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wish vs sHoTTaBoY
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No D/R No Unexplained Votes Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 09-20-04 at 10:45 AM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
wish has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-17-04 10:46 AM.
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sHoTTaBoY has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-17-04 10:49 AM.
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Ima "GAT"-THIS-"FOO" Let the Led TACKLE-YOU
Call me Adolf in this battle cuz Ima ATTACK-THIS-JEW Then SLICE-n-DICE-YA-DUDE, Im TWICE-AS-NICE-AS-YOU Cuz your "punches" wouldnt be "sick" if you ate HEPITITIS-RICE and learned KUNG-FU! Gat, You just spittin DEAD-FLOWS, Ya Wack, Ya TEXT-SHOWS My punches will hit this bitch so hard his fuckin HEAD-EXPLODES! Watch me CRACK-BACK when I SNAP-YA-SPINE after I CLAP-THE-NINE Tuck ya head into ya ass to prove you "fuckin" OUTTA-YA-MIND! Then SNATCH-YA-THROAT, pimp slap and DETACH-YA-SCROTE Cuz the only way shotta will win this battle is if his homies are ASKED-TO-VOTE! I ATTACK-FOR-THE-GREEN, This kid gets bent BACK-WIT-VASOLINE Watch this fool get "COTT" wit so many punches its a CATASTROPHY Ima be FLAWLESS-IN-THIS-FIGHT, Leave shotta JAWLESS-ON-SIGHT Cuz ill "cut this bitch down" to prove im the "TALLEST"-ON-THIS-SITE I see youve been KO'D-ONCE, im battlin a PLAYED-OUT-DUNCE Cuz this bitch is only hard when he sees DAY-OLD-CUNTS You cant FUCK-WIT-THE-ILLNESS, leave you STUCK-WIT-THE-REALNESS Cuz bitch,ill cut off ya hands to prove PEOPLE-WIT-NO-HANDS-FEEL-THIS Ya goin DOWN-TONIGHT, I hold the CROWN-THAS-RIGHT Call me King Kong cuz ima crush ya TOWN-ON-SIGHT |
This Nigguh ''PM'' Me Askin To Be In My ''Crew''..
Hes All Like..''SHOTTA I LOVE YOU..!''.. But That Aint The ''Issue''... I'd Rather Wipe My Ass With Ya Organ ''Tissue''.. I Wouldnt Let ''You'' Join Even If You Rode My ''Penis''.. This Fools From ''Detroit'' n Thinks Hes ''Slim''...Can Y'all ''Believe-This''..?! ..If I Had A Dime For Every ''Em'' Wannabe, I'd Be A ''Millionaire'' The Fact Ya Mommas Ashamed Of You Is The Only Thing To ''Compare''... ...O, Okay, An Your Rockin ''Blonde Hair''....Bitch Please, Take Ya Ass Back To ''8-Mile''.. See Boy, I Own Ya Life Like I Got Ya Life On ''Speed-Dial''... In One Fone Fone Call I Can Have Ya Death Lookin Pretty ''Vile'' An Ya Momma Left Too ''Mourn''.. I Can Make Ya Wonder Why The Fuck U Was Ever ''Born''.. That ''Wish'' You Have Make It Too Good ''Effect''.. An Sit Back n ''Reflect'' How U Got Murderd By A Hot ''Prospect''... I'ma ''Operate'' On Ya ''Bars'' Like A ''Dissect''.. Faggot! You Wouldnt ''Cum Hard'' Even If You Was ''Erect''..! |
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This was feedback posted for wish
wish won. punches hit harder...better flow to the brain cells
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Voted For: wish
dam wish you had better hits in this one than you did vs nutz. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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no bullshit vote like hotrod posted |
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Voted For: wish
wish crushed him.... flow: wish punches: wish *by far* creativeness: wish *by far* i thought this would be closee then it was, but he just got delt with easy ........ Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: sHoTTaBoY
sHoTTaBoY Punches were hard & they landed... Structure was pretty decent... Flow was pretty good... Vocab was good too...and easy to read it... wish Punches were good too not as hard tho… Structure was good.. Flow was decent and tha... Vocab was pretty decent... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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upppin 4 votes
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i will re after work.......
