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FEATURED TRACK NEW SPUL!!! "King Me" (J. Summers diss)
yea, I posted it in battle but wanted more feed too. so word...
www.soundclick.com/itsdakidspul Skit: Zone Out/SPuL Intro: SPuL First verse: SPuL Hook: SPuL Second verse: SPuL Outro: SPuL Beat: "Made You Look" by NaS Lyrics: Now I'm not a promotor of violene but could we please have a little moment of silence? ....That's for you, J Got you duct taped up in the truck, kick, pushin' like you Lupe This ain't no movie. When you're dead you dead This a one-sided bout, fucka two-way Dude, wait... King of the North? Fuck a coast, kid, you ain't even King of your State Listen...girls, love me, they all kissing the guy But if it's thumbs up for, J... he's just hitchin' a ride Man, I'm hot, I abuse...leave you shakin' like Michael J. Fox Only thing you ain't got his excuse Best not get confused, I'm reppin' the new set I'm rude bet, makin' money, doing my 2 step Your weak, I tell your, girl "yo honey, you nude yet?" Cuz losing's a bitch, and the only one you'll get (Chorus x2) SPuL's comin'!! Yo J you shook Feel ashamed, say my name, you cooked You ain't a king, you a clown, cat. You're going down (BLAT!) Lyin' on the ground, noww.. where my crown at? Kid, you want beef? That's stupid to say Cuz I got Kobe lookin' jealous, way I'm shooting a J You reppin' Alanson, kid. That just shows that you wack But congrats, on being King, where nobody raps! This punks mine.. so if you really ARE what you eat Watch J's next battle for my punchlines I'll leave your group with a knife to their neck right Cuz it's a Breeze beating Summers, like your sex life Ain't got lines to waste, wanted to dumb it down a bit But your songs beat me to the chase Yo I hate to break Jaws.... but your name, J. Summers Is sooo last season, that I'm makin' J. Fall Your group playin' you. Don't cry but yo You're just the whiteboy they found to give 'em ride to shows Kid, you ain't fire. Rap hasn't look forward To J. Summers, since fuckin' Jigga retired (Chorus x2) SPuL's comin'!! Yo J you shook Feel ashamed, say my name, you cooked You ain't a king, you a clown, cat. You're going down (BLAT!) Lyin' on the ground, noww.. where my crown at? LINKS: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=237018 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=236723 |
roflmao @ the intro
we was foolin on this shit kick pushin like lupe is slightly played.. lol @ the you aint even king of your state the michael j fox line is decent shit's flowin nicely heh @ shootin the j the "you the king where no body raps" that was ill the J Fall line hit hard roflmao @ the "get crunk" addlib shits all decent overall Imma give it a 7.5/10 lol @ the subliminal from the party track aiyo I dont see J Summers with the lyrical capability or creativeness to have something better than this nice job |
LMFAO @ intro.....now THAT is dopeness
where your going "King Me'' thats mixed nicely.... 1st verse is pretty nice.... im liking the opener on the 2nd verse... lmao @ last season line..dope lol closer is ill too...2nd verse is def. better in my opinion...you toasted him on that one... yea...i really dont see j summers coming with anything better than this..but...you never know...... lol good track man...and probably the best mixed track ive heard from u.... |
im feelin u.....ur pretty good as an audio head....
this is was decent.....well some steps above decent..... u got good emotion and flow.....good delivery this was on point man.... like the lupe ish and ur multis afterwards on announciation thumbs up tight....ender of 1st verse yes.... chorus is coo....likes beatin line coo fall and summers line coo |
.......WOW.....
