SUPERVILLAIN vs Lay Fear
 

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Check in by: 06-05-08 at 12:00 PM

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Lay Fear has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-04-08 12:00 PM.

SUPERVILLAIN has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-05-08 10:05 AM.

supervillain the tyrant, infamous crhyme sindicate, '08

You got no reason to be waiting cuz you'll easily be cooked with the ratings.
Punches givin u n' adrenaline rush..that will even make the Bears defense look degrading.
bitch's ain't about the old type..must be jokin if u think u'll hold hype
now if love is blind...it explains why B's had perfect vision his whole life
This homo's contestin for the top spot..So in this bout he'll be noticed.
The skeletons in his closest..died before they even came out an exposed him.
Nooone even acknowledges you, but its fact that he'll try an offend me.
Although SV is signed up for alot of leagues,..but jus' doesn't seem to excel in ANY.
This jerk won't be able to find a doctor to mend him, it'll be the ending see.
Cuz this dick will be ripped hard enough to not even be rivaled by a vasectomy.
Make you my bitch..I'll break you n switch as this abusing will help.
If axe EVER wraps the belt around the waist..its cuz I'd be to tired to do it myself.
Dam, tune your girlish ego down. It reminds me that your dumb.
But everyone says lifes a bitch..... Guess thats why Super's as lively as they come.

bitch's ain't about the old type..must be jokin if u think u'll hold hype
now if love is blind...it explains why B's had perfect vision his whole life
vs Brandon C in LLL Jr
Make you my bitch..I'll break you n switch as this abusing will help.
If axe EVER wraps the belt around the waist..its cuz I'd be to tired to do it myself.
vs. Axeshun in Hit em up battle league

I recycled those punches from some of my other verses I've done for LLL Jr..lol I checked the time left to post my vese an that shit said 4 minutes. Sorry I don't usually recycle but I didnt' want to no show or not post 12 lines. My bad

Voted For: Lay Fear

This vote is for Lay Fear. SV's punches were kinda played but some were pretty sick. It was a pretty equal battle but Lay's verse actually made me laugh so I'm gonna give it to him. And SV, some of your lines were corny as fuck, lol. No offense. And Lay, some of your shit didn't even make sense. But I'm gonna give my vote to LF. Decent battle, I guess.

kirk, i accept your opinion of my verse...im sorry that you didnt find it too entertaining. i'll try harder the next time around. i feel that its pretty dope though for a 20 some odd minute key. :thumbup:

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=245987
^^^however, i will have your vote removed due to the fact you guys are crew members...or at least y'all were just a few days ago. it doesnt seem fair...it might sway the general voting. i wouldnt have any of my current crhymies jumping in here and voting...its all ethics my man.

one love...


...s.v. deadly

Voted For: SUPERVILLAIN

woah!!! fucking hott son!!!!!!


Removed .

Spose to be feedback .

^^^lol. we're not trying to get crew votes...lol. im sure he meant to drop that comment as feedback for my battle.

thanks for the support soul, i appreciate it brutha...wordness.


s.v.

BTY is not a real crew. It does not a have a page in the forums. I am not repping it. But oh well.

I respect your wishes, kind sir. Enjoy your day...

^^^good lookin', you too...

...UUUUUUUUUPPPPPPPPPPPPIIIIIINNNNNN'''!!!


s.v. deadly, crhyme sin

Yeah bty ain't a actual crew, an aphilly def ain't in that shit even if it was lmao. referring to your last line. don't get him mixed up wit us.

This was feedback posted for SUPERVILLAIN
 

this haters disses 'mimic sheets of paper'...because they 'all fall flat', its known...
he couldnt get 'a-head' if he were a 'ballcap', or served a tall 'draft with foam'
dope bar, i think you got this one,punches hit alot harder.

I don't think you had enough wp in your verse sv, haha.

i just re anylized the battle,sv's does have this one for sure in my opinion,
his verse was better than lay fears, better structure, more creative,harder punches, better multies,and on top of everything lay fear had a crew vote so did sv but that was an accident.
lay fear you said house rules that means no recycled lines no no crew votes..and honestly your verse wasnt very good..your structure was off and o wasnt really feeling the punches.plus you recycled lines..
sv's got this

Well than you should have voted talk

This was feedback posted for SUPERVILLAIN
 

checkin pollz fam..you should take this easily....

