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Bone Collector vs ThA NoToRiOuS D
Battle Rules:
6 - 12 No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 09-05-05 at 05:33 PM Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in. |
Bone Collector has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-05-05 05:04 PM.
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ThA NoToRiOuS D has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-05-05 05:08 PM.
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You'spit \
First So Ill Be Waitin |
Dude Comeon Be Serious The Reasin You
.................................2-0 Is Cuz U Battle Nice Guys Thats Easy Like Goin To Beverly Hills And Doin .................................................. .............drive Bies Im A End U Like General In Street Fighters Cuz Youd Be 0-2 If It Wasnt For Dickriders I Guess The Only Times He Spits First ..........................is When Hes Playing Truth Or Dare Cuz When He Facs Me He Dosent Even Stare You Little Pussy Was Scared To Accept Ur Wack Like When Scobey Goes For Afg Attemp Im Ending You Like N.o Homesthat Happens When You Face The Bone |
Yo catch me in the street, poppin that bullshit
Catch a fat lip, hoes all over your shit My house of reresentatives stay starvin, beats thumpin You get wyt bytches but ur not the 1 dumping Im unholy, cause there ain't a part missin and i catch u in da club on the floor with a heart missin my point is that u a bitch aint no one gone respect ya nigga not even the real bonecollector would accept ya this your first battle and your rhymes are tiring your pathetic.......go get a job.....i think dunkin donuts is hiring The real bonecollector-----> http://community.rapverse.com/showb...=bone+collector |
uppin 4 dis bytch!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Voted For: Bone Collector
ok you where both kinda sorry you need to take more time to write your verse alot more time not everyone ont his sites freestyles there verses so go ahead and take you time writing them BONE:youhas some good line maybe 1 or 2 which one the battle for you...... THA;you where all around wack you need to step up our game and elevate alot vote=bone RTF PLEASE http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=207228 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
thanx 1-0 me uppin
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uppin...........4 dis bytch will reurn favor.....honest votes
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Voted For: ThA NoToRiOuS D
yo im given it to notorious cuz he had a nice structure and some nice punches...bone collector had nice punches and a nice flow but i still give it to notorious...v/notorious...fo real Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
thnxs 1-1...........uppin 4 diz bytch.......
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This was feedback posted for ThA NoToRiOuS D
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dam dis guy is defiantely on ma dick man imma block dis dude 1
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uppin ... ....
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Voted For: Bone Collector
Obviousely, for having punchlines flow and all the rest, not feelin struct. ThEBlAhBlAh you need to elevate in...rap basically. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
ayo uppin 4 dis shyt man dese pplz votes makes no sense aniwaiis uppin!!!
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Voted For: Bone Collector
alright simple and plain.....bone had better punches and better similies but bone you gotta work on ya structure...but ya word play and what not was tight.... Notorious work on ya flow and ya metas also work on ya vocabualy and you'll be set..alright my vote is bone Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Bone Collector
v/bone collector...both verses need better structure and need to hit harder with punches...bonecollector got it because he had better punches .but still needs to elevate .. notorious d... you need to fix your structure..you really havent been elevatin since i battled you.. u need to stop writtin the same word at the end of each punch..and most of it wasnt even a punch.. so wat does that tell you?..u need to elevate.. just get that structure fixed and elevate on your vocab and youll be ok...but no hate .. if you read my shit and there needs to be corrections on mine. then go head and say aiight.. but just elevate cuz u really havent since i battled you!!! |
Voted For: ThA NoToRiOuS D
bone ------- Dude Comeon Be Serious The Reasin You .................................2-0 Is Cuz U Battle Nice Guys Thats Easy Like Goin To Beverly Hills And Doin .................................................. .............drive Bies Im A End U Like General In Street Fighters Cuz Youd Be 0-2 If It Wasnt For Dickriders I Guess The Only Times He Spits First ..........................is When Hes Playing Truth Or Dare Cuz When He Facs Me He Dosent Even Stare You Little Pussy Was Scared To Accept Ur Wack Like When Scobey Goes For Afg Attemp Im Ending You Like N.o Homesthat Happens When You Face The Bone -------------- dude you come hard..and your punchlines was onpoint. it wasnt a bad verse...but just not hard enough bro.. -------------- ThA NoToRiOuS D -------------- Yo catch me in the street, poppin that bullshit Catch a fat lip, hoes all over your shit My house of reresentatives stay starvin, beats thumpin You get wyt bytches but ur not the 1 dumping Im unholy, cause there ain't a part missin and i catch u in da club on the floor with a heart missin my point is that u a bitch aint no one gone respect ya nigga not even the real bonecollector would accept ya this your first battle and your rhymes are tiring your pathetic.......go get a job.....i think dunkin donuts is hiring -------------- another good verse bro...you come harder though. your punchlines was good..and personals had this 1 hard...nice job on this battle the both of you.. v/ThA nOtOrIoUs D uppin on a RTF homies....werd its in my sig Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
wow wtf y deii disqualifying evry vote!! o well uppin 4 dis bytch!!!!!!!!
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Upping For Explained Votes Plz
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This was feedback posted for Bone Collector
checkin polls
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uppin 4 dis bytch!! explained votes man no hate votes les go!! ill rtf
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uppin c'mon pplz we need votes.............
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uppin 4 dis bytch man......
