Jack The Ripper vs. MarvJay
 

Now i'll be 3-0 vs. you, and 3-0 in KLL, how ironic.

I'm going 20 or 30 lines, just be sure to match me when I drop

I bet the kid won't even check in, lmao

MarvJay would destroy Jack the Ripper easily from what ive seen

im here fagget.....check!

HERBS UNITE!!!

Back again? And your skills still aint up to par
Your wack, and it's no joke... well actually... you are
Marv aint dope on the court, kid gets tossed around
So how are you a Marvelousjay, when all you do is backdown
I'll have you crossed now, cuz i'm getting tired of this joke
My skills known to light up a J, so watch him go up in smoke
Ha, this guys a laugh, i'll put you in the ground...hog
And watch me pound you... like stray dogs
But Marv was killin cats for a while, leaving kids dismantled
Remember when he called all of TE out!
...& got whored by EC in the first battle
You never got far on other sites, never won a tourney
I mean, the highlight of your career, was when you lost to me
Lol @ korv, wack fuck, my punches will leave you whored...
& make your ears ring so hard, you'll answer the front door
Wats the score? 2-0? & again i'm KO'ing you, your going down honestly
Cuz third times a charm, and Marv is def. falling for me
Just hit the ground and wait for the count, cock
And since we always argue, i'm 'bout to blow your top
Alright, let's clown his writing now, your fucking retarded B
But I spelled like that too
...back in grade 3
Must have shifty hands when he types, prolly on crack n' things
Dude aint hooked on phonix... but def. hooked on something
This guy is nothing, I easily leave ya cracked whore
I'm growing tired of you, & your just growing wacker
No one likes you, all of RV clowns this guy, shit
But your not the laughing stalk of RV
...your more like the root of it
You aint doing shit off the net, you can't get a deal
Marvs lines are all bananas cuz his verse hasn't had apeal
Just match me kid, and try not to leave us bored
I drop these barbaric lines just to leave ya horde

You fucking faggot.

i wish all da actin a stop..cuzz ima cum 2 da uk & start clappin da glock.
hit dis cat in his top......& do like da "toy u wind" and put "JaCK in a box".
a good mc? dis fagget is not!.....read his barz u'll see why i be laughin alot.
'ko marv'? no! only "5-0 u eva called u pick'd up a phone & ask'd 4 da cops".
we battlin 4 da 3rd time...rappin on a website's da only way dis herb shyne.
they call him head "GaMES" cuzz he has "TROUBLE" makin his words ryhme.
only time u "nice at da bar" u tipsy and ya "speech sler'd"..dont speak nerd.
when you gotta write verse's 4 me dis "aol" nigga neva 'KEyWORD(S)'.
ppl gas'd him like he really just might blow,oh jacks just missin a tite flow.
he sent his demo 2 a 50 label's...got a call
his manger said 'i got good news i just saved money switchin da geico'.
bitch im ya idol...and u "SUCK HaRD" everything dis nigga spit's.."LyPO"
jack was a "mistake" by his dumb ass parents........dis prick is "typo".
dis kid's mess..you JaCK THE lier who'd you eva RiP(PER) in text??????
still droppin wack barz guess u like "nice teacher's" just dont "give a F".
im no joke so dope you gon a crew and army........just 4 u 2 harm me.
all ya barz played jack ya punches like ya "title" they aint "new to rv".
u cant see-jay-lyically....shit! i'll put ya million up dat he-aint-rippin-me.
look at all verse's..dis dickhead try's 2 be funny cuzz he lack's creativity.
4,462 post...ya rec. 2-2 honestly how do u remain proud?.wit ya lame style.
u so ugly dat even if u got drafted 2 "cincinatti" u still couldn't "bang-gals".
whuts dis fags favorite lines...OH "I WHORED YOU"......OR I "OWNE'D YOU".
but he cant make his words ryhme or flow 2........ppl ya'll know its so true.
neva seen em say he's workin on audio's...either usin cool edit or pro tools.
u a "crossdresser & homo" all u care about is "drag n ballz" ima call u "gokuu".

i dont give a fuck if i match'd u...matter fact i did cuzz i set fire 2 ya punk ass lol

LMAOOOOO@ the gieco line

lmfao, you fucking suck if you can't even go 30 lines, are your verse is ass

are your verse is ass??......lmaoooooo i knew u was in special ed

I'm not from the UK, i'm from canada, and Marv knows that very well since he dissed me about being canadian twice in KORV2, pre-writing, wack recycling, cheating ass illeterate can't spell dumb fuck. :nono:

and thats not fucking sway yo, but wt/v, im signed in this league as headgames, not JTR, HOES

wow at the choppiness in marv's flow.........i dont know whether its your sheer lack of correct spelling or not but half the verse didnt flow reall good at all............also you still puttin shit in your verses about you comin with guns n shit and fuckin sayin your great and a whole lot of bollocks that is unnecessary, but forget that.......your punches were good, sum were anyway, but a lot were just half-assed and mediocre....you need to be more consistent with your shit.

