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MaNiPuLaTiOn vs marvolousj1009
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6 - 12 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting blind spit Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 08-01-04 at 05:59 AM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
aight im here bout da check in rite now.......................
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MARVOLoUsJ1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-01-04 05:35 AM.
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MaNiPuLaTiOn has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-01-04 05:36 AM.
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did ya'll see da shit dis hoe was just popin???,4 u goin gold is a option // cuzz ur saught of like a "lake nobody use" ya "flow is forgotten" //-1
i see u hatin talkin bout jay he suck,u tryin da play me but look at ya bar's u'z a lazy slut // y she agree da battle me well even dat "female rapper" couldn't give ds "lady-luck" //-2 dis habit is just mine,twistin faggets n punks minds when im rappin a punchline // dis chick got 7 wins neva went da elevated she keep comin "back" 2 da "front (lines)" //-3 marv cant rap? u mistakin him,u could manipulate dem other wun's but here i doubt u gon take da win // u ugly a dude would "curse u out if he woke up & saw ya face" now ima call u "rude-awakinin" //-4 scared da check in ya'll dis chick is nervous,cuzz her punchlines miss on purpose // look at ya "title" u cant keystyle & da "RV" in dat stand's 4 "(w)ritten verses" //-5 i dont mean da send her rage,but tell da truth u been afraid // while u writin 4 hour's my verse's be like dat "drink" cuzz they r "minute maid" //(made)-6 aight umm nuff i said 10-16 lines i spit 12 |
ima class-ik-fy u as HARDWOOD..coz u making me BORED...
so i knock ya jaw jus like ya crew..cos you both FLOORED.. 17 losses..its a fuvkin joke u claiming "da sickest on dis site".. aint even READY for newbs..a QUICKPUNCH turn out ya light.. u got no respect..always bitchin,n gettin yourself irrate.. you should migrate, coz even NEWBS tellin u to elevate.. you got d/r`s following u around like u captain dis ship.. when u tell a joke..u only stay afloat..coz no sides-split.. i spit quick,leave u more played than vedetta on sound-click.. ur style outta balance like a fat chick tryin ta standing-kick.. u banished..its my party..n u to beat is a "piece of cake" at least when you leave here u guaranteed to ELEVATE ok..beta explain personals for u voters bar1-hardwood classickz is his crew wrk out the wordplay bar2-READ/QUICKPUNCH..are 2 newbs who beat him bar3- he was gettin worked up coz a newb was tellin him to elevate bar4-wrk it out. bar5-vendettas hot on soundclick bar6-im tryin to say wen he go home he gonna take the elevator. SORRY BOUT THA BREAKDOWN BUT WIT THIS WACK NEW SYSTEM I CNT USE LINKS |
lmaoooo and umm im sorry da free post but i merked ready and me and quick punch battled like 5 months ago and u came on here in july which means ???
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dunno wots it mean?????
hey i chkd ur battles n u lost to them both. so there ya go.dnt try to sway, uppin |
This was feedback posted for MaNiPuLaTiOn
damm wish i could vote on this...tight ass battle................
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Voted For: MaNiPuLaTiOn
took it with a all around better flow...the rhymin was on hit, and she never fell off, took the battle and ran, walked wit it...marv had a tight flow it was just choppy in some places, and some punches didnt hit as hard as manip., v/manipulation Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: MARVOLoUsJ1009
omg this nigga just annaliated that bitch fo real and i aint saying that cuz i dont like the slit i vote fairly. breakdown man all your pucnhes were weak and aint hit hard and your personals were weak also.your flow and structure was good and your vocab is the same you also had a good ender6/10 and a good opener 5/10.now let me tell you why you lost. marv flow snd structure good vocab also your wordplay was flawless 1st bar powerful hit 8/10 2nd bar also hard 8/10 3rd and 4th ber hard hitting personals same with the 5th bar 9/10 your ending needs work but otherwise you locked this vote -marv better personals and punches |
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136230 umm here go da link stupid....fake ass personals lmaoo come on u gota check battle stats whut type of shit is dat i merked ready and i lost da quick punch so stop it.. |
That Vote Is Gettin Removed....fukin Hate Vote...
