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DeaDly RhymeZ 01 05-25-04 01:57 AM

If Your New on The site Click HEre
 
Yo If ur new come spit like 4 lines so every 1 can Give u some Feed Back tell u if ur gonna be good or need 2 Elavate 1

Fourmost 05-25-04 02:28 AM

Drastik Measures Diss(sixshot)
 
Here a recent diss i did on another site, i was only asked for 6-8 bars

/Verb Tearin Up Tha Scene As This Runts Gut Breaks The Seam/ Scarin Ya Wack Team 'n' Shut Ya Nuts In Doors To Hear Ya Scream/1
//Lacerate Cuts 'n' Expose Ya Lower'd Self Esteem// Cuz Even Tha Sluts In Ya Sleep Won't Be Part Of Ya Wet Dream//2

/Ya Gleam Of Fame Crushed Like Broken Bone Marrow/ Ya Rhymin Scheme Is Flushed wit Ya Bars That Aint No Aero/3
//These Ciggarettes Tip Their Anal Shaped Sombero's// Smoke These Fags 'n' Destory Like The Cape Passero//(wordplay)4

/Like Will Farrell I got Peeps Laughin At Ya Crews Abnormalities/ No Hitler But Terrorizin Like yall Jews Waitin For Ya Fatalities/5
//Ya Diss Filled Wit General Technicalities 'n' Dats Playin Wit Raw Fiya//Bring Ya Back To Reality As We Make Ya Clique Retire//6

Explanations:
line 4- in britian cigarrettes are called fags/ cape passero was a ship that got destoried in attemp to take over sicily
line 5- no discrimination towards jewish people

L.I. 05-25-04 06:13 AM

^^ potential.......

Big Kountry 05-25-04 08:53 AM

i am still 17.......... so hid your daughter,
cuz i pull up in a navgation...
.... the same color as water,
my flow is nice.... plus my text is mean,
when i drop on r and be.....
..... the elite turnm envyous green.

Fourmost 05-25-04 04:11 PM

^^Yo We Shud Battle Some Time@ BK

Young Smirf 05-25-04 05:39 PM

That shit was cold as hell I was really feelin' the whole apendix bustin' shit that was some hot shit... :thumbup:

From, Young Smirf

Squad Or Die Nigga let's go!!!

P.S. sike that shit was wack nigga get some better flow so you can be more like Young Smirf. :thefinger :cussing: :cussing:

Fourmost 05-25-04 05:42 PM

hahaha...Shut Up Pussy Before I Merk Ya Unorginal Hatin Ass

Jae m0ney 05-25-04 06:34 PM

Makin ya self look cool talkin bout heaters n' techs / All this jealousy and envy cause I'm seein success / I aint neva been locked in the penitetnaty / I'm the past, I'm the future, I'm what you hopin to be / Sayin youz a hustla but neva made a brick flip / Talkin bout gatz but neva held the biscuit

Snapshot 05-26-04 08:57 AM

Some Catz May Know Me, Ive Released A Few Bits Of Underground Material, But Anywayz, Ill Post A Few Of My Battle Lyrics Here Just So You Get The Idea Of How I Spit.
Snapshot Vs Silence (Round 1)

He Named Himself 'Silence', Because The Boys Never Heard,
Only Time He Produced 'Violence', Was When He Tripped On His Own Words,
Im Rippin' His Cloned Verbs, I Got Secrets To Unravel,
He's Gaining Less Points Than A 4 Letter Word In Scrabble,
Im 'Packed' Like I Travel, I Keep My Attacks Urban,
Attacking Back Against His Pack Quickly Strapped Like A Turban,
Im Getting On His Nerves, Im Wrecking His Game Well,
Im Like A Small Dose Of Mersh, Im Burning His Brain Cell,
Im Making My Name Sell, And I Think That He Knows That,
He Hangs Around More 'Pussys' Than A Full Time Bowcat,
I Dont Need To Show Stats, I Should Really Just Laugh,
His Girls Been Used More Times Than My Monthly Bus Pass,
Snapshot's Big By Himself, I Dont Need No Appliance,
Coz You'll Reply With Your Name, No Words Just 'Silence'!

