Acro Nim vs Wits End: Mindtrap vs Verbal Kent
 

12-14
Due Thursday

I'm here

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*streches*



first up..? You'll need forgiveness for all that crap you spittin,
besides this bitch has more periods then I placed,
at the end of this sentence.......................................... ...
will the bullshit end... Mind'll be the first to witness,
vote: Verb on wit and shit... I'm just settin the trend...
I'll smack Acro Nim's riders... drop hot n' I roast fighters,
n' ya fuckin styles the realist... but so is ya ghost writer...
n as far as Acro Nim... W.E.'ll kill that vision,
if you're the crew's savior,
...Verb's takin you out like the muslim religion...
hold that shit talk... Verb dismember frail gay raps,
ya puttin ya life on the line,
...kid's playin on rail way tracks...
nicca Kent'll pull guns... fuck what ya heard n shit,
n if you ever get on writer's block... you'll get stuck up for words bitch...
n if ya crew's open for business... then Verb is bound to start,
a riot... right now..!
n' destroy all ya fuckin counter parts...
out of the winners' circle simple... arrow pointed you out,
n without a doubt... underlined words best describe ya sex symbol...



whew..!

Shit... I could ghost for dude... still wouldnt be kids that quote him
And I'd say bite... but then you'd literally swollow my scrotum...
I mean shit... its no fable.. Mindtrap'll constantly kill kids....
While this fuck went through rehab and still dont know what dope is
I'm real with this...like bad yayo I'm comin with lines that kill
Watch how I manage to kill this Diary Queen....
............................................While kid just manages, the grill
Everyone heard about Kendra and how you used to be her writer
...I guess that explains how both were banned as biters
I'd alias drop on dukes. But kid has 30 names... this loser.
But I must admit Island was dope...
...Back in the RBL when posting verses from Aloe and User
And I aint mean to hurt feelings... but I'm comin with low-blows
Its sad when I fuck says he gets head... From overweight net-hoes
And here it comes the closer... dope as fuck... ending this action
But I dont know who to diss...
...Mr Skull, Nebs, User, Aloe, Self, Kaleef or Calefaction

v/ mindtrap... verbal kent, i had t5rouble catching your flow...
i was pretty disappointed with this battle.. a lot of played punches not too much originlity... neither of you seemed to care or try... bleh. .

Verbal Kent: i always have trouble catching your flow... i did catch it then you switched up your style and messed it up on me...the relist line was dope though... that was the best line of this battle....

mindtrap:played punches here, almost lost you this, cuz they just werent interesting..but you came at him much more personal...


v/ mindtrap..

both of you, vote here please: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108487

of course he came more personal... I don't even know who it is...








well... kinda...

Chrit you worthless piece of shit..! LMAO

You're fucked in the game buddy... this is goin to a second round..!

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Hmm battle was kinda dissapointing but

Mindtrap-Some of the personals were funny but expected
the last line at the end wasnt that good jus that it was a nice statement
but overall you had better/original punches altho you cudda directed
yourself away from the Biting lines a bit more...still iight tho

Verbal-I found myself getting geared up w/ some good
set ups but there was no devastating finish to them
which you shudda had w/ those set ups...
I think the Muslim religion line cudda been better but it was still
nice..overall your flow wasnt on point n Punches werent that Harsh

V/Mindtrap
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1-0 by polls.

Someone vote damnit

Mindtrap: Nice verse, you definately took avalon with the personals, you had a nice structure, but you had some played concepts, but you still took this

Verbal Kent: Couldnt catch your flow, i wasnt really feeling you verse, the best line was the TR one, but thats just about it.

V/ Mindtrap

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aight my vote goes tto mindtrap because his verse was better,his punches hit harder were more consistant throughtout his verse and were more powerful

also his flow was better
his sturcture was better by a lil and the personals were funny

for those reaosns my vote goes to mindtrap

hit up the battle in my sig please

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Oh man. This is slightly strange. I really thought Av won.

Nothing against Mind, but many of his punches werent good for the concepts.

I thought Mind's verse was kind of boring actually and had trouble finising it.

The last line was kind of good, but should have been reworded.

Av. You definitly need to change your structure/style.

I did catch the flow, but you were making me work too hard.

At first I really didnt even think that the last bar rhymed.

Until I read it out loud. But still. I thought Av's punches were much better.

The Realist line was one of the best.

So. Not a great battle.

But vote. Av.

3-0 to MT
Crew battles never end

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This has been around for ages.

MindTrapp had more personals but he stayed on the whole alias thing for the entire drop... I'm against personals when some of the audience might not get it (ie: el. frontlnes) but they're cool in LLL. Overall I enjoyed Av's verse more...

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I will also have to go with Verbal Kent in this.In my opinion it was pretty equal, but hey..Im just a wack newb'/herb anyway:whacky:...anyway..Mindtrapt had some good personals..but..this is like the first time..where punches out weigh them..Verbal came more consistent..as..Chrit fell of sometimes..like the net-hoes line and the rehab dope line was played..I've heard it alot in different forms..so..Verbal Kent gets my vote..

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113746
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