poetic justice vs mr.goodbar
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u spittin first..in 30 mins from now wen u drop i get 30mins d/q..if u outside that time spit n gud luk |
Poetry in motion...I spit 12 bars, didnt know the limit, enjoy and good luck
Poetic bout to get his whole-neck-slit from the apple to the throats pit/ You wish you were "Poetic Justice", so you could be fuckin on "Pac's" dick/ Poetic Justice, wanna bust this? what's that? Your edits-boring em?/ Thats because this is the battle arena, not the Poetry forum/click here bitch Justice has been served, got his asskicked like a poetic skank/ Blasted your plastered casket underwater with no ceptic tank/ This Janet Jackson wannabe got stabbed in front of me through your scab to your scar/ Got you running in squared circles like you was your Avatar/ I'll split you apart like an unlit cigar like I'm making a joint/ Your six points under par, under my car like periods under exclamation points!/ Im Max Hardcore, Your my bitch gettin pissed & shit on with sick shit! You know you love it!/ You claim your hard but your soft like bisquit, now thats Poetic Justice/ |
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:bored: -- just kidding mang, just whenever you get it
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yo
this a "goodbar"..coz ur first "punch" left u incappable...
dropin ya gay shit here..jus opened ya ass up..left u rapeable ur sigs 2 big 4 ya..if ya brain woz chocolate it wouldnt fill an m&m try again...if i try stand close enough to him i can hear the ocean type of nigga that cut himself with a pen.....jus cos it say "bic" only cat that would be happy wit cancer cos he can then claim to be "sick" checked your sig...ya balls dropped..thats real great ya so u had sex.....thats gud...now all u need is a partner i finished wit this newb..smashin his teeth like obie trice.... ....u need re-incarnatn now.... anyone who told u to be urself..cudnt hve given u worse advice |
iight people Ive posted on like 6 of your battles and the favor hasn't been returned, take 2 minutes, read each MC then vote, dont kill this board with sleepers, gotta give to get know-wattta-mean - peace/love
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yo..hit this up wit an honest vote goodbar.......
n i`ll hit up 1 of ur battles.aiight http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133877 |
hit this up first though............
im 4-0 up...........hit it honestly........ http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132300 |
PUNCHLINES - POETIC
STRUCTURE - MR.G FLOW - POETIC METAZ - NEIDA PERSONALS - ? VOTE POETIC DROP A FAIR VOTE ON THESE LINKS COS WE ALL HATE VOTING ON PPLZ BATTLES N NO GETTIN ANY VOTES ON ANY OTHA BATTLE BACK IN A FAIR EXPLAINED VOTE ON THESE LINKS http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133370 http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...366#post1394366 |
yo this battle was aight
GoodBar what happen mang i saw the verse you dropped 'gainst DaTruth and you came hard I just didn't see ya this time your flow was shakey and structure off so it made it hard to get what you was rimin' I liked your line 'bout runnin in squared circles though. Poetic your cancer line was sick mang but your flow was off slightly structure was aight your bic line was a little off soundin don't know why but still you came with a betta verse mostly based on flow and that. Punches was aight for both and personals some was hittin some just wasn't but still Vote Justice. |
yo i vote poetic just because he did better than mr. douschbag lol or w/e his name is
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Yo, please vote on these battles...
Me vs RV Me vs Illiance Me vs BostonLyricist Mr.Goodbar took this with his creativity and wordplay, Poetic had some good punches and good verse structure but Mr.Goodbar just edged it VOTE - MR GOODBAR |
I dont know how yall coulda voted for Poetic. His verse was horrible. Nothin in there whatsoever that caught mah attention. Ocean and M&m dont rhyme and partner and "great ya" dont either. Mr. Goodbar had lines that acually rhymed together. Thats like the most important thing! If they dont rhyme then your just talking shit about them. Good bar had some tite bars like that exclamation point one. He had a structure I could follow pretty good too. I still dont know how you could have voted for Poetic. This battle was a landslide. Good bar took it.
Vote-Goodbar Vote on it: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133759 |
great-ya
part-na rhtmes...simple...just depends how u say it bitch m n m o-cean same as...... |
both had good versis but Mr G took that battle, PJ came nice but i still think MR.G had a ting or two above him
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Was pretty close, but I didn't like the fact that PJ had a few broken lines.. Both were hittin' fairly hard, both had decent flow and structure.. I think ya'll could've came a little harder in those areas.. Was hard to call, but I'ma give this one to Goodbar.. he was a little bit more consistant, and that little bit makes a huge difference in a close battle.. much respect to both of ya'll tho..
v/Mr. Goodbar one~ n' if ya don't mind returnin' the favor with an honest vote.. check the sig.. thanks |
Thought this was a nice battle..This how i seen it
Poetic bout to get his whole-neck-slit from the apple to the throats pit/ You wish you were "Poetic Justice", so you could be fuckin on "Pac's" dick/ Not really a good concept to go with..been done loads of times..4/10 Poetic Justice, wanna bust this? what's that? Your edits-boring em?/ Thats because this is the battle arena, not the Poetry forum/click here bitch Tha was ok personal..could of been presented much better though..5/10 Justice has been served, got his asskicked like a poetic skank/ Blasted your plastered casket underwater with no ceptic tank/ This was decent in my opnion..witty concept..liked this 7/10 This Janet Jackson wannabe got stabbed in front of me through your scab to your scar/ Got you running in squared circles like you was your Avatar/ Decent again like this to..punch hit hard 7/10 I'll split you apart like an unlit cigar like I'm making a joint/ Your six points under par, under my car like periods under exclamation points!/ Wasnt feeling that..2nd line of this bar was mad streched..punch was weak 4/10 Im Max Hardcore, Your my bitch gettin pissed & shit on with sick shit! You know you love it!/ You claim your hard but your soft like bisquit, now thats Poetic Justice/ Didnt even rhyme..set up was ok..but the punch let u down on this bar..3/10 There was flashes of good potential in this verse..but it was blowing hot and cold throughout!..Use of wordplay was ok but needed to come harder..some personals made me laugh..like the avatar punch..flow was aight till the last..vocab ok..structure fell off a couple times..overall an ok verse.. this a "goodbar"..coz ur first "punch" left u incappable... dropin ya gay shit here..jus opened ya ass up..left u rapeable Was ok..was a bit played to..wordplay was ok to..5/10 ur sigs 2 big 4 ya..if ya brain woz chocolate it wouldnt fill an m&m try again...if i try stand close enough to him i can hear the ocean ok again..flow off but still came off ok..5/10 type of nigga that cut himself with a pen.....jus cos it say "bic" only cat that would be happy wit cancer cos he can then claim to be "sick" Na..wasnt feeling that..concept of a deadly disease to call them selves sick is used often and i consider it played..3/10 checked your sig...ya balls dropped..thats real great ya so u had sex.....thats gud...now all u need is a partner set up was ok..let down by the unoriginal punch though..4/10 i finished wit this newb..smashin his teeth like obie trice.... ....u need re-incarnatn now.... anyone who told u to be urself..cudnt hve given u worse advice Ok..again wasnt great..littered with spelling mistakes though! 4.5/10 Was also an ok drop..i'll say the same for you as your opponent really..blowed hot and cold..potiental also..come to think of it this was an even par..battle similar mistakes as your opponent..structure falling off sumtimes and also flow did once or twice..typos aswell..best bar i though was the first one This was a very close battle..But i go with Goodbar..he had 2 decent personals in this which clinched it really..in every other department it was even v/ Good bar..no hate poetic..just the way i saw it..can u both plz return da favour in my battles..links providing underneath my sig..pz |
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