Dazasta Vs. Cameronj86
 

ok rules..
no bullshit votes
no hate votes
d/r votes
12 lines
no biting
prewriting

you wanna go first?...waiting for checkin

not really, how bout we both start writing now and drop when we are done? Due in at half past? Howz that sound?

sure..........................ill start now........

No point in changing rules...Im gifted enough to boast..
and your custom title should be" Herb with a lot of Posts"..
Mediocre at most..and addicted to taking pills..
and i'd have to go to Hell if wanted rate your skills...
Decipate your will...I take lessons in strides...
and if you wanna win..go to "Quote Message In Reply?"..
Weapons in side...It takes skill to win this..
and yes i always got your back...with a knife in it...
Need and eyewitness?...witnesses said that I..
murked you..and suggested that "you need dick in your life"..
yes i stick it..thas right..i Dismantle your posts...
CameronJ only means..that Cameron's a Joke...

fuck I only got six and times up, gimmie a couple more minutes, I won't bite off of your verse since you already posted it, my bad, I got a brain freeze

it dont matter...you can have the time............

I'll drop my verse to seperate the real emcees from the gays
Destroy any chance for "dazata" like EMT's and the CIA
I'm better than you, 3 lines and already no way you can top that
Like Native Americans... there is no way you gettin ya spot back
Dazatas a rapper? What is he doing to get his name sold??
Like movies digitally remastered, just a new spin on the same old.
You heard that he's a good rapper? Don't believe the hype
I came to get polled, he want's to get poled and lay pipe
RB's badboy, now I'm back and better cuz I'm sick with it
Only time he's on the straight and narrow is riding his bf's dick

.........................................holla back..uppin 1

DAMN....
Heated battle...
Some dope shit from both
But since Dazasta in my crew
I wont vote........
But damn...... Nice from both

CameronJ you want in Executives?

Sheeeeeeeit Good To See You Back
Cameron....

Damn I'd Breakthis Shit Down But To
Be Honest I Thin Daz Got Murdered.
Cam Came Pretty Good To Not Have
Battled In A While, And Some Of Daz's
Punches Were Like Ehhh. I Think Daz
May Have Had On Punch In His Verse
The Rest Was Not Effective Or IT Was
Filler. Cameron Came Prepared, His
First 3 Barz Was Nice. Then He Fell
Off Btw Ever I'm Gonna Vote Cameron
For And Overall Better Verse He Took It
In Every Catergory.

v/Cameronj86

alright I'm uppin this battle for vote.... I just voted on a shitload of battles, so I'll just wait for some people to vote on dis one...

No point in changing rules...Im gifted enough to boast..
and your custom title should be" Herb with a lot of Posts"..
??...ok...not good...2/10

Mediocre at most..and addicted to taking pills..
and i'd have to go to Hell if wanted rate your skills...
filler if i've ever seen one....2/10

Decipate your will...I take lessons in strides...
and if you wanna win..go to "Quote Message In Reply?"..
no no no....2/10

Weapons in side...It takes skill to win this..
and yes i always got your back...with a knife in it...
do u really??....3/10

Need and eyewitness?...witnesses said that I..
murked you..and suggested that "you need dick in your life"..
no...again..wording is asshole..2/10

yes i stick it..thas right..i Dismantle your posts...
CameronJ only means..that Cameron's a Joke...
consistent with the rest..2/10

overall for Daz...13/60




I'll drop my verse to seperate the real emcees from the gays
Destroy any chance for "dazata" like EMT's and the CIA
first line is wackest shit i've ever read...but...u came back for a 3/10

I'm better than you, 3 lines and already no way you can top that
Like Native Americans... there is no way you gettin ya spot back
nice try..but no!!!!!! 2/10

Dazatas a rapper? What is he doing to get his name sold??
Like movies digitally remastered, just a new spin on the same old.
ok..not too hard hitting though...4/10

You heard that he's a good rapper? Don't believe the hype
I came to get polled, he want's to get poled and lay pipe
so what???...3/10

RB's badboy, now I'm back and better cuz I'm sick with it
Only time he's on the straight and narrow is riding his bf's dick
horrible...just plain horrible..1/10


overall for cameron...13/50....he wins



Wack ass battle right chea..neither had any good lines
cameron came not as bad so he takes this...peace

Pretty good battle...

Daz..you had a good structure and some nice punches but some lacked creativity although they still were good some okie wordplay try and use more personals they really help in battles..but the ones you had were good.

Cam...good solid verse...a little harder hitting punches then daz same type of flow/structure but the personals were okie and some more complexity..

can you both drop a vote on one of my battles pleae honestly..thanks

Vote. Cam

Well shit..I dont know about everybody else, but I think Daz got this shit.He had better punches, less filler,..more effective hitting punches..less bullshit..structure was good and so was flow..and also..vocab..

cameron..I wasnt feeling your verse..uh huh..no way..not at all..the lines was weak..in my opinion..and you had some fillers..alot of fillers..some of the attempted punches was pointless..like the native american line..booo to that..and that poled lay pipe line just..the..ender..the was the final straw.....in wackness..

my vote goes to Daz..

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113306

Daz - solid verse.. not ya best.. but thoroughly consistant.. non-stop punches.. used the personals to good effect an created some nice concepts for ya metas.. flow was neat.. let yaself down a lil wiv the 'knife in ya back' line.. although that particular version mite be new the whole concept is old.. nice creative verse tho..

Cam - 'new spin on the same old' = best line of the battle.. but the rest of ya verse let u down.. u werent personal enuff.. alot of general punches that werent connectin tho they were creative.. u seemed to slip towards the end as well.. prolly cos u were rushin.. def not ya best..

VoTe = Daz

Drop a vote on this both of u plz a.s.a.p:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111096

...1

lol @ this ancient battle... upping for votes.............

^^Lol.

...
 

ight, props to both, you both actually brought some different shit that made both yours unique..

With Structure n Personals n Flo, it goes to cam jus the way he brought it all together went hella good..

Dezata ypu brought the metas, vocab, n emotion leaves it a 3/3

Punches is what is the final decider, n cam went solid with his punches right through makin the tip in his favor, but props to both..

Vote: Cam

Both of you, return the favor here..: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=141355

Proof that its not me Homo..IM posting.My IP doesnt even fucking matchup hoe

v/ Daz

he had more wit and funny punches...cameron was okay but wasnt exciting...Daz killed it all the way through...and thats why he won....oldies battle...

LMAO..so even Though im not him. Ur still not winning.

cam good vocab and punches were ok flow was off a little as well as struture and that hurt your verse still a 5/10
daz good punches but they couldve been better and your vocab needs work nice flow and good struture 6/10
neither of you had good personals but daz had harder punches to win this

wow this shit is old..weird voting on peeps'is shit ive never read b4..both good verses but i felt daz pulled away with better context n personals...even if i don't get them all...lol..cam yourv only nice punch that really connected was the 3rd bar...it was a coo concept...but my vote goes ta daz...