Write To This Picture: December '04
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Write to this picture by surftomas for December:
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Surreal entities, take over and dominate ma dreams
Im walkin in an abyss, surrounded by strange oddities Damn yo, it hard 2 figure if dese tings friends or enemies I shudnt hav smoked dat last J, cos ma mind is meesin wit me spherical shapes in da sky, damn i must be higher than high Random imagery flies, incadescent picture swoosh past ma eyes |
I'm feeling you G, i shouldn't have toked that lightest green
Now im horny as fuck, and I swear tha bitch in the corner just winked at me!!.. As I think, I realize I'm walking thru a puzzle, a maze...A Labyrinth! So many pieces seem to fit... But to my amaze...They were just actin!!.. Why get high?...Why let time just pass you by?... Most say for the elevated feelin or stress, I say cuz I'm afraid to fly!!.. Its debated, The mind is a dangerous weapon when stimulated... And it can really throw you off wit all that random shit if wrongfully penetrated!!.. -keyed.... |
"systems in a down"
this crazy and confused world of ours lost touch with the galaxy's plans now universal disorder is in order...controlled by the magic hands of man we as humanity have become too busy traveling these unraveling paths with no sense of direction but an ignorant perception for the aftermath God created us in his own image then gave us free will and spirited souls we sold those clearance price to control a globe in hopes of infinite gold all's we got were the woes of those in which we should never of known every piece of the puzzle has been lost or hidden in the forbidden zones how did we cross lines deemed impassable and surpass the unimaginable why did the tangible turn out dismantled and strength become so fragile when did broad daylight become a designated place to hide our shadows whats the purpose of illuminating darkness when it finds all the whackos wheres plan b? or a right way, or the choice that wont fail ever so often we're too busy tackling issues instead of removing the nails in our coffins how 'bout this...embrace pain, evade the sane...and frequent our sorrow the journey will not be made...if there is nothing worth seeking tomorrow ...the super...c.s. |
These grounds I walk upon are fitting pieces in an unkown puzzle..
I call out for help into the blackness, but my voice is muffled.. Throughout this abstract dream, I will hold on and never let go.. I screamed upon eternity...and I'm still waiting to hear an echo.. A deformed man looks to the skies, and see's the puzzled clouds.. In the world of unknown meaning and thoughts, confusion is renowned.. Emotion is lost into the craniums of men, and fiends reliquish hate.. Rewind times as corrupted minds begin to cripple and break.. Poetic flows cannot describe this place in which I hide.. For this abstract place of unknown meanings, It's the portrait of my mind.. |
as a man stares at me from far above
i feel god givin me the love as i walk to god my feet lift off the ground from here on out i know im no longer bound as i walk on clouds floatin above just where i stood i look at god cryin so i know he under stood as i live my life in heaven ive left all the dark times behind me so now im in gods hands knowing that im free |
Allllright
Metallic elephants, metallic planes, a path to take,
Its hard to tell if this is real or if im just half awake, Is this a fegment of my imagination or somethin else, Im paraniod and I really need somebodies fuckin help, Confused... cuz all I see is puzzle peices in the sky, Oh shit, thats right, I took a few hits of acid didn't i? |
Acidic dreams float by im melodramatic slowness puzzling immages decend from the heavens above quickly the vision is clear, metaphorical armagedon diplomatic scenes of virtue and diplomacy given life by the god above peering through with a million eyes burning into our souls, stop the maddness and the hate planes crashing and people a-flame, he is angry repent, hail marry full of grace the lord is with me now is the time for our judgement, we sleep we dream |
appealing factors of what people's eyes capture, everythings fake, nothings real
notions of emotions being conveyed in my mind see more than i view is surreal i have screws loose and my behind is rollin.....but i wonder where is my caboose truth can only be percieved with the bulbs of light that shadow angles being obtuse my path is puzzled but the pieces fit....floating above are the choices that stick stick infront of every action so theyr infact inpactin my decisions that flick envisions that emit other thoughts and consequences for the missions to pick everything can go either way whether its the man, elephant, light bug, or plane trains of thought being corrupted by the brain that remains so unstably insane :thumbup: |
Creators Betrayals Other worlds another dimension, face filled with so much tension... Unfinished universe, missing peices, God's not putting attention... This mans lifes in suspension, he's walking away from our earth... But who is this man, I mean he has been with us since its birth... Alert, the world's shattering, all of this creation is falling apart... The atmosphere is fading away, its all rewinding back to the start... With no heart, this insanity's marking the beggining of the end... I mean, the universe is so unstable,... not even God can mend... The sky is bent, darkness went, the Earths falling into an abyss... Pray one last time, for the blessing to give the Earth one last kiss... But now real person turning away from us, and this is really odd... That, the one who created us, and turning away from us... is God... |
Missin puzzle pieces have currupted my direction
Walkin wit out affection has diminished my obsession PLains, trains, and robots have conquered the planet Realize the truth, human nature could't handle it Twilght Zone filled with Rhetorical rhyme schemes Yellow CAUTION tape's blocked off Historical crime scenes Extraterrestrials roaming no-mans-land Hostile environment has put a loaded weapon in our hands No respect for human nature, No more tears to cry In the future no one gives a fuck if you DIE thas a tight picture though for real, i didn't really understand but i tried to make the best of it. |
I think the picture means..
