K-Trini vs SPuL aka Reckless
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

3-0 KO
4-1 Loss

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-05-05 at 10:37 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

SPuL aka Reckless has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-02-05 10:39 PM.

K-Trini has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-02-05 10:50 PM.

The Best thing for you,is that you die,and I abolish all the clues
Only time you'd shine on stage wit me,is when ya polish my shoes
You winning?,hell no,ya couldn't eclipse me,if ya battled me
With bags of E-cstacy firmly stapled onto each of ur knees*
Squeezing ya tongue while spittin's only time ya rhyme-tight
You could eat bright lemons,but still wouldn't be in the lime-light
The day you kill everyone is the day nutin's worth more than you
So Change ya name,fix ya sig,and hop of Jack the Ripper's balls too

*Eclipse
E=ectsay
clipse=clips(staples)

DON"T UNDERSTAND............THEN DON'T VOTE

Look at this.......you wanted the battle........yet takin so long to post ur shit.

Trini? Who are you? To me, you're jus another stranger
I mean who the fuck names themself after the yellow power ranger?
Seriously, talkin' shit, man, you went and made me mad
By the way I'm gonna "son" you you should call me "Trini's dad"
My flow is hot like chemo therapy, so you go and figure
I'll eave you bald, lmao, like Charles Barkely nigga

Your closer ain't dope. Man, what the fuck you drinking?
It only signifies the place where you got tired of thinking

http://community.rapverse.com/showp...408&postcount=8
^^^^^^^^^That power ranger line biten off 9th degree.....

http://community.rapverse.com/showp...054&postcount=6
^^^^and that son/trini's dad line bitten of Jack the ripper........

I might report you later spul...................I'm just high right now.............

^actually that isn't biting. lmao..... and power ranger line is same concept you jackass. And I had it thought up way before 9th, I can show proof, when I said "Isn't Trini the yellow power ranger?" wit my alias Marshall Mathers. so stfu... lmao.....

Voted For: SPuL aka Reckless

.......lol good battle here man nice like spul's opener......lol but yea spuld ur verse was good nice punches and structure was good as well but u can also use some work on the vocab and k-trini u had ur punches and lines that were good but wasnt packin enuff as spuls work on yo delivery so tha punch can pack more u kno so good battle and just keep at it aight both did good but my v// goes to spul

This was feedback posted for SPuL aka Reckless
 

ahahahhahahahahah sick battleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

This was feedback posted for SPuL aka Reckless
 

is this really spul lmao.............................................. .......

This was feedback posted for K-Trini
 

Squeezing ya tongue while spittin's only time ya rhyme-tight
You could eat bright lemons,but still wouldn't be in the lime-light

^ That was dumb.

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Voted For: SPuL aka Reckless

nice battle
Spul, im loving that opener, good shit there, nice personal. for the majority of the verse, i though trini had punches that were a little bit harder (that barkly line was kinda weak) but spul had better wordplay and and his shit rhymed tighter. maybe you did squeez his tounge, lol. also, his closer was alot better.
trini, your verse was ok, but your wordplay was kinda played out, nothin original. your opener was played, that second bar was probly thr best, but that closer was weak. i jut hope you come harder than that when you try to battle me.
much respect to both
return the favor

Voted For: K-Trini

The Best thing for you,is that you die,and I abolish all the clues
Only time you'd shine on stage wit me,is when ya polish my shoes
You winning?,hell no,ya couldn't eclipse me,if ya battled me
With bags of E-cstacy firmly stapled onto each of ur knees*
Squeezing ya tongue while spittin's only time ya rhyme-tight
You could eat bright lemons,but still wouldn't be in the lime-light
The day you kill everyone is the day nutin's worth more than you
So Change ya name,fix ya sig,and hop of Jack the Ripper's balls too

ez pick for me..out classed
dont forget to vote...bdotones vs c-hood
and bdotones vs black city...

^^Can you please leave adequate feedbacK?I ain't returnin the favor unless you do.

Voted For: SPuL aka Reckless

lol spul won plain and simple he didnt even come hard the opener was crazy the closer was ight lol
ktrini you can hard but ya punches wasnt hard hittin like it cus be therefore spul won

rtf
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=197475

^Aiight i'll get to that soon............... gotta go out soon tho. but thanks for all votes. uppin.........

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Voted For: SPuL aka Reckless

K-Trini
The Best thing for you,is that you die,and I abolish all the clues
Only time you'd shine on stage wit me,is when ya polish my shoes
wack concept, who shines shoes on stage? you coulda worded this too be so much better and a dope punch, tsk tsk, 4/10
You winning?,hell no,ya couldn't eclipse me,if ya battled me
With bags of E-cstacy firmly stapled onto each of ur knees*
concept was wack again and badly worded punch, 3/10
Squeezing ya tongue while spittin's only time ya rhyme-tight
You could eat bright lemons,but still wouldn't be in the lime-light
coulda worded better, but concept was actually decent this time HOORAY! ;) 5/10
The day you kill everyone is the day nutin's worth more than you
So Change ya name,fix ya sig,and hop off Jack the Ripper's balls too
when my name was mentioned it had nothing to do with the original concept, but the personal is true cuz he is on my nuts hard, so 3/10

Overall, 15/40

Spul:
Trini? Who are you? To me, you're jus another stranger
I mean who the fuck names themself after the yellow power ranger?
didnt 9th use this line? or maybe you did first, well it was worded diferent so 4/10 for a meh personal
Seriously, talkin' shit, man, you went and made me mad
By the way I'm gonna "son" you, you should call me "Trini's dad"
I worded it better hoe :rolleyes: 5/10
My flow is hot like chemo therapy, so you go and figure
I'll leave you bald, lmao, like Charles Barkely nigga
wtf @ self glory, hop off your own nuts and onto mine hoe, 2/10
Your closer ain't dope. Man, what the fuck you drinking?
It only signifies the place where you got tired of thinking
wich is pretty much true, yup, but you coulda worded it a lot better dummy ;) 6/10

Overall: 17/40

vote = SPuL

Voted For: SPuL aka Reckless

ok this battle wasn't even close. Don't know why it is still open