Mimesis vs SKAAL
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 20 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 03-29-06 at 07:57 PM

Must drop verse in 1700 minutes after check in.

SKAAL has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-29-06 06:58 PM.

Mimesis has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-29-06 07:15 PM.

ok ok ok, i got some time to air this guy out


yo,
ya name states "mimesis i'm ya arch nemisis"
"limitless" flow would make it hard for you to "mimic this"
'writers block'?, i 'block' writers 'reject' ya "penmanship"
thank me for this lesson, oh it's nothin, don't "mention it"
a 'bad case' of 'h-i-v' couldn't make ya "'sentence-sick'"
jack ass, you just a 'jerk off' wit an "'injured wrist'"
these is 'dope lines' help ya self "'get a sniff'"
get a rope to close the gash from how((w i d e))ya "wig'll split"
{multi~ply~multiples~melt~reps~roastin~you}
{hope~this~guy~can~rap~you~ever~felt~death~close~t o~you}
somethin~that~i'm~supposed~to~do: "smash mim",
slut his girl til she hurl,knock him out, run his pockets, "cash in".....
they call me chicken hawk cuz i gotta "mac-10"
plus i stab bitches up break ya wifes "back-in"
then i kick her out next day she "back-in"
you a 'fag' so every time you park you "back-in"
...but thats enough "talk~about~ya~tendecies"
i spit 'murda' leave "chalk~around~ya~memories"
hell is hot, but tha"darkness~has~eclipsed~ya~heat"
i could kill myself and you still couldn't finish~me.............


i don't feel like explainin the wordplay but only raycharles wouldn't be able to catch it

You shouldn't have even made a callout, motherfucker.

It's like this;

I'll leave ya ripped in this downing. . if you win it's astounding
So I'll tip the SKAAL. . just to show that you're in a for a pounding



WHAT THE FUCK does that mean?. . look like you gonna cry, dude
You blue your chance at a win. .
. .now that's just what color I'll beat your eyes too
You're trash. . got destroyed in KLL, we watched as this gay fell
But fuck getting a clone of your wack ass. . I'll still hand you A, L
And then I looked at your sig. . laughed cause you seem shook
You "Live by it and die by it". . I just ain't in to Stephen King books
No luck. . no skills. . you SUCK, while me. . I'm still just ownin' up
While judging with this SKAAL makes EVERYBODY look dope as fuck

Get the fuck out of here.

This was feedback posted for Mimesis
 

alright i can't vote...

but seriously skaal..you fuckin suck...

your structure was one of the most annoying things i've ever seen...

and frankly.........mimesis last line wasn't even a punch..it was a personal...


true story...

i'm tired of ya'll non-rappin ass niggas tryna come in here and run ya moouth i wish we was battlin dface to face any nigga that spit can clearly she this shit is clear cut listen to my audios clown i got this shit mastered ya'll aint shit but a bunch of hatin ass white boys on this weak ass site i could care less about a vote fuck all of ya'll off beat non rhythim havin bitches yea nigga i peeped all ya'll audio shit lookin for a decent rapper to collab wit all of ya'll bullshit how about ya'll elevate i might sign ya'll dumb fucks i'm tired of this bullshit, anybody got any gripes or moans meet me down the music fest in ga in oct i'll sig your autograph then spit in ya face fuckin cock suckers

lol..right man...whatever you say faggot...your whack..lets leave it at that before i hurt your feelings

you a dick rider just like the rest you whore you could never hurt my feelings bitch ass nigga

i already did..that's why you're attempting to retalliate by calling me a dick rider...


lmao..
how lame do you get?

Lmao @ pulling the dickriding card before any votes have even come in.

