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Lay. 08-24-08 09:46 PM

2. Lay Fear vs 6. King Solo - Vote
 
PLAYOFFS ROUND TWO

2. Lay Fear vs 6. King Solo


Due times:
Check in due Wednesday 11.59pm EST.
- if you don't check in by this time, and you DO end up posting, -2 votes.
Verses due by Friday 11.59pm EST. Yeah, that's eastern. not pacific.
Lateness = -2 votes even IF your opponent allows you to post late.
Max. extension = 24 hours, to be granted by your opponent.

Line limits:
10 min and 20 max. for regular battles. 16 min and no max in champ matches. If no line limit agreed, second battler to post must match first battler. But ultimately, first battler gets to set the line number by how much he posts. Playoff matches there is a 30 max. for lines.

Voting:
You are required to vote on every playoff battle other than your own, if you don't like it sign out.

Lay. 08-24-08 10:15 PM

I'll say like 24 bro.

King Solo 08-25-08 04:28 PM

24 is good....

..and no last minute extensions. (feel free to make a punch around that)

King Solo 08-29-08 06:33 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Lay Fear
verses aren't factual.




Lay’s got the pimp life.. money, good looks.. I can’t beat him, not nearly
& I would’ve opened with a punch if I didn’t get sidetracked proving his theory
Lay’s still tight with disney.. he calling in a wish with the genie to spark it
Wished a lad in to his battle and got freaky with him on the magic carpet
& we both love the Jungle Book.. ‘cept it inspires me to drop my hardest
It pumps me up like shere khan, but only makes you drop shere garbage
Style’s full of clever wordplay.. fuck that, my punches’ll cause the ruckus
As my hook smacks lay about like abusing synonym’s for lazy mu’fuckas
I’ll flip avatars again.. this jedi ain’t progressing with that homeless stench
If the padawan upgrading its coz Lay’s broke ass is tired of living on a bench
& your girl is a round beast, but I hope you stay together.. those are the facts
Coz if her fat ass went on the market.. every grocery store would collapse
Seriously, the bitch is HUGE.. but I still been tapping that grotesque load
Went from bumpin’ uglies in my car.. to straight running her fat ass off the road
Talk like a hard nut.. but we know you could never KO anybody in a raw fight
Last time you had a shut-out you begged to be let back in the house all night
You know what I’m saying.. now hop off a roof son, your game’s shameful
& I know the truth hurts motherfucker so alleged probably be less painful
The word is you’re a cheat.. do whatever it takes to enforce the slaughter
Even your general persona makes a bitchmove.. for a fucking restraining order
Fuck your dope claims.. you may have fans, but they need to stop the gassin’
Coz the last time you tried to raid shit.. even the fucking flies were laughing
Quote:
Originally Posted by Lay Fear
You got crowds of 10 to 12 years olds yellin. All I can say is fuck, that's sad,
With them preteens yellin' "OH M...... GEE! How does he fuckin' suck that bad?!"
lol, this is a signature kirk punch

^ When chicks yell “FUCK THAT LAY UP” they ain’t talking ‘bout no basketball heat
& I don’t need a punchline to end this..
..coz even your best friend has signed off on your defeat.


magooo motherfucker.

Lay. 08-29-08 10:53 PM

you a jedi huh?..
fuck what this herb say..you shouldn even be here in the first place
I know you control the force.. I jus didn't think you'd prove it with ya wordplay
laz an nick.. same person. try to beat me but they never prevail an then..
ya both claim your better..then bitch about a voting scandal when you fail again
custom title's unique.. but take care of ya style..father it, n hurl once ya throw
n' you don't need a 'word to baby.. I forgot to pull out of your girl months ago.
he's never pleased his woman..but me, I surely don't need viagra for sex
you'll see enough waterfall from his girls legs it'll even have Niagra impressed
my swaggers the best, fag hasn staggered me yet,..useless wit bad writtens
n' watch him shuddlecock enough in his schedule we could use it for badminton
he's n animal, tried to convince him there was no scandal..its a lie ya retarded
there's no sense beatin a dead horse,..but I swear he was alive when i started!
reppin the establishment, hopin it'll carry you to glory is how it seems son
n watch the playoffs leave ya with a miss carriage your mother only dreamed of
get squeezed n harmed kid.. you'll get beat when I release the carnage
when we look at the ground - we just Scenic there as a piece of garbage
I got tons of reasons you suck, I can use as proof to stun n scar
an for starters'.......this league would surely never list you as one of ours
get bitch slapped, ribs cracked.. theres no dispute.. nick fletcher IS whack
I garuntee if ya presence is felt.., your boyfriend will just send ya your gift back
champin the season?.. beat Lay for once?, ha, that actions amused whore
its easy as pie for nick,..n he's NEVER known what 3.14 was actually used for
toss flames with that verse?, you never will so why'r ya bothered
well its obvious you arson,.. an its even more Apparent that I'm your father

