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*Froze* 11-19-06 04:54 PM

Froze vs J-360
 
Battle Rules:

UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Hate Votes
No Dickriding


Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-28-07 at 03:34 AM

Must drop verse in 1000 minutes after check in.

System 11-20-06 07:51 AM

J-360 has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-20-06 07:51 AM.

J-360 11-20-06 12:48 PM

yo this here is for all da shit you and your bitch ass crew(NGN) put me and my dude Tino through

listen

this kid Froze ain't shit in rapverse/
tryna get at me, bad rhymes is his curse/
u a pussy nigga,just like the rest of your crew/
can't rap for shit,ur wack,I can't see you/
cuz u invisible to me,u ain't shit to me/
but u don't get off my dick,im like a dog wit fleas/
take urself n NGN outta this site/
yall crackheads sayin i aint gonna leave witout a fight/
don't u get it son rap ain't for you/
so stop playin pretend wit ur pussy ass crew/
tryna step up to da big guys like me and Tino/
u think it's a game well good bye amigo/
cuz ur career is over,ima kick u outta da rover/
then leave ur ass there wit a tape sayin gameover/
cuz ima deathtrap have u ever seen da movie saw/
punk ass bitch never leave ya house witout ur mom/
u go to da cops everyday to report me/
they laugh in ya face,dont u no im J-360/
u look at rap like a cartoon in ya head/
da only reason u do dat is cuz u get no bread/
talkin shit to me will get a bullet to ya head/
fuckin wit Tino...now ya ass is dead/
this aint no battle it’s like a slaughter to me/
this shit would be better if I kill u for green/
I should stop rappin cuz i see tears in your eyez/
only way you gonna win is if u get more than 3 tries/


my bad for writin so much....but yea my fingers is gettin tired so I’ll come at u wit pt.2 once u stop actin like a little bitch and step up like a man.....u pussy ass nigga...you and your wack ass crew.....it’s Kemist and Tino all day nigga.....hahahahahaha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

System 11-20-06 03:12 PM

Froze has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-20-06 03:12 PM.

*Froze* 11-20-06 03:13 PM

Get off my dick...

I'm GeTtInG FuCkInG TiReD Of NeT BeEf, SomeTimEz It CaN Be FuNnY//
BuT No JoKe, YoU DiCkRiDiN fA CaSh ThE OnLy TiMe YoU EvEr All ABoUt MonEy//
NigGa GeT Of My DiCk, YoU A GeRm AzZ NiGgUh, U ProLlY GoT BurNT//
YOu Dickriding Me SO MucH, Dickz BruiSed N BurnNt//
HaVe Ya AzZ RuNNiN LyKe You JuSt HeArd A SiRen..//
DoG I SPiT "MaD BaRz" LyKe "AnGrY IrOn"/
My DIsSez LyKe RaPe....PeePz BegGin "StoP It"//
YOu DicKRYDe Me So MuCh, My DiCkz BeGiinng "GeT Of IT"//

SwiTcH UP!!

WHeN I PuT mY PeN to ThA PaPeR, J'z DEaTh QuIcKlY FollOwZ//
THem Dissez you made missed me, tHeM shitz wuz Hollow//
WiTH My Dick In YA MOuTh, you EnCouRaGeD to SwAlloW//
YOu DIckridin LykE PEnIs MixEd Wit MonTy CARlo//
I'll FInIsh Your Azz, LyKe CRIz In ThA BOttLe//
OnLy BItChez ALloWed TO Sya My Name, THat'z My MotTo//
So ThAt COnCluDeD, YoU A BiTCh Or WhaT? SaYN My NyMe//
I'Ma TeLL YoU THiZ...YoU CaN HaTE BuT YoU WaStiN Ya TiMe//
I'mA SmAck You J-360 ThA DirEctIon YOu SPiNniN//
YoU LYke JoiNt RoTationZ, BurNiN, But I'm AlReAdy WinNiN//
In My TypIN ScHeMe I'm AlTerNatInG EveRy OthEr LetTer//
N YOu TriPpiN On SutTIn If YoU ThinK YoU CaN BeTTeR//
So JaY, NeXt TiMe YoU WanNa Rap N ShiT///
THinK FirSt N StAy Off My DiCk..//

Valiant 11-20-06 03:20 PM

This was feedback posted for J-360
 
:::checkiin pollz:::

I ain't gonna vote on this battle since it could be viewed as "Dick Riding" but yeah good lookin' for the shout out J-360, and you should most likely when this battle, you lacked on the punchlines but your Personals hit more, lets slaughter these dudes

J-360 11-20-06 04:35 PM

yo peeps wats good wit da votes...........if u look at dis please vote

*Froze* 11-20-06 06:54 PM

Yes, vote up................................................ .

WhoAmI 11-21-06 10:24 AM

Voted For: J-360

man this battle wasn't great and to be honest the punches were all equally as bad...the only thing that really puts on ahead of the other is that J360 didnt use the same words to rhyme with itself. and froze kept dwellin on dickriding that got real boring for real and i hate the way you write it fucks with my eyes n shit...

but w/e: v//J

*Froze* 11-21-06 12:20 PM

Votes?............................................ ....

