x-cell vs *holly$wood*
 

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*holly$wood* has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-26-05 12:12 PM.

X-CELL has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-26-05 12:25 PM.

itz evident- i'm better then- this bi*** in need of medicine/
to fix his F***in head but then again- my rhymes are F***in sedatives/
you better check yahself before I check yah F***in chin-
premeditatin murder- lemme found out where he lives/
convicted in prison- for committin these beretta sins/
killin all yah relatives- death's knockin bi*** you betta let us in/
stand aside or settle in- i'm set to F***in win-
so Silky Slim-
fill me in-
was that you or the F***in hype talkin?-
white wash'em-
with lyrics- that destroy your lesser Sh*t-
the topic shoulda been 'come kick my ass'- my pleasure bi***/
are we here to battle or measure dicks?-
either way my punch lines engage crunch time on your rederick/
you shoulda known better prick/
F***in wid Xodus- my methods confined in sentences-
will hit like mike tyson plus eleven fists/
no matter the question the answer is- X a F***in nemisis-
throwin'em off the podium- i'm the F***in gold medalist/
F*** text- you better bring yah best if you wanna settle this/
i'll have u retreatin defeated and beatin like indians on the settlements/
silky fresh? F*** that- silky about to rot at the bottom with the sediment-
in the sea weed where I sent the bi***/

since you anal retentive-
my beretta's repented-
cuz even those sins that I mentioned-
were forgiven by the pope himself-
the same guy who told you to go to hell/
and i'll see to it that you choke.... wit help/
cuz i'ma stick my fist through the monitor-
down you throat and really go straight for the jugular/
F*** a battle- I'll dismantle anything you spit out/
cuz like aloer said- you aint runnin Sh*t but yah mouth!/
and i'm about to be gunnin it out-
no more F***in around!.............. Bleettttt!
good night bi***- you stuck in the ground!-

u a fuckin biter whos ya ghost writer but u still wack
who'd ya hire cause bitch ya still cant spit for jack/
u aint speacil u just joe blow ohh no wait i mean u blow joe
u just want a boyfriend like JO JO ya fuckin homo/
he calls himself hollywood cause he likes holly with wood
put on ya hoodie cause thats the only way ay in the hood/
lil punk pussy chump ya stump cause ya cant write a hit
u aint legit you couldnt keep shit fly if u was piolt/
put on some weight thats the only way ya gonna gain shit
im gonna make ya drop faster then a fat man that fainted/

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Voted For: *holly$wood*

well...I say u took this one str8 yo...xcell wasn't as hard and both of ur structure's was off and punches was "aiiiight"..

return favour son...

me vs bradley_thomas:

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This was feedback posted for X-CELL
 

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Voted For: *holly$wood*

lol......
not the strongest battle here

Hollywood:
ya had some decent stuff, but some fillers also, work on structuring your flows better, an bein more consistant, like i said tho'...ya had decnt ideas, just word them better, but hands down you got this win

X:
Ya flow was blah, it was a lil too basic, an there was basically nothin that hasnt been said before or thast made me take note, step ya game up

Hollywood gets my vote

RTF Y'ALL

Peace out

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Voted For: X-CELL

yea. x cell is elevating. i think he took this one. better structure in this one, and better punches and mettas. this was alot better than tha other verse i read from you. i think you came harder in this one, and i think you had alil more confidence. just keep takin yo time in battle,s n keep comin up wit punches and shit, andu'll be dope.
hollywood-ur verse was too poorly structured for me to give u my vote. i wasnt feelin yo verse either. i think you came too soft. i think you should work on consistency, opener was kinda off, then it was on and off again thruout ur verse. work on that, but other than that, i seen no prob. wit yo verse, i just wasnt feelin it
my vote goes to xcell.

RTF, links in sig...thanx

Voted For: *holly$wood*

this one goes to hollywood

first of all- so many more lines
good flow nice punches
some metas


all around nice verse