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.Barz Of Steel. vs Verbal Shoota
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10-16 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Good Luck Black Minimum posts to vote: 1000 Check in by: 07-02-05 at 05:44 PM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
Come check in so I know you wont fuckin duck me again
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Verbal Shoota has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-02-05 05:18 PM.
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LOL...This kids new? an joined in may? LOL, Yeaaaah...
Watch the personals roll in........Like he's been on here for along as say uhmmm...BLACK MAGIK lol :thumbup: Barz of steel? shit..i got a blow torch that'll melt 'em like Plastic Only time you gettin applauds on the mic....is when you pass-it UNdestructable emcee?...I dont remember you sayin your Dyslexic? then again, read ya verse an it Shows!..like the ribbs on an anorexic I got this bitch pm'n me daily ''yo teph, what about that battle?!'' What about it?...Kid, I GOT YOU SHOOK!...like i'm playin witta Rattle See, FAG...I peice my words like Lego Blocks, the wins come in Flocks Last time dude met-a-phor.............He tapped out from a ''Leg-Lock'' killin this beef like livestock....have him in witness protection on a farm Low-life virgin...He aint never ''cuttin''...Unless you can count self-harm DOG!...Be cool, calm, collective...... whatever, just leave the salad un-tossed I never met any emcee before...who was eager as this whore...for a loss Fuckin herb, claimin your new? yet you know everythin bout RV... Joined may 05...low-life, you got more posts than MC's who signed in 03! You wannabe me........... or maybe ...do you just wanna join RAW...??? Wont talk so tough.. ........when i ram these Keys down ya throat an give you LockJaw.... Cuttin=fuckin. |
.Barz Of Steel. has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-02-05 05:36 PM.
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This faggot penis rubs... ya body'll end up scattered with debri in tubs
After I "fear-factor" this queer bastard..........Make him "Eat the slugs" * This poser ain't never dump heat, he's a "Vegetarian" he "don't want beef" Shit, he could "mix his semen with sugar" dude still won't ever "cum sweet" Dawg you always come the weakest, I got shit that'll cut ya breathin' Shit, "Buck" will "Get Shot"............................Like it was "Hunting Season" ** I'm a hooligan man, but how is this kid fooling with grams? When the only "coke" he's seen........................came in an "aluminum can"!! *** This dude flows with legends?? How? When is flow is always thrown, rejected For "Always Having Weak Bars"...............Like "Bad Cell Phone Connections!!" I son emcees, Teph, don't fuck with me, I run this beef............................. I'm like "Stricnine to your insides" It's no wonder "You Can't Stomach Me" Tephlon, you have no skill whatsoever, and you spittin flames is nonsense Because the last sweet bar you had.........................Was made of chocolate *On the show "Fear Factor" they make people eat slugs. slugs=bullets :shoot: ** His old name was Buck.Shot...Buck=deer and deers get shot during hunting season ***Haha get it the soda?? Everything else should be self-explainable. |
this was actually a good battle.........uppin.....
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This was feedback posted for Verbal Shoota
damn this was a hot battle and teph you ripped it with the personals
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Get off his dick.......
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i said it was hot battle that means you did good too dumbass and i was giving feedback to him and he did rip it with his personals so shut the fuck up you bitch ass ho
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LOL
Uppin for some votes |
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Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.
barz gets this barz- good punches, fuck it, dope punches...great opener and closer, verse never really fell off, decent vocab, good multies..only thing i saw lacking was persoinals tef- opener was hella fuckin played...dope clsoer thoguh...nice punches, bad personals, although you DID have them...pretty good verse.... breakdown: opener-b closer-tie multies-tie flow-tie punches-b personals-vs my vote goes to barz Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Verbal Shoota
Flow-Barz....structured better and placed rhyming words better Punches-Verbal,Barz had far to many played concepts.Like semen=cumming sweet,bad cell phone connections,and beef=vegetarians.Those things have been done a million times.Those are just some...there are more played lines in ur verse. Personals-Barz.....Ripped on the dudes old name buck shot. Multis-probably verbal although both of you need to improve here. Originality-Verbal...like I said before...Barz whole verse was full of nothing but played shit. Vote-Verbal (VOTE IN LINK BELOW OR THIS VOTE WILL BE REMOVED) http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=197357 |
K-Trini....I can't vote on Jack The Ripper 'cause he'll only say its a hate vote
you got beat by Solo so i won't return the vote an i can't votwe against pen n paper either. Bumpin this...... |
LOL at u getting my vote deleted...
K-Trini was a hate vote anyway, so it will be removed :) |
Morse codes vote was unexplained too shit.
