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Gkillaz05 vs Shiest
Battle Rules
10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 04-19-07 at 01:35 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. Expired battle close - win |
Shiest has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-14-07 12:16 AM.
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check in nugga..........................................
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GKillaz05 has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-15-07 07:30 PM.
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Haha, GSkillz...
Look homes...What do you know abouts 10 Lines Besides sniffing it in rows up your nasal bout 10 times Your a faggit in the scene, position'd well for a backshot Fact. This PussyCat fumbles more balls than a Detriot Mascot GSkillaz '05'? its '07' Now, Your Expire Date's Prudent Don't get me wrong... ...You have an open mind - so open ideas pass through it Don't Fuck around, or the boys will have a nigga's G Killed Avoid other all drugs the only dope worth shooting is GSkillz You Over Came your fears but in vain for I'm ending your sequels You must have a low opinion of people ...if you think they're even close to your equals. g'luck mayne |
If looks could kill it would be the only way you'd destroy...
In Shiest'a pic, dude looks like a retarded cow boy... Shiest when you attempt to spit, its more like drool... Couldnt impress the kids on ice teez rappin school.... I'm still waitin', son must have lyrical constipation.... My punches hit so hard your about to be 8-1 (eaten one) So watch him twitch son, call it a knuckle sandwich... Gettin beat by your pops... Is the only time you ever have a buckle in ya hand bitch!... Your style is like a man-wich, the way its sloppy joe... Couldnt "stick to da heat" like you were playin hockey bro... |
uppin for some votes!!
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Voted For: Shiest
Ah this was a decent battle. Shiest took it, he hand some punches..kind of played but they worked..Gkillaz came a lil weak..and? if only time ur holdin a belt is when ur pops is beatin u ?? I don't get..why would u be holding it?..idk shiest took this v/shiest |
UPppin this bitch in this joint.....
Okkkk?.... |
Voted For: GKillaz05
Your style is like a man-wich, the way its sloppy joe... Couldnt "stick to da heat" like you were playin hockey bro... vs Your a faggit in the scene, position'd well for a backshot Fact. This PussyCat fumbles more balls than a Detriot Mascot good batttle i think you took it your punches hit ah lil harder good shit tho |
This was feedback posted for Shiest
...i beat you.........
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Voted For: Shiest
Gkillaz, your verse was very simple... Some of it seemed a bit forced. Shiest came slightly better with his lyrics in general, and also I was feeling his flow more. |
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lets get some more votes on this, come on peeps.
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Voted For: GKillaz05
checkin pollss... decent battle right now..sheist stop duckin me Removed |
shit my bad..ima get that vote removed
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lets get some more votes happenin' on this battle!!
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Voted For: GKillaz05
Haha, GSkillz... Look homes...What do you know abouts 10 Lines Besides sniffing it in rows up your nasal bout 10 times good flow here, but nothing hard hitting Your a faggit in the scene, position'd well for a backshot Fact. This PussyCat fumbles more balls than a Detriot Mascot Meh, decent bar, still nothing special GSkillaz '05'? its '07' Now, Your Expire Date's Prudent Don't get me wrong... ...You have an open mind - so open ideas pass through it I liked this bar, better then your previous and had a witty punch Don't Fuck around, or the boys will have a nigga's G Killed Avoid other all drugs the only dope worth shooting is GSkillz Meh, decent again, still nothing above average You Over Came your fears but in vain for I'm ending your sequels You must have a low opinion of people ...if you think they're even close to your equals. Again the flow is pretty dope just it is presenting a weak punch.. g'luck mayne Summary: I don’t see this as a really good verse. It’s on the line of decent and under average. Your flow was the only thing that was above average really, structure was good as well. Still more then flow is needed to win a text battle. HardHittingBars-1 DecentBars-2 BarsNeedingImprovement-2 Points-2 If looks could kill it would be the only way you'd destroy... In Shiest'a pic, dude looks like a retarded cow boy... I’ll give this a decent/meh as opener, nothing compelling Shiest when you attempt to spit, its more like drool... Couldnt impress the kids on ice teez rappin school.... Lol, humorous, but still only decent… I'm still waitin', son must have lyrical constipation.... My punches hit so hard your about to be 8-1 (eaten one) MEH! This wordplay I find having minor flaws. The sound doesn’t exactly match up, so it’s slightly forced, making this nothing more then a decent bar So watch him twitch son, call it a knuckle sandwich... Gettin beat by your pops... Is the only time you ever have a buckle in ya hand bitch!... Decent again…Still haven’t seen anything that overly impressed me Your style is like a man-wich, the way its sloppy joe... Couldnt "stick to da heat" like you were playin hockey bro... Decent again. Atleast the metta was good, still it didn’t reach the next level, harder hitting setups may bring it there though… Summary: Wasn’t really mind boggled. The verse was better in a sense, mainly because of the maintaining of consistency. Every bar was decent/average. Though he didn’t have the best bar of the battle, in return he didn’t have the worst as well. Again this seemed like a battle were you tried not to loose, instead of trying to win. HardHittingBars-0 DecentBars-5 BarsNeedingImprovement-0 Points-5 Overall: Best use of bars-G Flow-Shiest Punches-Tie Opener-G Closer-G Vote-This was a decent battle, Shiest having the best bars and the worse, and Gk just staying in there landing constant blows. And for that consistency I have to give him the win. |
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This was feedback posted for GKillaz05
ive seen stick to da heat line before
the only time u ever have a buckle in ya hand before...and that retarded line is played as fuck..i even used it? lol well idk just puttin out some feedback.....gkillaaz set it up baby 12 lines maximum |
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Voted For: Shiest
Your a faggit in the scene, position'd well for a backshot Fact. This PussyCat fumbles more balls than a Detriot Mascot GSkillaz '05'? its '07' Now, Your Expire Date's Prudent Don't get me wrong... ...You have an open mind - so open ideas pass through it vs Your style is like a man-wich, the way its sloppy joe... Couldnt "stick to da heat" like you were playin hockey bro... v/ for Shiest he had more creativity and his punches hit wikid hard and they were funny but some were played...no hate |
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Bumping I guess...........................
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would it hurt to vote?????????????????????????????????
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Voted For: Shiest
Your a faggit in the scene, position'd well for a backshot Fact. This PussyCat fumbles more balls than a Detriot Mascot Don't Fuck around, or the boys will have a nigga's G Killed Avoid other all drugs the only dope worth shooting is GSkillz You Over Came your fears but in vain for I'm ending your sequels You must have a low opinion of people ...if you think they're even close to your equals. vs. nothin gkill only had that sloppy joe line but it was still terrible wordplay and not even close to writen in a correct style. vote- val by a landslide, anyone who votes the other way is a fuckin douche sandwich |
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This was feedback posted for Shiest
check'in polls.........................................
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u can have this battle closed if you want if this been more then 14 days...
i'll send you the link in a min if you want.... |
here is the link....
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=124674 ^^ just post the link to this battle and strobe will close it since its kinda dead the site the 21 day rule is in effect... |
Voted For: GKillaz05
eh u won dis by a lil bit. sheist jus wasn't as creative. pretty close battle doh. h0lla. |
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