my vote will stand..... |
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This was feedback posted for wish
Ima "GAT"-THIS-"FOO" Let the Led TACKLE-YOU
Call me Adolf in this battle cuz Ima ATTACK-THIS-JEW ^^^5/10 Played Then SLICE-n-DICE-YA-DUDE, Im TWICE-AS-NICE-AS-YOU Cuz your "punches" wouldnt be "sick" if you ate HEPITITIS-RICE and learned KUNG-FU! ^^^5/10 elementary Gat, You just spittin DEAD-FLOWS, Ya Wack, Ya TEXT-SHOWS My punches will hit this bitch so hard his fuckin HEAD-EXPLODES! ^^^ 5/10 need to actually connect Watch me CRACK-BACK when I SNAP-YA-SPINE after I CLAP-THE-NINE Tuck ya head into ya ass to prove you "fuckin" OUTTA-YA-MIND! ^^^8/10 much better...now only if all ur lines were like this Then SNATCH-YA-THROAT, pimp slap and DETACH-YA-SCROTE Cuz the only way shotta will win this battle is if his homies are ASKED-TO-VOTE! ^^^6/10 now im starting to think u bite from that line above dwodn I ATTACK-FOR-THE-GREEN, This kid gets bent BACK-WIT-VASOLINE Watch this fool get "COTT" wit so many punches its a CATASTROPHY ^^^5.5/10 for effort Ima be FLAWLESS-IN-THIS-FIGHT, Leave shotta JAWLESS-ON-SIGHT Cuz ill "cut this bitch down" to prove im the "TALLEST"-ON-THIS-SITE ^^^6/10 ok...but im bored I see youve been KO'D-ONCE, im battlin a PLAYED-OUT-DUNCE Cuz this bitch is only hard when he sees DAY-OLD-CUNTS ^^^7/10 made me laugh You cant FUCK-WIT-THE-ILLNESS, leave you STUCK-WIT-THE-REALNESS Cuz bitch,ill cut off ya hands to prove PEOPLE-WIT-NO-HANDS-FEEL-THIS ^^^7.9/10 nice Ya goin DOWN-TONIGHT, I hold the CROWN-THAS-RIGHT Call me King Kong cuz ima crush ya TOWN-ON-SIGHT ^^^6/10 blah ^^^overall 61.4 i think |
all i did was post the winners verse coz its the only one that deserves to be ther..
winna- wish...but was sorta weak....work harder |
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Voted For: sHoTTaBoY
shoota boy won this battle, shotta coming up,wish aint hit all too hard, and shoota had some nice personals Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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This was feedback posted for wish
hehe, I cant vote cuz Im on wishes team...But truthfully it was a nice battle....but wish had more ....complexity and laughing matters nice 1 shot
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Voted For: sHoTTaBoY
aiight, good as battle boiz.... opener - wish closer - shot flow - shot punchez - wish v/ shot got my vote cause it was jsut a bit easier to read and hisflow was better.... this aint no ahter vote cause wish u tiiight as man..good battle. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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This was feedback posted for sHoTTaBoY
Nice Drop Both Of Yall... Cant Vote On This 1 But Shotta You Got Sum Competition... So Wateva Good Luck Both Of U
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Upin this bitch go damnit....................
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Voted For: wish
ouch, they were both really, really nice verse, tough desision.... shotta i luv u, u had a lotta great punches. it fell at a few times, but it was hot 4 tha most part wish, ur verse was sick. had more word play and more puches in a row. so no hate to neither, but i gotta go wit wish.... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: sHoTTaBoY
ok shotta you got this both the verses were good but yours got my vote... better punches and more complexed lines wish you need to stop chattin bout yaself n start dissin aight nice verse though... v/ shotta due to better punches and better vocabulary... ~1~ Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Appreciated
can we get more votes? an honest vote will be returned |
Voted For: sHoTTaBoY
i think shotta wins dis 1 he had harder punches his verse was better i lyked it much better shotta wins dis battle fair eunf nuff said shotta wins peace Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: sHoTTaBoY
aight this was i tight battle full of metas which were all nice but shotta pulled out with the personals and punches they hit clean and hard nice structure and flow was real nice man wish you had real nice metas you got that part but you selfglorifyed too much i hate to see that stuff and you had some personals and s few good punches nice shotta punches-8/10 personals-9/10 opener-10/10 closer-7/10 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
i wasnt done
still for shotta metas-8/10 wish punches-7/10 personals-6/10 opener-8/10 closer-7/10 metas-10/10 |
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This was feedback posted for wish
this is an feedback for wish
MERKED~! PERIOD.<<<<<<<SEE DA DOT LOL |
Upin this shit i need empty slots for battles
holla with a vote n i'll return the fave p e a c e |
Voted For: sHoTTaBoY
Vote:shotaboy Lyircs: wish Wordplay: shotta Originality: tied Opening:shotta Ending:wish Personals: shotta Structure: toed Flow: wish Punches: shotta Multies: wish Metas: shotta Overall Rhyme: wish............u kicked a sick verse jus didnt seem specifically aimed at shotta..thats y i voted 4 him cos he came at u hard Overall winner: shotta.........gd battle y;all Return tha favour..........links under sig..............Pecae Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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