C.a.l.i-cold Outside Feat Triple N!!
 

YUP REAL NICE HIP HOP DEEP TRACK HERE FOR YALL TO PEEP TRIP ON THE HOOK ANNO DOMINI ON THE HOOK THIS WILL BE ON THE A.I MIXTAPE VOLUME 2 LEAVE FEED hit the soundclick;)...........
MODS--i left feed on lethalgks track called hit em up and carsonjets track called diamond cut

posting while listening

intro-dope as fuck!

1st verse
flow and emotion are dope.good fucking verse.

hook is nice, sounds a bit like rbx from doggystyle records.

second verse. good flow, nice rhymes. good emotion.


beat is nice!

good fucking song right here. I would certainly bomp it!

good job.

nice way to rep TC audio.

cali, this piece was good,...actually fuck good
it was great,...you def try n strive for perfection on ya drops
i was feeling the concept n the entire drop to be real with ya.....
was'nt feeling the deep voice change on the chorus but your
acapellas n shit was mad clean, nice drop fam, wow, youve
elevated alot copmpaired to when i 1st heard ya.............

^thats Triple N On The Hook Foo Lol;)

i rele wish youd switch up tha way you flow lmao i know its how you rap..but yea good track dope ass beat good concept triple did hell of a job on tha hook nice to see you bak droppin...and...no...you dont run brownsville..i do...:thumbup:

i notice all of the peeps except decree were from ya crew...d/r convention...who knows...anyways on to the track

the beats aight....honestly trip made the song or attempted to....not even triple could save this song....it was that bad....like i said the beat is aight but ya flow is fucking horrible....i should say lack of flow because u don't have one....u sound like ya just reading with emotion....i will give u that....u do have emotion....u just have no skills....mic presence is good....ya awful cocky for somebody who can't flow....u have good emotion, good mic presence and a good vocab but ya fucking flow aka lack of flow kills it....u should have never quit wendy's....ya better at that wrapping then u are at this rapping....i applaud trip for trying to save the song but even god himself couldn't have saved this track....u think ya better then me too....u got another thing coming kiddo....tell ya friends to stop lying to u about ya music....i remember before u disappeared just this last time u said u had a style similar to freeway's....unless freeway sounds like a deaf kid trying to explain something to his deaf friends then i would have to say that u don't have a style similar to freeway's....and before u try to come at me saying some dumb old played out banks shit....fiya said that....not me....but anyways have someone teach u how to flow or just quit cause a real label would never sign u....they'd have to be deaf, blind, and dumb....this is honest feedback

overall - 0.5/10

that .5 was achieved thanks to triple....if he wasn't on here it would have gotten a donut....take it as hate if u want but this is my honest to god fucking opinion on this track

beat by annodoimin is hot....damn his shit always hot anyways...dats ma man holdin it down 4 da UK!!!

oh yea the track.......CALI u came nice...lyrically it was cool...i didnt like the hook, i dont think NNN shud hav dun cos his deep voice didnt really fit 4 that type of hook..CALI wa son beat 4 the mostpart..NN ur flow is flawless, lyrically a lil unda CALI, but ur delivery n voice n prscence is sik yo...id say dis shit was propa deep, worth tha dload...Peace

Listening................

Yo i like the intro kinda got my hooked on it, yo the beat is tight.


Listening to cali- Aiight man you got nice flow, you stayed on the beat. Ok i like the lyrics you spitting, you putting real emotion to it.

The chorus is aiight....................


Cali-......Aiight still doing good on the flow. Nice lyrics, still saying on the beat.......The lyrics is better yo...............Putted more emotion on this 2nd part.


Yo i dont have to go no more father, this track with emotion and nice lyrics by cali is hot. Stay up, i still hate you though lol.

im feeling this nice quality nice volume nice beat why did you have to steal it:( i was gonna use it lol. but cali you did ya thang. triple did his thing and this was a tight little peice. 1

Oh snap! This is a solid song...shit...Imma go listen to it again...

