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BiZzO 06-28-05 07:00 AM

.Murdz. vs Dizzee Rascal
 
Battle Rules:

10 - 24 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
no hate votez

G/L

Minimum posts to vote: 300

Check in by: 06-29-05 at 07:00 AM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

System 06-28-05 07:02 AM

Dizzee Rascal has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-28-05 07:02 AM.

System 06-28-05 07:18 AM

.Murdz. has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-28-05 07:18 AM.

Dizzee Rascal 06-28-05 10:15 AM

Personals = He from australia and his name and he crams his verse with filler of multis

Fucker why couldnt u give a pacific deadline???

Bitch complainin', as i spiral ur spine only way ur structure amazing (a-maze-in)
Murdz sonned in an awkward situation, like father explainin creation
My fist abrasive, where u like ancient food, poisning u just ruin ur crews/cruise
Stamp my opinions in ur iris so u can bring 'insightful views'
But whats new? Could show ur weak all day but dont have the time
Cus voters always spot murdz-errors/murderers, like sumo on sumo crime
Votes? nah, to u just an 'optical illusion' the only time u 'see projects'
History speaks for itself, australians are just fucking english rejects
Youve no respect so whats next knuckles crack ur head in abuse
Advice on multi's give them 'up', thatl be the 'height' of their use (think)
So duce game set, again ill repeat facts u aint any fucking respect
Take propellas to ur face they wont leave murdz scene like cocky suspects
So how ur slurs-put? doing-this-make-it-good? wait a minute halt
Bitch my knifes leave this sir-cut/circuit, cus its got too many volts/faults
So it seems a dis-grace like dodgy heart control u 'cant set the pace'
U aint got no 'buzz' where im number 1, with u 'light years' from 2nd place

BiZzO 06-28-05 10:16 PM

MuRdz Thinking YA PuncheS MatCh YA Name, SureLy Retarded
No Need to Recycle Ya Shots, Your Already Pure Garbage *
Never Dropped Any Heavy Shots Like Newbie Drinkers
Nerd Thinks He Thug Cuz His Suspenders Got Uzi Stickers
IF Ya Truly Sick With Words, Then I Must Vomit Glossaries
Plus If Ya Could Count, This Would Be Ya 1-2-3-4th Loss on RV **
Stop Talking About You Offing Me, Cuz Ya Just Too Soft & Sweet
& Don't Call Me To Watch Ya DVD Re-runs of Dawsons Creek
Bashing This Bitch Has Me Laughing at Ya Average Raps they Suk
Ya Punches More Crustaceous Than The Dinos From JurraSUC ***
Park My Fists Across Ya Heart & Start To Expose Your Lungs
Then Have Ya Beat Wit Tennis Rackets Just To Show You 'Love' ****
Ya Wouldn't Be Blowing Up If Ya Unlatched Large Grenades
Cuz Ya To Slow To Keep The Heat Up Like Retards on Parade
Never Take Charge Like Gay Bulls Who Just See Pink
Only Flames You Spit Were In a Tent With Three Rings
As I Keyed This I Told Your Moms, Don't Wait Up
Cuz She Like a Broken Chair...Always Some1 New Holdin Her Legs Up
So Get Out The Way Cuz A Hot Boy You'll Never Reach
Fact Is Its Only Wit Ya Boys That Ya Perform Fell-on-Knees *****

* .he recycled his name from the UK rapper.
** .this be his 4th loss on RV.
*** .JarraSUC - Jarrasic park, dinosaurs.
**** .Love is a score in tennis.
***** .Fell-on-Knees = felonys.

BiZzO 06-28-05 10:31 PM

comeon dont sleep on this ish! lets get some votes goin!!! BuMp BuMp BuMp!!!!

BiZzO 06-28-05 11:16 PM

IiGhT LeTs GeT sUm VoTeZ pOuRiN iN... BuMp BuMp BuMp It Up!

BiZzO 06-28-05 11:56 PM

comeon yo lets get some votes no sleepin dawg!!!!!!!!!! uppin dis ish lets go!

B.I.G. 06-29-05 01:06 AM

Voted For: .Murdz.

Murdz won this cuz:

had better structue, flow wuz a tie, creativity a tie, muli's came better from murdz, personals wuz a tie, opener - murdz, closing - tie, punches wuz a tie too, so the better verse wuz from murdz...
Dizzie - 8/10
Murdz - 10/10

V/ Murdz

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Dizzee Rascal 06-29-05 06:28 AM

O shit i wondered why some1 voted on this lmfao i forgot to blacklist this guy
Murdz all hate aside u gotta admit, this guys on too much of a noob level for voting but ill allow it anyway
uppin for some decent votes

BiZzO 06-29-05 08:04 AM

werd, werd, sup dizzie............................................ .............. gud battle

Dizzee Rascal 06-29-05 01:46 PM

Lets get some respected votes yooooooooooooooooooo

PrahJect 06-29-05 03:29 PM

This was feedback posted for Dizzee Rascal
 
gd luck fammmmmz......gd luck both of u......pollllz

BiZzO 06-29-05 09:17 PM

werd... VOTEZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ ZZZZZZ

BiZzO 06-30-05 03:19 AM

BuMp, BuMp, BuMp, BuMp.... Lets Get Some Votes In This HizzaE!!!!!

