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...Genius... 'vs' Oreo
Rules Good Luck Both |
bout to prove i elavated
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yea check been workin sorry if i'm late...
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you changed your name?
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yea why?....i smell prewrittens.....hmmm.....you droppin tonight?...
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are you, i dont prewrite, i had some pre thoughts like every rapper but you just made it more fun with the last min change, wat are you, we can do this shit if you wanna?
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yea dawg drop tonight when ever ima finish d/l my songs an start writing i guess so whats good i'm sure you wanna drop asap to?.....
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yeah so we just drop them where in wat im writing in? it aint like the front ines?
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yea just write in here it aint like in FL....aiight drop ya verse an lemme d/l my songs an i'll try to drop tonight.....
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aight but get at me, pm me when yu drop yours
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yea i'm about to drop
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his raps are a disgrace its got me mad like a "raped ape" check his battle links he's lyrically fucked like paris on that sex "tape" his rhymes are cute but gay like jacko mini "mall's" kid couldnt flow if i through his dead body in niagra "falls" cant get any play so he goes from male butt to "butt" respect your daddy if i woulda been wearin a rubba you still woulda been swingin nut to "nut" he begged me to get in my crew but he wasnt "Destined 2 Rhyme" now just anutha win on my record forever "defined in time" yall got me battlen this "rookie" who names himself after a "cookie?" lmfao fuck this cut it off i aint even battlen a kid named oreo lmfao |
in this battle you gonna need a lyrical vest to help ya,
cuz my flow is on fire, touching my bars will melt ya, he aint a genouis no more so he calls him self apoclalypse, and the only reasony you spittin is cuz you rap wit a lisp, go writers block so you record fallin like alicia keys, you are the end but its to an era of wack emc'ess, 8 mile can be your style but you caint liv long as an archrival, so put a condom on an fuck beyonce, she knows alil bout survival, aint trying to diis you but you'll win bitch, wait hold up, let me grab my tissue,(achoo) :laugh:]im alleric to bullshit :shocked: |
uppin this good job i'm fuckin rusty as hell i gotta get bak to battlen....uppin yall...
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*sighs* i dont like doin this cuz u was winnin oreo...
...but you bit off me. i like the compliment but thats just a disgrace, and apo, u have to come waaaaaaay better next time. |
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i dont know what oreo was thinkin:
oreo: white and black rhymes seem to have played the role of a horrible collab. but keep ya head up, there will be easier bucks to tackle soon enough. ya rhymes are just a tad played, ya good though, ya recovery isnt too far off. just add some decent punches, some up to date structure and ya good. keep elevating buddy. a'poc: ya keyed on the better half of this battle, ya had a killer opening, the closure was honestly rusty, but ya structure and wordplay were beautiful. nice punches especially for a person who hasnt battled in a decade. its good to see your out there battlin again, just dont catch me with an open slot. haha. vote: apoc. |
k i hafe to vote honest i think ggenius won apoc or w/e long ass name oreo needs elavation tho but still good in all but not feelin his verse:
oreo: k you came hard one of yer best ive heard from you but you aint good enouhg to beat apoc hes to good for you and more skilled hes a vet no fuckin with a vet lol a lil vocabulary from you but not to much i seen but try and work on wordplay and stucture they were off badly specialy structure and flow. apoc: k you took this man with ease lol you had way better flow and wordplay, punchlines nicely played. oreo got badly played but you need work on vocab it need serious work but you still better then me no doubt about that......... VOTE: apoc return the favour in any of my battles....sig is where the links at |
...Apocalypse... advances because Oreo will be banned.
Closed Pz. |
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