But whatever, get it removed. |
Voted For: Verbal Shoota
Barz of steel? shit..i got a blow torch that'll melt 'em like Plastic Only time you gettin applauds on the mic....is when you pass-it See, FAG...I peice my words like Lego Blocks, the wins come in Flocks Last time dude met-a-phor.............He tapped out from a ''Leg-Lock' You wannabe me........... or maybe ...do you just wanna join RAW...??? Wont talk so tough.. ........when i ram these Keys down ya throat an give you LockJaw.... vs. Dawg you always come the weakest, I got shit that'll cut ya breathin' Shit, "Buck" will "Get Shot"............................Like it was "Hunting Season" I'm a hooligan man, but how is this kid fooling with grams? When the only "coke" he's seen........................came in an "aluminum can"!! * aight this was a good battle but verbal shoota eged it out with like one more punch.....if barz had like one more good punch he might have had this.....so for a more consistent verse with solid punches v/ verbal shoota |
man it was 3 quotables to 2 quotables........i said if you had one more punch you prolly would have won....but you didnt you had to throw in some gun play lines that really arent that dope at all......and i fuckin battle verbal shoota when he was buck.shot.....man i just RTF thats it....i dont give a fuck who you are what you look like or what you have done to me..
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Voted For: Verbal Shoota
.Barz Of Steel. This faggot penis rubs... ya body'll end up scattered with debri in tubs After I "fear-factor" this queer bastard..........Make him "Eat the slugs" * ^uhm only first part of first line is a punch actually, rest is nice wordplay This poser ain't never dump heat, he's a "Vegetarian" he "don't want beef" Shit, he could "mix his semen with sugar" dude still won't ever "cum sweet" ^lmao at second line, nice one, good wordplay Dawg you always come the weakest, I got shit that'll cut ya breathin' Shit, "Buck" will "Get Shot"............................Like it was "Hunting Season" ** ^first line's bleh, second is a nice personal punch I'm a hooligan man, but how is this kid fooling with grams? When the only "coke" he's seen........................came in an "aluminum can"!! *** ^coo punch This dude flows with legends?? How? When is flow is always thrown, rejected For "Always Having Weak Bars"...............Like "Bad Cell Phone Connections!!" ^good wordplay again, first line is an aight punch I son emcees, Teph, don't fuck with me, I run this beef............................. I'm like "Stricnine to your insides" It's no wonder "You Can't Stomach Me" ^wordplay's aight in last line, first one is ugh Tephlon, you have no skill whatsoever, and you spittin flames is nonsense Because the last sweet bar you had.........................Was made of chocolate ^uhm not feeling ya closer really... Verbal Shoota Barz of steel? shit..i got a blow torch that'll melt 'em like Plastic Only time you gettin applauds on the mic....is when you pass-it ^haha lmao at the last line, niiiiiiice UNdestructable emcee?...I dont remember you sayin your Dyslexic? then again, read ya verse an it Shows!..like the ribbs on an anorexic ^good wordplay in last line, coo first one I got this bitch pm'n me daily ''yo teph, what about that battle?!'' What about it?...Kid, I GOT YOU SHOOK!...like i'm playin witta Rattle ^no real punch but aight bar See, FAG...I peice my words like Lego Blocks, the wins come in Flocks Last time dude met-a-phor.............He tapped out from a ''Leg-Lock'' ^tight wordplay formed into hardhitting punch killin this beef like livestock....have him in witness protection on a farm Low-life virgin...He aint never ''cuttin''...Unless you can count self-harm ^haha lmao at the last line, hotness right here! DOG!...Be cool, calm, collective...... whatever, just leave the salad un-tossed I never met any emcee before...who was eager as this whore...for a loss ^coo bar, feels like a filler though... Fuckin herb, claimin your new? yet you know everythin bout RV... Joined may 05...low-life, you got more posts than MC's who signed in 03! ^haha nice nice...hitting hard You wannabe me........... or maybe ...do you just wanna join RAW...??? Wont talk so tough.. ........when i ram these Keys down ya throat an give you LockJaw.... ^coo closer In the end my vote goes to Verbal Shoota cause he came with more personal and creative punches but BOS, you dropped very good as well! Nice battle here! |
Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.