Good stuff, liked the beat, you flowed well over this. Triple did good on the hook too. RTF on my OM:)

Listenin' to while I post.

Intro: like it, quality already sounds very good, props to whoever mixed this.

First Verse - Came in strong, nice laid back flow, ride it nice oh shit, damn, the fuckin' chorus is madd like Gritty, i like that shit.

Chorus: Like this shit rides nice on the beat, nice play off of each other. I like this song already.

2nd Verse - Aight same dude (Cali i think) Damn, nice lyrics. Like this verse better, first was good, this is better. Nice a smooth flow, can hear everything amazingly clear, damn i can't wait till i'm at the point where my shit is this clear. Oh shit, the hated for skin tone line, liked that shit.

Verse over, just listenin' to like the beat, makin' me think about madd shit. Oh yeah, chorus back, shit is nice. Triple N on the Chorus i take it, chorus is nice man. Beat is Wild Nice. Nice end to the song. Aight. coo

I really liked this song, i can tell you got crazy flow, intro was very cool. I like this song, i would bump to this, way more my style of rap. It's gangsta, which isn't mystyle persay, but you kickin' knowledge, madd multies, and nice wordplay. NIggaz need to start givin' you respect son, cause you definately is nice. I would prolly buy your shit honestly, and there ain't TOO many niggaz you can say that about on here. Keep droppin' 'em.

-CJ-

Know this beat from somewhere lolz...(don't mind this)

Intro belongs to the beat and I'm definitely liking it. Had your flow on lock (both of you) and I feel the change of tone with Triple's deeper voice was a nice add-on to the song, it gave variety to it. Lyrics are at quite high level in my opinion, many will be able to relate to what you're saying there. I'm just overall feeling this track, verses were filled with knowledge, deep stuff and the hook was nice

DQ

hahahahahaha!

Sick track fam.

"Corrected Lenses got me seein through benzes,
the pens is for my brothers, got me seeing throught colors."

Keep it up......................:thumbup:

Overall rating = 84/100

ok everything was nice except for the flow. i felt it coulda been better. send me that track and i'll show u what i mean. but other than that ya lyrics are dope and ya dynamics were onpoint. just gotta work on ya flow. and i wasnt really feeling the hook. maybe cuz i was looking for something different. it woulda been dope if u had a chick singin the hook in spanish or something. ionno but this was aiight.

Really feeling this track... I can understand why some people don't like your flow but to me it sounds unique, kind of got that poetic edge. Hook is good too, a bit repetitive but the concept is nice. Always on beat and good mic presence both of you. I think there's a few too many blank spots where just the melody plays, perhaps you could add some extra samples or sound effects. Overall this is hot though, one of the best tracks I've heard from Cali and certainly the most emotional.... Oh yeah and the beat is obviously the shit since I made it lol. Keep this up!

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i definately liked this aside from all the bullshit talkin ill give it up to anyone who comes of f decent and this was a solid track n makes it with the hook but the content was cool keep it up on this level and 86 the shit talkin holla back some feed

oh anodomino beats,something like that
i was gonna use it
anyway dope ass beat
nice verse,i just dont like the way u finished your lines like : The idea of bein a thuggg
anyway lol
Chorus is dope as fuck,Nice triple's verse,hes always dope
pretty good track seriously,
9/10

intro's nice..
beats pretty nice

Cali.. your vese contains good multi's, and very good vocabulary.. the quality is pretty good.. and could feel the emotion..

chorus: LoL.. its funny how trip always does all the chorus's in all his collabs..

Triple: umm does he rap or only does the chorus??

well its pretty good..

