quintessential vs D523
 

Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No bullshit, u know the deal



Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 05-06-08 at 06:31 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Quintessential has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-04-08 01:37 AM.

Pen my flows with a flaming torch that always leave pages scorched
I could win spittin' shit more random than that name of yours
you'd get hurt by anybody, my punches burst yo' capillaries
I know it sucks battlin' an MC whose name is not in your vocabulary
frankly, your verses are like cake, see me devour your rhymes
yeah, i saw your 'freestyles' that you probably took hours to write
tried to manage my menace, watch as I turn this damn fake to ashes
in this battle, the post counts represents the percentage of wackness
burn this faggot with acid, your death will forever me tragic
now i know why you're named d523, 'cuz it sounds better than derek

spelling error: forever BE tragic
hope it doesnt affect the way the votes go

D523 has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-04-08 05:12 PM.

On Rv, This Bitch Don’t Fit Right, Like A Bathing Suit Without A Lining
Skills So Small, I’d Have To Squint To See What’s Essential About His Rhyming
Little Rookie…If You Think You On My Level Not Even, Ill Leave Your Heart Bleedin
Soon As You Stop Breathin, You Start Seein A New World In Hell Without Gods Teachings
We All Know That D Don’t Wait, He Attackin You First, You Been Wack From The Birth
Your Rappins The Worst, Kid Got Them Felon Lines… It’s Impossible For Them To Actually Work
People Appreciate My Rhymes, Credits Keep Comin Like The End Of A Movie
I’m The Truth, No Homo But I Wouldn’t Bite Your Lines If You Fucking Fed Them To Me
“A”, “B’ Ill Rip Shit Out Of You Professionally Like I Went To Doctor School
So I Don’t Have to Spit This In Alphabetical Order For You To “C” “D” ‘s on top of you

D's Backkk :shoot: :shoot: :shoot:

wow, didnt mean to make my verse end up lookin like that, but still good battle, lets gooo

Voted For: D523

i thought Quintessential was taken this till..
“A”, “B’ Ill Rip Shit Out Of You Professionally Like I Went To Doctor School
So I Don’t Have to Spit This In Alphabetical Order For You To “C” “D” ‘s on top of you

u guys should go a round to it was mighty close

This was feedback posted for D523
 

your a fucking lame ass faggot

sooo, u talk shit, but dont vote on anything. No wonder RV went downhill with mediators like this...

wtf was that for he is nice
btw i wanna battle u set it up

n queer ass cheaters like you :thumbup:

enjoy getting banned

i kno in philly niggas kill snitches

i guess ur just one of them dudes

id much rather enjoy beatin u in a battle. stop procrastinating

lol imma battle him also...

derek u fucken at school? or u skip?

na im here haha, in portuguese we in the computer lab

uppin for votes guys... Aphilly, don't ban him just yet, I wanna get my first win on rv.com

lol, ok buddy. u came .w some shit but dont say ur winnin yet. and aphilly aint annin shit

Voted For: D523

Quintessential
your opener is good, smooth punch and nice personal. You have a good consistant flow and decent amount of ok punches. I think you could of closed your verse a lot more solid. But its a good personal either way.
Overall, could of been a lot better, but you have some decent punches in there.

D523, first of all. Fuck off with the bold text. We all know what a multi is, you have no reason to bold your rhymes, its looks fucking wack as fuck and pisses me off when Im reading your verse.

Your openers shit, good attempt at a personal but you didnt pull it off too well.

Little Rookie…If You Think You On My Level Not Even, Ill Leave Your Heart Bleedin
Soon As You Stop Breathin, You Start Seein A New World In Hell Without Gods Teachings

This is just one big boring ass filler with bolded rhymes.

Your last two punches are what took this for you.

good battle

uppin this for votess

^^ Cheating Fucking Faggot, Your A Fucking Queer, Get The Fuck Off The Board You Lame Ass Fucking Dick Sucking Queer Of A Faggot

woww still on the shit talkin thing i see. That's good, battle me or shut the fuck up. thats all i can say

^^ so that way you can just make up ANOTHER account and vote for youself? your fucking whack dude.

it aint even like that faggit, but dont take up space on my battle thread to talk shit

so what is it like you? YOU CHEATING MOTHER FUCKER

Voted For: D523

if you didnt bite this from another site,
its a decent verse, creative,your punches hit harder then his..
i doubt you wrote it but you get the win..
quintessental your verse was alright,decent vocabulary i liked how you rhymed capillary with vocabulary,i did that in some of my older shit..i felt like your verse was more of a filler though your punches really didnt hit..

why thefuckiseveryone doubting i write my shit. LISTEN the fuck up RV,i write my shit. u heard me?

^^ cuz your a fucking cheat you faggot

lol, this little bitch is STILL on my dick. E-GANGSTAA watch out!

^^ whats that? is that a cheater i hear....awwww yes, yes it is.

lol shut the fuck up and battle me cause until then as far as im concerned ur not on my level.

and dont talk shit, only respond if ur gonna actually prove me wrong, if not, then shut the fuck up.

why are you still here? aren't their other sites were cheaters can go to?

upppin this cmon votee

D523 wins by KO.
-CLOSED.
-Flash