Lmao @ B.O.S.'s verse. That shit was hillarious. Man Buck would have had this but his shit didn't make me laugh at all. I was thinking "yo Teph has this" after the first couple lines but then it went downhill. Your shit was not very consistent on the lines of connecting punches in my opinion. Some of your punches were good but like I said as the verse continued you were falling off. Aswell as the fact that B.O.S. ISN'T Black Magik. B.O.S. is my homie from way back so that kinda threw me off. Barz verse was funny as hell though. That cum sweet like was hillarious man, they all were and thats what won this battle for you. Bad closer though... Could have been better. But my vote goes to Barz for more consistent and connecting punches aswell as a funnier verse. |
Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.
aiight let's see: Teph: Barz of steel? shit..i got a blow torch that'll melt 'em like Plastic Only time you gettin applauds on the mic....is when you pass-it ehh... ok......... 4/10 UNdestructable emcee?...I dont remember you sayin your Dyslexic? then again, read ya verse an it Shows!..like the ribbs on an anorexic ok................. 5/10 I got this bitch pm'n me daily ''yo teph, what about that battle?!'' What about it?...Kid, I GOT YOU SHOOK!...like i'm playin witta Rattle umm... it's eh............. 3/10 See, FAG...I peice my words like Lego Blocks, the wins come in Flocks Last time dude met-a-phor.............He tapped out from a ''Leg-Lock'' lol nice........... 6/10 killin this beef like livestock....have him in witness protection on a farm Low-life virgin...He aint never ''cuttin''...Unless you can count self-harm pretty nice.......... 5/10 DOG!...Be cool, calm, collective...... whatever, just leave the salad un-tossed I never met any emcee before...who was eager as this whore...for a loss no, too basic.......... 2/10 Fuckin herb, claimin your new? yet you know everythin bout RV... Joined may 05...low-life, you got more posts than MC's who signed in 03! haha nice........... 6/10 You wannabe me........... or maybe ...do you just wanna join RAW...??? Wont talk so tough.. ........when i ram these Keys down ya throat an give you LockJaw.... ok................ 4/10 Overall, not a bad verse, seen better from you. You had some good punches, but none that made me go "OHHH!!!!!!!" nah mean? but flow and shit was down. overall not bad. 35/80 Barz: This faggot penis rubs... ya body'll end up scattered with debri in tubs After I "fear-factor" this queer bastard..........Make him "Eat the slugs" * haha coo......... 5/10 This poser ain't never dump heat, he's a "Vegetarian" he "don't want beef" Shit, he could "mix his semen with sugar" dude still won't ever "cum sweet" lmao.. nice, but cum lines kinda played so... 6/10 Dawg you always come the weakest, I got shit that'll cut ya breathin' Shit, "Buck" will "Get Shot"............................Like it was "Hunting Season" ** lol nice......... 5/10 I'm a hooligan man, but how is this kid fooling with grams? When the only "coke" he's seen........................came in an "aluminum can"!! *** lol another nice one........ 6/10 This dude flows with legends?? How? When is flow is always thrown, rejected For "Always Having Weak Bars"...............Like "Bad Cell Phone Connections!!" lol nice.......... 5/10 I son emcees, Teph, don't fuck with me, I run this beef............................. I'm like "Stricnine to your insides" It's no wonder "You Can't Stomach Me" lol nice....... 6/10 Tephlon, you have no skill whatsoever, and you spittin flames is nonsense Because the last sweet bar you had.........................Was made of chocolate 4/10..... it was ok.............. [b] overall, your verse was good. You stayed consistent throughout whole verse. Punches kept comin'. none made me go "ohhh!!" but shit was still good. I liked it. overall nice job, yo... 37/70 Overall, Barsz edged it out word v/Barz good battle |
This was feedback posted for .Barz Of Steel.
Nice Drop Fam..
Mos Def Took This Battle. ~R~ |
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Teph, tell your d/r buddies like K-Trini to stay out Uppin this shit |
Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.
RETURN THE FAVOR this was a pretty hot battle. but im gonna have to go wit barz of steel ya mean. his punches were hittin harder in this one and thats whats important. barz of steel- pretty hot verse from you. nice punches and decent multies throughout the whole thing. opener was kinda weak but it got better after that.personals were ok, nothin extraordinary. flow was on point that got you alot of points too. *best bar*-This dude flows with legends?? How? When is flow is always thrown, rejected For "Always Having Weak Bars"...............Like "Bad Cell Phone Connections!!" -this joint was hot, the best bar in the battle i think. nice set up and delivery. verbal shoota-pretty decent verse. one of your better ones but ya needed some more punches in there.flow as straight and structure was good. but the personals were kinda weak and you didnt focus on punches enough to make up for it. *best bar*-Barz of steel? shit..i got a blow torch that'll melt 'em like Plastic Only time you gettin applauds on the mic....is when you pass-it -this was hot, you def had the better opener flowed well and hit pretty hard. overall=barz of steel took this jawn becuz his punches hit a lil harder and were a lil more witty than verbal shootas. personals were nothin special on both sides. multies were good. but it came down to punches and barz of steel were better this time. RETURN THE FAVOr links are in the sig |
Voted For: Verbal Shoota
tuff battle here very close could go to any1 but VS u had a nice flow and some good lines but not enuff of delivery to make punches hit hard and BOS u had some punches but not hittin as well so both need to work on that and really kinda tie all the way but im gonna give his to VS cuz he had a betta flow and structure so my v/ verbal shoota but tuff though could go to any1 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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This was feedback posted for .Barz Of Steel.