7/10

tracks not too bad. I think kids are ratin it a little high, wasn't that spectacular. I just don't get why you're sayin the cops are racist - when you are the whitest kid I ever seen? Flow needed to be mixed up a bit, but was at a good emotional level to match the track. 1

hahahaha..I fell the same way the nigga in ya sig feel....If you rlisten to other peoples tracks C.A.L.I. you would notice she isnt from the south.....Also you were off beat..in some songs Tupac had a poetic flow but he was on beat

aight i'm feeling the beat...coo joint right here.....honestly i must say that your flow needs a lot of work...sounds off...and thats honesty take it or leave it...lyrics were felt...the chorus i was also feeling...overall i think trip was the best part of the song...and i agree phenom i think this is being rated a lil to high *cough cough* dickriders...stay up 1

I highly dought he has any dickriders, but Triple N killed it

^i agree;)now moving along funny how only people i have beef with have said anything negative and yes lv texas is the south nuff said:nono:

I hate you, and clowned you in above post, I only gave props to Triple N, andyour stupid ass fuck

LV is from New York

looks like i'm not the only one who realized cali has no talent...this thread was a d/r convention for a minute and then people started coming to their senses...am i the only one that realizes cali has a bitch voice too...mines not the greatest but it's better then his but u can't really do shit about a voice but for being 24 u sound hella young...now watch this everyone...cali got clowned by lame and suprisingly hasn't responded back yet and this was at 5:59 in the afternoon yesterday...now watch...the minute i post this he'll respond to me...i'll be really suprised if he says shit about lame...

i totaly aggree.....the song was ok but your flow needs sum work.....emotion was there so was delivery......hook was aight but kinda repetitive.....iono man
you flow ehhhhh....u need to fix sumthing but nice lil joint stay up :thumbup:

aight, what i dont get is this.... now alot of peeps r sayin that this song is over rated and is getting alot of "veiws" and "feedback" but theyre the ones that make it that way. if you got a problem with it .. dont support it and repeat the same thing that the 12 persons above you said... let the kid be, he's jus makin music, if yall are hatin on it then thats fine but dont get jealous... peeps r straight gettin angry that this threads got more posts n views than theres.................

who cares about how many views you get...posting on the board is about getting feedback from different cats...to help you elevate...cali was the first to talk about how many views it got and other cats are simply stating to him that it doesn't matter how many views you get. feedback is feedback...i think most of the cats saying this song is not all that are being real cal...half the cats that said this was nice are in your crew...post this song on another board that your not really active at and see what happens that how you can test if cats are riding or if cats are hating...this is real talk...no hate i always speak the truth and the real so take it as what you want

yea, Cali, you talk a lot of shit, but you improving too, yo. Gotta give you props for that. It wasn't spectacular like someone said, but it wasn't bad either. Pretty nice. I liked Triple's hook. good shit on that. Your verse parts weren't bad either. Flow was off a lil, but your emotion nice. Lyrics coo. good shit, yo. pc one.

RTF on my and Trip's sugar soon pc yo.

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not bad but cali you went sort of too slow in the beginnin..but got better..and the beat is too laid back for no sound effects na'mean yall should of addin sound fx but still a good track just alil too plain.. and trip you did good but the chorus should of had you whisperin a bit more like when you said "in the streets".. well i give this a 7.5/10 pretty good track holla back 1ne...

^will add sound effects;)......................................... ..

intro is coo... feelin that.... woah, who do u sound like?... real familliar... but whatever..

flow is niiice... really feelin this style.. beat is nice laid back, good for the lyrics...

ain't feelin this dude on hook, his flow don't fit... he good, but too hard for beat...
after the 2nd in tha streets part with the will it ever change, yea that shit is nice...

2nd verse, agian ya flow is on point.. shit is nice still

ain't gettin no more detail, 'cause i am liking this track... so ya.. 1
peep my track V
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=189383

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I just used this beat too...

First verse...pretty nice lyrics...the way you flow is odd, but it works...hook...hella tight...second verse is good too...dope beat, good track. Keep it up, we still gotta collab damn it...

6lol will do soon as i finish the a.i mixtape

nice intro,

first verse is good quality is nice, flow is on point

cali shoulda did the hook in my mind

still nice lyrics