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Freestyle-King vs UnPaveMyPath
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10 - 14 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 04-28-05 at 03:32 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Freestyle-King has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-25-05 03:35 PM.
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I spit so much, my lungs get SWELLED UP/
my tonsils get HELD UP/ as soon as you agreed to this shit, you just got your-SELF FUCKED UP/ Next time, I'll get more DETAILS/ for RETAILS, I ain't know Rapbattles was full of FEMALES/ UnPave..., you will have your chance, you will BLEW YOUR REVENGE/ and what I'll DO IF YOU WIN/ Is make you eat my shit THROUGH A SYRENGE/ With the SYRENGES blowing with the power of many ENGINES/ I blow past your flow in with TEN MENS and VENGANCE/ Hold up a dildo, like WHO'S IS THIS?/ It's My Dick.... what you USE TO KISS/ Im snappin, rappin, attackin like this was your CRUCIFIX/ Put up your written shit, I'll tear that JOKE TO A PREFIX/ |
Man dont take 3 dayz to drop man damn that is so long
u probably a newb man wat the fuk |
Look how many posts you have... and then call me a noob again
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noob.............................................i t doesn't matter how much post you have it is determined on how long you have been rappin, battlin, freestylin etc..
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UnPaveMyPath has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-25-05 04:12 PM.
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Lets reveal the truth... its wack that you think you're big, you can tell hes an herb explaining his hobbies within his sig.* Forcing lines isn't an option and you could never attend a gig, ya flows something not even a miner would begin to dig, What exactly is "trill"? anyway you little bitch come and see, This actor... what do you expect from this Lil Flip wannabe, As far as i'm concerned, homie you ain't even worthy of frees, The way I look at your sig., its seems you're encouraging me!** Preparing to injure with lyrics, so just watch or look, nobody cares about SODA boys because if you 'drop' your 'shook',*** ya lyricless... how queer is this... ya unable to drop a hook, Only way you 'droppin sense' is if you fumbled your pocketbook, Or change purse, and your lame verse, must be fakin "wows", couldn't make anyone say OOO even if ya verse was made of vowels, *in his sig. he has stuff that should be in his profile... **Now keep it trill yall and stay merkin'em <---in his sig. ***Sota Boys... also in his sig. |
Yes.. I'm a noob right? Haha Thats funny. But the act you put on of being a "freestyle king" is even funnier
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Voted For: UnPaveMyPath
Lets reveal the truth... its wack that you think you're big, you can tell hes an herb explaining his hobbies within his sig.* Nope.. Forcing lines isn't an option and you could never attend a gig, ya flows something not even a miner would begin to dig, Weak... What exactly is "trill"? anyway you little bitch come and see, This actor... what do you expect from this Lil Flip wannabe, Eh, ok.. As far as i'm concerned, homie you ain't even worthy of frees, The way I look at your sig., its seems you're encouraging me!** Good.. Preparing to injure with lyrics, so just watch or look, nobody cares about SODA boys because if you 'drop' your 'shook',*** OK ya lyricless... how queer is this... ya unable to drop a hook, Only way you 'droppin sense' is if you fumbled your pocketbook, Good.. Or change purse, and your lame verse, must be fakin "wows", couldn't make anyone say OOO even if ya verse was made of vowels, Weak finish... Even so, Freestyle King was completely wack, nothing worth quoting.......terrible spit with no personals, mostly self-glorification.. |
wait one minute i know u don't think that that is lil flip in my sig. cause if u do than u don't know nothing about rap mayne
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Who gives a fuck about mainstream rap........ |
Haha. I know Lil Flip claims he is a "freestyle king"
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ohh i got u playa i thought that u thought that that was lil flip in my sig iight mayne i got u
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uppin this k.o.....................................
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Voted For: UnPaveMyPath
Alright Unpave takes this home...........its an alright battle. Buts it was good. Both had good punche and pave had better structure. So Pave comes out on top........Ayo Freestyle King Come battle me........I need a Battle |
Voted For: UnPaveMyPath
damn one sided battle... UPMP- whats your alias man...? and if you aint got one then its just gunna make it easier for me to whore you when the time comes... FK- your shit sucked you need to elevate on your structure and your flow... your punches need to be stronger ... but yeah this is just feedback so im notgunna get to into it |
uppin............................................. .
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This was feedback posted for UnPaveMyPath
damn Freestyle-King got pwned....Badly....I mean BADLY.....like he's crying now....probably....
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This was feedback posted for UnPaveMyPath
checkin polls......................................
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This was feedback posted for Freestyle-King
your rap was corny get that shit off of this site.....
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Voted For: UnPaveMyPath
UnPaveMyPath- this is a good battle. I like your flow you were rhyming it well..your structure was really good...keep working hard cuz you will be very good 7/10 Freestyle-King - Your freestyle was not that long... I was not feelin your flow and your structure. UnPaveMyPath came at you hard and you did not do that good. 5/10 V/UnPaveMyPath |
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