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Archeologist 10-17-04 05:08 PM

Socrates 'vs' Daz 'vs' Sdizzle
 
Rules
G'luck Both


Vote Who Came 1st 2nd 3rd.
We will add the votes up and who finishe's 1st and 2nd will advance to the Semi's

Logic The Goonie 10-17-04 05:12 PM

Daz lets make this a good one.:) sdizzle, like show or something :huh:

Check.

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=155797
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=155793

Daz 10-17-04 06:26 PM

lmao. this will be funny.

sdizzle 10-17-04 06:49 PM

yea check.................

sdizzle 10-18-04 01:30 PM

your back socrates?
seems u left rv, noone knew, and returned cuz u missed us
now u say ur presense is blessed? ha, like the friggin devils christmas
u aint even the best of your time, just thought u'd like to know
considering socrates ideas are like his money, all play dough
now ur styles played out, and guess what dizzle just found
how you both lost last week, but still advanced to the next round
thats funny, and bullshit.... but its only cuz this fag is gassed
cuz if u were half as good as u sigs.....no, ud still be pretty bad
this match is a gimme, damn i was hoping for a real challenge
not this fruit with:
no crew, no battles, just a nack for using other peoples talent
then daz comes to plate, i wont even check his battle last week
hes a mod on rb..... with 3/4 no-show's in his JUNIOR league
and the sad part is they'll believe what they arent sure is true
shit if you think ur tired of it, the board must be exhausted of you

Daz 10-18-04 02:08 PM

Theres a 14 line limit.
But egh fuck it ill go 28 son.
14 for each of you. I'll edit this in with a verse.

Logic The Goonie 10-19-04 12:08 AM

noooo, dont do that. its 14 lines, if sdizzle wants to be dq'ed then ehh, thats his problem. ill see if i can work something out with him cuz i aint feelin the cheap win :(

Logic The Goonie 10-19-04 06:03 PM



^sdizzle^



^Daz^

Take out these fuckin fools, 1-2 in succession
Fuck ugly, dizzle's face is a new cure for depression
You can brag about your posts and wins on RB
And i'll brag about how wife beaters ACTUALLY FIT ME
Shit im here to attack, Soc's killer lyrics is on the swarm
Make dizzles chances lower then the fat hangin from his arm
Daz agrees a tub of lard jumped into sdizzles gene pool
While hes a midget with glasses on trying to seem "cool"
Fake jerseys dont phase me ive been a king for ages
To reach the keyboard he,gotta sit on the white AND yellow pages
I should just stop right here, both you faggots are done
Chances are like anorexia becoming holy, slim to nun
Daz the slut, cum in his mouth and he takes it in the butt
how do i know this^^^? hes SO TIRED of chewing the nut

Daz 10-20-04 04:19 PM

Your Gay For Posting Pics.
I didnt even know that shit was allowed.
Anyway Heres a quick 14.

These kids are walked over, after they're knocked in the street...
Is that wrong? i just wanted to keep Soc's on my feet...
So what? your verses made me throw up so grow up..
Told Dizzle to go nuts...Ended with pizza, chips and donuts..
Bad and tough? kid your just mad you suck..
And i'd use a Hall Of Shame line..But dizzle's just bad enough..
Dudes Ur new to this your verses were stupid bitch...
I wanted to diss soc, but why waste time doing it?..
Soc just sucks, and dizzle is So-So...
but why complain about a league when you fucking no showed?
Socs in my league too, Should retire chump...
Chuz i burn down these fags houses and had 'em all fired up...
and im a meanie son, no im not a nice dude..
When speaking of jokes, when all know this hoe's real...
And ur skill?please ur making mountains out of molehills....

