New Acapella!! Leave links!!
The songs is just an acapella on a verse i wrote here's the link and enjoy :thumbup:
the song: http://www.soundclick.com/fotrill links: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2631670 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2631701 |
this shit was dope, quite a few quotable lines, and the closin bar was nasty- track is spoken wordish, kinda reminds me of the acca on the bis 2000 b.c album-
"my 5 fingers said to my dick... ima beat that ass"- "should say peace out, but yall blow like a sneeze, clasp ya dome, squeeze ya teeth out- ya show ya peice out, leave my knees 6 feet in ya feces leak out like a pcp drout" haha i like the way you write, keep droppin |
pretty dope, I like your flow, the only thing thats a downfall on this was that you can't keep your flow going. You always pause then do that blah blah blah and then pause, try and keep a steady flow man. but it's pretty dope, you have a pretty funny style to the way you write lol. the beans line was funny lol.
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why u doin acapella? lol
its pretty good but i cant reall rate ya flow r shit..lyrics r coo, nice emotion n delivery. nice drop.. http://community.rapverse.com/showt...103#post2632103 holla back^^^^^ Feed used 1/24/06 "Hold That" |
accapellas allways easier to flow, lol.
this is good, a few nice lines that stood out making it more affective. Feed used 1/25/06 "Poetik Karma" |
yoru voice is odd
id liek to hear you rhyme to a ebat alot of quotables id like ot hear you on a track with tito flwo there wasnt a beat to follow so it was prety cool |
Pretty nice lines in there...
Can't wait to hear an actual track. Good shit. RTF http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=220491 |
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yeah those r my fav'S to lol Quote:
then peep my other tracks on soundclick :laugh: Quote:
Here's the story...i got a big ass box in my room full of rhymes and i was goin through it tryin to find some shit to record and i found this verse which i liked but forgot about and i rapped it...so i was like "this would make a tight acapella" got to the studio and tried to put it to a beat but i wasnt feelin it so i told my man to just press record and i spit it. THANX FOR THE FEED EVERYBODY |
listning......................
voice is ight................................ flow is good seems to be anyway.......................... deleivery is good................ lyrics r sikkness.........funny to .................... yeah i def i wanna hear this track...................... if this was a free your dope.....................if not it was dope anyway Feed used 1/26/06 "fresh like me" |
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LOL no it's not but thanx for the feed |
return tha fav on my fresh like me track please and thank you
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aight thats cool
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nice multis broken up through out... lacked emotion in parts... fucked with the vocabulary in this... kept the ass ending a bit too long to have no real multis in that section... Lyrically sound for the most part... would like to hear it behind a beat to see how it really flows...
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thanx for the feed
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how so? |
ok..da lyricz is str8 on hea got sum nice lines but othaz were kinda eh nahmean...flows coo...deliverys aight could've been more consistent thru out da track tho...overall dis was ok nahmean...
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shit really wasn't broken down in bite size pieces for the idiots that call them selves hip~hop artists... Had a nice use of an extended vocab in this... People tend to say shit as elementary as they possibly can so that everybody listening will get what ever it is they're trying to convey... so 9 times out of ten most of the mainstream shit you hear a kindergardener could interput ... I liked that fact that someone would actually have to think a lil to listen to this... |
put a beat, it could be more fun, nice lines, flows not bad, sometimes you sound like your tryin to say big words
good track |
edit: i fucked up on this psot my bad
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thanx for the feed everyone
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lol ok cool was just wondering what u meant to be honest i'm not gonna put a beat to this ...i did but i wasnt feelin it so.... :thumbup: :thumbup: :thumbup: :thumbup: :thumbup: :thumbup: |
its str8 for accapella iono..i wasnt realli feeling maybe its not my type of stuff....to random for me to like....but funny none the less
thanks for the Feed on my track u gleave me feed and ill Return the Favor aight |
yeah no prob man thanx for the feed
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