if you didnt capture the meaning of the track... you were'nt meant to..

BLACK FLAME 11-08-03 12:44 PM

Syntax vs Mr.legend!!!!!

BLACK FLAME 11-08-03 12:47 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by anonimus
uhhh mr legend...if you would have saw the name of the track you would realize it was a stalker...and the story was from the perception of the stalker...

and I was saying "just one look...thats all we will need" meaning a connection...it was a topic bruh...

and I think I rode the beat quite nicely...even tho it was something I wanted to do over but time constraints with the deadline kept me from doing it...it was a spur of the moment type of thing syn asked me to do...

it was monotone because I was trying to show sincerity in the words...with the undertone of madness in the low pitch voices...

and honestly, after listening to what YOU sound like...its obvious why you wouldnt like my shit...but, before you tell someone they dont ride a beat right...you might wanna check your own shit and make sure its on par...for real man...

critics man...



Man you KNOW you came correctly You Shouldn't take critcism to the heart. LOL Why are you even explaining anything?

Syntax Mastery 11-08-03 01:06 PM

^cuz he rushed and came half ass in his eyes... this IS half ass anon shit... but its still illness

Soul Theory 11-08-03 03:18 PM

I appreciate the props Legend, but I can't count your vote. It's too controversial.


LMAO . . . tie . . . again . . .


Syn (2-0)

MT (2-0)



Good battle syn.


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