Brand New..."Ghetto iLL"...holla atcha boy
 

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Beat: Arkane Productions

Hook: All Q...yea, me again singin...lol

Verses: 1 & 2 Tha Q




Holla atcha boy

*PS...Both of these verses are "recycled" from earlier songs...I jus thought they sounded nice on this beat.



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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=213560
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=213445

Listening...

Beat starts off...haha...it's decent...NIce flow, nice deilivery...damn nice multies in the beginnning...

Quality is mad dope too haha. I went to The Source today to see if they would be getting that mic in, and I am waiting for them to call me. Word.

Good track man...keep it up. A great mixtrack tape.

Word. :thumbup:

werd, this shit iz dope. dope beat, dope lyrics. dope flow, all that shit. sumthin id burn off n listen 2, u know, werd

ok first off i love ArkaneBeats. dope beats with that old school feel to it.

chorus - singing aint too bad. i think its cool with you kinda rappin on it. it blends quite well. i like what you say as well.verse

when you rap i like your flow. real good. is this the thing you sent me the other day? yeah it is. yeah this is cool. at the beginning of both your verses you got some good multies in there.

quality is bomb. i guess ima have to go pick up one of those USB mics. prescnce is good as well.


good track overall. i actually downloaded this. and i usualy never download anything off the net

quality good you got that nice mic lol props
flow like ive said in all of ur other songs never really went off that i heard so no hate here
beat not really feeling it kinda plain not my type of beat
hook loving it how you say shti over him mad dope loving it
presence loved how you made words stand out u seemed layed back/ kinda hype lol
lyrics pretty good no complaints props on this
overall i was feeling the hook the best loved it

yeah.... i see you using that mic to ya advantage... i'm gettin' mine soon...lol....

i told ya already on aim... this shyt is pure fire... i love the topic, the beat, ya flow, and ya added that singing shyt... nice touch.... a huge step away from ya regular adlibbing tactics...lol... you are a true emcee, dawg and kats can sleep if they want.. i recognize skill and you can prolly sell some shyt if you put it out there like that... straight underground circuit.. i'd buy it... 9/10... holla

hmmmm.....i aint got much to say, that shit was RAW, i jus think u should turn ur singin up from the bg on tha chorus.....haha, but im feelin that shit. i think i noticed u fall off once.....but other than that...clean....

9/10

Listenin...beat is dope...quality is superb...dleivery on the mic is very nice..presence is the best Ive ever heard on any of yourre tracks..lyrics on the first verse are dope..I like youre singin as a dubbing, 2nd verse...flow is immense...damn..this is sick...lyrics good..this is a quality track..ima have to say this track is 10/10...I love the hook...you keepin it like that or is akay on that?

^^^word...appreciate the love my nigga



stay up BD



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ncie man.. i liked this shit..came out really good, liek the beat alot ..keep it up man

^^preciate the feed


and I will RTF



holla



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yea good/original beat choice......the dubs on ya rhyming words is jus a tad loud.....flow is cool......delivery could be a bit more animated.....I like its laid back style but u coulda did a lil more wit it.......the hook....is diff.....it fits the beat.....the singing in the background would be better if it was a lil more layered sounding....but overall good track..enjoyed it....there is lil things I can knitpick at here an there but if people gotta knitpick to find flaws in the track then u on point..solid song...keep dropping good shit

I agree wit him but i think that this isn't one of ya best drops it was dope but its not a cover song

but u doin ya thing im not mad at that lol hit up my thread 47 Carter

werd, this is fuckin hot shit, doesnt get better than this, seriously. you just came in so well and just rode the beat perfectly, and your multis are fuckin amazin! before i hurd this, i thought "heres the best", which i got on my ipod now (i fuckin luv that track!), woz your best, but now i've changed my mind completely, this is pure dopeness. 10/10

^^well, thank you...lol


but yo...ya IPOD can hold mad tracks...put this joint on there too


holla atcha boy



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Dope shit man..Flow is nice - Quality is nice and warm..I like tha beat - It has that old school, Classic ish feel to it..lol

Lyrics were delivered nice man..Keep bringing tha hot ish..

Peep mine aswell

Thanks

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^^No doubt


preciate da feed



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beat is iight...your flow is always way on point man...your voice is good to,i like how diversial your shit is , got your own style thats well defined...man..the 2nd verse flow is nuts

good shit man.

RTF plz

love the beat, nice sample at the beginning
good flow n lyrics, real nice quality
hook's dope, im really feelin the singin n rappin together
10/10 easily

Preciate da feed








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Beat is good flow is good same wit delivery almost in spots biggie like in tha beginin overall good track son keep droppin...=1=

preciate da feedback dawg







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WOWOWOWOWWOWOWOWFUCKINWOWHOLYSHITDOPEISHHOTSHHHH.. .

Intro:Weird Singing Samples(Meh)

You Come On:Dope Shit!!!!

Emotion-Just Right For This Track

Pressence-THis Is Perfect cant find a flaw in it

Delivery-Dope Shit Love How U Handled Yourself And How u Approached the Beat

Hook:Catchy:)Love The SInging Bits In B/g

Beat Dope

Overall:Your Best 9/10

Straight Fire

Plz Rtf On My Something For YOur Radio

^^don't bust a nut nigga



lol

i kno ive already left feed on this but...
when i first heard this it was like the first day i'd been listenin to nethin on soudclick/dmusic/etc....
since then i've d/l'd some shit by triple n, dzk, n a few others
n this is mos def the best song i've heard :thumbup:
so i have to give u props for makin somethin this dope
keep at it :thumbup:

this shit won't play for me......I've been trying for days and it just won't play :cussing:

^^ehh...you can drop feed now





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You know what I feel about the joint - the hook is dope.. verses are cool but the hook is the strong part of the song. Flow and all your mechanics were good, but you need to work on delivery and strengthen that aspect of your rhyme game. other than that, no complaints.. good job

yizzer


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