Intermental, CMP, Jessica - Why Remix
 

www.soundclick.com/intermental

jessica (intro)
CMP (first verse)
Intermental (2nd verse)

http://commmunity.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=215181
http://commmunity.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=215321

www.soundclick.com/intermental

"WHY"

holla atcha boi..one.. :shoot:

upppin...............

beat is average..nothing special...nah i didnt like it

jessica (intro)
not that gd.......i dont like her voice....or that ok nothing special


CMP (first verse)
flow is ok, not bad......

Intermental (2nd verse)

quality is kinda gd, lyrics r nice, flow is kl.....better than cmp
best part of this shit....yea homie...nice job

not bad song....

thanks homie............

Ite, yuh i like the beat has a nice ring too it. I Like the vocals and the end of each bar nice enpahsism, sounds gd. The hook is ite could have been better though. Verse 2 was good, nice lyrics and flow props.

Overall 8/10

Good song man.

ok....

sample is pretty sick....

piano's are sick aswell man

takes along time for the beat to kick in dont it lol

there we go....

hook is pretty meh emotion aint good on that lyrics are iite on it thou... sounds a bit borin

first guy

he's iite... flow is kool.. emotion is meh though.. delivery is pretty kool... lyrics are straight. flow gets a bit repetitive though, needs swuitching up.. or at least change of rhyme scheme,

hook

inter: vocals are a tad loud... emotion is better than the other dudes... wheres ya uk accent u sed u had? hahaha lol lyrics are dope, flow is decent changed ya rhyme scheme nice shit strong verse man

overall its an ight track no ya best but still good... keep droppin em man pz

thanks homie.......

uppin.............

alright gotta leave feed for fam
alright not feeling the girl really her voice is really shaky she almost sounds like those chipmunk samples
first guy not feeling the intro to his verse his voice is ok i odnt liek the effect he put on his verse wrong typ fo track to do it on overall flow was cool nothing special lyrically id like to hear him speed up his flow
intermental lyrics were alot better than first guy flow was pretty much on alot better than ppast tracks
overall cool track wasnt feeling first guy intermental i think your vocals could be turned up a little bit props on the track

oh yea you can hit up my track and vote hot if you like it :)

fo sho imma get to that now

i like the sample at the begining, first dudes verse is cool and weird, flow is cool and original, like his voice, verse gets annoying at the end lol, hook is dope, i really love the beat, inter props for this song, its your best seriously, loved your voice on this one, your flow was straight and flow too, props dope job man

peace

....chorus...::no good::

1st rapper: u dun have the right kinda voice to do something like that sound like ur getting choked...but eh the flow switches so much i cant realli get a good understand on what ur tryn to do.....

2nd rapper: ....ur better then teh first guy it was str8 ur flow had meaning u fell off beat a lil but thaz koo u sound like a beginner (if ur not sorry mean no offense) but ya i liked ur verse better then the first....keep tryn

Hopefully u will do better next time

"Remember" i am not an asshole lol i have to post thsi to everyone im just critical aight ? so try harder consider thsi NEGATIVE MOTIVATION to try harder and shut me up

Kinda feeling the beat...The sample was cool...First dude, not feeling it. Flow is boring, delivery is plain...I cant even really understand what he's saying.

As a whole, Im not really feeling this track. Keep trying though man. Pz

RTF on "Questions"

Thanx.

^^^ayo man u didnt say anythin to do wit me :(...

Intermental:

Your verse was a little better lyrical wise, but still not great. Flow was kinda iffy in some spots...Quality was decent. Really was not one of your best tracks man.

RTF on Questions.

Umm Yeah...


...Fuck Jessicas Intro Word


Its Koo

Cmp-Good Flow

Deliverys Koo

Presence Is Nice

Lyrcis A lil Meh

Inter:

Proly The Best

Delivery-Dope

Emotions-Ok

Flows-Good But A lil Off In Spots

Lyrics Are Better

Overall:6/10


Not ya Best Still Aight

aite...............thanks.......

u stole my chipmunk to sing the beginning of the track!

Did you pay him?


1st dude hit the mic while recording....

beat is ok

flow is pretty decent


vocals need to be amped though
yizzer


Inter...u came in way to languid...up that emotion on the 1st few lines...hook the listener in

ur lyrics were pretty cool

I like how u did some of ur dubs


ur delivery was monotonous at spots

decent track that's promising


1

^^LOL..thank u i guess..........

-listening

Intro koo i like her voice for some reason;)
good intro nothing ammusing but kool.

2nd verse- flow was on point lyriks was straight on beat nothing really ammusing,
3-rd-nice lyriks on beat nothing ammusing but good shit,some lines had me like (mm iight) but chea man this drop was hot

keep dropping hot thist man intermantal man u starting to sound nice homie keep it up yo
(nice beat by the way)
7.5/10
RTF ~1`

Intro - wuz aiite didn't really feel her voice that much but fit the concept of the song....

1st MC and hook- wasn't feelin his style at all, felt like the delivery could've been better, lyrics could've been upped....

Int. - nice verse, ya elevated from your earlier tracks this year....nice delivery and stayed on topic....

Overall - decent track and quality wuz strate.......

pz

~1~

RTF: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=215435

intro - good singin

1st verse - sounds koo. flow iz aight. voice iz aight.

2nd verse - u sound soooo much younger then u look, lol. good lyrics. good flow.

this track wuz koo. nice beat too.

rtf pleeze

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=215548

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