War Zones- Lethal Gk
 

my newest track that I have been working on I need to know exactly what yall feel about this track, even if the vocals sound to loud or low, anything yall can think of check it out at

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/5/lethalgkmusic.htm

I checked out http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=173441
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=173153

Soooo Stickied- Featured Track 1/31/05-2/06/05- Congrats-

iight i listen 2 it an i liked this track shit had a nice beat man....who did it.....nice flow nice lyrics....they went perfect on this beat if u could peep my 1st audio an gimme feed it would be appreciated :thumbup: here go tha link http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=173482

up your vocals a bit i couldnt really hear you in that..maybe just turn the mic up a bit...but other den that its all good but it might have been the style of beat that cut your vocals a bit....but its all good...keep doing yo thang...pz

thanks for the feed im gonna respond to everyones tracks a little later

Give Me That Beat Please~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

yo it was tight, maybe just turn the beat up a lil bit but other than tht, ur flow was on point and u has some gd lyrics up in dere

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=173203 - wat u think?

your voice dont sound as clear as usual....

your flow goes well with the beat....

lyircs where kinda played......(speaking of your feel in lines...)

raise your vocals...or lower beat...i say oyu lower the beat a lil bit and raise your vocals a lil bit...

chorus......
you need to switch up oyur voice or add eckos...your chorus was good just couldnt tell it was your chorus.....most chorus's have eckos or they change there tempos...




alll in all...change up your speed and shit like that every now and then...you had like a lil bit off emotion...work on that shit....not your best work....

word exactly what I wanted to hear man, thanks see thats the kind of feedback that you improve from

yea i'd cop an album off the flow in this song... everything an emcee should display in a flow i think was displayed here... I'd love to here it after being mastered by a professional... good shit man, keep the hot shit here.... 111.1.1.1.1.1.111

Shit Is Decent Your The Best Kid Under 16 I Ever Heard And Thats Word Sun You Got Potential Flow Is Good Lyrics Are Blah Could Be Better But They Reflect How Young You Are Shit Is Pretty Good Overall

lyrics are ok in some parts...not so good in others........you flow was on point....but switch it up every once in a while.....it gets boring after a while.....ad lib your hook so people know its your hook......it kinda just sounds like one big verse if you dont listen to it closely....u have a good voice....good flow....quality was good....beat was dope......overall this was a pretty good song.......RTF in sig

This is nice ... i like the flow to this ... the flow matches pretty good to the beat ... lyrics are pretty nice ... ALOT of wordplay ... lol ... this is nice man ... good track overall ....

Peace !!

~1~

the cd cover in ur sig is sick.............who made it?

you know my boy Ltizzle made that cover but dont evrybody go rushin on him asking him for one, hes one busy person

this track was pretty dope. i was feelin it...overall i give it like a 7

word the featured track man I really should redo this track in the studio for my mixtape then

ha you killed the shit outta this beat, hot dayum!!!!!!!! lol... you got an original flow you str8 murdered the track, this was ill.... it deserves to be stickied for another month.. stay up.. "gorilla warfare the reason for Vietnam"................ good shit.
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word thank you I appreciate all feedback im getting

ay yo im feelin this, if u get a complement from me then u good iight, im feelin this track.

I like the beat, ur ryhmes is poppin, nice flow.

whoa. nice drop dun. Last I heard from you was waaack. This track is light years ahead of ya last drop. Beat is sickness, and you stuck it son. Nice drop. Stay up. 1

lol thanks for tellin me my shit before was wack, but why aint you tell me this when I dropped it lol, I could of deleted it quick or something

aww man i know you........haha how u doin? know this was decent and yeah i aint forgot about you we gone get u on vol 3 it just aint started cuz we had a hang up on pop the trunk 2 ......yall gotta watch for this boy man he fire....... we gone blow dat azz up....aint nobody gone gra the flow and run wit it like this kid

I thought the presence was really good. You seemed pretty comfortable getting into the song emotionwise. The chorus desperately needs some help. Throw a dub in there or something.....basically, just spit another version of the chorus in a different tone or emotion and blend the two together......that makes it sound more chorus like :thumbup:

it was sum dope shit fam on da real u held it down i like the overall quality & plus ur song blended in wit da beat so i would give it 8.5
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