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Killah Bwoy vs triple N
here we go this is a round 2 we;ve both gotten much better
10 lines blind spit ( i aint no bitch i aint gon say you go first...fair battle) no feedin 3 hours to post after check in no d/r cv or biting good luck |
checkin' in but 3 hours is to much time, make it 45 mins
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no jus incase u ened time..im droppin now so it dont really matter..........checkin in
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Dis is no competition Blast ya with my Lyrikal Ammunition get rid of my opposition../
Walkin under ladders FUCK superstition still beatin you bitch,ASUME THE POSITION../ 'Spit razor sharp lyrics..Touch the screen and you'll wind up with ya hands missin'../ Like a fat bitch tryin' to walk to the store, Beatin me is a Fuckin' "Mission"...../ I Cause total annihalation This kid can't "drop shit" like a kid with constepation..../ "Your soo cool Bwoy"smack ya in da face,im tryna battle not hold no conversation../ rearrange ya face cause ya rhymes are ugly like a michael jackson mascalation.../ Read the tutorials I master the arts of rappin' while this bitch "masters- Batin"..../ Bwoy: come on dawg stop jackin off and drop ur verse...N:SHH im consentratin.../ Its ova dawg dont even drop jus' because i beat you again you aint gotta be hatin../ good luck dawg..... |
can yall drop an honest vote on here.....please i'll hit this up when yall have spat
QUICKPUNCH VS T12U3 K1LlA |
oh and wen i sed in ther line its a fuckin mission...its slang for thats hard
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Faggot niggas like you garanteed to be left on wax
This bitch like a musical instrument, blowin' on dick like it was a sax You won't get dap, cuz there's no gay rights in rap No one's gonna root for an emcee that hugs more nuts that "jockstraps" Always talkin' bout u hard, when in a real fight u wanna mix an mingle Claimin u bust shots, only thing this bitch pops is "pringles" I'm a do like Ja an 50 an squash this beef like I was lewis farracon Wastin' my time, ya rhymes couldn't generate heat if they was wearin' "long johns" I'm put more pains in ya gut than ab crunches You beat me, never!, I've felt breast harder than your punches Compared to yours my rhymes are athletic, I'm the killa bwoy slayer Ya shit is basic an fundamental like a white basketball player This nigga emulates rapper's likes, he wants to scream like "lil john" All the gurls scream when ya drop ya pants cuz ya got a "lil jon" He was put in this forum jus to annoy, he mad cuz I'm the real mccoy One look at ya pic an I almost died of fright, I guess that why they call u "Killa Bwoy" Hold That son, would have dropped 15 mins ago but erased my shit by accident..lol |
wtf i sed 10 lines............................................
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oh my bad son, i jus got so deep in my rhymes that I wasn't even thinkin'
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yo TRIPLE_N ur STRUCTURE Took it away but good shit dogg
KILLAH you had da SHIT GOin Da PUNCHES n everthing DIS IS A CLOSE BATTLe TRIP)_n FLow 7/10 RHymes 9/10 Structure 4/10 20/30 KILLAH Flow 8/10 Rhymes 8/10 Structure 6/10 22/30 Good battles guyz Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe |
ok well Killa Bwoy i was feeling ur lines
Vocab and Structure: Ok vocab pretty complex used lots of big words and shit like dat... also your vocab was killer compared 2 TripleN... structure was good aswell Personals and Punchlines: This would be ur strogest point in the battle i was feeling ur verses especially 'Spit razor sharp lyrics..Touch the screen and you'll wind up with ya hands missin'../ Like a fat bitch tryin' to walk to the store, Beatin me is a Fuckin' "Mission"...../ I Cause total annihalation This kid can't "drop shit" like a kid with constepation..../ that what got u my vote... Flow and Rythmicness: Your lines flowed exspecially well and the rythmicness of your ryhmes was good as well... TripleN was really feeling ur lines so much Vocab and Structure: vocab was ok but Killa beat u on dis... u need to use more complex and big words... and structure was the same as killa's... Punchlines and Personals: You had a bit less they hit pretty strong but not strong enough to get my vote... Flow and rythmicness: ok ur lines flow was really good and same wit the rythmicness... Over all: ok my vote goes 2 Killa Bwoy cuz he had better punchlines and personals and they hit hadder also, he had some mad vocab... Winner: Killa Bwoy |
uppin for some well explained honest votes, holla!!
