High Knucks vs phenom1
 

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6 bars Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 07-31-07 at 09:19 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

phenom1 has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-28-07 09:36 PM.

Yo Ima Post Mines In A Lil Bit lAter Today?
Are You Gonna Post Yours Today

High Knucks has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-28-07 09:49 PM.

Quit Messin In Fights!! Phenom 'Check Ya Insides' Like Inspections At Flights
I Know How To Form Punchlines While He 'Left In The Dark' Like Directions At Night/*

Dethrone The King? You Feeling Lucky? I Get To Ripping And Smash You Clovers
Cuz He Stop When 'Shit Hits The Fan' Like I Was Flipping A Bathroom Over/** (HaHa)

Phenom Be Ruling And Stunt Ur Growth. I Crush Fakes So I Get To Ruining You Bummer Clones.
My Skills Is Shown, And Its Best If Dude 'Keep At Bay' Like Moning To Summer Homes/***

This Is Like Words In A Undercover Sting Gone Wrong Cuz You In Trouble You Fake
First Time He Too Out Witted To Match This So Like 'Greedy Thieves' He'll Do A Double Take/ ****

Knucks, Keep On Wishin G! Cuz Like 'Dated Love Letters' Your Punches Are Fading And Missing-Me
You Better Then P? Thats Where I 'Draw The Line' Like Painting A Fishing Scene/ *****

Outweigh Me? I Test His 'Bone Strength' So Its Not 'Marijuana' When He Watch Me 'Try A Joint'
This Dudes 'Irrelevant To Skill' And I Kill Without 'Laying A Finger' On Him And He'll Be Desides The Point/******


* Directions For Like AirPlanes
** I Flipped The Bathroom And The Shit From The Toilet Hit The Roof
*** Bay=Keep Him Calm, And Also That’s Where Most Summer Homes Are The Bay
**** He’ll Ask For A ReMatch, Like When Theives Take Double
***** A Fishing Line
****** Point Finger

take a page outta your sex life dude, you're nothing much
for real, how many battles before you prove you fuckin suck
you'll need alot of luck, i'm about ready to burst
grab a 4 leaf Clova... but that guys even worse
i'll slap ya around, like when you're in your room
you have so much whack shit dude, you could get high off the fumes
nah i'm not serious, i'm messing around, having a beer
i get straight to the point, phenom's just queer
i'll tear you apart, more of monster than that wall in boston
and i'll break ya down faster than pychaiatrist with a shotgun
PUMP PUMP
you're no good, your shit just doesn't fly at this board
you couldn't land a decent punch, in a brawl at the airport

yo good Battle Mayne, But Lets Get Some Votes On This
Votes??????

Voted For: High Knucks

phenom1
Quit Messin In Fights!! Phenom 'Check Ya Insides' Like Inspections At Flights
I Know How To Form Punchlines While He 'Left In The Dark' Like Directions At Night/*
That was pretty weak.
Dethrone The King? You Feeling Lucky? I Get To Ripping And Smash You Clovers
Cuz He Stop When 'Shit Hits The Fan' Like I Was Flipping A Bathroom Over/** (HaHa)
Not bad.
Phenom Be Ruling And Stunt Ur Growth. I Crush Fakes So I Get To Ruining You Bummer Clones.
My Skills Is Shown, And Its Best If Dude 'Keep At Bay' Like Moning To Summer Homes/***
Nah.
This Is Like Words In A Undercover Sting Gone Wrong Cuz You In Trouble You Fake
First Time He Too Out Witted To Match This So Like 'Greedy Thieves' He'll Do A Double Take/ ****
Not feeling this.
Knucks, Keep On Wishin G! Cuz Like 'Dated Love Letters' Your Punches Are Fading And Missing-Me
You Better Then P? Thats Where I 'Draw The Line' Like Painting A Fishing Scene/ *****
Whack.
Outweigh Me? I Test His 'Bone Strength' So Its Not 'Marijuana' When He Watch Me 'Try A Joint'
This Dudes 'Irrelevant To Skill' And I Kill Without 'Laying A Finger' On Him And He'll Be Desides The Point/******
No.

Pretty whack verse, nothing to special stood out at all, was actually a pretty difficult read. Work on your structure, a bit on flow, and don't explain everything. If a punch is good it won't need an explanation. Good attempt, keep elevating and dropping.


