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Clockwork vs NotoriousM
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4 Bars No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 07-16-06 at 12:29 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
NotoriousM has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-14-06 12:28 AM.
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Clockwork has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-15-06 01:46 PM.
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Dis dude say he Notorious but he new to the RV
I can get you well know for losin, make it your hobbie My flow is sicker than animals at the vet He sweatin now. So he put on some deodarant. He tryin to keep it a Secret This is your first performance...you actually showed up Your career like dead fireworks...you feel the light but you still wont blow up Like police officers dis bitch has no clue Im a felony, I go to jail just for murderin you |
When he comes to rappin' we gun' see how this clock works.../
Tried throwing one punchline at me and this nigga got hurt...// Time gun' stand still, As soon as I drop this Clock.../ Get OFF the Fucken grind, You ain't gun' last on ma Block...// Why the fuck you only battle newbs, You runnin' scared?.../ Is it cuz you ain't bringin' shit to this game, You unprepared...// Gun' cause my temper to flare, its ma nature im Notorious.../ Over before it started, and You know I'm gun' be Victorious...// |
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Voted For: Clockwork
Breakdown Clockwork Dis dude say he Notorious but he new to the RV I can get you well know for losin, make it your hobbie that was weak and not worded well My flow is sicker than animals at the vet He sweatin now. So he put on some deodarant. He tryin to keep it a Secret ...Worded bad and strecthed and the punch was weak.. This is your first performance...you actually showed up Your career like dead fireworks...you feel the light but you still wont blow up ....that was alright nothing specail../ Like police officers dis bitch has no clue Im a felony, I go to jail just for murderin you ...weak.... overall I think your verse wasnt all that strong you basically need to work on how you word your punchez and how long your lines are and your syllable count can be a hendurance to how people look at your verse so next time man work on those things and you will be straight Grillz When he comes to rappin' we gun' see how this clock works.../ Tried throwing one punchline at me and this nigga got hurt...// ...weak... Time gun' stand still, As soon as I drop this Clock.../ Get OFF the Fucken grind, You ain't gun' last on ma Block...// a little weak.. Why the fuck you only battle newbs, You runnin' scared?.../ Is it cuz you ain't bringin' shit to this game, You unprepared...// .. weak... Gun' cause my temper to flare, its ma nature im Notorious.../ Over before it started, and You know I'm gun' be Victorious...// [/b] Weak..[/b] Man no offense you had nice flow but you didnt throw not one punch that was noticable man i mean i see attempts but they was weak man its like you didnt even try .....you couldve had a thousand punches just off his name i mean I know a few man you need to work on throwin punchez and try to use some personals both of yall my vote goes to Clockwork battle wasnt all that great |
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Voted For: NotoriousM
Dis dude say he Notorious but he new to the RV I can get you well know for losin, make it your hobbie ^weak so nah My flow is sicker than animals at the vet He sweatin now. So he put on some deodarant. He tryin to keep it a Secret ^played This is your first performance...you actually showed up Your career like dead fireworks...you feel the light but you still wont blow up ^decent Like police officers dis bitch has no clue Im a felony, I go to jail just for murderin you ^nah vs. When he comes to rappin' we gun' see how this clock works.../ Tried throwing one punchline at me and this nigga got hurt...// ^nah Time gun' stand still, As soon as I drop this Clock.../ Get OFF the Fucken grind, You ain't gun' last on ma Block...// ^nah Why the fuck you only battle newbs, You runnin' scared?.../ Is it cuz you ain't bringin' shit to this game, You unprepared...// ^decent Gun' cause my temper to flare, its ma nature im Notorious.../ Over before it started, and You know I'm gun' be Victorious...// ^self glorify so nah weak battle but ima give it to grillz v/grillz |
Voted For: NotoriousM
Nice Battle punches: Both Personals: Grillz Struc: Grillz Flow: Grillz Well Both Veses Were Nice But Grillz Take This, Had More Flow And Struc And Better Personals |
Voted For: NotoriousM