Snapshot Vs Silence (Round 2)

When I Read Your Lyrics The Only Thing I Think Is 'Greed',
Coz You Sat And Read My Bars Then Used Them To Feed,
If Snap Spat 2nd, You'd Be Starving Like Its Eid,
Deprived Of Lifes Lines, Like A Kid With No Sleep,
You Act Like A 'Home Creep', You're A Well Known Fag,
I Could Beat You With Accapellas With No Need For A Note Pad,
Now Im Making You 'Gloat Sad', And You're Scared I Might Catch You,
Im Making You Stand Still Like Your Avatar - A Statue,
There's Knowone To Back You, You Use My Verbs To Copy,
Trippin' On The Ice, Like A Beginner Playing Hockey,
You're Flows Were Too Sloppy, This Guys Just A Joke,
Im Devouring Your Body Like Your Nose Snortin Coke,
You're Left With No Hope, Best Keep Your Lines Clean,
Coz I Got 16 Lines To Kill You And Im Only On 14,
He Dropped Late, Tryna Debate Over A State Of Hate,
So I Couldnt Feed Off His Lines, I Had To Use Knowledge To Create.

Snapshot Vs OG

O-G, Copying Verses, Then Try Keep It 'Low Key',
Might Be Number '1', But He Aint No 'Kanobe',
Gangsta? Then Show Me, 'I Aint Afraid',
You Just Rip Like Paper Until The Verse 'Is Decayed',
A Bit Like Your Teeth, Prepare To 'Be Sprayed',
I Dont Know Where He Stayed, But OG Went For A While,
Probably Went Out On A Ripping Spree Short Of A File,
Ill Distort The Look Of Your Smile, You Aint A Big Man,
About To Be Buried From Audio Off Me And Big Skan (For Real!),
Im A Lyrical Hit Man, 'Holding It Up', Like Hostels,
OG'll Be 'Taken Out' Soon Like His Girlfriends Tonsils,
Leave You With Two Holes Like Nostrils, Im Ready To Bury,
Feel Like A 'G', Coz You Moveed To 'Intelli',
Im Keepin It Steady, Setting The Place,
Try Copying A Verse Again And Ill Be Wrecking Your Face,
Fuck 'Counting Bars', Snap Needs To Destroy,
Like 'Father And Son', Im The Man You're The Boy,
You Expected 'Open Arms', But Rewind 'Gave No Smile',
Due To Copying Verses, Best Change Your 'Name And Profile',
My 'Game Is So Vile', Im 'Stoppin Heat To Give Flows',
I Never Knew Boys From The Hood, Were 'Rockin' Beats On Windows',
Im 'Choppin What This Theif Chose', Your Flows Dont 'Hurt At All',
It Might Be Due To The Fact This Cat Dont Use 'Personals'.

Booty1icious 05-26-04 09:07 AM

Now I'm a newbie, but that kid is sick ^^^ Fa sho'.

SixX da FinisH 05-26-04 09:14 AM

Check Me Owt Homies....
 
o shyt... tha kid is hot.. peep...

yall dont want it/the textcee wit dead-ly verses packin harder puches than jet-li/yall sub-par at best so none of yall can get-me/its ya boi SixX back at tha game/heard tha name/spittin ill so bytches drop on knees n give brain/

its the devil's son himself re-incarnated to spread hell/ i make hits spit hot shit n pop shells/yall can ack like ya kill me all ya want n im reborn/ pull a hell-boy n stab ya wit my devil-boy hell-horns/(devil horns)

stop cuz all ya rhymes r element-ary/im back so yall can stop lamentin-me/ yall soft like ya names was bobby b(rown)/yall wont find anotha brotha near as hot-as-me/haha!

holla atcha boi

Snapshot 05-26-04 09:16 AM

Yo Peeps. Yo Sixx - I Like Tha Way You Flow Man.

White Noize™ 05-26-04 10:46 AM

Im New, Whatup!

insanedialect 05-26-04 12:54 PM

Yo What Up Im New In Here U Say Drop 4 Lines So..

______________________(1)
______________________(2)
______________________(3)
______________________(4)


I Wonder What That Was For??

young dE 05-26-04 08:29 PM

young dE has to do it HoLLa

letz get to the point the fact iz
my fLow like ya lookz quite unnatractive
like a gun ya skiLLz mite malfunction
dont make an ass outta yaseLf wit dat assupmtion
my life was supposingLy prewritten
but i aint pLayin wit da cards i was given

Da MaGiCiAn 7 05-26-04 11:41 PM

insane dialect u a funny ass nigga LMAO

SixX da FinisH 05-27-04 06:38 AM

ayo
 
de... i kno ya kinda new so i figure i can help ya owt wit ya flow sum jus pm me if u wanna git at me

holla atcha boI
~1~

DeaDly RhymeZ 01 05-30-04 11:25 PM

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Das a GOOD 1 INSANE DIALECT

YungAMO 05-31-04 03:55 PM

All you newbs blow

besthandles3 06-01-04 11:59 PM

Yea, wat it do world.Its ya boy jae dome aka besthandles ya no.Im new in dis thang so if ya wanta holla.Ya no where 2 go!!!

besthandles3 06-02-04 12:38 AM

droppin sum linez aight!!

i go by jae dome cuz i wreck microphones,
str8 from tha dome,never been kid write,
alwayz makin shyt up str8 from my mind,
talkin down,lyke bennie siegle u either get down,
or lay down,if ya lay ya gonna stay down,bitch!!!

