Oreo vs Kordozar
Battle Rules:
6 - 10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting 20 Posts?Fucc Outta Hea Minimum posts to vote: 650 Check in by: 02-14-05 at 01:32 AM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. Closed - Expired / old battle |
oreo has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-14-05 12:49 AM.
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Kordozar has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-14-05 12:56 AM.
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Zekes Professional Masturbator Iss His Work Occupation.. Located In Merktown Cincanatti Where He's That Onli Population.. He Stinks,On Tha Verge Of Bien Extinct Like Bison.. Uses His "Head" Tha Most Out Of His Crew Of Wisemen.. Zeke And Oreo 2 Pussies In Love Who Host Dykes.. Left Kester Dead Along Time Ago,So Thass Why Oreo Ask Him Ta Ghost Write.. Brotha Who "Acts"A "Sista" Quit Singin Like Whoopi... During 3 Somes His Tha Creme In Tha Middle Like His Selftitled Cookie.. **Explanations** Before He Cleared All His Info His Location Wass Merktown.. Bisons Are Almost Extinct,And His Crew Wass Called Wisemen.. Whoopi Goldberg Played In Sista Act And She Wass Singin Oreo Cookies Have Three Parts Chocolate Cookie-Top Creme-Middle Chocolate Cookie Bottom... |
Uppin Hiz Verse And I Know If Zeke Ghost Wrote Fa You I Can Tell If You Have N e Personals............
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Kordazr get ya head cracked from behind, ill ask you how it feel
Only time your lyrics exercise a mind is putting the brian on a treadmill Rap like r kelly having sex,mainly its only the youngins you fucking Daffy is the best choice for you avy, cuz with out 20 posts you duckin* Oreo listens but only hears good rap coming from your local radio tuner Zip up ya grades cuz its like you got your fathers name, ya forever a junior** Already squashing this emcce face it man your not a fearce opponent Read a math book cuz ya rhyming abilty multiply's zero as an exponent*** first*= he ducked our first battle and only added some bullshit about wanting 20 posts http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=176987 second**= he failed 11 grade twice so hes a junior for the third time thid***= his ailas was "exponent" |
famo i have an alias, i read all, i write my own verses dont get scared already
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Tha Fucc I Failed 11th Grade Twice Zeke Stop Sayin Stupid Shit Im In Mih Rite Grade I Dont Even Go Ta School No More And Exponent Wasnt Mih Alais And Oreo Wass Ya Name Fa Tha Longest Zeke Seriously Stop Tellin Money Fake Shit Fa I Punch You In Ya Mouth Tru Story........
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prove this shit, i have an alias man, so whats good, why do you type like you gangsta man you shitty
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Lol Iight Occ Talk All Tha Rap You Want I Dont Talk Like Shit I Type What Imma Do And Why You Backin Up Zeke You Fuckin Him Or Somethin?Lol Calm Ya Geek Ass Down.......
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This was feedback posted for Kordozar
Both pretty good.... Oreos R Kelly line is funny, and the junior line. Kordz I think edged him out though. He didnt really need the explanations which is a plus.
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he had explanations, your a fucking newbie you wouldnt have lnow i was in the wisemen, get the fuck out of here before i get the kryptonite,
kor did you notice the first letter to each of my bars spells your name fagets |
Lol He Said I Didn't Need Explanations Dickhead And How You Kno I Wass In Tha 11th Grade?Zeke Tole You Cus He Tha Onli 1 Who Know N e Thang About Me Yo Don't Battle Me No More If You Gonna Have Ghost Writers.........
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Uppin Thiss Shit.................
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uppin...........i have an alias famo i read and see all, i have no ghost writer, have stobe check my pm;s
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This was feedback posted for Kordozar
Checking The Polls
Nice Drop Kor...................... |
Yo Uppin Some Votes Damn!!!!!