Sagat 08-30-08 03:16 AM

ay’s got the pimp life.. money, good looks.. I can’t beat him, not nearly
& I would’ve opened with a punch if I didn’t get sidetracked proving his theory
You know what I’m saying.. now hop off a roof son, your game’s shameful
& I know the truth hurts motherfucker so alleged probably be less painful

vs.

he's never pleased his woman..but me, I surely don't need viagra for sex
you'll see enough waterfall from his girls legs it'll even have Niagra impressed
my swaggers the best, fag hasn staggered me yet,..useless wit bad writtens
n' watch him shuddlecock enough in his schedule we could use it for badminton
he's n animal, tried to convince him there was no scandal..its a lie ya retarded
there's no sense beatin a dead horse,..but I swear he was alive when i started!
^this was dope

solo's verse definitely surprised me. i was expecting something much better. i really wasn't feelin too much in the verse. many more misses than lay.

vote: lay fear

Brydon 08-30-08 07:13 AM

Haven't got the time to break it up but i think you both came good in this........
Nick i liked your drop but it jus seems to be missing something???
It just seems choppy at times ya know.... on then off...on...off.
Lay you had some serious hitting punches..... a couple made me crack up but on the real, it jus seemed more refreshing reading your verse than nicks.....

Vote--- Lay

By a smidge.

King Solo 08-31-08 01:10 PM

Ok, so I was joking on the crew votes thing. However, neither of these votes would be considered 100% valid in any other league because of lack of explanation.

And that is not bitch talk, that is real talk.

Lay. 08-31-08 08:16 PM

I'll leave it open for more votes, cuz I'm not closing this with just two votes. Sagat, your vote is explained. However Brydon you need to vote and break it down much more. Or Nick can DQ it.

Brydon 08-31-08 08:23 PM

Ok i will break it down 2moro after court as long as i dont go down for a short period of time...........

And NO im not trying to sound bad boy peps...True story....

Lay. 08-31-08 09:20 PM

You should prolly do it tonight so I can have it closed an have battles up tomorrow.

King Solo 09-01-08 09:58 AM

So, not to sound bitchy.. but.. if I picked out some bars from both verse, didn't comment on why the bars were good or not, and then just posted two lines saying "yeah, there was some misses in this guys verse and I was feeling the other guys more"

then that is an explained vote. well, if that is your definition of explained I would hate to see how bland and plain an unexplained vote would be like.

King Solo 09-01-08 09:58 AM

Again, I don't care if they pick you.. I would just like to see some REAL explanations.

Lay. 09-01-08 10:00 AM

Well thats how I vote an noone complains, I pick out the quotables from each verse.. an judge the rest with it. It doesn matter, I'm not closing this until we get more votes. I'm not closin a playoff match with two votes.

King Solo 09-01-08 10:01 AM

^ No, you don't.

You do bar breakdowns.. posting something after each bar saying like "yeah, this was a nice concept but you had poor wording and the flip wasn't that great."

^ shit like that for each bar.. that is explained.