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yo dope battle
very close call so heres my breakdown punches= tie> both had some tight punches that were interestin and creative vocab= tie> i think both had some gud use of diction in there structure/flow= this goes to tripleN to me b/c he had some better transitions between lines and the whole thing flowed a lil better than killahs complexity= tripleN again b/c I like the way he set up his punches, and he had some koo play on words in there(lil john) personals= again a tie, both had some koo burns overall winner= barely b/c this was a very competitive battle but i go with tripple b/c i think he wanted it more 4 my reasons above fav. line: "Compared to yours my rhymes are athletic, I'm the killa bwoy slayer Ya shit is basic an fundamental like a white basketball player" hit my battles yall peace |
I would give Killah Bwoy for his flow and Triple for his personals. However, Triple went over in lines and plus I was feelin the whole of Killa Bwoy's verse whereas it was only towards the end I really got into it. Both verses are excellent though but my vote will go to Killah Bwoy.
Vote on these two links (honest votes) plz: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121363 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120624 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121373 |
Here we go.....
Killah bwoy came with some stretched lines that didn't have that bad of a flow since they were all atretched to the same length.... Dis is no competition Blast ya with my Lyrikal Ammunition get rid of my opposition../ Walkin under ladders FUCK superstition still beatin you bitch,ASUME THE POSITION../ ^^^This is an example of a stretched line. It ruins the rhythem all together..... It also didn't have any punch in there. people didn't see that all his attempts at punches were mediocre.... Bwoy: come on dawg stop jackin off and drop ur verse...N:SHH im consentratin.../ Its ova dawg dont even drop jus' because i beat you again you aint gotta be hatin../ ^^^Weak closer too.....where's the punch? I understand that you freestyled the whole verse but you could have thrown in a couple of punches just to mix things up... Triple_N came with a basic flow that did flow through out the verse. This made the whole verse easier to read. He had a few stretched lines but not that many...... Faggot niggas like you garanteed to be left on wax This bitch like a musical instrument, blowin' on dick like it was a sax You won't get dap, cuz there's no gay rights in rap No one's gonna root for an emcee that hugs more nuts that "jockstraps" ^^^ Kinda weak for an opener but atleast there was a punch in there......Triple had soem pretty weak attempts at punches but a few did hit a little..... Compared to yours my rhymes are athletic, I'm the killa bwoy slayer Ya shit is basic an fundamental like a white basketball player ^^^ Most original punch in the battle. It hit kinda hard too.....Triple_N just came with more punches in this one and I think that's what wins battles..... Vote - Triple_N |
I cant vote cuz I in Killah's crew,but I would give this battle to Triple_N .. no hate Killah your shit was tight, but that was some hot shit I seen from triple man, had some HARD punches. Good Battle Boys would love to see Round 3!!!
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oooh close shit
Killah...hot puches...stretched lines fucked ya up the only reason i'm sayin that is cuz i used to stretch my lines and it does fuck ya up but i flipped styles and shit is workin out for me...just a suggestion but you still killed him wit punches... 9/10 triple not bad shit just didnt compare to killahs 8/10 |
My votes gonna have to go with Killa here he came harder to me and he had some sick lines Triples was also hot but i think Killa took it.
Killa 8.5/10 Triple 8/10 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe |
thanz dawg...i see peoples hate stretched lines but i am goin to flip the structure next battle..
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Oh and could u all return Honost votes plz...in my sig.
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Yo i gatta give the vote to Killah bwoy... Heres how i break it down...
