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Illmatic 02-02-05 07:08 PM

TuniT vs Illmatic
 
Battle Rules:

10-20
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 02-05-05 at 07:08 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 02-02-05 07:12 PM

TuNiT has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-02-05 07:12 PM.

System 02-02-05 07:18 PM

Illmatic has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-02-05 07:18 PM.

TuNiT 02-02-05 07:22 PM

ahm back now an am 'STILL-AT-IT' so lemme get started with 'ILLMATIC'
u see i got an ILL-HABIT of MERKIN
so when u see diz verse ur shook an try sayin ''HEY MAN MY KEYBOARD AINT WORKIN''
its cum you SLURPIN an takin dick in the 'BUM'
ima stick a knife ta da chest an engrave 'REDRUM'
your stuck in a SLUM, cause ya verses dont HIT HARD
i'll leave ya LIPS SCARD like an operation gone WRONG
an nobody wants ta see your texts like oprah in a THONG

Illmatic 02-02-05 08:15 PM

Ain't a curse word could describe me i flow past damn,
and get it right i ain't a "young Buck" i'm a grown ass man
you don't wanna battle you forced cause you due to rebuddle
i wonder "kweli's reaction" when he see's this "beautiful struggle"
why even think about this verse, battles already been tooken
go ahead and post ya wack verse, i already stopped lookin
"get rich or die tryin" well i'm takin you wit me
you'll take nine to the spine remember nigga you ain't fifty
T unit you come up with that all by yourself you twit
and by the way nowadays how far will 50 cent get
sick shit that i spit'll hit you i'll see that a rash build
my serrated syllables still in you, i leave yellin "cashville"
Tunit you so hard do what the fuck you do
stands for This Untolerable Nigga Is Through
what nigga ya soft try blingin hard as me
cause you sure can't rap go try out singin r and b
i can understand why you frontin on r v
cause everybody wants to copy what they see on t.v
rap is mine bitch best regard what i do
cause the peachs in georgia are harder then you

TuNiT 02-02-05 08:19 PM

yo verse wuz a lil blah in places, kinda of self glorified in parts too but it wuz straight nice lines is some places good luck n ish

TuNiT 02-03-05 09:47 AM

yo uppin fo dem votes homiez !!!!!

votes will be returned if yuh leaves a link nah mean

Illmatic 02-05-05 01:27 AM

your verse was aight, you had some good punches...good luck

blitz 02-05-05 04:15 PM

Voted For: Illmatic

illmatic win came hard followed the rules flow was ok not rly good struck was ok didnt coem to good but it was rite rhymes wasnt that good punches was ok not all that persnals was weak same with punches but he followed the rules so he has to get y vote and he cmae harder

Blackmage 02-07-05 04:26 PM

This was feedback posted for Illmatic
 
Uppin this for my man illmatic yall holla at this battle and always remember..........it's whatever holla at me

TuNiT 03-26-05 04:00 PM

fukkin vote fuckerzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

Re~Verb 03-27-05 01:00 PM

Voted For: TuNiT

TUNIT YA VERSE WAS HWELLA SHORT.BUT IMA GIVE U THE VOTE COZ U HAD MORE PUNCHES THAN ILL DID IN HIS WHOLE VERSE.......
ILL.ELEVATE ALL YA LINES ARE TOO BASIC,FAIRLY WEAK BATTLE BUT TUNIT HAD BETA PUNCHES.N THAT WINS HIM THIS ONE

Re~Verb 03-27-05 01:02 PM

Hey
 
PLZ RETURN ONE HONESTLY

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Illmatic 03-30-05 12:38 AM

A check this... thats a bullshit vote... bitin people to vote for you, thats a BITCH move

TuNiT 04-23-05 06:09 PM

hey can u vote on diz yull i voted on mad battlkz pplz

TuNiT 05-23-05 05:49 AM

voeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee ee

henrey_the_8th 05-24-05 04:51 PM

Voted For: Illmatic

Damn that was ill, i like when you spelled his name out, i heard that thong thing before to, Both were good verse for RV, TuNiT-7/10 Illmatic-9/10

Ghost 05-24-05 04:56 PM

This was feedback posted for TuNiT
 
polllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllsssssss sssssss!

josh654789 05-29-05 01:47 PM

Voted For: TuNiT

liked tunits verse better. both had good structure. overall neither verse was too bad.

Sik Wit It 05-29-05 01:53 PM

Voted For: Illmatic

ahm back now an am 'STILL-AT-IT' so lemme get started with 'ILLMATIC'
wack
u see i got an ILL-HABIT of MERKIN
so when u see diz verse ur shook an try sayin ''HEY MAN MY KEYBOARD AINT WORKIN''
decent
its cum you SLURPIN an takin dick in the 'BUM'
ima stick a knife ta da chest an engrave 'REDRUM'
played punch here
your stuck in a SLUM, cause ya verses dont HIT HARD
i'll leave ya LIPS SCARD like an operation gone WRONG
an nobody wants ta see your texts like oprah in a THONG
nope


Ain't a curse word could describe me i flow past damn,
and get it right i ain't a "young Buck" i'm a grown ass man
nah
you don't wanna battle you forced cause you due to rebuddle
i wonder "kweli's reaction" when he see's this "beautiful struggle"
decent
why even think about this verse, battles already been tooken
go ahead and post ya wack verse, i already stopped lookin
average
"get rich or die tryin" well i'm takin you wit me
you'll take nine to the spine remember nigga you ain't fifty
weak

overall both dorps were pretty weak here, but Illmatic
took this one, punches were just a little harder than Tunit’s
......tunit ur drop was weak, especially ur 1st line here,
overall u need to elevate more.. both

Chris Stylez 05-29-05 08:24 PM

This was feedback posted for TuNiT
 
Ayo hommi u still owe me a battle from way back when.......So nigga wat it is den

TuNiT 03-14-06 07:56 AM

let uz vote vote vote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Payn 03-14-06 10:58 AM

Voted For: TuNiT

diz battle here was ok nothin real special stood out

Tunit- u need 2 work on ya structure, but a real good key right here

Illmatic - i like ya structure, but u need 2 work on it tha difference between a battle verse & an o.m. verse
it'll come in time keep workin on up

no hate

v// Tunit 4 better punches, & wordplay

King 03-14-06 06:59 PM

This was feedback posted for Illmatic
 
why even think about this verse, battles already been tooken
go ahead and post ya wack verse, i already stopped lookin
DIS LINE WON IT...............
PUNCHES-ILLMATIC
CREATIVITY-ILLMATIC
ENDING LINE-ILLMATIC
COOL BATTLE................TUNIT YOUR BEST LINE WAS:
ahm back now an am 'STILL-AT-IT' so lemme get started with 'ILLMATIC'
u see i got an ILL-HABIT of MERKIN
so when u see diz verse ur shook an try sayin ''HEY MAN MY KEYBOARD AINT WORKIN''
THE REDRUM PART WAS WEAK...........JUS KEEP WORKIN WEAK ASS DUDE

MyNamesGrafhYall 03-15-06 08:40 PM

This was feedback posted for TuNiT
 
Bo-Bo-Bo....

Black Hand, Label We Are The Gang!....

MyNamezGrafhYa'll


and dude is whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaack

Magic5 03-17-06 12:43 AM

This was feedback posted for Illmatic
 
I don't really think naming yourself after a Nas CD is best path you could take.

I also don't really think naming yourself T Unit is that good of a path either.

Whatever, though.

vinceness_deala 03-17-06 08:40 AM

This was feedback posted for TuNiT
 
ayy, oprah got that money tho, i'll see her in a thong anyday


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