Premanition 10-20-04 05:19 PM

owwwwww....this was nice....liked this alot...all came gud but really it ended up between two...

dizzle you came o.k ya flow was nice n had some o.k punches in there but i just feel u were out of ur league here slightly...

socrates.....tight shit dawg, real tight, flow was perfect n there were plenty of quotable punches in there...i'll personally liked -

"Take out these fuckin fools, 1-2 in succession
Fuck ugly, dizzle's face is a new cure for depression"

^^^ i like funny lines n this did have me laughin....nice punch...

daz - you came nice here dawg wiv gud flow n some nice multis in there, punches were strong to....again some funny shit....liked in this verse -

So what? your verses made me throw up so grow up..
Told Dizzle to go nuts...Ended with pizza, chips and donuts..

^^^funny line, man i've been rollin around the floor wiv some of these punches...

Conclusion

my vote goes to....

...socrates....you both came nice but basically socrates had the more consistant punches...i felt he was comin hard wiv most of his lines whereas daz had some really nice barz then some where i thought ya fell off abit...

1st = socrates
2nd = daz
3rd = dizzle

nice shit y'all

peace

sdizzle 10-20-04 05:48 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Premanition
owwwwww....this was nice....liked this alot...all came gud but really it ended up between two...

dizzle you came o.k ya flow was nice n had some o.k punches in there but i just feel u were out of ur league here slightly...

socrates.....tight shit dawg, real tight, flow was perfect n there were plenty of quotable punches in there...i'll personally liked -

"Take out these fuckin fools, 1-2 in succession
Fuck ugly, dizzle's face is a new cure for depression"

^^^ i like funny lines n this did have me laughin....nice punch...

daz - you came nice here dawg wiv gud flow n some nice multis in there, punches were strong to....again some funny shit....liked in this verse -

So what? your verses made me throw up so grow up..
Told Dizzle to go nuts...Ended with pizza, chips and donuts..

^^^funny line, man i've been rollin around the floor wiv some of these punches...

Conclusion

my vote goes to....

...socrates....you both came nice but basically socrates had the more consistant punches...i felt he was comin hard wiv most of his lines whereas daz had some really nice barz then some where i thought ya fell off abit...

nice shit y'all

peace


apparently someones never read the hundreds of punches against how i look....

Abraxas 10-20-04 06:13 PM

Both were good.....
this is just feedback.. this does not count as a vote... or w/e
1- daz
2-soc
3. dizz

soc and dizz were close....

Valor 10-22-04 01:54 AM

socrates-
you had hard,dope,and funny ass personals,along with oretty dope punches,you flow was excellent i must say and so was your structure...word up

sdizzle-
you had some witty lines also meaning your punches,ur flow was decent aswell was your structure...yup

daz-
you my friend had okay flow,and your structure was okay,u had average punches iguess you can say...ive seen better from you man

overall i think scocrates came way better than the other two in this he got witty and personal with his verse so my vote is....

v/1.socrates
2.sdizzle
3.daz

Jacent. 10-22-04 10:16 AM

Wow @ the votes

Daz most certainly got this.

And its rather gay that Socrates used pics, cause thats an advantage towards him..

but

it goes like this

1. Daz
2. dizzle
3. socrates

Archeologist 10-22-04 10:42 AM

v/1.sdizzle
2.socrates
3.daz

How i see it going down.
Sdizzle fat punches are played.

Punch of the battle.
"Chances are like anorexia becoming holy, slim to nun"
Pz.

