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Lay. 07-07-08 02:14 AM

*HW Title Match* Kirk ( 12 ) vs. Lay Fear ( 9 )
 
Kirk vs Lay Fear


Due times:
Check in due Wednesday 11.59pm EST.
- if you don't check in by this time, and you DO end up posting, -2 votes.
Verses due by Friday 11.59pm EST. Yeah, that's eastern. not pacific.
Lateness = -2 votes even IF your opponent allows you to post late.
Max. extension = 24 hours, to be granted by your opponent.

Line limits:
10 min and 20 max. for regular battles. 16 min and no max in champ matches. If no line limit agreed, second battler to post must match first battler. But ultimately, first battler gets to set the line number by how much he posts.

Goodluck.

Keith Moon 07-07-08 02:43 AM

Don't post in other threads unless its your battle, or mag/chat thread.

-Lay

Lay. 07-07-08 03:02 AM

Goin 16 dude. Match me...

Kirk 07-07-08 08:04 AM

How bout 20, son?

Lay. 07-11-08 12:13 PM

Were goin 12, an verses due Saturday. We both agreed on extension.

Kirk 07-12-08 05:14 PM

Honestly didn't feel like writing this week. G/L



Quote:
Originally Posted by Lay Fear
This one will come down to the wire


Forreal? Well, I know I'm gonna be dousing your fire... to keep it poppin',
But you're right. What it really comes down to is wire... you even dropping?
This homo's political views are fucked. It's something you make a habit.
Then I found out you hate Bush. That's when I knew you were a faggot.
Your long distance relationshipmust suck. How can you trust her comfortably?
Cause I saw you're from "Above You," When your chicks chillen Under Me,
Lay Fear is underground. Mainstream is somethin' you can't stand, bro,
Only cause you prefer to be constantly jumping in and out of man holes,
This little bitch is as soft as a flower and forreal, his verses are so blah,
That's why I'm so quick to toss Lei and tell this mother fucker Aloha,
Please bitches? Haha, Ya get clowned cause your things refered to as mighty thin,
So next time a bitch says "OH LAY!" they'll be raisin' glasses for my title win.

Kirk 07-12-08 10:58 PM

Lmao, way to no show the champ match, bro.

Lay. 07-12-08 11:00 PM

I just got off work I'll have my verse up in a few minutes nigga.

Kirk 07-12-08 11:01 PM

Nah Son! It's Too Late!

Lay. 07-12-08 11:03 PM

Oh okay, well if you want it like that, then thats cool.

Adam 07-12-08 11:03 PM

I wouldn't count it. Should be leading by example, he's already had an extension, guy is the fucking mod of the league. I say he deserves the loss, it's not like he wrote a 70 line verse earlier this week.

Kirk 07-12-08 11:03 PM

Post your verse, no showin' mod.

Lay. 07-12-08 11:05 PM

lmao at RedBull.., yeah well my bad. Give me a minute..some of us work Kirk..you know what that is don't you?

Kirk 07-12-08 11:06 PM

I got a job, son. Keep the shit talking. I'll take your rights away like THAT.

Lay. 07-12-08 11:21 PM

Aight goodluck bro..


smh..champ match eh?
Think you deserve this? you worthless,..I'll drop this contender.
If its true what they say about firemen - then ya verse is the exact opposite gender.
I'm king bitch, I'm the one you can't swing with..an from your plans your doomed.
This battle would only be simplify actually lowered my verse to your standards too.
Prick, you'll get tossed an clowned..I'm the boss around -
N Kirks pick of the litter.., just a piece of trash picked randomly off the ground.
Your girl gets around, always goin down..so don't be astounded queer.
N I heard that horsefly....which is why ya girl hasn't been on the ground in years.
Liftin weights? Na..this so called player is just meddlesome.
An bitch you ain't in-shape..its JUST the fat girls ya fuck actually resemble em.
When it comes to votes I'm always ahead..so don't ask me for this much.
Ya won't see me lay back,..
............unless ur so far behind thats all you can get a glimpse of.

Kirk 07-12-08 11:28 PM

Worst champ match ever. Haha.

Lay. 07-12-08 11:44 PM

Im sure there has been worse.

Kirk 07-13-08 02:08 AM

You vs. 2v, maybe?

p4ntzistheish 07-13-08 02:14 AM

i'm not gonna be as detailed as I usually am this week. i'm tired and i don't really feel like it. lol

overall this week was good, but weaker than the norm from the both of yous. i gotta give it to kirk, cuz his verse was consistent once again, and his punches mostly hit. lay's verse was just not as good tbh. but that's excusable after your 70 line drop. kirk just edges this one out and i know next week will be better from both.

vote: kirk

Keith Moon 07-13-08 03:10 AM

Forreal? Well, I know I'm gonna be dousing your fire... to keep it poppin',
But you're right. What it really comes down to is wire... you even dropping?
6.5/10 Funny
This homo's political views are fucked. It's something you make a habit.
Then I found out you hate Bush. That's when I knew you were a faggot.
3/10 playyeedd..
Your long distance relationshipmust suck. How can you trust her comfortably?
Cause I saw you're from "Above You," When your chicks chillen Under Me,
5/10 played but a personal.. kinda
Lay Fear is underground. Mainstream is somethin' you can't stand, bro,
Only cause you prefer to be constantly jumping in and out of man holes,
7/10.. had me smirkinggg
This little bitch is as soft as a flower and forreal, his verses are so blah,
That's why I'm so quick to toss Lei and tell this mother fucker Aloha,
7.5/10 wordplay.. me gusta
Please bitches? Haha, Ya get clowned cause your things refered to as mighty thin,
So next time a bitch says "OH LAY!" they'll be raisin' glasses for my title win
8/10 lol

Good wit.. I liked the verse
37/60


smh..champ match eh?
Think you deserve this? you worthless,..I'll drop this contender.
If its true what they say about firemen - then ya verse is the exact opposite gender.
4/10.. not feeling this one
I'm king bitch, I'm the one you can't swing with..an from your plans your doomed.
This battle would only be simplify actually lowered my verse to your standards too.
4/10.. maybe just me but the wording was bad.. punch had no clarity. and kinda a played concept..
Prick, you'll get tossed an clowned..I'm the boss around -
N Kirks pick of the litter.., just a piece of trash picked randomly off the ground.
5/10 Litter and trash.. but yeah.. not enough wit with the trash of the ground.. didnt hit hard
Your girl gets around, always goin down..so don't be astounded queer.
N I heard that horsefly....which is why ya girl hasn't been on the ground in years.
6.5/10 yeaahh.... funny kinda.. but drab
Liftin weights? Na..this so called player is just meddlesome.
An bitch you ain't in-shape..its JUST the fat girls ya fuck actually resemble em.
7/10 hehe
When it comes to votes I'm always ahead..so don't ask me for this much.
Ya won't see me lay back,..
............unless ur so far behind thats all you can get a glimpse of.
7/10 alright

29.5/60


Kirk Wins..

Lay. 07-14-08 12:59 AM

Kirk wins 2 votes to 0.

Kirk (15) and Lay ( 8 )


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