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Feeble Minded 12-30-03 04:47 PM

Diss the Person Above you..
 
Exactly What The Title Says...

6 Lines MINIMUM

Note: I Move Threads Once They Reach 10 Pages.

PaDDyMaN 12-30-03 07:31 PM

Feeble minded aint nuttin but a pussy avoidin DICK LOVER,
u admin? cause u kiss ass to the mods like NO OTHER
on this forum u aint nuttin but fractious
please take your flows elsewhere to practice,
your lyrics n flow is just plain pablum
in the music industry you couldnt go as far as a fathom.

fractious = irritable
fathom = around 6 feet

PaDDyMaN 12-30-03 07:35 PM

Paddyman go hang yourself with a fucken noose,
let loose some good lyrics and all the hate votes will offer truce,
U just some flyweight ass lil BITCH with barely any posts
lord knows u give the ladies more dick than a weenie roast
im longing for lyrics that can make your opponents lose
that seems an impossible mission, u actin like Tom Cruise

Feeble Minded 12-30-03 07:55 PM

what a fag, no ones less styled as him
moron. . even thought that i was admin
i file ya chin & uppercut, you risk ya health
what kind of fucking newb would diss yaself?
thats sad, i chew on ya brain and munch it
a herb, proven by the fact you even explain ya punches

PaDDyMaN 12-30-03 08:11 PM

i fed this noob lyrics by means of a spoon
practically wrote it for him and he still takes til noon
over three thousand posts and six to zero score
you mustve had a close call with a noob and swore "nevermore"
i mean cmon who the fuck would want to spend that much time?
must be a virgin whos seen no tits cuz he chooses to pretend he can rhyme

bouncedoggydog 12-30-03 08:47 PM

I'm about to shut this lyrical zero the fuck down/
Expose ya neuro structure 2 verbally spit roundz/
Intense heat escapes when I speak, got ya hooked like a sketcher to tweak/
Nothing but a noob most likely attached to Moms boob/
Foul spitz and whack scriptz sum up your antics 2 soft licks/
Born of sin, crazed with a hillbillys grin, you'll never measure up to even the likes of Tiny Tim/

monk murda 12-30-03 10:57 PM

bounce doggydog sound like he want to be bow wow...
he fuckin wit a pit so his ass best bow down....
im a general... ur ass a cadet..
so get down an give me 10 push ups in 5 sets.........
doggy...........
leave that shit in cali......an thats like committn suiside tryin to battle me..
im outte.................

ClassX 12-31-03 01:34 AM

I smell ur product from far away this herbs stinkin with the green
The only time you touched Nas it was written on ur screen
You never were hard, even as a baby you never knew to rattle shit
Hows this gangsta got war stories his record remains battless
So bitch talk to a priest quick or find one of there faithfull servers
cuz you'll need more then jesus christ when yomonks murdered

SONNED

RapStar12 12-31-03 01:34 AM

((Aimed At "Monk Murda"))

Yo, monk murda, you can't say shit//
You call that a punch, i say it's a "gay hit"//
You only got 14 posts, what a newbie//
You 'suck' so bad you probably 'blew me'//
Iite dawg, I'd like to see you murder sumone//
You couldnt do it, you fuckin wannabe 'big pun'//
Iite, I'm done this shit, don't be offended//
You got some shit to say, go ahead, 'send it'//

bouncedoggydog 12-31-03 01:34 AM

Aimed @ Monk Murda
(walked away for a min)

Aint no one even hearda Monk Murda,
Who's only illnes came from hamburger
Kind of like the livestock disease
You got A Foot in your mouth -G-
More like 12 inches of Brown Beef
Tip ya like Mad cows next to Universities
Like a fraternity Pledge My verse leaves ya hazed
Extremities Numb from time spent down on ya knees
Your lines are like burning stress cuz they left me unfazed

RapStar12 12-31-03 02:31 AM

BounceDoggyDog, you a moderator?//
You messin' with me now, and no ones greater//
I can't believe they let you in, whats goin' on?//
Your the fall of RB, not some, but all your shit is wrong//
All them fuckin' posts, and you only got one win?//
We know your goin' to hell, cuz that's some sin//
Your fuckin' structure is like a 'queers map'//
Honestly, I rather listen to Brittany Spears rap!// ((HaHa))
Ok..I thought it was whack, but I'm out//
Go ahead, cry, do what ever, fuckin' pout//

