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Artemis 07-31-05 03:43 PM

Macreep vs El Dios
 
Battle Rules:
Punchline Battle

2 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-31-05 at 04:13 PM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

Artemis 07-31-05 03:50 PM

I forgot to put 3-0 or 4-1 KO.....................

System 07-31-05 03:51 PM

Macreep has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-31-05 03:51 PM.

Macreep 07-31-05 03:51 PM

just post dawg......................................

System 07-31-05 03:52 PM

El Dios has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-31-05 03:52 PM.

Artemis 07-31-05 03:53 PM

Wen u lie every thing turned black n grey like ya name,u won’t win anyway….
Tries to log in,even I know K-Trini* was banned but he still waits for the day….

*His old account which got banned was called K-Trini

Macreep 07-31-05 03:53 PM

would never be a breathing leg-end if made a living carving knees
cause the only people rooting for El Dios are some starving trees

Artemis 07-31-05 03:54 PM

done bitch ur turn to drop!!!!!!!!................

Macreep 07-31-05 03:55 PM

and I have a feeling you are troop.............you are an alias though...cause how else you know about K-trini?

Artemis 07-31-05 03:57 PM

i can read bitch,theres so many threads with it in!!!N this account has been here a long time i just been on vacation and then moved!!!!

Macreep 07-31-05 03:59 PM

ok troop....by why ya pick a mexican name for?????

Artemis 07-31-05 04:00 PM

i aint fukin troop.....n its spanish it means The God

Macreep 07-31-05 04:03 PM

^^^^so wat ya fuckin alias then mother fucker.....

Fiend 07-31-05 05:13 PM

Voted For: Macreep

Eh, you just came a lil harder. El Dios, your wording was horrible. Decent wordplay from Macreep, so..

V - Macreep.

Rtf in my sig yo.

Macreep 07-31-05 05:14 PM

^^Thx for the vote...and gonna drop a vote in ya battle now.....

DeHotBwoy 07-31-05 05:43 PM

Voted For: El Dios

El Dios just had better flow wit it and i think he deserves it cuz he juss had that nice personal punch

Trini even tho u 2 syllabled it it was wack Trees dude say somthing realistic im out i give this to el dios with overall better lines i think he deserves it 1

WhoAmI 07-31-05 06:13 PM

Voted For: El Dios

Odd battle i swear there's a seperate forum for this but whatever....

Macreep your punchline was slightly amusing but pretty weak nonetheless.if the wordplay was clever enough you wouldn't feel the need to have certain words in bold.

El Dios had a weak punch as well but he actually made an attempt to use a couple personals so i guess that makes his punchline a tiny bit better...

SO El-Dios gets my vote

Daubs 07-31-05 06:36 PM

This was feedback posted for El Dios
 
polls here...................................

mac concept was played to fuck.

Spoken Word 07-31-05 06:50 PM

Voted For: Macreep

El Dios:

Wen u lie every thing turned black n grey like ya name,u won’t win anyway….
Tries to log in,even I know K-Trini* was banned but he still waits for the day….

^^ this punch wasnt very effective, i think you should stop doing punchline battles and go for something with more lines so you have a better chance. Youve got skill but expand it.


Overall: 4/10

Macreep:

would never be a breathing leg-end if made a living carving knees
cause the only people rooting for El Dios are some starving trees

^^ you had a decent meta and a mediocre punch, you could have done better but still an overall OK bar.


Overall: 6.5/10


Vote: Macreep


Return the favor with an honest vote on a battle in my sig or this vote will get removed.

Castro... 07-31-05 07:03 PM

This was feedback posted for El Dios
 
Both was eh....I think mac tried a punch but it suck big time and el dios had a good personal...so if I had to vote I couldnt ya like simese twins...both bars was weak and it would be super hard to decide for a winner so ......v/TIE

Kawn Flixx 07-31-05 07:15 PM

Voted For: El Dios

Wen u lie every thing turned black n grey like ya name,u won’t win anyway….
Tries to log in,even I know K-Trini* was banned but he still waits for the day….
Hmm..this was a pretty solid punch..felt it could have better,but it was good because you also put a personal in it.. Keep it up

Macreep
would never be a breathing leg-end if made a living carving knees
cause the only people rooting for El Dios are some starving trees
Hmm..dont really get your punchline..here but it was really weak..and had no hard direct punch..Overall elevate and keep it up

PrahJect 07-31-05 07:32 PM

Voted For: Macreep

yo imma be real....mad dawg my friend but his lines didnt cut it.....it was plain but it was a punch but didnt land hard enough also k-trin...youre lines were ok too....it made sense it hit harder but it wasnt great but i guess its hard trying to give hard punches in 2 lines but i liked the wordplay

PrahJect 07-31-05 07:40 PM

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btw....rtf please or that will be removed

I. Mind 07-31-05 07:43 PM

Voted For: El Dios

El Dios: It was a lot better punch mixed with a real nice personal
7/10

Macreep: I didn't really get ya punch at all!

5/10

vote el dios

Viva 07-31-05 08:22 PM

This was feedback posted for Macreep
 
checkin pollsss.....................................

Macreep 07-31-05 08:34 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Intermental
Voted For: Macreep

yo imma be real....mad dawg my friend but his lines didnt cut it.....it was plain but it was a punch but didnt land hard enough also k-trin...youre lines were ok too....it made sense it hit harder but it wasnt great but i guess its hard trying to give hard punches in 2 lines but i liked the wordplay



MAd dawg.....is this mexicano Mad dogg???

If so...then damn :shoot:

Lay-z 07-31-05 08:40 PM

Voted For: El Dios

Straight up..i liked it more..came across as better overall


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