Sagat 09-01-08 10:17 AM

Lay’s got the pimp life.. money, good looks.. I can’t beat him, not nearly
& I would’ve opened with a punch if I didn’t get sidetracked proving his theory
nice
Lay’s still tight with disney.. he calling in a wish with the genie to spark it
Wished a lad in to his battle and got freaky with him on the magic carpet
this seemed kinda forced to me
& we both love the Jungle Book.. ‘cept it inspires me to drop my hardest
It pumps me up like shere khan, but only makes you drop shere garbage
aight
Style’s full of clever wordplay.. fuck that, my punches’ll cause the ruckus
As my hook smacks lay about like abusing synonym’s for lazy mu’fuckas
wasn't feelin. i get it dude. just wasn't feelin
I’ll flip avatars again.. this jedi ain’t progressing with that homeless stench
If the padawan upgrading its coz Lay’s broke ass is tired of living on a bench
decent
& your girl is a round beast, but I hope you stay together.. those are the facts
Coz if her fat ass went on the market.. every grocery store would collapse
ehh. wasn't feelin
Seriously, the bitch is HUGE.. but I still been tapping that grotesque load
Went from bumpin’ uglies in my car.. to straight running her fat ass off the road
meh
Talk like a hard nut.. but we know you could never KO anybody in a raw fight
Last time you had a shut-out you begged to be let back in the house all night
ehh. wasnt feelin
You know what I’m saying.. now hop off a roof son, your game’s shameful
& I know the truth hurts motherfucker so alleged probably be less painful
nice
The word is you’re a cheat.. do whatever it takes to enforce the slaughter
Even your general persona makes a bitchmove.. for a fucking restraining order
played. not a great flip either
Fuck your dope claims.. you may have fans, but they need to stop the gassin’
Coz the last time you tried to raid shit.. even the fucking flies were laughing
meh. wasn't feelin
^ When chicks yell “FUCK THAT LAY UP” they ain’t talking ‘bout no basketball heat
& I don’t need a punchline to end this..
..coz even your best friend has signed off on your defeat.
meh

vs.

you a jedi huh?..
fuck what this herb say..you shouldn even be here in the first place
I know you control the force.. I jus didn't think you'd prove it with ya wordplay
decent
laz an nick.. same person. try to beat me but they never prevail an then..
ya both claim your better..then bitch about a voting scandal when you fail again
okay
custom title's unique.. but take care of ya style..father it, n hurl once ya throw
n' you don't need a 'word to baby.. I forgot to pull out of your girl months ago.
wasn't feelin
he's never pleased his woman..but me, I surely don't need viagra for sex
you'll see enough waterfall from his girls legs it'll even have Niagra impressed
nice
my swaggers the best, fag hasn staggered me yet,..useless wit bad writtens
n' watch him shuddlecock enough in his schedule we could use it for badminton
nice
he's n animal, tried to convince him there was no scandal..its a lie ya retarded
there's no sense beatin a dead horse,..but I swear he was alive when i started!
lmao. dope
reppin the establishment, hopin it'll carry you to glory is how it seems son
n watch the playoffs leave ya with a miss carriage your mother only dreamed of
okay

get squeezed n harmed kid.. you'll get beat when I release the carnage
when we look at the ground - we just Scenic there as a piece of garbage
okay
I got tons of reasons you suck, I can use as proof to stun n scar
an for starters'.......this league would surely never list you as one of ours
ehh not really
get bitch slapped, ribs cracked.. theres no dispute.. nick fletcher IS whack
I garuntee if ya presence is felt.., your boyfriend will just send ya your gift back
played
champin the season?.. beat Lay for once?, ha, that actions amused whore
its easy as pie for nick,..n he's NEVER known what 3.14 was actually used for
ehh
toss flames with that verse?, you never will so why'r ya bothered
well its obvious you arson,.. an its even more Apparent that I'm your father
decent

happy man? the big breakdown's only going to say what my summary does.

King Solo 09-01-08 10:22 AM

^ Thanks.

That is acceptable, although it could be better. :thumbup:

In-Vision 09-01-08 07:19 PM

uhh...i was held against my will i agreed to vote....so...unless it's absolutely necessary i give an explained vote for it to count..i'm not going to...


vote...lay-fear.


nick...that alledged line was nice as fuck though

Kirk 09-01-08 07:19 PM

Lay’s got the pimp life.. money, good looks.. I can’t beat him, not nearly
& I would’ve opened with a punch if I didn’t get sidetracked proving his theory
^This was alright.

Lay’s still tight with disney.. he calling in a wish with the genie to spark it
Wished a lad in to his battle and got freaky with him on the magic carpet
^Nah. Not feelin' this.

& we both love the Jungle Book.. ‘cept it inspires me to drop my hardest
It pumps me up like shere khan, but only makes you drop shere garbage
^Naaaah.