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upppin............you know how many votes i done in other peeps battles and they aint return the favor
hey could you put your daffy avy back up till the battle over, no beef just asking |
This was feedback posted for oreo
Kordazr get ya head cracked from behind, ill ask you how it feel
Only time your lyrics exercise a mind is putting the brian on a treadmill ......decent coulda been alot better, kinda played too though Rap like r kelly having sex,mainly its only the youngins you fucking Daffy is the best choice for you avy, cuz with out 20 posts you duckin* .....nope Oreo listens but only hears good rap coming from your local radio tuner Zip up ya grades cuz its like you got your fathers name, ya forever a junior** ......nice, make ur entire verse this good Already squashing this emcce face it man your not a fearce opponent Read a math book cuz ya rhyming abilty multiply's zero as an exponent*** ......ok closer Zekes Professional Masturbator Iss His Work Occupation.. Located In Merktown Cincanatti Where He's That Onli Population.. ....ummm, no He Stinks,On Tha Verge Of Bien Extinct Like Bison.. Uses His "Head" Tha Most Out Of His Crew Of Wisemen.. .......ditto Zeke And Oreo 2 Pussies In Love Who Host Dykes.. Left Kester Dead Along Time Ago,So Thass Why Oreo Ask Him Ta Ghost Write.. still no Brotha Who "Acts"A "Sista" Quit Singin Like Whoopi... During 3 Somes His Tha Creme In Tha Middle Like His Selftitled Cookie.. ......good concept, needs better wording ummm.....its kinda sad cuz lookin at his post count you'd think kordozar was a vet but sorry but ya not, be more creative, the personals were there but the punch didnt hit all that hard oreo had a pretty decent verse but im kinda surprised that i didnt see too much nameplay by kordozar with a name like oreo, lmao.......good concepts, punches hit pretty hard so yea, he gets my vote vote-oreo, damn i wish i realized before i left all this feed that i needed 650 posts to vote |
damn, jus realized the 1st word in each of his lines spelled Kordozar
and btw oreo, ya links not workin |
Yo anyway.........................................upp in for kor
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Kats Always Hatin Fuccin Pussi,Uppin Thiss.........
*RunTelDat* |
This was feedback posted for Kordozar
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upppin, damn kopr you get people uppin for you????
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This was feedback posted for oreo
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^^why the fuck you uppin for me???? who the hell is you, but uppinnn
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Voted For: oreo
Breakdown... Name:OREO Verse: Kordazr get ya head cracked from behind, ill ask you how it feel Only time your lyrics exercise a mind is putting the brian on a treadmill Rap like r kelly having sex,mainly its only the youngins you fucking Daffy is the best choice for you avy, cuz with out 20 posts you duckin* Oreo listens but only hears good rap coming from your local radio tuner Zip up ya grades cuz its like you got your fathers name, ya forever a junior** Already squashing this emcce face it man your not a fearce opponent Read a math book cuz ya rhyming abilty multiply's zero as an exponent*** Need/Don’t need to work on:Sup fam...beenm a minute...anyways um i think you got this..right now you dont have to work on anything bruh....nice shyt. just through in some multis. Stats... Punches:7/10 Metaphors:5/10 Wordplay:4/10 Structure:7/10 Personals:6/10 Multies:0/10 Total:29/50 Percentage:58.0% -------------------------------------------------- Name:Kordozar Verse: Zekes Professional Masturbator Iss His Work Occupation.. Located In Merktown Cincanatti Where He's That Onli Population.. He Stinks,On Tha Verge Of Bien Extinct Like Bison.. Uses His "Head" Tha Most Out Of His Crew Of Wisemen.. Zeke And Oreo 2 Pussies In Love Who Host Dykes.. Left Kester Dead Along Time Ago,So Thass Why Oreo Ask Him Ta Ghost Write.. Brotha Who "Acts"A "Sista" Quit Singin Like Whoopi... During 3 Somes His Tha Creme In Tha Middle Like His Selftitled Cookie.. Need/Don’t need to work on:hey...um..overall a "meh" verse...nothin special...work on everything....had personals though... Stats: Punches:4/10 Metaphors:4/10 Wordplay:0/10 Structure:5/10 Personals:7/10 Multies:0/10 Total:20/10 Percentage:40.0% RTF in the sig against J DOT...personally felt i won....hope you feel the same way.. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
This was feedback posted for oreo
Polls,good drops both yall.
Oreo i wanna battle you. |
who the fuck is you pound????? battle me for what??? set it up
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Oreo I Found Out That Kester Wass Ya Ghost Writer Pussy I Knew You Couldn't Write It Ya Self You Used Him Ta Ghost Write Bitch Ass Nigga
Uppin................. |
the fuck you talking bout man, how he my ghostwriter????
shit mither fucker you another parrellel when i, oreo start to win you start to bitch out |
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