Zeen 06-02-04 05:30 AM

Say what up to the new guy named Zeen
I'm here to have some fun and do my thing
I'm gonna represent the FTL to my fullest
so get out your kevlar cause Zeen is the King of the lyrical bullets!


:shoot:

Su'Q'us Va'Q'su 06-02-04 06:13 AM

why dont you post 4 bars so we can see how wack you are

Zeen 06-02-04 07:45 AM

[QUOTE=Su'Q'us Va'Q'su]why dont you post 4 bars so we can see how wack you are[/QUOTE]

yeah I guess 4 little lines is nothing but toys
it's gonna take a little more to seperate the men from the boys
ok, I'll play, more lines coming your way
I'm gonna make some noise here on the rapbattle scene
cause I've come to rep the 954 as the King Zeen
When it comes to hip hop I'm really just a old fart
cause I really like to rap about women,sex and fun cause thats whats in my heart
nothing like a beautiful day in the FTL to remind you this is paradise
where all the women white latin and african are easy on the eyes
just hop in the car and put the top down
take a cruise by the strip and later have a night on the town
now I know will smith likes to bless the city of miami
but I don't think he's been up here to FTL or he'd relocate in a hurry

I dunno what you mean by 4 bars 'q' su
but if this doesn't make you happy, then :gfy:
I got a job to do...

954-ftlauderdale

:thumbup:

Afa-n-ssiv 06-02-04 12:58 PM

Verses
 
Im A Lyrikal Rapmaster
I Rap Faster Than Lambagini On Spreewell Spinnas
Im A Countinuous Winna
I Spitt Crazy Verses That Make You Tired And Withered
Now I Hope You Feelin The Shit I Say
Cuz Im Down To Get Wit A Crew What You Say

Zeen 06-02-04 03:23 PM

[QUOTE=Afa-n-ssiv]Im A Lyrikal Rapmaster
[/QUOTE]

homeboy, after you catch some of these other guys acts on this board
you gonna realize it's time to go to skool :help:

:laugh:

D40 06-03-04 10:15 AM

The way i was born n raised was to be with the rizlan n haze..
get my people together and smoke the highgrade for days..
get together spit a few lyrics tokin on a blunt..
get lean of the fumes of nuff high grade skunk..

;) you can tell i produce more hehehehe

Kleetus Kleaver 06-03-04 11:43 AM

over half the emcees in this thread need some serious work....

eminem3 06-03-04 12:03 PM

yo blads u suck worser then the ducks ur bigger then the bar but smaller than my c**k u smoke some shit it's called cannabis it is so bad it makes u pissed worse niggz think im a wanna be black im more black then any slut

D40 06-03-04 12:16 PM

[QUOTE=eminem3]yo blads u suck worser then the ducks ur bigger then the bar but smaller than my c**k u smoke some shit it's called cannabis it is so bad it makes u pissed worse niggz think im a wanna be black im more black then any slut[/QUOTE]

:laugh2: WTF :gfy: u OBVIOUSLY GOT A LITTLE COCK

DeaDly RhymeZ 01 06-03-04 10:28 PM

LEmmie Spit sumthin
lol



Yo Im The Type a Nigga To Leave ya Like ya was on + Crack +...
Su'Q'us Va'Q'su Dont Talk Nigga u know' ya + Whack +...
Leave Blood ON ya Body Get DA Gat Make it Go * Splat *...
Lay This Wanna Be Rapper Down n Stepped on like a * Mat *....


:laugh2: :shoot: :laugh2: :laugh: :laugh2:

2 - S W E E T 06-04-04 02:02 AM

If you eva try to stop my consistant flow of cash
you gonna make a nigga blast
medamorph myself back into a mothafuckin Outkast
So fresh and so damn clean
nical plated mack 11 with the blue tripple beam
Cleanest simi automatic wepon youv eva seen.

spitonline 06-25-04 06:18 PM

show-n-prove
 
If i'm not the greatest I gotta be one
of u'm.
deeze twenty year vet's u'll have the audience
makin fun of u'm.
actin like he want it witt me, but you bein my
competition is not the position you wanna be.
ya betta off fightin witt death, man i'll have mc's creepin
off stage tryin to lighten there steps.
they'd rather forfit then take a loss right on
the set.
Dog i'm one of a kind wonderful witt rhymes
all times
You couldn't make it past the first line
let alone crunch time
I leave rappas witt writa's block cuz of
my punchlines.


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