Style’s full of clever wordplay.. fuck that, my punches’ll cause the ruckus
As my hook smacks lay about like abusing synonym’s for lazy mu’fuckas
^Hated this line.

I’ll flip avatars again.. this jedi ain’t progressing with that homeless stench
If the padawan upgrading its coz Lay’s broke ass is tired of living on a bench
^This was alright.

& your girl is a round beast, but I hope you stay together.. those are the facts
Coz if her fat ass went on the market.. every grocery store would collapse
^Hahaha.

Seriously, the bitch is HUGE.. but I still been tapping that grotesque load
Went from bumpin’ uglies in my car.. to straight running her fat ass off the road
^Naaaah.

Talk like a hard nut.. but we know you could never KO anybody in a raw fight
Last time you had a shut-out you begged to be let back in the house all night
^Alright.

You know what I’m saying.. now hop off a roof son, your game’s shameful
& I know the truth hurts motherfucker so alleged probably be less painful
^Naaaah. Not feelin' it.

The word is you’re a cheat.. do whatever it takes to enforce the slaughter
Even your general persona makes a bitchmove.. for a fucking restraining order
^Alright.

Fuck your dope claims.. you may have fans, but they need to stop the gassin’
Coz the last time you tried to raid shit.. even the fucking flies were laughing
^Ehh. Okay.

^ When chicks yell “FUCK THAT LAY UP” they ain’t talking ‘bout no basketball heat
& I don’t need a punchline to end this..
..coz even your best friend has signed off on your defeat.
^I don't remember doing that. Lol.





fuck what this herb say..you shouldn even be here in the first place
I know you control the force.. I jus didn't think you'd prove it with ya wordplay
^Worded shitty but alright.

laz an nick.. same person. try to beat me but they never prevail an then..
ya both claim your better..then bitch about a voting scandal when you fail again
^Ehh. Alright.

custom title's unique.. but take care of ya style..father it, n hurl once ya throw
n' you don't need a 'word to baby.. I forgot to pull out of your girl months ago.
^Alright.

he's never pleased his woman..but me, I surely don't need viagra for sex
you'll see enough waterfall from his girls legs it'll even have Niagra impressed
^Haha. Not bad.

my swaggers the best, fag hasn staggered me yet,..useless wit bad writtens
n' watch him shuddlecock enough in his schedule we could use it for badminton
^Lmao. What the fuck at this? Dumb but funny.

he's n animal, tried to convince him there was no scandal..its a lie ya retarded
there's no sense beatin a dead horse,..but I swear he was alive when i started!
^Nah.

reppin the establishment, hopin it'll carry you to glory is how it seems son
n watch the playoffs leave ya with a miss carriage your mother only dreamed of
^Naaah.

get squeezed n harmed kid.. you'll get beat when I release the carnage
when we look at the ground - we just Scenic there as a piece of garbage
^Ehhh. Shitty use of that wordplay.

I got tons of reasons you suck, I can use as proof to stun n scar
an for starters'.......this league would surely never list you as one of ours
^Not bad.

get bitch slapped, ribs cracked.. theres no dispute.. nick fletcher IS whack
I garuntee if ya presence is felt.., your boyfriend will just send ya your gift back
^Lol. Worded bad but still funny a little.

champin the season?.. beat Lay for once?, ha, that actions amused whore
its easy as pie for nick,..n he's NEVER known what 3.14 was actually used for
^Nah.

toss flames with that verse?, you never will so why'r ya bothered
well its obvious you arson,.. an its even more Apparent that I'm your father
^Not feelin' this.




Well, I think Lay took this. Both of you had a few crummy lines here or there. But what really got my vote was the few lines Lay had that were funny as shit. You both had a few decent lines, but Lay's verse stuck out with those couple lines that had me laughin'. That grocery store line was funny from Solo. Probably my favorite from him. And Lay's shuddlecock line was fucking funny even though it was so dumb. But yeah, I think Lay took this for the reason I stated before. Both of you dropped pretty well though.

V/Lay

King Solo 09-01-08 07:46 PM

I didn't drop that well at all, at least I don't think so. I actually read Lay's verse just now having skipped over it before.. but yeah, even I agree he won.

Lay. 09-02-08 10:30 PM

Lay Fear wins 4 - 0 an advances to the Finals.


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