High Knucks
take a page outta your sex life dude, you're nothing much
for real, how many battles before you prove you fuckin suck
Not bad.
you'll need alot of luck, i'm about ready to burst
grab a 4 leaf Clova... but that guys even worse
Lmfao.
i'll slap ya around, like when you're in your room
you have so much whack shit dude, you could get high off the fumes
Ehh..
nah i'm not serious, i'm messing around, having a beer
i get straight to the point, phenom's just queer
Easy, but made me laugh.
i'll tear you apart, more of monster than that wall in boston
and i'll break ya down faster than pychaiatrist with a shotgun
PUMP PUMP
Word.
you're no good, your shit just doesn't fly at this board
you couldn't land a decent punch, in a brawl at the airport
I dig it.

Not bad, can tell it's been a while since you've battled. Still got some magic, flow was dope, some punches were pretty funny. You got this easy.

Vote: High Knucks



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Yo Can We Get Some More Votes On This One Please
Good Battle So Far Knucks

Voted For: phenom1

This was better no doubt about it no dick ridin good cuz knucks u brag alot for sumone not that great!

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Voted For: High Knucks

check



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Yo Thanks MAyne, But Is Germ, Bull And Knucks Spose To Have The Same Ip?????

shut up, your verse was gay

This was feedback posted for phenom1
 

open: Phenom- I felt the first line
close: Definantly Phenom1...High Knucks it seemed like you were searching for something to rhyme with "this board" and came up with "airport"...I realize though that this is in keeping with the airport/directions theme from Phenom's first 2 lines. Still a little weak...
personals: tie
metas: Phenom
punches: High Knucks..."you have so much whack shit dude, you could get high off the fumes" I felt that
multis: Tie
close one...but
Win: phenom

Vote Added

Voted For: phenom1

Meh i have Phenom winning this with more multies that caved around punches man... sorry he gets my vote as his were more hitting and more interesting and intriguing than high knucks.... som played but it was a hit at least not a statement or such

Voted For: High Knucks

Intro - HK
Creativity-HK
Personals-Tie
Punches-HK
Flow-HK


U did ur fukin thing naww mean, u had ur objective n ur mind n u accomplished it great job. Phenom u tried u had sum nice play on words naww mean but u need 2 hit him where it hurts naww mean. i think u a betta freestyler than battler Good Battle 2 both guys


n Check mah battles out plezz Sin-Scere vs JWild

This was feedback posted for phenom1
 

not bad punchlines/metaphors...nothing great but nothing terrible either.....

one thing...don't explain your punches...if you can't convey what your trying to say accurately enough for people to understand without explanation...than you need to try something else.

I mean seriously, how many times have you enjoyed a joke that had to be explained to you? It just takes away from the strength of your writing. If people don't get it, they shouldn't vote...at the same time.if it's more than a few people, than you probably were just to vague...so assume that people will understand what your saying without explaining it....and if they don't get it...be an un-biased judge to determine whether it is because they just don't get it...or because you didn't execute your punch the way you should have.


stay up.

are you seriously that stupid? high knucks had virtually 0 punchlines asside from his last line. He had No personals whatsoever. The flow was shitty, there were no multies...and look at the difference between the length in the lines! Syllable count is what makes flow...and you can see that high knucks has no concept of syllable count.


AND YOU REALLY USED INTRO TO FUCKING JUDGE A BATTLE? wow you are whack. Intros are stupid, and completely irrelevant to the actual diss...all it is, is talking shit, that you chose not to put into a rhyme format.

Maybe you meant opening bar? Because opening bar and intro are different.


either way, high knucks didn't have a punch his first bar...that bar didn't even make sense..

how many battles before you prove you fuckin suck? It only takes 1....if you've battled multiple times..and havn't proved you suck...it's probably because you don't suck....that applies to everything.

so that "intro" category is a joke, either way you want to look at it.


and creativity? once again, how can you give that category to high knucks? his shit was basic, extremely simple...and played out years ago...

phenoms lines were in no way completely original or dope...but they were decent...and the fact that he actually had punches, and metaphors...against someone who didn't...wins creativity by itself.


stop riding peoples dick. If that's not what you're doing..than you really need to consider staying in school for atleast..the rest of your life. It's people like you who make some of the folks on here, feel like it's a waist of time to battle. Because people won't understand the shit anyways.

and no, they should not have the same IP address...there are rare cases when someone are friends in person...but even then, the mere fact that there is bias is reason for them not to vote...you clearly had a better verse..so it's obvious this is true.