We're not crew. Lol. If I had known that we were considered crew then I wouldn't have voted, man. Don't try to sway shit. Check my posts. Never have I even acknowledged the exsistence of BTY. I understand SV dq'in it because he thought we were crew and I don't care one way or another. But don't try to sway votes by saying "there was an intentional crew vote."

^^^lol. you cant be serious doggy.

im far from being a hater, so let me break this down for you...

1) lack of wordplay would be me recycling old lines that i used in battles with other people. rofl. i personally think that that is wack as fuck and if i were a mod, i would've dq'ed you off of that alone since it is against the standard "house rules"...yet flash didnt, so he must feel differently about this issue than i do. i think that it sets a bad precident for others to follow, not to mention, it shows a lack of creativity and overall laziness on your part.

2) peep my verse again. you and kirk might not of liked it (ha!...so i did my job), but i had consistent material that actually incorporated you throughout my piece. your verse on the other hand only mentioned me like twice, plus, out of the 2 mentions that you did drop, you blatantly typed up a fake personal (like the "me currently losing in multiple leagues" line) that sounded like a pre-written line for someone else that you were going to battle who is actually in a tourney. lol.

3) you didn't even really acknowledge the requests that i made to initiate this battle in the first place, but i still made do with your rules. i just feel that in the wide scope of things that you severely underestimated me and you're regretting it now. fuck a text record homie...losses happen to the best of us (well, except nos of course...lol, jk). I AM WITHOUT A DOUBT, TOTALLY CONFIDENT THAT I WON THIS BATTLE...HANDS DOWN. regardless of the voter turnout, you couldn't tell me otherwise, word. that previous comment is not intended to knock your work, im just telling it like it is. im honest with myself. i (of anyone) would know if i deserved to catch n ''L''. dont get me wrong, i think that you're a talented cat and as far as "the active battlers in the front lines at this current point in time", you're definately one of the best, that's why i chose a match with you...to test myself and todust off some of the old cobwebs.

im content with my piece. it hit its mark, wordplay and all. good luck, i wish you nothing but the best.

oner...



...s.v. dangerous, big bad crhyme sindicate

This was feedback posted for Lay Fear
 

polls cool battle both of you

Haha. SV. What Lay said was definetly sarcasm, dude. Him and I spoke about this battle and I said to him "SV was tossin' wordplay almost every fuckin' line, man." So, I can pretty much say that I'm 99% sure that was sarcasm. Joke, bro. Don't take it to the heart.

And as for me "not liking your verse." I thought it was a good verse, man. You both came with punches. I gave my vote to Lay cause his punches made me laugh. Don't act like I came in this battle to dickride cause "I'm in his crew." I came in here to vote on a battle, man. An opinion is an opinion.

^^^word. i can respect that.

its kind of hard to hear a sarcastic tone when reading text...lol.

oner...


...the supe

Lmao. dont' catch feelings. Idc about some FL battles on rv when I got playoffs goin on RB, I'm sorry I didn't put my 100 percent ALL into this like you did but its not that big of a deal. I had a punch or two I thought up..an when I looked it said 4 minutes left to post. So I recycled. If you care so strongly about winning and the horrible recycling than you can have the win, just say the word an I give flash permission to close this. Hahaha


props on ya sick verse.

lay, kirk:

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...337#post3215337
^^^...if y'all are interested in the life of crhyme, feel free to try-out gents. you both have my vote.

hollar.


esvee, big bad crhyme sindo '08

Voted For: SUPERVILLAIN

super:
i'll get 'ballsy', he wont do shit, he only 'gets nuts' when facin' his buddy's pair
he's afraid of any real competition...watch me have this ''lay fear'' running scared
2/5 - meh opener.

''iron man?'' please!!! watch me 'rock' this topic: im 'death metal' and you're emo
lay fear is a 'front lines coward'.....he makes ''soulja boy'' look like a 'war hero'
3.5/5 - decent.
this haters disses 'mimic sheets of paper'...because they 'all fall flat', its known...
he couldnt get 'a-head' if he were a 'ballcap', or served a tall 'draft with foam'
2/5 - meh.
dudes writin' is trash, he sucks more than the tube used when ones syphonin' gas
his rhymes gettin' cash??? the only time he'll get papers when he's wipin' his ass
3/5 - iight multi's.
frighten this cat??? when it comes to 'typin'' if i show him a 'hyphen' he'll 'dash'
so who's 'violent' with rap? this guy 'nose' a beating, just minus the 'sinus attack'
4/5 - niice wordplay.
well, since im your 'pen pal', im clickin' 'send now'...so heres a 'letter' for you...
...im not 'aphilly-ated' with your crew, but yet i've proven that im ''b.etter t.han y.ou''
2/5 - meh closer.
=16.5