MoneyMaker 11-22-06 09:18 PM

This was feedback posted for Froze
 
Deffinately took this even if he you was holdin backk....good shitt my nigga...you murderred thatt Pussy

MoneyMaker 11-22-06 09:20 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Shiest Lucia
:::checkiin pollz:::

I ain't gonna vote on this battle since it could be viewed as "Dick Riding" but yeah good lookin' for the shout out J-360, and you should most likely when this battle, you lacked on the punchlines but your Personals hit more, lets slaughter these dudes


OK...NGN Boyz i just realized this is a bigg Site Joke....bc this nigga CAINT be serious sayin datt ROFL :laugh: :laugh:

WhoAmI 11-23-06 05:56 AM

^^actually is SL not beating you 2-0 at the moment????

and both battlers here were equally as wack except J360 didnt use the same concept in like 4 lines simultaneously, as well as "rhyming" the same word as itself....

*Froze* 11-27-06 05:22 PM

lmfao werd, I just checked that, I rhymed burnt with burnt....

Anywayz, I win :)

Vote or die, *adlib* *adlib*

J-360 11-29-06 05:46 PM

yea right nigga..........i got dis battle...........yo were da votes at

flow verse 11-29-06 07:49 PM

Voted For: Froze

ryp-6 gets my vote based on more wordplay.. flow was about equal...pretty good delivery on both.. just ryp-6 had some better punche...j-360 nneded more wordplay and the only personal in the entire battle was "I'mA SmAck You J-360 ThA DirEctIon YOu SPiNniN"--- but both had a good drop---good luck

*Froze* 11-30-06 03:21 PM

More votes.........................................

*Froze* 12-02-06 01:52 PM

VOTE OR DIE! Adlibz...lol..........................

Implicit 12-05-06 09:41 PM

This was feedback posted for J-360
 
i'd just like to say that both arent very good at all. both people need to work on punches and personals. and froze u need to stop saying dick riding so much.

Cola 12-10-06 04:32 AM

Voted For: Froze

umm...this shit was pretty one sided...i mean even tho Froze came with pretty emlemantry shit...360's shit was fucking whack as fuck....and stop doing GnGngnNgN...that is fucking annoying as fuck......

*Froze* 01-18-07 07:56 PM

I'm tired of seeing my old battles.....VOTES?!...................

Ramcees 01-27-07 07:33 AM

This was feedback posted for Froze
 
I'm GeTtInG FuCkInG TiReD Of NeT BeEf, SomeTimEz It CaN Be FuNnY//
BuT No JoKe, YoU DiCkRiDiN fA CaSh ThE OnLy TiMe YoU EvEr All ABoUt MonEy//

lay off on the dick punches, although this was agd opener
but ya aint got my vote

*Froze* 11-25-07 04:46 PM

UppN this horrible ass battle from '06.............

Valiant 11-26-07 01:36 PM

J-360 is a bitch nigga now.
...........I ripped that confused dude.

*Froze* 11-26-07 01:40 PM

^Have you voted yet? Vote quick...get this 'ish closed...I'm embarrased that I wrote this and actually thought it was the hottest shit out lmfaooo

Valiant 11-26-07 01:45 PM

I think i already posted feedback back when I hated u guys.

animosity 12-14-07 08:12 PM

This was feedback posted for J-360
 
Good flow i couldnt understand the other dudes structure so you get my feedback.

Brydon 12-28-07 12:02 PM

Voted For: Froze

my vote has to go to froze just about,simply because he had slightly more imagination with it,but to be honest there wasnt much at all in either pieces.also frozes wordplay was slightly better.

Oh D 01-02-08 08:12 AM

Voted For: Froze

Froze won. only jus. stop chattin bout dickridin n come up with wittier shit. both were shit so i aint gonna explain.

*Froze* 01-02-08 10:00 AM

This is from '06...............jesus....two years....

ILL GEE 01-02-08 07:14 PM

Voted For: J-360

i can't even vote on this without expressing the pain i feel when i see stuff like this destroying my artform....

too be absolutely truthful to both parties... i gotta say that both rhymes were wack

but J-360 did have the better verse... more organized ... better flow to it.... punches (if you can call them that) hit harder... too much "only reason" and "only way" lines for me... no real originality

froze?...wow... where do i begin? oh.. ok...let's start with the D*ck rydin references....how many were there?...well just about every line said sumn about it... if that's all you got then ya doomed already... throw some punches... some wordplay, maybe... a decent line or two would help... painful to read both verses but i just wanna help close it out...

vote goes to 360....barely

ILL GEE 01-02-08 07:20 PM

lmao on the votes... you guys can't be serious?!!!! he used dick riding in almost everyline and y'all thought that was hot?!!!...lmao... i know it was 06 and all but damn!!! nah...fuck that.... DIDDAMMMMMMMMMM!!!!!!! well... whoever wins... ya had a year and some change to get better... hope that actually happened...lol

Big_O 01-05-08 01:09 AM

Voted For: Froze

Really like your style - shits nicee, some quality lines ~

1) My DIsSez LyKe RaPe....PeePz BegGin "StoP It"//
-Dirty Line, but I liked it haha

2)WiTH My Dick In YA MOuTh, you EnCouRaGeD to SwAlloW//
- Again sick fucking line, but had meaning...Liked it


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