Tolerant Level 12-31-03 07:04 AM

rapstar12 why u wanna spell ur state with ~Kinds of Syllabals~
man thats more wacker the in invincable ~minds of Feebles~
so i wanna rip ur sould out withs the many of my ~Signs of Evils~
u wanna talk about sins man u wouldnt have a clu why? u a ~def Precher~
ur ryhme are to defin the world like the so i ~Mess ur Feature~
cause u gonna die slow on a high ~Cliff Seizer~
but ur organs have already been ~Exposed to Light~
i think the maggot underground would ~Explode on Sight~
cause ur ryhmes aint even really there so i u aint so i ~Expose ya aint Tight~

Philosopher King 12-31-03 07:51 AM

Tolerant Level, you've peaked, and now it's all downhill --
With your wack wavy lines, you've got nothing but clown skill,
No, scratch that, clowns kill just about everything you did,
They may be silly, but your rhyme is just stupid.
"Syllables" don't rhyme with "evils" but you've got too many of both things,
You're lucky you're nothing, so pity holds back my loathing.
You sound so gay, I'll call you a homophone --
Now get out of this place and leave me alone.

Born To Kill 12-31-03 11:08 AM

The King of Philosophy is so totally full of shit...
Thinks he's a scholar cuz Harvard's in Massachussetts!
But ya never went, really, weren't allowed ta go...
Ya brain's disabled, similar ta how ya rhymes don't flow.
If the shit was a faucet, you'd have standing water...
And if this was a battle, bitch, you'd definately get slaughtered.

DVUS 12-31-03 01:38 PM

so born, your a veteran?
Fuck it, im the storm your just a feather in.
thinkin of steppin in, ya better check again
an SoE representative,
ya should a been more tentative
and next time take a some narcotics
cause theres a 46.95% chance ima kill this pop artist.

Born To Kill 12-31-03 03:11 PM

^^^ His name is DVUS...

Gonna run this bitch down, cold use my Hummer...
Flip his name backward, that's his fate, bummer!
So sad we lost you, RB's mourning for they idiot...
Consider this site a village, that's why ya were needed.
Cuz like the cliche goes, there's one for every town...
And you repped the title well, till I cold put you down.

DVUS 12-31-03 05:43 PM

the only thing your runnin down on is lyrical support
im bout to call ya out like like a queer turned escort
stds takin tha places of intelligent thesis
hummer and bummer wow thats some deep shit,
so peep this, cause you need it,
my words are the cure, to your mental diseases

Staight A 12-31-03 06:23 PM

/\/\/\DVUS

is this a test?aha this emcee lame an worst than the rest,
so wateva he say needs to have ma verbal inquests,
Ill make you invest, coz ure disease make u speak less,
than that di*k vanilla ice on his Eminem hating conquests,
So lets break it down, DVUS u cypher stressed an make a mess,
u rap ure best when a di*k comes in yo mouth an u say "yea thats the best"

DVUS 12-31-03 06:45 PM

i cypher stressed, dvus makin a mess?
only thing i mess is tight n pink under ya bitch dress
so next time ya might think about gettin thick vest
cause like ya flow, yer lyrics aint past the tit test yet
vocaly flat chested, only 11 posts, ima get arrested
this kids just a minor and he just got molested
didnt you get the flyer, the whole site protested
find this guy a driver, he needs ta be protected,
im tha novel writer and yer about to be "the ended"

730 12-31-03 09:24 PM

Let's get past the hatin past the fact that DVUS is trash
N see His locations numbers, so he'd feel right @ home in my ass
buddy you're gassed, N you can keep thinkin you're a fighter
but dude you're dumb to think ya hurtin shit, Ya get NO Wins in cyphers!
i'll end ya life and quickly i slit ya truly you're hurtin
when i introduce ya to my knife, N make it start flurtin
this's a workin for ya weak ass, but still dude ya can bling hard
but i'll still cut u leave ya ass wining like martha stewarts vineyard

Antonio Banderas 12-31-03 09:37 PM

^^^^ 730 diss ^^^^^^^

I take possession of his soul to revoke his life+
He stays avoiding pussy like a defocused dike+
Still droaning in his sorrow like quote from sprite+
Ass fucking TYSON is the only way he opens mic (mike)+
730 takes it up da ass like bananas in tail pipes+
Practice deep throating lyrics..he chokes on mics+

Dialekts 01-01-04 12:08 AM

Youre rhymes? is well just like youre rhymes! its already been played...
I'll hang antonio from chandalere so now im ceilng banderas's fate
This fuck'll get beat quick, when I spit people rush they seats kid
While geek remains a nobody like when baby's stuck in the fetus...

