FIVESTAR GENERAL vs Mike Macs
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 02-22-06 at 11:56 AM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. |
Mike Macs has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-22-06 11:28 AM.
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FIVESTAR GENERAL has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-22-06 11:31 AM.
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Ok Here It Goes-
This Wack Mc Is About 2 Get Lyrically Devoured/ U Accepted Da Battle, Your Stupid But Not A Coward/ This Hoe Iz 2 Slow It'll B Dayz Before He Realizes He Lost/ Jus A Pussy Without Heart Off Ta See Tha Wizard Of Oz/ Another Wack Rapper Puttin Real Thuggs Ta Shame/ Im Block-tested Fivestar General...battle Acclaimed/ Now Pay Respects Cuz Lyrically Your My Son/ U Also A Turf-hopper Don Even Noe Were U From*/ I Keep An Arsenal Of Words,nouns,adjectives And Verbs/ 2 Verbally Assimilate Fake Ass "macs" And Herbs/ So Texually U Becoming Equvilent 2 A Dead Man/ Nand No Visine Can Clear Up Tha Glocks Red Eye**/ So Don Don Try, Jus Eat Ya Wheaties And Re-up On Ya Minerals/ An Maybe Learn Dat Cadets Like U Should Challenge Da General/ *he Says Hes From Atl But His Email Sayz Crooklyn **red Eye Pertaining 2 A Beam From A Laser Like Ones Used On Guns For Accuracy |
In My 11th Line Change Dead Man 2 Dead Guy Datz Wut It Should Say
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Fuck you talkin about you ain't drop a verse yet just correct it then submit.
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You spell so bad, had me thinkin yo alias is tornados second account
And ya verses, like mc hammers dough, will never amount Readin yo raps is sufferin, shits feels like chronic *indigestion* N makes no sense, like you talkin to whites in ebonics Cypher you claimin to be a father, like you eva fucked a whore N you provin 2 have skillz is like ya dick....nothin eva seen before It's like I'm the only real nigga here, put all ya bogus rumors to rest Actin like you real but you as fake as pamela anderson breastz Ya punches like chris tucker stand up, annoyin, shit's just bad humor Horrible, you rappin good is outta the ordinary, abornmal, just like a tumor Stick with the title you got, cus weight, you'll neva be carryin False info you be givin is like two gay niggas, never be marryin |
Ok drop btw I was born in brooklyn n moved to atl couple of years ago, I just put my current location there, fuckin stalker....
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btw if you don't understand my drop then don't fuckin vote, I'm blacklistin n e one who duz so they can't do that in my future dropz..
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Voted For: FIVESTAR GENERAL
heres da break down- opener-even tho it barely makes sense-mike punches-general had som clean ones-This Hoe Iz 2 Slow It'll B Dayz Before He Realizes He Lost/ Jus A Pussy Without Heart Off Ta See Tha Wizard Of Oz/ andSo Texually U Becoming Equvilent 2 A Dead Man/ Nand No Visine Can Clear Up Tha Glocks Red Eye**/ So Don Don Try, Jus Eat Ya Wheaties And Re-up On Ya Minerals/ An Maybe Learn Dat Cadets Like U Should Challenge Da General/ mikes punches were mostly to basic and didnt connect for example-Readin yo raps is sufferin, shits feels like chronic *indigestion* N makes no sense, like you talkin to whites in ebonics * that was wack beyond all reason* so punches goes to-general closer-general mikes closer wuz to basic an not focused V/=general |
I just said if you don't fucking understand it don't fucking vote dumbass, tornado is this nigga... .If you check some of generals posts he fucking talks like retard, and mc hammer has no money, bankrupt, his rap, like mc hammers dough, will never fucking amount, it's as simple as if you didn't understand don't fucking vote dumbass...
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mike i don giva fuck were u wer born itz jus a personal don take it personal
uppin for votes |
Voted For: Mike Macs
5star you never really grasped the meaning of a bar...you would switch from punch to punch each line, instead of following thru with yo thots in a complete bar. Mike your shit was just played. Pamela Andersons breasts. you can do better than that. althought both verses werent so hot. im givin it to Mike for personals. punches were aight. keep it up. vote: Mike Mac's |
This was feedback posted for Mike Macs
ok battle coudnt pick winner so tied....................