..Grillz..: When he comes to rappin' we gun' see how this clock works.../ Tried throwing one punchline at me and this nigga got hurt...// 5/10 - Good Opener. Time gun' stand still, As soon as I drop this Clock.../ Get OFF the Fucken grind, You ain't gun' last on ma Block...// 3/10 - Meh. Why the fuck you only battle newbs, You runnin' scared?.../ Is it cuz you ain't bringin' shit to this game, You unprepared...// 4/10 - OK. Gun' cause my temper to flare, its ma nature im Notorious.../ Over before it started, and You know I'm gun' be Victorious...// 3/10 - ok Closer. 15/40 Clockwork: Dis dude say he Notorious but he new to the RV I can get you well know for losin, make it your hobbie 4/10 - OK Opener. My flow is sicker than animals at the vet He sweatin now. So he put on some deodarant. He tryin to keep it a Secret 2/10 - NO. This is your first performance...you actually showed up Your career like dead fireworks...you feel the light but you still wont blow up 3/10 - Flow was off. played. Like police officers dis bitch has no clue Im a felony, I go to jail just for murderin you 2/10 - Weak Closer. 11/40 WINNER: GRIlLZ |
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Voted For: NotoriousM
vote goes to grillz for having a more consistant verse..neither of you had any flow, good personals/punches..or anything...but grillz was consistantly better and he showed more of a knowledge of text battling. |
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Voted For: Clockwork
Dis dude say he Notorious but he new to the RV I can get you well know for losin, make it your hobbie PLAYED My flow is sicker than animals at the vet He sweatin now. So he put on some deodarant. He tryin to keep it a Secret DECENT LINE REALLY BUT WORDED POORLY This is your first performance...you actually showed up Your career like dead fireworks...you feel the light but you still wont blow up VERY PLAYED. I THINK THIS WAS MY 1ST PUNCH BACK IN 04' LOL. Like police officers dis bitch has no clue Im a felony, I go to jail just for murderin you WAK CLOSER. YOUR SHITS DECENT BUT YOU LACK CREATIVITY IN PUNCHES. YOUR STUCK IN THE 04 ERA MAN. TRY HARDER NEXT TIME. When he comes to rappin' we gun' see how this clock works.../ Tried throwing one punchline at me and this nigga got hurt...// WAK Time gun' stand still, As soon as I drop this Clock.../ Get OFF the Fucken grind, You ain't gun' last on ma Block...// SUPER WAK Why the fuck you only battle newbs, You runnin' scared?.../ Is it cuz you ain't bringin' shit to this game, You unprepared...// YOU DISSED YOUR SELF NOT HIM. WAK Gun' cause my temper to flare, its ma nature im Notorious.../ Over before it started, and You know I'm gun' be Victorious...// WAK AND SIMPLE YOUR JUST ALL OUT WAK AND UNCREATIVE PLUS THE ...// OFFENDS ME. THAT SHITS SSSSOOOO OLD SCHOOL IT AINT BEEN COOL SINCE RB AND RV WERE TRYING TO SPLIT UP. BASICALLY iM GIVING THIS BATTLE TO CLOCK WORK COZ HIS LINES WERE PLAYED BUT WEREN'T BAD. GRILLZ HAD WAK ASS SIMPLE LINES WITH NO PUNCHES AND EVEN ENDED UP DISSING HIMSELF WICH IS REALLY RETARDED. RTF V/CLOCKWORK PS. YOU BOTH NEED TO ELEVATE. |
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Voted For: Clockwork
I give this one to Clockwork, simply because he had better/harder hitting personals... No hate, this was a close battle, but Clockwork came wit it from start to finish. Notorios-You had a nice verse dawg, but it was mad dull...boring my nig. You wasted yo first couple bars on his name. You cant do that and expect to win every battle. Matter fact, name play is old, so you should never start with that at least put it in tha middle of your verse. But overall, I felt you had a nice verse, nice personals that hit in tha right places, it was just boring. And also, your opener tells alot about ur battle. You first line seemed like it was guna be coo, but you lost it when you was finishing tha bar. You verse was boring, which allowed me to never really get into it. No hate, just a honest vote. Clockwork-You had tha winning verse and took my vote, mainly because yo personals werent played, you dropped a personal and left it alone, and your verse wasnt dull. You had a nice opener that got me into your verse and you played it out throughout tha rest of tha verse. You didnt fall off. Nice shit, and nice verse. Overall-this was a real close battle, but it came down to tha little things that clockwork did better that took my vote. I was feeling his verse way more. No hate, just a honest vote..may tha best man take this battle. -1- |
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Voted For: Clockwork
This is your first performance...you actually showed up Your career like dead fireworks...you feel the light but you still wont blow up vs noting.... honestly that was the best bar in this battle.... other dude didnt have no real punches or noting flow was ok but he should of attacked more or hit harder or something hes verse was sub-par clockwork verse was also type average but had that 1 bar that made me pick him for trying harder an actully tossin a punch.... |
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Voted For: NotoriousM
the tie breaker goes to grillz...his verse was much better and came harder to me vote: Grillz |
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