Also, red bull joined in 2005, in the 3rd month after germ joined. Germ has close to 7600 posts.
red bull has 400 and something. It is very possible they are the same person...and red bull is an alias of germ. The best way to figure it out...is look at previous posts...and see how many times the same IP address comes up.

Also notice that, red bulls location is vague. It says canada. Germs says adanac. Which is in canada. High Knucks says nothing about location. Not to mention, that of the 3 accounts that have the same IP address...only one has aim and msn sn's......"coincidentally", it is germs account that has it...the first one made..now it seems logical that he made that account as his first, and primary...and made aliases....and chose not to disclose his contact info because it would give him away.

I mean, who REALLY doesn't have aim or msn? and who really doesn't list the city they live in?

yeah, a handful of people don't have aim or msn...and some don't list the city...but most do...and i feel like the odds of having 2 different people who don't have aim or msn....ALSO who don't list their city...are pretty low. And it's very odd that even though the odds were beaten, that one of them was the battler. The other voted for that same battler. And than someone with the same IP address, who has only averaged about 1 post every 2 days over the last 2 and a half years...just happens to "know" the other two folks with the same address in this thread.


The fact is, if it's the same IP address...it was posted from the same location...so all red bull, or high knucks..or germ can say..is that you guys are all homies.....but either way..given the information i've presented..that doesn't seem likely.

I would keep an eye out to see if those 3 accounts are ever on silmutaneously.

Yo Thanks For The Explanation, But Why Didn't It Cou nt Your Vote?????

Because I didn't vote...i didn't feel like elaborating on why the other kids verse was so terrible...and if i just say its not good...he can get it removed for being unexplained....but....i ended up elaborating anyways...so I'll edit my post, just PM strobe and tell him to change it to a vote.

Voted For: phenom1

ayt hands down P got this shis kncuk looked like i was reading a child's book work on ya punch lines overall P had better wordplay,punchlies,etc.so i vote 4 P

high knucks had virtually 0 punchlines asside from his last line. He had No personals whatsoever. The flow was shitty, there were no multies...and look at the difference between the length in the lines! Syllable count is what makes flow...and you can see that high knucks has no concept of syllable count.




your first line didn't even make sense.

how many battles before you prove you fuckin suck? It only takes 1....if you've battled multiple times..and havn't proved you suck...it's probably because you don't suck....that applies to everything.



Basically, phenom beat you in ever aspect of battling. By a lot. Not because his verse was incredible, but because yours was incredibly bad...


to make it simple. This was a battle, where only one person battled the way they are supposed to.

1 person had consistant punchlines..the other had 1. and it sucked.

1 person had decent flow. The other person had shitty flow.

Nobody used personals.

1 person had decent metaphors..the other had none.


it's no contest here, i really believe that anyone who votes towards you high knucks, should be banned for being stupid, or dick riding.

Voted For: High Knucks

High Knucks wins because I feel like it.

At least he doesn't PM me repeatedly asking for votes.

So, phenom, what will you do? Report this illegitimate vote and you lose the battle for PMing, choose not to report it and you're one vote closer to losing.

Have a good day, and next time vote on other people's battles and they might just vote on yours if they're nice.

This was feedback posted for phenom1
 

Punches, Flow, Multies, And Wordplay Go To Phenom1
And Personals, Creativity Go To Knucks,
Very One Sided Battle

Vote-phenom1

wow, now YOU'RE having votes from the same IP address....


cheaters everywhere...

stop trying to be really good on a rapboard

There is no try, there is only do.


Whether or not what I do is good or bad, or none of the two, is a decision that you make because you have no other choice.

for the record, i'm high knucks, and bull is a buddy who was at my house

its hard to believe you had no other choice but to thouroughly break down a battle that was posted in about 5 minutes. i'm fully aware of the same ips, as well as strobe, so just quit crying. i also wrote that verse in 5 minutes, while drinking beers, which is why i havn't, or don't even care, about how the voting has gone in this battle. i've been told by about 3 other people, as well as receiving one on this account, pms from phenom asking for votes on his battle, which by reasonable assumption, is cheating, but, i really don't care because i really didn't try

so please, stop flaunting a long lived status on this board, and just save your time and effort.

Yo I Didn't Cheat Dizzy Is My Nephew
I Was Gone At Work He Showed Up Logged Me Out
And Signed In, Don't Believe Me, I Can Prove It, I Can Call Him
And We Can Be On At Te Same Time

Dont Beleive Me WhatEver
But It Can Be Proven

i hope your not talking to me.

i always have choices. I Have been sick the last 2 days and have had nothing better do. Nobody is crying, i don't care about you, or phenom. For your info, the quote you posted.m Was because I saw phenom have someone vote from the same IP..as for the rest, save your nonsense.....im not flaunting shit, i'm simply trying to stay active in hopes that it gives others to stay active as well....long lived status?

haha, you got 8000 posts kid...i have like...1300....in more time...tell me who's takin this more seriously?