Now thats a fuckin battle track right thurr....... gotta give credit where its due.... for a battle track... this shit was pretty heavy... it aint over till its over though.... waiting on J.Summers to fire back one time... Freakin Bully |
^haha thanks appreciate it yo.
and word props to everyone else for feed too. wordddd |
lmfao, intro iz illyness.
dope track. but howd u guys do tha intro? shit really sounds like ur in tha same room talkin n shit, werd |
I actually found it alright......you're probably thinking I'm hating, but the only real things I liked about it were the intro (pretty creative), the production (top notch man.....seriously) and the J Fall line. The rest of the lyrics sounded pretty played to me. I'm sure there were some more original concepts in there that I'm missing, but you did way too many J something lines and it just wasn't hitting in my opinion. Now, on the production side of things, like I said, you fuckin held it down man......props.
Now it's time to await J's diss :thumbup: |
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and word kool. i just tried to make volume close to the same that Zone did. but word upppp... where the fuck is J? |
very impressive this actually, quite a few played out lines in there, but ya made up for it with the nice cocky delivery, and sick flow haha...nice battle tune man
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Why get all bent outta shape there turtle jizz? |
^hmm..... so not givin' a fuck about a 26 yr old rapper who can't get nowhere thinks is getting bent out of shape? ok, there buddy. How bout you get off my dick and get out of this thread. You already said what you think, so why keep posting here? Don't you got kids to attend to?
BUT THEN AGAIN... i forgot how much you must be on J. Summers dick, so of course you'd be standing up for your lil buddy who got you a show aka the "PHANTOM" show. :rolleyes: Gotta rely on kids 8 years younger than you, huh? Sad.... |
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roffffffflmao i used to watch this show when i was little lol
spuls coming you sound like carson jet and its really annoying lol : / crunk on lmao nice adlibs there uhh not feeling this spuls coming : / solid diss intro killed it what the fuck ever happened to that show lol : / i liekd everything except your hook spuls coming shit you sounded like carson jet to a t |
lol @ carson jet. pshhhh. thanks for feed tho lol
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man i dont know what it was lol
this track and that girl lets partaaaaay reminded me of carson jet lol |
LMFAO @ that intro.....that shit is classic
this is some hard shit though on the real Of course the beats hard as fuck lol King Me in the backround sounds pretty tight.... I'm feelin the punchlines you comin with on this shit......on the real this is one of the better diss tracks i've heard on this site......you killed him on this one whos the king of the north? oh yeah SPuL son |
^haha WORD up man. appreciate the feed yo
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lol i think it might just be effect I used on hooks, it's cuz now that i'm doing mono my usual hook effect I did on stereo don't work :( |
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^word doneeeeeee. 147 plays, 7 downloads last night. snapppp sonn
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^word thanks man. appreciate it.
and iunno if that loser gon post. He told me on Saturday he ALREADY had it recorded and that he'd post in on Sunday. And I saw him on TWICE after I dropped viewing our thread, and iunno if he been on today. but iunno when that lil chipmunk gon drop |
haha man that was illy i liked it it was really nice king me !!!!
ok beat was ok but i heard it a bit but wtf at the beginning i dont know wat to say to it lol funny 1st verse was ha ha ,,liked the fox and lupe lines they were good ones creative and i like that hook was aight nothing too spectacular but still was better than decent 2nd verse was killa too ,making fun of dis cat musta been fun for u, the bryant and j fall line were funky fresh lol at j. fall lol i still laugh it was pretty good track i liked it and thats wat matters to me 9/10 good job man |
lmao at the intro... kinda weird... but funny in its own unique way. nice beat choice. verse 1 is nice. but it gets quiet after the first 4 or 6 barz. but this is pretty nice. hook is the best park of this, sounds nice. verse 2 is also hard hittin. nice punches here :thumbup:. outro is... ehh...
nice shit tho cuz. 8.5/10 |
^word appreciate the f eeed
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haha, i aint sayin nothing bout the beef between yall n what not....i just have to laugh a lil bit, cuz you sound a lil too animated for this beat.....i was expecting something a lil more (how should i say this?) Hard? i unno sounded a lil cartoony to me....lyrics were real good tho, n quality wasnt bad but i gotta agree with willa a lil carson jet-esk.....who knows....the intro had me goin tho, i gotta dl that j summers track...haha jp good shit tho...
