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...Now Come Follow Me... Through the desert Sand...
...Feel the sun burn at your soul...
...one man... one word... trapped in Babylon...
...Now come follow me... through the barren land...
...walking a path of burning coal...
...nothing... no soul... I just travel on...

Things have changed in this great world...
Livin' in a town nicknamed the great whore...
Current day Babylonia holdin' a holy war...
When the heat is on it gets unworldly cold...
I just sit back and scan the crowd... reconnaissance...
Don't mess wit an outcast... it's common sense...
Let me hit ya wit some knowledge kid...
Now everytime you sleep wit a chick... u see it's adultery...
Your sleepin' wit someone else's wifey... & it's too cold to see...
Kids testein' limits... teen pregnancy...
All in a chool run summed up best by non-amnesty...
Drugs and sluts co-exist in harmony...
Wanna get some there is no need for Karma see...
Babylon's like an illegal drug pharmacy...
But the revelation of this town is god's prophecy...
When citizens & kids lose faith like they lost at sea...
Total destruction... aint' no hypocrisy...

...This is the lost book of village turn to chapter three...
...the angel of anarchy foreshadowed them coming after me...
...sawed offs... fords... chevys... tryin' to plaster me...
...the villa looked to the sky and asked Jesus... "Rapture me"...
...& then the clouds gathered above the grave of Patty Duncan...
...Something sent me the word of the awaiting mass destruction...
...I took one more gulp of the bottle of everclear...
...but death... one thiong for me which I willl never fear...
...So what if I'm a mess no one understands the metaphors...
...the parables... the fables... and the lores...
...I'm tryin' to better myself lookin' toward the lord...
...Holy Spirit convict me... I don't like living in the city of whores...
...It makes my lost lamb of a soul more wicked...
...my principal's punchin' my one way hell borne ticket...
...while I'm tryin' to weather the storm as it intensifies effect...
...it puts an end to our lives of debt...

...This is the product of my own blood and tears
...a sinner lost in a cloud of fire consuming lvoe and fears
...now if you hear this song and think I'm goin' sacrilegious
...yo didn't understand but I just aksed forgiveness
...I probably won't be able to summon the self-control within
...but I've escaped the wrath this time around but what's comin'
...Tribulation... Revelation... Iunno but I know It's been
...too long since you all kids felt the drummin'
...all this moanin' about the town will soon cease
...too me the town is diseased and deceased
...In my heart and soul it just does not exist anymore
...but already I feel the contamination of the Devil's fore...
...play... but hey... It'll always be ther but press ignore
...If I can... But I just over came the great whore
...Babylonia... Lawson... Same thing but different
...You rip me... The angel of Anarchy... you rippin' him
...Keep spittin' it... Cuz you'll be the one burnin' in the end

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...t=182864&page=2

Link... just for you Indeph now you can't close it (okay maybe you can but still)

this is dope man...very good use of metaphors...very good description...this could be OM of the month right here..i'll post more fb later

Thanks man... appreciate it...

yo pretty good...good multies and metaphors along with wordplay...6.5/10 keep it up

^laughs hard cuz I know you did not read that shit... and if you did... either a) you didn't understand it... or b) think your cool by trying to downplay a vet.

either way... that's the biggest oxymoron of a feed I've ever seen.

Dope Explains It All.
Wordplay Was Sicc.
The Chorus Is Trvial And Nice...
Your Scheme Is Of My Interest..
Deep Internal Deliverance...
Perhaps We Can Collaborate On Something Soon?
The Choice Is Yours.
Dope Drop...

Explained... I feel better

Heir to the Blueprint says:
6.5? Did you not understand it or what...
STACKS OF CASH says:
thats not low ta me
Heir to the Blueprint says:
I'm trying to figure this out... cuz If the two best topical cats on the site say that's bad ass then... how the fuck are you seein' a 6.5..
STACKS OF CASH says:
k 8
Heir to the Blueprint says:
Damn man... that shit just looks bad...
STACKS OF CASH says:
relax man....i didnt call u wack on purpose
Heir to the Blueprint says:
I was like... WTF!!!!! lol
STACKS OF CASH says:
lol

werrd we're cool.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Goliath

yeah... definately colab if you want

AIM- meaballer05
MSN- rhowe13@hotmail.com

I'd be happy to work with ya anytime... I'm just that chill of a cat.