Voted For: phenom1

Quit Messin In Fights!! Phenom 'Check Ya Insides' Like Inspections At Flights
I Know How To Form Punchlines While He 'Left In The Dark' Like Directions At Night/*
(WOW......nice one clever)

Dethrone The King? You Feeling Lucky? I Get To Ripping And Smash You Clovers
Cuz He Stop When 'Shit Hits The Fan' Like I Was Flipping A Bathroom Over/** (HaHa)
(damn.....ok)

Phenom Be Ruling And Stunt Ur Growth. I Crush Fakes So I Get To Ruining You Bummer Clones.
My Skills Is Shown, And Its Best If Dude 'Keep At Bay' Like Moning To Summer Homes/***
(lol k)
This Is Like Words In A Undercover Sting Gone Wrong Cuz You In Trouble You Fake
First Time He Too Out Witted To Match This So Like 'Greedy Thieves' He'll Do A Double Take/ ****
(k..lil funny)

Knucks, Keep On Wishin G! Cuz Like 'Dated Love Letters' Your Punches Are Fading And Missing-Me
You Better Then P? Thats Where I 'Draw The Line' Like Painting A Fishing Scene/ *****
(oooo killer set here.....really good comparisons here)

Outweigh Me? I Test His 'Bone Strength' So Its Not 'Marijuana' When He Watch Me 'Try A Joint'
This Dudes 'Irrelevant To Skill' And I Kill Without 'Laying A Finger' On Him And He'll Be Desides The Point/******
(weak ender, ur lst line couldve been worded a lil better.... 2nd line was coo, just didnt hit me hard)


take a page outta your sex life dude, you're nothing much
for real, how many battles before you prove you fuckin suck
(eh pretty str8 forward but generic)
you'll need alot of luck, i'm about ready to burst
grab a 4 leaf Clova... but that guys even worse
(k...assumin this is some type of personal and they have relation....it didnt hit too well)
i'll slap ya around, like when you're in your room
you have so much whack shit dude, you could get high off the fumes
(LOL... k lil funny)
nah i'm not serious, i'm messing around, having a beer
i get straight to the point, phenom's just queer
(eh)
i'll tear you apart, more of monster than that wall in boston
and i'll break ya down faster than pychaiatrist with a shotgun
PUMP PUMP
(coo comparison)
you're no good, your shit just doesn't fly at this board
you couldn't land a decent punch, in a brawl at the airport
(good one)



p had this.....solid structure....although no personals on this battle really....this was based off punches and multis and wordplay in this matter and P just hit alot harder

Thanks Mayne Uppin This..............
Thanks For The BreakDown

Lmfao..

R-Evolution, dude I've been here since July 2004, this is an alias of my real Red Bull account. High Knucks won this battle, no doubt, phenom1's was garbage. The reason people don't battle on this site anymore is because verse's like his get wins because the only people who vote are half retarded.

/Knucks has been my best friend for almost 15 years, I guess we are a rare case of knowing each other.

Also, phenom1 PM'ed me to vote as well, basically, you lose/possibly get banned if I turn you in.

This was feedback posted for High Knucks
 

I just took the best shit of my life. It was also one where there is like barely any left overs and wiping is really easy.

So, what your saying is, the more simple the verse, the better?



PLEASE...notice how nobody GOOD battles anymore.

Thats because the people who were GOOD, got fucked by people like you who don't understand anything about what the elements of rap battling. High knucks shit was simple as fuck..and thats giving him the benefit of the doubt. People do battle here all the time, just nobody that is any good. The people that battle here, fucking suck now...and thats because of people like you who celebrate mediocrity....if you can even call it that.

LMFAO..