This was feedback posted for Mimesis
 

........lmfao @ mimesis owning the fuck outta Skall.......

and skaal wanted to act like he was so fucking sick like he actully had talent thank god i aint battle you, it would of been to easy!!

memsis won this EZ!!

to bad i cant vote

I think this link is your problem, i was lookin at your punches and i didn't go "oh he's wack, before i even knew you did audio my first thought was "he's audio". You have an audio type style and it shows in your work cause the whole time i'm thinkin this would be a pretty decent ass audio. Only 2 problems with this.

1. This isn't audio, this is text homie. There's a BIG difference. you have to be more clever, where mic pressence and delivery disappear, literal wordplay and visable metaphors come into play. The punches used against you in this battle would be hard to do audio, but text, just being able to see the words helps you.

2. Your dumbass chose to battle fuckin MIMESIS. That mistake is self explanatory.

Good bye now

lmao all these posts and you'd think thered be atleast 1 vote.

Voted For: Mimesis

This one goes to mim for actually having a good verse. It was basically this for me

I'll leave ya ripped in this downing. . if you win it's astounding
So I'll tip the SKAAL. . just to show that you're in a for a pounding
WHAT THE FUCK does that mean?. . look like you gonna cry, dude
You blue your chance at a win. .
. .now that's just what color I'll beat your eyes too
And then I looked at your sig. . laughed cause you seem shook
You "Live by it and die by it". . I just ain't in to Stephen King books
No luck. . no skills. . you SUCK, while me. . I'm still just ownin' up
While judging with this SKAAL makes EVERYBODY look dope as fuck

vs.

hell is hot, but tha"darkness~has~eclipsed~ya~heat"
i could kill myself and you still couldn't finish~me.............


v/mimesis Hey asshole RTF

Word. Thanks for the vote.

Voted For: Mimesis

thank me for this lesson, oh it's nothin, don't "mention it"
a 'bad case' of 'h-i-v' couldn't make ya "'sentence-sick'"
jack ass, you just a 'jerk off' wit an "'injured wrist'"
these is 'dope lines' help ya self "'get a sniff'"
get a rope to close the gash from how((w i d e))ya "wig'll split"

Vs

WHAT THE FUCK does that mean?. . look like you gonna cry, dude
You blue your chance at a win. .
. .now that's just what color I'll beat your eyes too
You're trash. . got destroyed in KLL, we watched as this gay fell
But fuck getting a clone of your wack ass. . I'll still hand you A, L
And then I looked at your sig. . laughed cause you seem shook
You "Live by it and die by it". . I just ain't in to Stephen King books

Mimesis Had A Better Verse His Punches Were Hard Hitting And Consistent Nice Personals And He Kept His Verse In Order Not All Sloppy Like Skaals Was So Mih Vote Goes To Mimesis

Voted For: Mimesis

SKAAL......your shit was mediocer(<--or however you spell it)
at best. you had some ok multi's deicent. you lacked any real punchlines most were herbish. and all that symbol shit was kinda annoying. your stucter was barely ok......elevate sonny boy.......grade:4/10

mimesis.......yours was ok nuttin special had some cool punches in there..sturcter was good...but i hate when people put them captions in their verse's....the skaal wordplay was pretty good....so yours was a lil' better....grade:6/10

vote:mimesis

Word. Upping this.

Voted For: Mimesis

checking the polls...

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Voted For: Mimesis

SKAAL its not even a matter of understanding your wordplay, your verse just sucked. granted you did make a commendable attempt with your wordplay, but battles are about punches and yours seemed to be weak to non existant. your flow was on point though, but thats where it ends. out of the one or two punches there were no decent punches there. less than average at best.

Mimesis you came real witty with your verse. i was feeling the wordplay in this, even though SKAAL used wordplay more consistently in my opinion. the punches were harder hitting and you had an amusing personal regarding his sig. my favourite line in this was Mimesis' opener

I'll leave ya ripped in this downing. . if you win it's astounding
So I'll tip the SKAAL. . just to show that you're in a for a pounding

there's a clear winner here. SKAAL was outmatched, better luck next time

v/Mimesis