That Was Grimey..
Speaking About The Little Conversation You Posted.

lol... yeah get at me for a collab.

Nice Man. I Liked The Way You Did This. Its Deep Man. You Have Obviously Studied Some Shit From The Bible Or Talked About It With Some Enlightened Cats. This Is One Of The Best Writtens I Have Read On Rv.

I'm sewin'.....I got Babylon on lock damnit!....... stupid bitch! :gfy:

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na i'm play'n...this was Doper than the Dopest Dopers...in the whole doping world....WORD :thumbup:

oh and thanx for teaching cats about me...lol....but 4real this was...nice glad to see someone reads besides me :evilgrin:

lol... Yeah... thanks for the feedback everyone.... uppin' for more...

i was really feelin that shit... you were goin at a different style that most people do, and if for every stupid remark about this open mic... i will kill you... lol but anyway, nice vocabulary and structure even though i don't give a fuck about that, and with that being said it was only a matter of sickness to me.. and that my friend on a scale of 1 to 10.. 10 being the best, 1 being the worst.. 9 muh fuck...lol @ 6.5.. peace

thanks for the feedback!!!!

uppin' for more...

God damn stop sleepin'.

hot hot drop, good meta's, prooly gonna make the hall of fame... return the favor they are in the sigs...

thnx... will do... uppin' this one.

Do you mind if I hump your OM?

Do you mind if I e-humped your OM?

Please... refrain from having sexual relations with my open mics via internet.

I;m pretty randy at the moment though, have you a deterrent?

No... but dear god... for your computer's sake... keep your package or what not to yourself.

pandemonium = worlds easiest net horndog. nah i'm playin but dis really is hall of fame material mayne. u on a whole nother level wit them metas. vocab is sick like always. stay up dawg and return da favor like right now in my OM. 1.

I do not possess a "package" (I think youre using a slang term for "penis").
I wish to stimulate my cliterus over a nice intellectual passage.
If you dont mind.

ah snap if your a hot female then you can hump my OM & my kneecap (yes, I read that post) all you want.

serial I will rtf thanks for postin'.

nice drop fam the flow was awesome n the wordplay was creative as a ma fucka. liked the metas was feelin the whole verse a lil long but worth the time to read it

9/10

holla

thanks alot... uppin'.

When citizens & kids lose faith like they lost at sea...
Total destruction... aint' no hypocrisy..
..This is the product of my own blood and tears
...a sinner lost in a cloud of fire consuming lvoe and fears
...now if you hear this song and think I'm goin' sacrilegious
...yo didn't understand but I just aksed forgiveness

i really enjoyed this, although i think the first paragraph/stanza/whatever didn't flow as good as the last two, i thought you packed too much vocab, and it was a little uneven and a little hard to read.......but overall, pretty amazing piece, shows that you have a great deal of understanding/wisdom of history and you are a very talented writer....hall of fame for sure, you can even post this in that forum because im going to say this should be in there for sure.....so yeah, very good piece, i was feeling those ^ lines the most, thought they really stood out....unique structure, and the chorus was perfect, loved it, ahhaha, definately keep droppin man......

thanks alot for the feedback man...
uppin'.

mayn, u had sum nice ass multies fasho. u wuz on sum different type a shit, nom sizlaxin? i liked it. about 9/10, wiggity werd

wiggity werd? WTF is in the water in Canada?

j/p thanks for the feed.

shit was dope kid... flowed well and a good topic. i was feelin this overall id give it a 8.5/10

the opener was dope kid i was really feelin that

lmao @ 8.5 booo wicked booo

don't make me whoop yo ass fool!!!

j/p... thanks for the feed

ok, yo, you kno what I say:

Breathe made me lose my breath
Graduate put me to death
and Babylong brought me back, wit strep

:cool:

but fo reel, this shit was real nice. Real good lines. didn't rhyme or flow that nice in first verse beginnin', but shit picked up later on. fLow was pretty ill later on. That adultery line was my fav tho. lol OVerall, 9/10. good shit. pc

thanks for the feed spul... enjoy the strep.

Quote:

Originally Posted by villagepimp

wiggity werd? WTF is in the water in Canada?

j/p thanks for the feed.

well, sumtimes there corpses floatin down tha river in Bridgewater. frum people jumpin off a bridge n commitin suicide or frum people bein thrown off, its pretty gross in there sumtimes, lol, werd

no shit... we just got pollutants... shit be gross yo.