Brydon vs MurDah187
 

Battle Rules:

10 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-06-09 at 06:10 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.


Win - Expired battle close

Brydon has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-03-09 06:11 PM.

You fag as if u try bringing bring murda, you waste the voters time,
dude wtf are you thinking when ur shit dont even ryhme?(true story).
Ima kick this shit like an addiction, jus forget ya eazy,
but like a fag u come back over and over jus to try and plz me.
I come hard wid it while u still try to keep up, but fuck it bring it,
i bet you put your self in my shoes while u write jus so u can dream of winning it.
Im jotting this quick while fucked up on vodka and red bull,
i dribble shit while you jus work hard but make it easy looking the fool.
You get the pipe out for that extra bit,u prefer it when high,
but we think its jus better for our eyes if u o.d with it and Die.



Rusty and shocking but after sum time its gettin there slowly....

MurDaH187 has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-04-09 10:00 AM.

so its a new month so brydon better change he's tampon,
this bug better ditch his sugar before this ANT get STAMPED ON/
what i see when brydon walks across the street
me trying to Pilot my honda to brake hes knees/
I imagine his throat chamber Splaterd on my Window Whipers
look how i gottem releaseing Bowels, even hes punches are COMPACKED like SHITTY DIPERS/
Brydon sleeping but in battles i got mad pull like a U-HALL
run ova ya Skull an paint my rims Red an white like the Bull's-Hall's/
im a kill'em, so odvious Sin is my Goal
so after i Burn hes Verse im a smoke the ashes in a Bowl/
It'Z MurDaH...

IS THIS WAY OF WRITING BETTER FOR YA??

Voted For: Brydon

ok well im gonna go ahead and vote for brydon generally a weak battle bbuuttt if i had to choose itd be cuz of the one line about this dude bein a faggot that shit was dope

vote-brydon


Unexplained vote removed

Voted For: MurDaH187

Actually it flowed nicer because you shortened lines. You didn't throw to many punches here and i am not big on talkin about the shit you got in a battle it should be directed to him since it is you verse him. And brydon the verse you gave on me i liked this one not so much. I don't liike how you keep puttin your verse down at the end it makes me like well if this aint his best than forget it. A true rapper don't fall off its in his blood no matter how long a break. At least for me. No hate but i vote murdah.

So you cant critic your own work now? come on!!!!!!!!!!

upfront you voted for brydon because of a GAY LINE???

ARE YOU SERIOUS????

now thats a gay vote right there...

thanks away...

And the other voted for you coz i stated i wasnt on my game so its whatever really aint it.

^^^ true true.... 1-1 upp'in for votes...

It was not that you can critic your work 187 jus had nicer verse and yours wasn't bad i thought it was better than decent and you said it wasn't that great so if it aint your best and you know it aint than bring your best next time bra thats all

Its all good homies uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lets get sum votes!

This was feedback posted for Brydon
 

Brydon:
You fag as if u try bringing bring murda, you waste the voters time,
dude wtf are you thinking when ur shit dont even ryhme?(true story).
4/10 - weak opener.
Ima kick this shit like an addiction, jus forget ya eazy,
but like a fag u come back over and over jus to try and plz me.
3/10 - nah.
I come hard wid it while u still try to keep up, but fuck it bring it,
i bet you put your self in my shoes while u write jus so u can dream of winning it.
3/10 - nah.
Im jotting this quick while fucked up on vodka and red bull,
i dribble shit while you jus work hard but make it easy looking the fool.
2.5/10 - does that make any sence?
You get the pipe out for that extra bit,u prefer it when high,
but we think its jus better for our eyes if u o.d with it and Die.

oops sorry guys .. wasted my vote ... is was a weak battle anyways ... think i woulda gave it to murdah tho

Can't you pm a mod or something??........................

Voted For: MurDaH187

you're first 2 lines were the best of your verse. multies were ok.....but brydon seemed like he rush his verse and really didnt click


Unexplained vote removed

Checkin votes^^^^^^^^^^^
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uping for votes....

gkillah why dont u pm a mod to fix ur vote...

brydon why u geting votes removed...

its cool thou but its not like meny people vote anyways...

Voted For: Brydon

again wasnt feeling the battle,elevation is needed it takes time though..but i gave u the win cuz your
i bet you put your self in my shoes while u write jus so u can dream of winning it.
line.


Unexplained vote removed

^^ that vote is like the problem child vote....

it should be removed but im not gonna bitch since dont no-body vote now a days...

oh damn i couldnt explain it but it was plain and simple.......Nate won the battle

Wtf???? yeah i agree nate won this battle.......... wtf are you talking ya mug??