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This was feedback posted for Verbal Shoota
checkin da pollz 4 diz...u got diz tephlon...EZ...
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Uppin this.........
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Voted For: Verbal Shoota
This faggot penis rubs... ya body'll end up scattered with debri in tubs After I "fear-factor" this queer bastard..........Make him "Eat the slugs" * OK WORDPLAY, PRETTY DECENT OPENER. This poser ain't never dump heat, he's a "Vegetarian" he "don't want beef" Shit, he could "mix his semen with sugar" dude still won't ever "cum sweet" PLAYED, BOTH OF EM... Dawg you always come the weakest, I got shit that'll cut ya breathin' Shit, "Buck" will "Get Shot"............................Like it was "Hunting Season" ** PRETTY DECENT NAMEPLAY. I'm a hooligan man, but how is this kid fooling with grams? When the only "coke" he's seen........................came in an "aluminum can"!! *** PLAYED CONCEP AGAIN.. This dude flows with legends?? How? When is flow is always thrown, rejected For "Always Having Weak Bars"...............Like "Bad Cell Phone Connections!!" NICE WRDPLAY, GOOD PUNCH. I son emcees, Teph, don't fuck with me, I run this beef............................. I'm like "Stricnine to your insides" It's no wonder "You Can't Stomach Me" GOOD FLOW AND PUNCH. Tephlon, you have no skill whatsoever, and you spittin flames is nonsense Because the last sweet bar you had.........................Was made of chocolate PLAYED. _____________________________________________ Barz of steel? shit..i got a blow torch that'll melt 'em like Plastic Only time you gettin applauds on the mic....is when you pass-it PLAYED... UNdestructable emcee?...I dont remember you sayin your Dyslexic? then again, read ya verse an it Shows!..like the ribbs on an anorexic OK WORDPLAY, CUDDA BEEN WORDED BETTER... I got this bitch pm'n me daily ''yo teph, what about that battle?!'' What about it?...Kid, I GOT YOU SHOOK!...like i'm playin witta Rattle PLAYED.. See, FAG...I peice my words like Lego Blocks, the wins come in Flocks Last time dude met-a-phor.............He tapped out from a ''Leg-Lock'' LOL, NICE PUNCH. killin this beef like livestock....have him in witness protection on a farm Low-life virgin...He aint never ''cuttin''...Unless you can count self-harm GOOD PUNCH... DOG!...Be cool, calm, collective...... whatever, just leave the salad un-tossed I never met any emcee before...who was eager as this whore...for a loss MEH... Fuckin herb, claimin your new? yet you know everythin bout RV... Joined may 05...low-life, you got more posts than MC's who signed in 03! GOOD PERSONAL AND PUNCH. You wannabe me........... or maybe ...do you just wanna join RAW...??? Wont talk so tough.. ........when i ram these Keys down ya throat an give you LockJaw.... PLAYED. _______________________________________________ WOW, BOTH CAME WEAK HERE WITH MAD PLAYED LINES, AND I HATE TO SAY IT, BUT TEPH GOT IT HANDS DOWN. BARZ, WE COOL AND EVERYTHING BUT YOU CAME WEAK HERE MAN, MOSTA YA ERSE HAD PLAYED CONCEPTS!! BUT ANYWAY...SPEND MORE TIME ON YA VERSE IN FUTURE OR SOMETHIN!! HE USED BETTER PERSONALS AND LESS PLAYED LINES. NO HATE BUT TEPH GOT IT. |
This was feedback posted for .Barz Of Steel.
nicccccccccccceeeee battle dawgs a tite 1
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Voted For: Verbal Shoota
good battle. it wuz close, but i liked verbal shoota's mo. both had good openers, Barz of steel? shit..i got a blow torch that'll melt 'em like Plastic Only time you gettin applauds on the mic....is when you pass-it This faggot penis rubs... ya body'll end up scattered with debri in tubs After I "fear-factor" this queer bastard..........Make him "Eat the slugs" * but shoota's made me laugh, lol. both a yall had sum nice punchez foreal. no hate barz, u had sum ill ass multies too. but i gotta go wif verbal shoota fo this 1 werd Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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An Barz dont be removing any more voters damn you, whats the polls now? like 7 votes for me? LOL.... I almost got enough too win this battle two times over...smh. |
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