Quit Messin In Fights!! Phenom 'Check Ya Insides' Like Inspections At Flights
I Know How To Form Punchlines While He 'Left In The Dark' Like Directions At Night/*
So what is good about this punch? Is it the terribly choppy multies, the weak metaphors, or the self glorification?
Dethrone The King? You Feeling Lucky? I Get To Ripping And Smash You Clovers
Cuz He Stop When 'Shit Hits The Fan' Like I Was Flipping A Bathroom Over/** (HaHa)
Honestly.. not funny, not even well thought out, just stupid. If I heard this live I'd probably leave.
Phenom Be Ruling And Stunt Ur Growth. I Crush Fakes So I Get To Ruining You Bummer Clones.
My Skills Is Shown, And Its Best If Dude 'Keep At Bay' Like Moning To Summer Homes/***
Another terribly choppy line, difficult to read, ruins the entire punch. Learn the key elements to texting, there is none in here.
This Is Like Words In A Undercover Sting Gone Wrong Cuz You In Trouble You Fake
First Time He Too Out Witted To Match This So Like 'Greedy Thieves' He'll Do A Double Take/ ****
That's not even a punch, it's just whack.
Knucks, Keep On Wishin G! Cuz Like 'Dated Love Letters' Your Punches Are Fading And Missing-Me
You Better Then P? Thats Where I 'Draw The Line' Like Painting A Fishing Scene/ *****
This is one of the worst punches I've seen in the last while, I mean even the creativity in it is fuckin' whack.
Outweigh Me? I Test His 'Bone Strength' So Its Not 'Marijuana' When He Watch Me 'Try A Joint'
This Dudes 'Irrelevant To Skill' And I Kill Without 'Laying A Finger' On Him And He'll Be Desides The Point/******
Another shitty self glorification line, with no real hit at all.

This verse fuckin' sucked, I mean Knucks didn't drop anything too special either, but it was definitely better than this piece of shit.

take a page outta your sex life dude, you're nothing much
for real, how many battles before you prove you fuckin suck

what in the fuck is good about this? it doesn't even make sense, not one part of it...the set up is completely irrelevant to the actual"punch" and the punch makes no sense to anything.

you'll need alot of luck, i'm about ready to burst
grab a 4 leaf Clova... but that guys even worse

this is fucking basic as well...set up, stupid....punch....WOWWWW...it's so impressive that he added "4 leaf" to somebodies name, which turned his punch into meaning....grab a guy thats worse than you for good luck because his names clova....the wordplay here fucking sucks dude..if you don't see that you're stupid as fuck....not to mention the fact, to even bring up someone so shitty, is to hurt yourself.


i'll slap ya around, like when you're in your room
you have so much whack shit dude, you could get high off the fumes

i'll slap you around, like when you're in your room? that doesn't make any sense either....you have so much whack shit dude, you could get high off the fumes..
that actually wasn't too bad...but the fact that he didn't even set it up AT ALL...let alone decently....is what makes it bad...if he's not going to have punches where the first line sets it up....than what is the purpose of the the other lines?

nah i'm not serious, i'm messing around, having a beer
i get straight to the point, phenom's just queer

basic, no complexity whatsoever....and if i had a dollar for everyime some new fucking tool has used this, i would buy this site, and kick people like you off of it

after i own 91% of the world because of how fucking rich I am.

i'll tear you apart, more of monster than that wall in boston
and i'll break ya down faster than pychaiatrist with a shotgun

once again, these are two seperate lines that have nothing to do with eachother.
2nd line was decent....but it had no fucking set up..which makes it an incomplete punch.

you're no good, your shit just doesn't fly at this board
you couldn't land a decent punch, in a brawl at the airport


This is as close as he came to having 1 full complete decent punch....instead, he either used no set up....or his set up just contradicted his follow up

In order to be able to land, or not land....you have to be abloe to fucking fly in the first place...the first line he said your shit just doesn't fly....so to say he couldn't land a decent punch.....is to say that his shit would be flying in the first place....the only this changes....is if the first and 2nd line have nothing to do with eachother...in which case..it was another incomplete punch..which is the story of his whole entire verse.

it was either no punch at all..or incomplete....atleast phenom was able to create complete punches that made sense......

and it's funny you say"shitty this, shitty that"


because it's better to have shitty anything...than nothing at alll.

shut the fuck up, i know that you have probably grown used to the warmth of your friends balls on your fucking forhead over that much time, but you gotta cut the shit....and stop being a biased little faggot who is judging hip hop writing, and not using any elements of hip hop or writing to do so.

Yo Please Stop Fighting, 1 More Vote, The Real Reason Why I Pm'd Yall To Vote, Is Because Thats What You Did On My Last Site, Beacause Usually NoOne Votes.....But I Did Not Cheat I Love Rap, And I Would Never Do That.....I Can Prove AnyThing Ya'll Want

It's funny how you broke down his verse with half the wordplay flying over your head.