lf:
You got no reason to be waiting cuz you'll easily be cooked with the ratings.
Punches givin u n' adrenaline rush..that will even make the Bears defense look degrading.
3.5/5 - pretty good opener.
bitch's ain't about the old type..must be jokin if u think u'll hold hype
now if love is blind...it explains why B's had perfect vision his whole life
1/5 - line sounds like it was biten.
This homo's contestin for the top spot..So in this bout he'll be noticed.
The skeletons in his closest..died before they even came out an exposed him.
3/5 - iight.
Nooone even acknowledges you, but its fact that he'll try an offend me.
Although SV is signed up for alot of leagues,..but jus' doesn't seem to excel in ANY.
2/5 - meh.
This jerk won't be able to find a doctor to mend him, it'll be the ending see.
Cuz this dick will be ripped hard enough to not even be rivaled by a vasectomy.
1/5 - forced.
Make you my bitch..I'll break you n switch as this abusing will help.
If axe EVER wraps the belt around the waist..its cuz I'd be to tired to do it myself.
1/5 - weak.
Dam, tune your girlish ego down. It reminds me that your dumb.
But everyone says lifes a bitch..... Guess thats why Super's as lively as they come.
2/5 - meh closer.
=13.5

..........
cant, were in the same crew and know each other in real life..it would be unfair.

^^^bumpage for more votes. uppin' this battle.


the supe

Sounds bitten? How does it sound bitten, that doesn't even make sense...if you vote you can say 0/5 every punch but dont' say its bitten. I've never bit in my life Gk.

Voted For: SUPERVILLAIN

Lol 2 sound pieces.Lay u seem to lose ya self half way and didnt recover but the start was coo.Supe: i liked the way you wrote your piece and you had some mad multi's.All in all supe was quite abit better as a whole. Vote:supe

^^^^^^^^^UUUPPPPPPIIINNN''' FFFOOORRR VVVOOOTTTEEESSS!!!!!!!!!


ttthhheee sssuuupppeee

Voted For: SUPERVILLAIN

IGHT LAY FEAR UR PUNCHES AND RHYYMESCEME WERE COO AND HAD A GOOD FLOW TO IT I THINK THIS WAS YOUR BEST LINE "Dam, tune your girlish ego down. It reminds me that your dumb.
But everyone says lifes a bitch..... Guess thats why Super's as lively as they come." OTHER THAN THAT.....SV TOOK THIS BATTLE WIT BETTER PUNCHLINES AND I LIKE HOW EACH LINE HIT. I LIKE THAT DASH LINE SHIT WAS TIGHT U GOTT ALOTT NICE LINES HOMIE GOOD JOB =1=

Voted For: SUPERVILLAIN

If axe EVER wraps the belt around the waist..its cuz I'd be to tired to do it myself.

^^ that bar makes it look like you bit your verus dude...wtf?? why would you say Axe??? Most of your lines were fillers and had nothing relevant at all about SV. You said hes in alot of leagues, again..he's not..which makes me think you bit that shit dude.


Esvee was on point and orginall.....

im not 'aphilly-ated' with your crew, but yet i've proven that im ''b.etter t.han y.ou''

thats a funny bar, becuase you said i was in his crew...which i'm not. lol. I just told him i was joinin his crew along time ago, just to be a dick.

''iron man?'' please!!! watch me 'rock' this topic: im 'death metal' and you're emo
lay fear is a 'front lines coward'.....he makes ''soulja boy'' look like a 'war hero'

^^ i really liked this line the best out of both of your verus's




vote: SV



**side note...FUCK YOU SV

funny how he admitted to recycleing...what a fucking bitch

^^^rofl.

way to go phil... :thumbup: ...what a nice way to send a back handed compliment. DICK!!! lol. fuck it though, thank you for taking the time out to participate in our little melee. your feedback was appreciated.

once again lay, we disagreed on a few things...but honestly, you still got down. lets keep it pushin' playa.

oner.


the supervillain of crhyme, '08

Voted For: SUPERVILLAIN

im voting for SV.... just because...... he shit stood out.... i mean you cant argue wit a big red L... you know what im saying :)

World Peace


-Don Tito Bronsky