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Kordozar vs Wes City
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12 Lines No Crew Votes No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 07-18-05 at 02:57 PM Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in. Reopened - 8/10 |
Wes City has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-18-05 02:31 PM.
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Fuck a kordozar his ass will just choke
And tha fat lady has sung…his mom jus hit a high note Yea Im an ill head with a mind that knows ya wack see The only thing that bumps kordozar is a face full of acne Your not dope, you prolly look like cali’s sister Ill beat ya hands down on the spot like I was playin twister I mean this battle is nonsense like your iq you bum ……this line would be dope if your name wasn’t so fuckin dumb ya punches don’t hold weight and are very controversial kors-light.. I can tell with all them low carb commercials a bottle of sleepin pills and a lullabye for this geek you may need those^^ …… but I jus read ya shit and that puts me to sleep |
Kordozar has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-18-05 02:33 PM.
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You Nice?Ock Please Your A Nobody Anywhere See Boy Listen
And It's Easy To Knock Wes Off Without The Detroit Pistons Ya Seed Will Lose Both Legs Before It Ever Starts Steppin Come On Fam Your A Has Been So How You Learnin New Methods? You Respected?Highly Doubt It Even Ya Legs Can't Stand You Ko The Only 5-0 You Seen Was Ya Grandfathers Birthday Candle I Bet Ya Audio Was The Flip After All The Tracks Then Flopped Kord Always Was A 'Star'Who Left Him Gassed Up Like Astronauts Defeatin Me With What?You'll Lose Just By The Personals In Ya Name Cartoon!!Nut They'll Indentify Pinky Once They See It In His Brain Ya Verse Was The PastWack Punches..Why Post It You Already Knew It Already Left You Blue!Now My Black Fist Will Match With The Bruises The Detroit Pistons Knocced The Lakers Off Which Is The Wes(t) His Alias Is New Method And He Does Audio Scream At Me |
Voted For: Wes City
Fuck a kordozar his ass will just choke And tha fat lady has sung…his mom jus hit a high note 8/10 nice opener Yea Im an ill head with a mind that knows ya wack see The only thing that bumps kordozar is a face full of acne 8/10 nice punch Your not dope, you prolly look like cali’s sister Ill beat ya hands down on the spot like I was playin twister 8/10 again nice I mean this battle is nonsense like your iq you bum ……this line would be dope if your name wasn’t so fuckin dumb 7/10 good ya punches don’t hold weight and are very controversial kors-light.. I can tell with all them low carb commercials 7/10 good a bottle of sleepin pills and a lullabye for this geek you may need those^^ …… but I jus read ya shit and that puts me to sleep 8/10 good closer Overall: 46/60 You Nice?Ock Please Your A Nobody Anywhere See Boy Listen And It's Easy To Knock Wes Off Without The Detroit Pistons 7/10 ok openor Ya Seed Will Lose Both Legs Before It Ever Starts Steppin Come On Fam Your A Has Been So How You Learnin New Methods? 9/10 good punch and personals You Respected?Highly Doubt It Even Ya Legs Can't Stand You Ko The Only 5-0 You Seen Was Ya Grandfathers Birthday Candle 8/10 nice I Bet Ya Audio Was The Flip After All The Tracks Then Flopped Kord Always Was A 'Star'Who Left Him Gassed Up Like Astronauts 8/10 good punch Defeatin Me With What?You'll Lose Just By The Personals In Ya Name Cartoon!!Nut They'll Indentify Pinky Once They See It In His Brain 7/10 ok Ya Verse Was The PastWack Punches..Why Post It You Already Knew It Already Left You Blue!Now My Black Fist Will Match With The Bruises 5/10 weak closer Overall: 44/60 v/ wes Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Ehh It Wasnt It Explained Cus So Doesn't Count Uppin More Votes!!
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lol dont be a bitch about it.....both verse was good i was feeling both almost equally but if yuou see that wes took it wit hard hittin punhces and personals wit it kodosar didnt have that much hard hittin punches and he lost by two points cuz of it so like i said i vote for wes for a lil better verse keep it up both of you.....you happy i broke down both verses and explained my fuckin vote |
Who Cares? Uppin More Votes!!!
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that vote is explained out the ying-yang uppin....
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Voted For: Wes City
Wes City - Good spit, it flowed well, and you had some good personals, and hard hitten punches. Best Line -Yea Im an ill head with a mind that knows ya wack see The only thing that bumps kordozar is a face full of acne Worst Line - NONE Kordozar - iight spit, it flowed well, nothin that great in it, but you hard some decent punches. Best Line - You Respected?Highly Doubt It Even Ya Legs Can't Stand You Ko The Only 5-0 You Seen Was Ya Grandfathers Birthday Candle Worst Line - Ya Verse Was The PastWack Punches..Why Post It You Already Knew It Already Left You Blue!Now My Black Fist Will Match With The Bruises OVERALL - This battle goes to Wes, he had the better flow, harder punches and more creativity. Kor man, you need some stronger punches and some more thought out shit. Vote - Wes Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
This was feedback posted for Kordozar
to close to vote...every time i read the verses they cancel each otha out...nice battle
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Uppin For More Votes!!!!!!!!!!
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wow what a bitch move....you wanna play that way than alright
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Ehh Cus Im Not Gonna Sit Up There And Get Cheated Upping For Votes...
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This was feedback posted for Wes City
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tha kid fuckin broke down each verse bar by bar....and you call that getting cheated..?? wtf are you accept the loss |
Voted For: Wes City
u had goood verbal skills there dont get me wrong but u came in on the opening a bit weak son....you need a bit of elevation...as for yo closing it was ite..... but u come on top and that vote goes to you overall vote....Wes City Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
most likely your vote will be dq'd ....and this vote i would agree kordozar on the count of he has no idea what he is talking about....you should dq votes like these and no the ones that are broken down bar for bar....cause thats jus a bitch move
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Cus Im Not Going To Cheat You Out Of A Net Battle, Whats On Ya Mind? If The Vote Is Done Properly Then It's Gonna Get Dq'ed Point Blank....
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nah there is more than one way to vote....breaking it down bar by bar is one of the most indeph ways to vote...and you got it dq'd ...WOW, and if its jus a "net" battle to you then why are you getting votes dq'd??
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Two Unexplained Votes Niether Of Them Count Cus Uppin For Vote...
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Voted For: Wes City
Wes City had better flow, harder punches and, Both of yall had about the same personals, so that is tied in that categorie. Both had tight verses, and it was hard to judge, but wes city did better in flow and punches catetgories, to take the win, Return the vote please in a battle in my sig Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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This was feedback posted for Kordozar
you did ok wit the punchlines so now start pickin up better rhymes
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