U Really Piss Me Off.....i Wud Break Ur Fukin Legs,u Fukin Twat. But Obviously I Cant.watch As U Get Fukin Hated On.dummy. |
uppin 4 honest votes..ideally peeps who know wot they talkin bout.
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Voted For: MARVOLoUsJ1009
aight... manipulation: overall a decent verse... wordplay was kinda bordering on the lame side, except for ya personal about who he lost battles to... decent flow.. kinda basic but you were sort of trying to include multis.. punches were hit n miss Marv: some nice original wordplay.. as always from you :P.. punches n' personals were well thought out n' hittin... flow was a tad stretched... I can tell that you rushed that verse so the stretches didnt really bother me... v/marv If u want, return it: me vs GSS in sig |
okay good honest vote...can we get some more ppl favor's will be returned...
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Voted For: MaNiPuLaTiOn
Decent battle........ Marvous......your structure was horrible, your flow was horrible, and your punches were weak, I thought with lines that long you'd at least have multies but you barely had any of those, you had no personals, nor did you have any wordplay or metaphors, this was a weak disappointing verse, I seen you drop somewhat better before, plain and simple you gotta do better Manio........good verse, once again your strength was your wordplay and metaphors...those were nice you won this battle with those alone, good complexity...stay at it, punches were ok nothing spectacular, personals you had a few they hit but were jus average strength, your flow was good as well as your structure, you out classed him in every category Vote: Manipulation |
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This was feedback posted for MARVOLoUsJ1009
sorry manipulation he ate u not that his flow was amazin but his punches were betta sorry i cant vote for u yet not enough posts.
any time ya want it |
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Upppin Stop Sleepin Ppl 4 Real.....................................
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whut da fukk ppl??? vote man they really need da do da 2 link thing badd on dis shit
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^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^whut Da Fukk Is Really Good .....................
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Voted For: MARVOLoUsJ1009
yoo tite verses to both of yall dis was a good battle, both of yall did yall thing and i like that, mARVOULOUS-u had nice flo and u had good punches multis but yo vocab cus of got a lot betta but u had dose punches dat hit hard as hell so u took it Manipulation- look u had nice flo and evrythin but i really wasnt feelin yo strcutre or ur wordplay, u had sum punches but jus dint hit as hard as Marvoulous, so v/Marvoulous yo hit my new battle up honest votes http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=140877, iite 1 love Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: MARVOLoUsJ1009
Except for some of the stretched lines, Marv took this one easily... not sure when this battle started but it had to be before MaNip joined hardwood... this was a weak battle for her compared to her topicals. Marv had way more punches that hit a lot harder. multi's were there but it was hard to get a flow going because of the structure. had some nice personals in there also. Manip... came with an old style... structure was better but punches were kinda weak... she did have a few personals but they could've been worded better to be more effective. not too much use of multi's and wordplay did minimal damage. I know she spits better than this from other posts I've read but today just wasn't her day v/marv |
okay uppin wun more vote ppl stop sleepin..............................
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Voted For: MaNiPuLaTiOn
i gotta give this manip she came with better structure n pretty good personal punches flow was good in most parts.i liked your wordplay,it was nice...marv..i got where you were going with your punches but they jus werent written wright..you had some really good idea's but jus dint capitalize on them..you would've had a better verse if ya tried ta shortin ya lines n work on your punches a little..but props ta both nice verses.... please retun the vote: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=141117 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=140239 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...d.php?p=1480054 |
uppin.....................for sum votes..
leave ya links...... |
lol aight but her personals was fake dunn u aint see da link i left??? its nothin uppin
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Voted For: MaNiPuLaTiOn
I gotta give this to him...this was an O.K....verse.....and his wordplay was ok..the liune that was hott was..elevate..line...it was pretty hot......marv...u supposed to be the best on the site .....not really showing it...i knwo you got skillz use them man....iight ....ok battle both of ya... Vote.....Manipulation.....for..better sturc...wordplay and punches.... |
stop swayin marv...............i had personls,u didnt....uppin.............
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This was feedback posted for MaNiPuLaTiOn
Dis battle was good
the only problem is that I cant vote yet Ill be sure to vote on dis one |
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This was feedback posted for MaNiPuLaTiOn
Nice drop really feelin it
I liked ur structure punchlines and overall verse TOO bad I cant vote yet but I will be sure to do it |
uppinupp....favours will be returned......................
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