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Thx lol but I couldn't think of another line cus I rushed through it...........
Uppin #2 |
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Voted For: Mike Macs
Vote- Mike Macs Weak battle. Flow- Tie. Pretty basic flows from both catz. Punches- Mike Macs. Some alright punches. Five star had too much self-glorification shit in his drop to throw one. Personals- None. Wordplay- None. Multis- None. This battle came down to punches. Mike Macs threw some, and though they were weak, they still hit harder than Five star's... |
Uppin this again............................................. ............................................
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This was feedback posted for Mike Macs
ya'll wack u no i'm betta ya'll need to step back we all no that ya'll both sniffin crack .
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Voted For: FIVESTAR GENERAL
MiC MaCs u should hand over your rapping writes 1. u got merked. 2. ya Verse was just stupid.. For Instance: "You spell so bad, had me thinkin yo alias is tornados second account" ^^ What the FuCk...that shyt is too ConFuSing...i still dont FUcKIN GET IT.. " N makes no sense, like you talkin to whites in ebonics " ^^ wHAT THE HELL was that supposed to rhyme with? I cant even comment further on ya verse, and people call me wack..Oh my GoSh!!! u just crammed wordz to make them rhyme, and ya whole verse aint flow for Shyt... ' Five Star: ya verse definitely topped dudes, at some cases ur shyt aint rhyme too....and u got off flow...meaning, u aint finish ur lines... I dont like ur structure..ha but you getz my vote, and dude omg....*walks ouT* |
Voted For: FIVESTAR GENERAL
yo man thats sum ill rhymen i m gonna giove you my vote its close but id have to givve it to ya show sum love bk to my battles |
dam dis shit hella old uppin
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Voted For: FIVESTAR GENERAL
FG: This Wack Mc Is About 2 Get Lyrically Devoured/ U Accepted Da Battle, Your Stupid But Not A Coward/ 4/10 - meh opener. This Hoe Iz 2 Slow It'll B Dayz Before He Realizes He Lost/ Jus A Pussy Without Heart Off Ta See Tha Wizard Of Oz/ 3/10 - played. Another Wack Rapper Puttin Real Thuggs Ta Shame/ Im Block-tested Fivestar General...battle Acclaimed/ 2/10 - lame. Now Pay Respects Cuz Lyrically Your My Son/ U Also A Turf-hopper Don Even Noe Were U From*/ 3/10 - meh attempt at personal. I Keep An Arsenal Of Words,nouns,adjectives And Verbs/ 2 Verbally Assimilate Fake Ass "macs" And Herbs/ 3/10 - meh. So Texually U Becoming Equvilent 2 A Dead Man/ Nand No Visine Can Clear Up Tha Glocks Red Eye**/ 2/10 - no. So Don Don Try, Jus Eat Ya Wheaties And Re-up On Ya Minerals/ An Maybe Learn Dat Cadets Like U Should Challenge Da General/ 2/10 - weak closer. 19/70 Mike: You spell so bad, had me thinkin yo alias is tornados second account And ya verses, like mc hammers dough, will never amount 3/10 meh opener. Readin yo raps is sufferin, shits feels like chronic *indigestion* N makes no sense, like you talkin to whites in ebonics 0/10 - riiiight, try me. Cypher you claimin to be a father, like you eva fucked a whore N you provin 2 have skillz is like ya dick....nothin eva seen before 2/10 - gay. It's like I'm the only real nigga here, put all ya bogus rumors to rest Actin like you real but you as fake as pamela anderson breastz 1/10 - Your new homie, and still cant get any more fuckin played. and wow look he said the N word, to try and make his line seem so much coolier. Ya punches like chris tucker stand up, annoyin, shit's just bad humor Horrible, you rappin good is outta the ordinary, abornmal, just like a tumor 2/10 - explain? Stick with the title you got, cus weight, you'll neva be carryin False info you be givin is like two gay niggas, never be marryin 3/10 - wow your best line was about gay ppl! 11/70 weak battle, no word of a lie... I would merk either of you any day of the week. |
Voted For: FIVESTAR GENERAL
feedback on mac- reading was smooth but punches weren't that strong ...some of them were played to...... feedback on general didn't have as much punches as macs....but overall generals verse just came alot stronger..... i vote general ~1~ |
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