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upppppppinnnnnnnnnnnnn
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This was feedback posted for Bone Collector
Basicly i thone bone got em Tha NotoriousD i see you poppin ish on alotta thread and nigga u berly aint even decent on text nigga....Mane Up ya record some so i can battle you and make a win aginst you looke worth something......Bone you got this easy i just dont feel like explainnin
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both Emcees DO what im doing but on a Major Scale....yeah just look right above my avatar Elevate....
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Got Damn Still 1-0 Vote Up
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yea man...........but ay!!! stfu young u talk madd shyt 2.......dis was like ma first battle so stfu i signed up awhile ago..........so im tryin 2 finish n imma lay back 4 a while n u gotta stop hating 1
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Voted For: Bone Collector
Structure-Tha Notorious D, had pretty much the better structure felt i could flow to his a lot better.bone collector your structure was hard to follow, felt i couldnt flow to it as well Multis-Neither had any apparent multis that i could see.Both need to up on that to complex your verse more. Vocab-Again neither had any vocab that was presentable, felt both verses were below the average on that, up on that to enhance your verse. punches-I feel bone collector had the better punches, they were original and they had good wordplay and creativity to them.As for tha notorious d you sorta complimetented him in the first line.....and whats wrong wit white girls? my girls white....dont see much of a good punch there. personals-Clear to see bone collector racks up this catergorie, simply for the fact that they were presentable un like tha notorious d...up on ur verse period lol originality-Both were pretty original not the best battle ive seen eh, id say v/bone collector |
thanx man uppin for more votes
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uppin 4 dis bytch!!!
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Voted For: Bone Collector
Dude Comeon Be Serious The Reasin You .................................2-0 Is Cuz U Battle Nice Guys Thats Easy Like Goin To Beverly Hills And Doin .................................................. .............drive Bies ^^ight,nice attempt at a punch but wasnt feelin it too much,iight opener Im A End U Like General In Street Fighters Cuz Youd Be 0-2 If It Wasnt For Dickriders ^^im feelin the flow and i like tha 2nd line...nice I Guess The Only Times He Spits First ..........................is When Hes Playing Truth Or Dare Cuz When He Facs Me He Dosent Even Stare ^^wasnt feelin it too much...kinda creative tho You Little Pussy Was Scared To Accept Ur Wack Like When Scobey Goes For Afg Attemp ^^^2nd line stretched a little too much but iw as feelin it...nice Im Ending You Like N.o Homesthat Happens When You Face The Bone ^^^i dont understand why thatz there but iight Yo catch me in the street, poppin that bullshit Catch a fat lip, hoes all over your shit ^^wouldnt he want to have hoes?..not feelin it...pretty wack opener My house of reresentatives stay starvin, beats thumpin You get wyt bytches but ur not the 1 dumping ^^again,not feelin it...played Im unholy, cause there ain't a part missin and i catch u in da club on the floor with a heart missin ^^no punch,self glorification,and you rymed missin wit missin my point is that u a bitch aint no one gone respect ya nigga not even the real bonecollector would accept ya ^^wack punch,elementary school bar,and once again you rymed tha same words this your first battle and your rhymes are tiring your pathetic.......go get a job.....i think dunkin donuts is hiring ^^first line was pretty good,i was feelin it,but that 2nd line killed you with that bar...played out and wack iight,bonecollecter definatley got this one...tha notorious d,i see that u are elevated from b4,but keep at it and i respect that your battlin again...NO HATE!!! v/bonecollecter |
thanx upp#6........
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uppin fo my homiez battle!!!!!.....they need votez
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Voted For: Bone Collector
Yo catch me in the street, poppin that bullshit Catch a fat lip, hoes all over your shit 1...no punch watsoeva...just threats My house of reresentatives stay starvin, beats thumpin You get wyt bytches but ur not the 1 dumping 2...whack. Im unholy, cause there ain't a part missin and i catch u in da club on the floor with a heart missin 1...again...no punch...just threats my point is that u a bitch aint no one gone respect ya nigga not even the real bonecollector would accept ya 3....wuz a decent concept..coulda been something with some wording this your first battle and your rhymes are tiring your pathetic.......go get a job.....i think dunkin donuts is hiring 2....whack Dude Comeon Be Serious The Reasin You .................................2-0 Is Cuz U Battle Nice Guys Thats Easy Like Goin To Beverly Hills And Doin .................................................. .............drive Bies 2....weak Im A End U Like General In Street Fighters Cuz Youd Be 0-2 If It Wasnt For Dickriders 4...meh...decent i guess I Guess The Only Times He Spits First ..........................is When Hes Playing Truth Or Dare Cuz When He Facs Me He Dosent Even Stare 2...not much of a punch You Little Pussy Was Scared To Accept Ur Wack Like When Scobey Goes For Afg Attemp 4...ok Im Ending You Like N.o Homesthat Happens When You Face The Bone OK...this wuz easy.The win goes to bone collector for actually haveing a battle verse MY advice to both of you...is to stop with the threats.Just diss the oppenent.And nothing more. Vote-Bone Collector Vote in one of the battles in my sig...or this vote will be removed in 3 days :thumbup: |
This was feedback posted for ThA NoToRiOuS D
just peeping the polls
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Voted For: Bone Collector
you are wack man...how you a mod? Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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