JTR.......pretty much killed this battle, his punches were nicely done, they flowed well and each one packed a punch, most of them were comical lines that made me laugh like fuck, just nice simplicity in the lines and then turning them into funny ass comical punches, anyway, he was way more consistent in this battle with the punches so its easy for me to pick a winner.

V/ - Jack the Ripper

don't forget my complexity, witty cliches and dope wordplay, lmao... j/p

yo u cant win a fuckin battle without runnin ya fuckin big ass mouth....u sawyin 4 votes me & king solo dont get along but ima let his vote rock

i'm not swaying dummy, if i'm swaying, then so are you, idiot.

matter fact i was gonna let da vote stay but king solo said i cant vote in his battle....so he cant vote in mine..

nope, too late, sorry, shoulda stated that at the begining of the battle, you can't just take out his vote cuz it was against you, especially after you just let it slide, lmfao.

hmm,....i kno i can't vote but heres my take
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headgames,some real original concepts but some were
on the weaker side of the witty meter if ya nah sayin
2nd last bar was one of my favourites...
overall good verse for consistentcy n wordplay was well worded
along with your punches actually being very direct in most cases.
good verse........ good creativity.
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marv,flow was choppy in areas, some punches were ok but stretched out
way to far to be effective, you seem to put to much filler into your
verse to keep the reader interested throughout ya bars n verse..
alot of ya concepts are played n recycled n flipped but still recognizable
n do not have a witty apeal to them any more....
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headgames easily took this imo........pc

word then, 10-0 me :thumbup:

v / jtr;;;;;;;;;;

ok then , it's 2-0 me...

I vote on almost everyones battle, and no one comes and gives an honest vote back, wtf

Back again? And your skills still aint up to par
Your wack, and it's no joke... well actually... you are
But Marv was killin cats for a while, leaving kids dismantled
Remember when he called all of TE out!
...& got whored by EC in the first battle
Lol @ korv, wack fuck, my punches will leave you whored...
& make your ears ring so hard, you'll answer the front door
Wats the score? 2-0? & again i'm KO'ing you, your going down honestly
Cuz third times a charm, and Marv is def. falling for me
Just hit the ground and wait for the count, cock
And since we always argue, i'm 'bout to blow your top
Alright, let's clown his writing now, your fucking retarded B
But I spelled like that too
...back in grade 3
No one likes you, all of RV clowns this guy, shit
But your not the laughing stalk of RV
...your more like the root of it
You aint doing shit off the net, you can't get a deal
Marvs lines are all bananas cuz his verse hasn't had apeal

vs

we battlin 4 da 3rd time...rappin on a website's da only way dis herb shyne.
they call him head "GaMES" cuzz he has "TROUBLE" makin his words ryhme.
ppl gas'd him like he really just might blow,oh jacks just missin a tite flow.
he sent his demo 2 a 50 label's...got a call
his manger said 'i got good news i just saved money switchin da geico'
(as stretched as it is, funny)
dis kid's mess..you JaCK THE lier who'd you eva RiP(PER) in text??????
still droppin wack barz guess u like "nice teacher's" just dont "give a F
4,462 post...ya rec. 2-2 honestly how do u remain proud?.wit ya lame style.
u so ugly dat even if u got drafted 2 "cincinatti" u still couldn't "bang-gals"
neva seen em say he's workin on audio's...either usin cool edit or pro tools.
u a "crossdresser & homo" all u care about is "drag n ballz" ima call u "gokuu
(*chuckles*)

v/jack.......meh, better flow, more creative.....marv came with some played/boring shit....not really hard hitting stuff........but it was a decent battle...props to both

3-0, now you can finally STFU

jack
u had some good shit but it seemed like marv out lined evry thing i didnt like bout it...i suppose he got that from battling u twice...ur style was choppy and unattractive to me as da reader...u got me searchin for tha rhyme...but still good

marv
ur shit was funny, u had coo punches and wordplay...good flow too....way more consistent and enjoyable

v/ marvjay

good battle

V/ Marv....
his verse was pretty witty... i didnt htink he would take this at first, i was kinda shocked... i read both verses twice and went by punches that stood out and marv's shit stood out more. his humor was what won this shit, his verse was pretty funny.
this wass my fav line
we battlin 4 da 3rd time...rappin on a website's da only way dis herb shyne.
they call him head "GaMES" cuzz he has "TROUBLE" makin his words ryhme.
this won tha battle for marv... jtr came kinda weak this time. i got all ya wordplay homie, dont get me wrong... i liked some of ya lines, it seemed like u had some good wordplay in almost every line...
this was ya best "No one likes you, all of RV clowns this guy, shit
But your not the laughing stalk of RV
...your more like the root of it" i liked that shit but i dont think it was enough to win tha battle...
V/ Marv? lmao... no (?)

Jack The Ripper wins.
MarvJay loses.

This thread is now closed.

Moved to Closed Battles.