the modernization..of nature..broekn animal acres.. from the king of the jungle..to ranning by mayors.. bee's ran not be heart..but by a mans light bulb.. and wings being replaced..with 2 pairs of light gloves.. its not the wordl..its life and the price of..all for years.. its all proved..with an human image in the wall of cphere.. -deph |
Temporally im alone in space pondering about my Life As im walking it feels like I’m losing breath from a Knife When I try to reach out to catch a breath I tremble in Fear As I step near & see aliens witch made me shead a Tear I’m stop to look up in the sky as of witch there is no Sky I see a different planet & feels like its falling for me to Lie It feels like im in such a puzzle my mind twitches to a Beat Sounds of teachers from school asking me to take my Seat A ring of fire trying to burn my chest as in this was all a Test As I walk to where im distend to be I go to sleep in a Nest Parallel- Beyond True Power |
its my first time ta write a rhme for a pic so listin
the clock hit 12 dot dot zero zero // eyes drifted as my thoughts rose of a rap hero// what already came to pass is flashin in ny iris's // and i was effected with necglected thoughts that was like viris's// an as a white rode appeared in my eyes // i looked around and sawl that god was showing me my life // what happen when it happen my future was flashing // this dream was repeating my hole heart beat from the begging of my presents on the hence world called earth // god was showing me ever moment in my life all the way from birth// and thats that it says to me that i fell a sleep and god took my mind throw my beggiing on earth and the pic shows taht my dream just begun cuss it shows animals and that for babys so its the begging for me if you know what im sayin |
kaos dimension
watch matter materialise
once realised in my eyes can u visualise, words to the wise beware these snake guys trues take my hand and i'll take you to the promised land get lost like a grain of sand in my land, made with due attention i care too much to mention digital, meets the physical, the kaos dimension peices of my mind fragmented, like data thats hard to find will the weed help bind? or fray, causing chaos to rule the day? watch reality dissapear, what IS your place here with me? you didnt mention, but i see the tension of reality, has saw fit to set you free but before you cease to exist, exist in peace with me because order is all good, but the chaos can set you free |
my first time too...
racing towards time wit my mind scrambled in disarray rays of light wit elephants rushing, screamin towards my face i face the light its truth holding all in store for soul and tho i'm infront of the sun this journey seems so cold the long trek by foot to realist points of view seems to be my everlastin walk thas never through |
i'm just trying to put together the pieces to the puzzle
it's been to years but im still just tryin to put together the ruble That the planes caused and even though i'm not an elephant i'll never forget that why i can't believe when people don't get why i get upset but soon i will reach that portal and i will become immortal then i can just live but i'll still try to grab lightening bugs to try and get the light they give cause i'm trying to get in the game the express way so i'm soon to be the the king of the world name A.K.A. |
what i think this thing means
gods puzzle millions of pieces
looks down at his million sheepis made a puzzle for man to connect life might make it might fail on the first try sets the path and the foundation you have to choose lifes dowmation at the end of your puzzle your closer to him so fix your puzzle to make pieces fit lose sin skies the limit and nails are in your path how will you handle it and learn da math every man takes this path thats why theres no face we take it too slow or we react in fear of death w/ haste how many bees are in your comb and how many bulbs light ur fuse how many seeze the day and how many sit back like the muse when your puzzle is finished will it be small n have no one to approve live the puzzle dont sit back to watch pieces you got nothin to lose Insight from B.Wall................. |
I crossed worlds like a crossword puzzle/
Where people get a screw loose and where hustlers get hustled/ This is the time port of an era of carrying a mic in my hand/ And if you flew like plane you can never land/ I never new once you take off you go higher than planets/ I’m stuck in the diverse world of rapping and I didn’t plan it/ I move like a steam-train with no steam/ It goes on like water but not in a stream/ My mind buzzes like a bee/ My mind sparks like a light bulb that you can see/ |
i'm sorry for the free post but i was just wondering if some one picks a winner? or is it just for fun?
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i came to school after playing a game that i just mastered, only later to find out i came face to face with this fat bastard we exchanged words until i got plastered but since then i've been having dreams of a worldly hazard, every time i wake up swearing that i just saw armeggeddon and i truly thought that the world was ending, all the visions of it twisting and bending but only to find out that my mind was pretending, i saw so many colors that they started blending til i wake up in the morning swirling and sweating, regretting that i ever fucked with him so then my sane probability wouldn't be so slim, it drove me to the point where i just rushed home and cried trying to decide,til later when my parents came home they just found out i committed suicide
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I'm livin life ta tha end now I'm trapped in a time warps
Now I undastand tha ol' sayin don't live life like a dead corps, So I'm finally off my ass tryin ta get my shit together but I can't match tha pieces of tha puzzle up wit one another, Damn what's goin on am I hallucinatin elephants ain't dat small Trains ryde on rells An bees weren't dat tall, |
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