Philosopher King 01-01-04 04:03 AM

What the fuck, man? How'd a baby get inside a fetus?
Yeah, fool, you don't know 'cause you're slack-jawed like Cletus
A broke hokey yokel, who spoke like a true joke --
Went four lines then broke off in a broken chokin' croak.
That's all, folks? You smokin' coke before making wise cracks?
I'll revoke your rhymin' license, tax your tracks -- they got no facts.
You're going nowhere with that diarrhetic "dialektic" --
I'm cookin' with gas, you ain't really electric.
Fire up the grill, guard your grill from gunfire --
That don't work, you fool, and it shouldn't, you liar.

730 01-01-04 10:29 PM

You'll get blown, left side all gone with step sounds
as a walk all through a Pking...like a fuckin china town
there's the frown i was hopin for i'll clap when u speak
then take this P king down the drain, like a bloody leak
this bud'll freak when his ass get's fucked no doubt undastand me
cuz i'll rock his flat chested flow....like a gwen stefani
that's the plan B, as u get marked with these cuts
ass you see me seein wantin to See deez nuts....<-lol...had to

LyRiCaLLyInSaNe1 01-01-04 10:42 PM

730 is jus an unknown bitch who dont up his battle...
gets into these thangs, always loses, and that'll...
screw up his mind frame makin him go crazy...
jus like his mom did wen she saw her baby...
thats why his dad left him n was neva heard of again...
so go to our battle 730 and up my ugly lil friend

PrhymeSuzpekt 01-01-04 11:08 PM

you claim to be lyrically insane, ya lyrics bring me pain
I have never seen shit so wack that it boggles my brain
niggas just like is always spittin how they so hard hittin
but, when they step to the mic sound like they cranium shittin
your intellegence level must have just dropped to spots
cause ya rhyme style ain't shit like mothafuckin street cops

FlowS EternaL 01-01-04 11:20 PM

Put 3 in this punks Tail, hes lyke boats witout sails,
so i Got PS in the Shredder lyke Junk Mail..!!(PS/PrhymeSuzpekt)
Its bout time you pray for forgiveness and repent, cause
Lyke cyphers wit the Devil, p'RHYME' is Hell Sent..!!
ill give you cruel and unusual punishment, your record left wit dents, Im lookin lyke a million bucks, but you lyke ja, can't get past a cent..!!

Da_Killa_Kid 01-01-04 11:28 PM

You flow eternal please you just got started,
Im the hardest and switched up fonts like he's retarded,
and take jigga off ya av cause ya sully his name,
or i'll bullets where that shit won't have you walkin the same,
im a muthafuckin menace you a newbie that blows,
now suck on that shit for eternity, you know how it go.

Holla At Em

FlowS EternaL 01-01-04 11:46 PM

You bout to get floored lyke Mops..
I Got 'KILLA' behind bars lyke Veteran Cops..!!
Suck the blood from ya veins out wit a Straw...
a KILLA?? naw, this kids neva even broke a law..!!
Ya WAck lines n spyts Bearly Last...
ya Name is ashamed!! y you think its Trying to DASH...??!!

Ghetto_poet 01-02-04 01:00 AM

d-v-u-s u juss fucked up the alpabet/
u think ur a vet ya best bet is to nuetur ya pets/
im bout to put a hex on your 7 lines of text/
ur jus a prick who thinks he can rap/
well...suck my dick bitch with ur lips around my sack/
send u back and fix ya facts/
ya rhyme in few lines that are harder to find than saddam in iraq/

730 01-02-04 03:19 AM

fuck a dialect avvy, this kid's truly on some pot
his verse's dyin 4 help, like a fuckin life support
^that was played as fuck, so i'ma just rip ya this time
when i leave ya cut in sections, like ya 3 phrased rhymes
ya gay lines ain't cuttin shit, N i'm leavin ya a wreck
cuz i got bout 6 billion peeps on earth, who'd speak on Dialect...