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^lmao @ dl that j. summers track. but word thanks for feed
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HHAA intro is dope as fuck..
like thE king meee intro!... OH SHIT....man, you killing the punchesss on this track multis are fuckin sick dawg...j summers koo wit me but this is crazy...pun ches are hawt....delivery is sick, yup yup... likkke the hoook.....WHERE MY CROWN AT!! lol yup u got that b... king whetre no1 raps......J fall DAYUM..hawt shit....j summers is nice, but this is hard as hell yo... 9/10 fam.. i wanna hear summers return |
dont tell me that homo no showed after all that shit talk
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he PMed me saying he was at hosptial for some ish and he'd be back today. so let's see =/
but word @ this track hitting #1 on disses chart, and #56 overall. :shoot: |
hahaha intro was raw as fuck, lmao ..... nice beat... Made you look... kinda feelin the "KING MEEEE"
Verse 1: this flow is aight, but i just dont like ur delivery on this shit...... some of the lines are decent, but u have some played ones.... we can tell ur hype about this shit, ok first verse hook: im really likin this shit..... nice way to flip it "wheres my crown at" was nice Verse 2: WAY more lyricall..... GOD DAMN... some of these lines are raw, but i still dont like ur delivery... but these two lines were raw... Yo I hate to break Jaws.... but your name, J. Summers Is sooo last season, that I'm makin' J. Fall Kid, you ain't fire. Rap hasn't look forward To J. Summers, since fuckin' Jigga retired heavy disses and nice wordplay..... i also like the outro... clever good shit overall...... well mixed and everythin |
^word man appreciate it
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OK..now that intro was jus hilarious yall took that chipmunk shit to the next level LMFAO!!!!!!!!!!!!....ok first verse flow comes in strong u use alot of callbacks in ya flow...u used too many its great for battle cuz u can throw alot of words in btw the rhymes but gets repetitive..delivery had nice energy...liked addlibs....second verse same as first flow wise jus lyrically WAYYY harder....u had sum ouch lines...but also had sum played shit throughout this battle...lyrically inconsistent but the lines that hit..HIT HARD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!like DAYUM!!!!!
Ouch lines: Dude, wait... King of the North? Fuck a coast, kid, you ain't even King of your State Your weak, I tell your, girl "yo honey, you nude yet?" Cuz losing's a bitch, and the only one you'll get You reppin' Alanson, kid. That just shows that you wack But congrats, on being King, where nobody raps!<-----BIGT OUCH!!!!!that stung I'll leave your group with a knife to their neck right Cuz it's a Breeze beating Summers, like your sex life<----OUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Yo I hate to break Jaws.... but your name, J. Summers Is sooo last season, that I'm makin' J. Fall<-----GOD DAYUM!!!!!! Those lines right there overhand rights to the jaw fo real....good shit....1 |
^word thanks man up
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MAYBE a little more?
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man i'm really liking your flow at the start, really confident shit...really liking this, better than anything i've heard from jsumms by far...good shit, pretty lyrical, and nice scheme.
kobe lines was funny... where nobody raps...hahahahahahaahhahahaahhahahahhaahha i thought you killed this beat, and thats hard to do after nas...shit was fire. really like the hook play off intro was aight, little long really good quality. 1st verse was the best in my opinion, shit was solid though... real good. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=237290 |
^word thanks for the feed man. apprecaite it
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ayo on the real man this was HOTT!!!!
hahaha..this was one of the best disses i heard on RV..next to Apexx battle to Zone Out and Ike's diss to Status.. lyrics were bananas..you hit dude with so many damn punches..flow was real simple..the weird thing was that your voice sounded real comical...but it was cool i dont know what else to say..im jus hopin that J.Summers wont respond..but if he does..he better take his time to write it.. RTF IN MY SIG. |
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