Killah had nice punches, good flow, good structure, and nice personals Triple has some alright punches, alrigt flow, structure wasn't bad, but i thought personals kinda lacked Overall Killah hit harded with personals...and his punches... My vote goes to killah |
giving this 2 triple N. He had the thim and flows and rymes to back his shit up. I'm quite impressed by both rappers but triple ripped him by metas similies and flow. Vote for N, he won dis battle fair n square.
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Dis is no competition Blast ya with my Lyrikal Ammunition get rid of my opposition../
Walkin under ladders FUCK superstition still beatin you bitch,ASUME THE POSITION../ i kinda like the anger here... but the lines are still stretched 'Spit razor sharp lyrics..Touch the screen and you'll wind up with ya hands missin'../ Like a fat bitch tryin' to walk to the store, Beatin me is a Fuckin' "Mission"...../ um... i dunno.. wasn't that dope.. you're saying its hard... not a great meta either I Cause total annihalation This kid can't "drop shit" like a kid with constepation..../ "Your soo cool Bwoy"smack ya in da face,im tryna battle not hold no conversation../ see.. you're forcing mutlis. annhilation has nothing to do with the rest of the line.. and the constipation thing is kinda played.. rearrange ya face cause ya rhymes are ugly like a michael jackson mascalation.../ Read the tutorials I master the arts of rappin' while this bitch "masters- Batin"..../ the wordplay is pretty neat Bwoy: come on dawg stop jackin off and drop ur verse...N:SHH im consentratin.../ Its ova dawg dont even drop jus' because i beat you again you aint gotta be hatin../ i kinda like that... pretty ok Faggot niggas like you garanteed to be left on wax This bitch like a musical instrument, blowin' on dick like it was a sax nice metah, i like it You won't get dap, cuz there's no gay rights in rap No one's gonna root for an emcee that hugs more nuts that "jockstraps" ok.. pretty nice metah again Always talkin' bout u hard, when in a real fight u wanna mix an mingle Claimin u bust shots, only thing this bitch pops is "pringles" would have been nice to have a multi here with shots, it flows kinda funny to me. but pretty nice punch (probably played, but i havent heard it...) I'm a do like Ja an 50 an squash this beef like I was lewis farracon Wastin' my time, ya rhymes couldn't generate heat if they was wearin' "long johns" eh... not so much I'm put more pains in ya gut than ab crunches You beat me, never!, I've felt breast harder than your punches aight.. pretty nice[/] Compared to yours my rhymes are athletic, I'm the killa bwoy slayer Ya shit is basic an fundamental like a white basketball player [b]eh... not so much This nigga emulates rapper's likes, he wants to scream like "lil john" All the gurls scream when ya drop ya pants cuz ya got a "lil jon" eh.. dont like the rhyme... ok punch i guess, but not great He was put in this forum jus to annoy, he mad cuz I'm the real mccoy One look at ya pic an I almost died of fright, I guess that why they call u "Killa Bwoy" hehe.. nice personal.. first ive seen this battle ok check it... both of you came somewhat inconsistently... killah your rhymes are stretched and you force multis into them that are often irrelevent... and you mix punches with threats in one line, and the punches come out weaker. try using more setups and shrinking your lines, and using metas and wordplay that aren't so played... triple n... your verse started hot.. fell off at the end big time but then you had a nice closer which also had a personal... both of you guys need to step that shit up on personals. but still, for the better, more original metahs: v/ triple n |
Whew nice to see a fire battle yall but well lemme explain my point of view
killa real nice verse my man but it thought -n- was a bit more fluent in delivery punches were soret of even and format goes to you but since the fluentcy of his rymes were a bit better i thought he eeked it out -You won't get dap, cuz there's no gay rights in rap No one's gonna root for an emcee that hugs more nuts that "jockstraps" i liked that it was hard but watch out for your stretched line my friend it ll cost ya if ya dont fix it Big ups to honest votes .............check my shizznit out keep strivin its why were here |
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