Voted For: Brydon

so its a new month so brydon better change he's tampon,
this bug better ditch his sugar before this ANT get STAMPED ON/
ehhh, okay... good connection but not really a hard hittin punch
what i see when brydon walks across the street
me trying to Pilot my honda to brake hes knees/
weak, i wouldnt really go with the "im going to kill you with..." type of lines in a battle anymore
I imagine his throat chamber Splaterd on my Window Whipers
look how i gottem releaseing Bowels, even hes punches are COMPACKED like SHITTY DIPERS/
okay, decent but a pretty played concept
Brydon sleeping but in battles i got mad pull like a U-HALL
run ova ya Skull an paint my rims Red an white like the Bull's-Hall's/
na, im not feelin this one
im a kill'em, so odvious Sin is my Goal
so after i Burn hes Verse im a smoke the ashes in a Bowl/
okay coo, closer material but a pretty played concept again


You fag as if u try bringing bring murda, you waste the voters time,
dude wtf are you thinking when ur shit dont even ryhme?(true story).
decent personal, but not very hard hitting...a little rewording could do nicely
Ima kick this shit like an addiction, jus forget ya eazy,
but like a fag u come back over and over jus to try and plz me.
ehh, na
I come hard wid it while u still try to keep up, but fuck it bring it,
i bet you put your self in my shoes while u write jus so u can dream of winning it.
haha, pretty funny, nice concept.. little forced.
Im jotting this quick while fucked up on vodka and red bull,
i dribble shit while you jus work hard but make it easy looking the fool.
decent, nothign special
You get the pipe out for that extra bit,u prefer it when high,
but we think its jus better for our eyes if u o.d with it and Die.
this was a nice closer and i thought it was pretty cool he said this because you said the smoke your ashes line and he couldnt even see it... kinda predicted your rhyme type shit...extra points for this

Okay this was a close battle, but for the simple fact bry kinda predicted the line at the end got me. I liked that. Murdah you've been elevating but i think you slacked off in this battle... stay consistant and get some fresh concepts, both of yall need some fresh concept most of them are played... but decent battle nonetheless.

WTF....................................... ok no probs...........

Battle me again murdah your rules set it up

This was feedback posted for MurDaH187
 

this should be put into the hall of shame

'Herbest Battle Ever'

























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With your pic next to it yeah that wud be unstoppable in ur fight for finest geek boy living.

says' the guy who is too lame to post up a picture

This was feedback posted for Brydon
 

fuck this... polls

^^^^get your facts right first^^^^

Still after more dudes pics i see.............

uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp pp

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Voted For: Brydon

You fag as if u try bringing bring murda, you waste the voters time,
dude wtf are you thinking when ur shit dont even ryhme?(true story).

barely descent opener


Ima kick this shit like an addiction, jus forget ya eazy,
but like a fag u come back over and over jus to try and plz me.

this was cool, it actually brought a smile to my face


I come hard wid it while u still try to keep up, but fuck it bring it,
i bet you put your self in my shoes while u write jus so u can dream of winning it.


nice


Im jotting this quick while fucked up on vodka and red bull,
i dribble shit while you jus work hard but make it easy looking the fool.


descent

You get the pipe out for that extra bit,u prefer it when high,
but we think its jus better for our eyes if u o.d with it and Die.

barely descent


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so its a new month so brydon better change he's tampon,
this bug better ditch his sugar before this ANT get STAMPED ON/

descent opener

what i see when brydon walks across the street
me trying to Pilot my honda to brake hes knees/

not really hard hitting here

I imagine his throat chamber Splaterd on my Window Whipers
look how i gottem releaseing Bowels, even hes punches are COMPACKED like SHITTY DIPERS/

barely descent

Brydon sleeping but in battles i got mad pull like a U-HALL
run ova ya Skull an paint my rims Red an white like the Bull's-Hall's/

barely descent

im a kill'em, so odvious Sin is my Goal
so after i Burn hes Verse im a smoke the ashes in a Bowl/


barely descent closer


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I believe that Brydon came off better in this round. You guys had some good stuff and seem to be well matched as opponents. The content goes to Brydon,but the flow seemed to be even at times throughout the verse.


Vote - Brydon

Voted For: Brydon

Brydon got this hands down... He came at it way harder....

The lines that won it for him...

"dude wtf are you thinking when ur shit dont even ryhme?"
i don't know what you're talking about, but if that's true, it's a good personal...
"i bet you put your self in my shoes while u write jus so u can dream of winning it."

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Honestly i really couldn't understand what murda was saying...
Maybe it's just me??? I don't know...

"run ova ya Skull an paint my rims Red an white like the Bull's-Hall's"
Bull's-Hall's? What's that?
"even hes punches are COMPACKED like SHITTY DIPERS"
I don't get it...
"im a smoke the ashes in a Bowl"
Smoke ashes? in a bowl?
once again... i don't get it

but... to be nice... this was an aright line...
"i got mad pull like a U-HALL"

No hate... peace...

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