^^^that was sooooooooooooooo wack but c'mon dude had 3 phrases....lmao

Cryptic Thoughts 01-02-04 03:32 AM

Cut this kid up... Severed limbs... whore is fucked...
I joines the talent pool... while on the beach this kid is stuck...
Of all the luck, You get matched with the got of text...
Hell RB's tired of wackness... So prepare to be put to sleep...
Fade this creep... Kiunda of worried... battling a perverted freak...
I'll be getting fucked up after dark while you just rockin night-e
So chill G... you know damned well you'll never hurt me...
Its sad when ya username is ya bedtime.... 730

Straight Ace 01-02-04 03:42 AM

Target:730
Trapt Wit, posted just while i was replyin.

You said it yourself..no need for me to say it to..
As forwardin your posts is the best way to clown u..
Kid is from: ............ Guess it's symbolyzin' his wins..
Ur name is in future prospect of battlin'..over in mins..
Awaitin' a noob to post.. no fear of strike backs..safe..
& after u read this,i will be to..clean record.. except..
Dirty nails from closin' your grave..

Dialect OTYP 01-02-04 05:55 AM

i move in the dark and conclude that i'll creep dat
its no question wit me you lose if you speak back
check his name i got a duce that could beat dat

im a gully nigga all about the sin
its obvious im about ta win
if you moved from the city you in(chicago)
you couldnt get out the wind(its the windy city)

of my lyrics when blastin
im a killa on the mic a rappin assasin

Staight A 01-02-04 07:36 AM

dialect....

dialect, top of the pops errrrrr.........i think not,
u thiking u hot but u not, coz ure battle record sez u sqaut,
So take ma lines an rot, coz smokin pot needs milk to top it off,
coz u squirt lines like ure moms tit does, an thats her eveyday job,
So why u pop, ryhmes that need a lock from the admin, coz it fvcks us all off,
take a hint, get a life an quit da cypher life punk,
coz it aint suiting u, boi u like gay guy jumping in a club,
but then ud know all about it, coz there's where u get all ya fvck'z.

DªÖ 01-02-04 07:56 AM

your a freekin prospect of whats never gonna top
Rockin Shots that dont come out ya barrel its locked
Like a freepostin shark ur gettin fished out when i spoke of u
spew out more shots then neccesary so then i took out ya crew
its a freekin mess best onlookers dont slow down in the freeway
Or they'll catch a glimpse of a masacer called Staight A.

Straight Ace 01-02-04 08:05 AM

Target:.Staight A..
You've been warned kid uses exspensive words to cover up he's a epigram..
Actin he's not a newb, while his structure his 'out of line' like a retarded diagram..
Kids far from 'straight' can't even spell it right like typin' with crooked hands..
Read the rules before u post it says "No bullshit"..u failed to meet our demands..
:laugh:
Leave this kid clueless on what to do..
Me, myself i aint sure yet either..
Wether to merk,own..or simply son you..
Battle this kid?..hardly even..far to dull..
Like comparin' arm wrestlin to tractor pull..
Now ill give you chance to reply & fight..
But after this..be honest..
Whats Mighty Mouse..without the might..

William H. 01-02-04 09:36 AM

yo
either you smart ass shit or you confused as hell
i cant tell, plain as this
if your shit is a diss
take that shit as a miss
big words damn whore
do you no what half of them standfor
me i slack up chill in the studio get my raps up
then i internet post on neighborhood orbituaries
my last post was in late febuary
some body tossed this kid a damn dictionary
i can make it hot like 200 degres
you send 100 mc no nigga wanna wit me
i slings heavy bombs
yung Arnnold cause im carry heavy arms
i can fly in benladen bombs
fuc the wheather
smoked niggas until their face look like leather
i push ur script up threw the ledger
and stop drooling on the team
cause im like fetti cheese
i got oodles of noddles and plenti cream

- k ! L L z - 01-02-04 10:34 AM

..William H soundz Like-a Poser.. Like Bow Wow In-a Rover..
..Get Punked and 'Spit' On Like 'Camels' Plus Get 'Humped'..
..You Nothin To-Me, Bring Ya Crew Of Two I'm Killin-all-Three..
..Trench Coat Assasin Im Blastin then Laughin, Clappin..
..My Nickle Nine When It Rings, Nock-off the Shine On-ya Bling..

Straight Ace 01-02-04 10:55 AM

End this newbie show & their infestation..
Make u look re-aligned..
& ridiculous like a Japanese animation..
All these kids with little posts, or even just 2..
1 used to talk bs & the other..well that one to..
Aliases puerile..lackin' creativity..heared it all..
& regardless the season..Ace'll make you 'fall'
Quick to reply..my steps been set in my head..
Ur steps at succes..been crushed in this thread..


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