GKillaz05 06-30-05 03:29 AM

Voted For: .Murdz.

.Murdz. - Pretty good spit, your flow was on target, and you had good wordplay and followed up with hard punches.

Best Line - So Get Out The Way Cuz A Hot Boy You'll Never Reach
Fact Is Its Only Wit Ya Boys That Ya Perform Fell-on-Knees

Worst Line - Never Dropped Any Heavy Shots Like Newbie Drinkers
Nerd Thinks He Thug Cuz His Suspenders Got Uzi Stickers

Dizzee Rascal - iight spit, the flow was pretty solid, and you had a few good punches.

Best Line - So it seems a dis-grace like dodgy heart control u 'cant set the pace'
U aint got no 'buzz' where im number 1, with u 'light years' from 2nd place

Worst Line - So how ur slurs-put? doing-this-make-it-good? wait a minute halt
Bitch my knifes leave this sir-cut/circuit, cus its got too many volts/faults

OVERALL - This battle was really close, but I gave it to murdz cuz I liked his wordplay better. He had strong punches and a good flow. The other dude's punches were not that creative and he didnt really use any wordplay.

Vote - Murdz

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Dizzee Rascal 06-30-05 06:57 AM

Hmmm at sayin he has more wordplay than me ok........
swoooooooosh

BiZzO 06-30-05 07:04 AM

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BiZzO 07-01-05 02:00 AM

uppin BuMp BuMp, BuMp!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

BiZzO 07-01-05 06:25 AM

BuMp BuMp, BuMp!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

MiSk 07-01-05 11:42 AM

Voted For: .Murdz.

checkin polls.........................................

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Dizzee Rascal 07-01-05 12:03 PM

^^ omg y u attempt at swaying by cheking it in the vote box u fucking herb

BiZzO 07-01-05 07:39 PM

bitch, dont fuckin rag on ma team mate, just cause u was braggin how u gunna K.O me! fuckin dumass, you aint shit!

BiZzO 07-02-05 06:55 AM

what the fuck pussy, GKillaz05's vote was explained, u such a fuckin bitch!

Dizzee Rascal 07-02-05 12:07 PM

HAhaha
was it fuck explained

woteva man
Uppping not my fault ur Dr's gttin clocked

Germ 07-02-05 05:00 PM

Voted For: Dizzee Rascal

this was pretty close, i'd say....both had some shit ass lines, both had some pretty cool lines....and im cool with you both, so this is how i see it

murdz, you came with some nice stuff, but you didn't keep it consistent....like some lines were totally fillers, and really hurt the effectivness of your verse....had some real nice concepts, some you made real good, others just went to shit.....i feel if you tuned your wording a lil bit, changed some punches...youi coulda taken this, and that mom joke, just a waste of a bar, cause it was all on his mom, stupid man........close though, heres what i liked...

Park My Fists Across Ya Heart & Start To Expose Your Lungs
Then Have Ya Beat Wit Tennis Rackets Just To Show You 'Love

and opener was nice too, but set-up was blah...keep up man, not bad

dizzee, not bad man...i felt you kept it more consistent overall, staye on topic, didn't have as much fillers as murdz....and you were definately more creative....i enjoyed your verse more....although it didn't rhyme that well in text, the aussie line cracked me up, haha.....the murderer line was pretty coo too.....but overall, like i said, kept it more consistent, were more creative, had harder punches, and i enjoyed it more

however, it was still kinda close, good battle, keep up to both

v/dizzee

BiZzO 07-03-05 07:50 AM

get fucked idiot! this is bullshit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

BiZzO 07-03-05 07:35 PM

uppin.... lets get some votesssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss!

Dizzee Rascal 07-04-05 06:10 AM

Upping this dont complain since that was the 1st explained vote up in here and u know it was aswell

MyNamesGrafhYall 07-04-05 07:12 AM

This was feedback posted for Dizzee Rascal
 
Dizzee got diz EZ, Murdz verse was a bunch ov played out bullshit...

BiZzO 07-04-05 07:31 AM

fuck off bitch, u dont know what the fuck u talkin bout u fuckin fake ass nigga!

Daubs 07-04-05 07:35 AM

This was feedback posted for .Murdz.
 
Nice, polls.......................................

BiZzO 07-04-05 07:28 PM

werd, upppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn nnnnnnnnnnn

BiZzO 07-06-05 04:53 AM

uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn dissssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss

Dizzee Rascal 07-07-05 06:36 AM

Why aint this getting no votes despite u put the limit up to 300 posts
o
wait
nvm
swoooooooooooooooooosh

BiZzO 07-08-05 12:27 AM

voteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeee

Dizzee Rascal 07-12-05 06:41 AM

Will this win ever happen taking so fucking long lol

Dirty Nigga 07-14-05 06:00 PM

This was feedback posted for Dizzee Rascal
 
pollz............you got this fam'z......uppin....

Dizzee Rascal 07-31-05 10:24 AM

Wow
This takin fucking agez
uuuuppping.................

Germ 07-31-05 04:12 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by .Murdz.
get fucked idiot! this is bullshit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


i would fucking whore you.


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