The Jett 10-22-04 01:01 PM

SDizzle
seems u left rv, noone knew, and returned cuz u missed us
now u say ur presense is blessed? ha, like the friggin devils christmas
dumb ass metiphore
u aint even the best of your time, just thought u'd like to know
considering socrates ideas are like his money, all play dough
its wordplay, but 4th grade'ish
now ur styles played out, and guess what dizzle just found
how you both lost last week, but still advanced to the next round
u said this in the last bar. Second line, good personal
thats funny, and bullshit.... but its only cuz this fag is gassed
cuz if u were half as good as u sigs.....no, ud still be pretty bad
Pretty funny
this match is a gimme, damn i was hoping for a real challenge
not this fruit with:
no crew, no battles, just a nack for using other peoples talent
NO
then daz comes to plate, i wont even check his battle last week
hes a mod on rb..... with 3/4 no-show's in his JUNIOR league
Ouch. nice personal
and the sad part is they'll believe what they arent sure is true
shit if you think ur tired of it, the board must be exhausted of you
No
Overall 5/10.
-----
Socrates
Take out these fuckin fools, 1-2 in succession
Fuck ugly, dizzle's face is a new cure for depression
Lmao. nice
You can brag about your posts and wins on RB
And i'll brag about how wife beaters ACTUALLY FIT ME
Lol. again. funny personal
Shit im here to attack, Soc's killer lyrics is on the swarm
Make dizzles chances lower then the fat hangin from his arm
Nah.
Daz agrees a tub of lard jumped into sdizzles gene pool
While hes a midget with glasses on trying to seem "cool"
Dumb
Fake jerseys dont phase me ive been a king for ages
To reach the keyboard he,gotta sit on the white AND yellow pages
It was ok
I should just stop right here, both you faggots are done
Chances are like anorexia becoming holy, slim to nun
This was really good. I liked it alot
Daz the slut, cum in his mouth and he takes it in the butt
how do i know this^^^? hes SO TIRED of chewing the nut
Dumb Closer
Overall 7/10
------
Daz
These kids are walked over, after they're knocked in the street...
Is that wrong? i just wanted to keep Soc's on my feet...
Good play off the name
So what? your verses made me throw up so grow up..
Told Dizzle to go nuts...Ended with pizza, chips and donuts..
good flow with multi's and personal
Bad and tough? kid your just mad you suck..
And i'd use a Hall Of Shame line..But dizzle's just bad enough..
Another good line
Dudes Ur new to this your verses were stupid bitch...
I wanted to diss soc, but why waste time doing it?..
Filler. been said to dizzle
Soc just sucks, and dizzle is So-So...
but why complain about a league when you fucking no showed?
Not a hard personal
Socs in my league too, Should retire chump...
Chuz i burn down these fags houses and had 'em all fired up...
dumb
and im a meanie son, no im not a nice dude..
When speaking of jokes, when all know this hoe's real...
And ur skill?please ur making mountains out of molehills....
Meanie? LMAO
Overall 7/10

1st. Daz
2nd. Socrates
15th. Sdizzle

Efusive 10-22-04 01:17 PM

lol @ these votes....

Daz won this battle
then soc then dizzle...between dizzle and soc
was pretty colse...daz wins, because i said so. :)

pz

sdizzle 10-22-04 03:40 PM

lol @ carson jets 15th

thats honeslty the funniest thing i saw in the battle

not being sarcastic, it actualy made me laugh

1
2
15

The Jett 10-22-04 03:46 PM

Im creative. ;)

Ill-Grammatix 10-23-04 08:53 AM

blah at this... all 3 verses were kinda young-minded... but dizzle definitely got this for his personals... dizzle 1, soc 2, daz 3

soc and daz were basically on the same level

soc best personals: there was only one if ya actually read the verse

You can brag about your posts and wins on RB
And i'll brag about how wife beaters ACTUALLY FIT ME

daz best personals: again, only one that stood out in the whole verse

Soc just sucks, and dizzle is So-So...
but why complain about a league when you fucking no showed?

dizzle best personals:there were a few here... surprisingly

now ur styles played out, and guess what dizzle just found
how you both lost last week, but still advanced to the next round


then daz comes to plate, i wont even check his battle last week
hes a mod on rb..... with 3/4 no-show's in his JUNIOR league

^^that one was the killer... for the record... i don't really think dizzle is good at this shyt but the facts are right there in black and white... all 3 can fix they structure a little, though

Logic The Goonie 10-24-04 04:02 AM

-Closed.

1st-Socrates
2nd-sdizzle
3rd-Daz

Socrates and sdizzle advance.


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