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Diplosive 12-23-04 01:16 PM

~Logic~ vs Diplosive
 
Battle Rules:

10 Lines
3-0 KO
4 votes to win
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-23-04 at 01:46 PM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

System 12-23-04 01:17 PM

Diplosive has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-23-04 01:17 PM.

System 12-23-04 01:21 PM

~Logic~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-23-04 01:21 PM.

Diplosive 12-23-04 02:37 PM

are u mad cus ya get no luv like dem faces in prison?-
its becus I keep ya eyes sharp to da blade like a lasiks incision-
ur verses aint even cool-but mine is hard fire-
and i think its time to get ya jaws fenced like barbed wire-
we goin 1 on 1-so why are u in the booth scary-
last time u had a dime on ur bed was from the tooth fairy-
even if u did have skill-oh you'll lose it-
cus ima get rid of u like F's to an honor roll student-
frontin like u got ice and u froze tha spot-
cus playin tetris is the only way u have control of blocks-

Meta4 12-23-04 02:52 PM

*Okay*

This dude *Suck* he's like used bubblegum guys *chewed up*//
*Newb Fuck*his record gonna be like a new Luda collabo *Srewed Up*//
Imm not Kells but fuck I can make *happy people* *diss on you*//
*Tsk Tsk to you*cuz tha only tyme u see gold is when I *Piss On you*//
*Man* it's an allure I come wit twin guns threw da door//
I told not to *recycle* he threw his pop can on tha floor//
Cuz shit dude when a battle it'a simple but hectic motive
Yo career would'nt *blow up* if I *dip* u in plastic expolsives//


thats a wrap

Meta4 12-23-04 02:54 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by ~Logic~
*Okay*

This dude *Suck* he's like used bubblegum guys *chewed up*//
*Newb Fuck*his record gonna be like a new Luda collabo *Srewed Up*//
Imm not Kells but fuck I can make *happy people* *diss on you*//
*Tsk Tsk to you*cuz tha only tyme u see gold is when I *Piss On you*//
*Man* it's an allure I come wit twin guns threw da door//
I told him not to *recycle* he threw his pop can on tha floor//
Cuz shit dude when a battle it'a simple but hectic motive
Yo career would'nt *blow up* if I *dip* u in plastic expolsives//


thats a wrap






typos damn uppinnn

Meta4 12-23-04 03:42 PM

upin .................................................. ..

50hater_killer 12-23-04 03:55 PM

Voted For: ~Logic~

I think he had better structure I think his word play was better little bit of harder punches and I think his closure was iight hit up on my links peace.

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Diplosive 12-24-04 12:59 AM

need more votes on this battle...........................uppin

C-Bo 12-24-04 01:08 PM

Voted For: Diplosive

Punches-Diplosive
Personals-Logic
Flow-Diplosive
Multies-Tie
Creativity-Diplosive

Explanation-I think Diplosive was a little more creative with his punches than Logic was..both came kinda played but Dip came out on top

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C-Bo 12-24-04 01:09 PM

return tha favor with a vote on one of my battles in my sig

Wisdom 12-24-04 02:38 PM

Voted For: Diplosive

D came wit str8 fire..........i liked almost every line...i think he had way more better punches

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Original .A.B. 12-24-04 02:58 PM

Voted For: Diplosive

diplosive on fiya kid whoiaaa he's tight i think he got this by Far


Punches; Dip
Rhymes Dip
Flow Both
Structure: Dip
Overall Dip
he gets my vote cause his personals and punches have more profession and lgic u needa work on ya stuff a little :thumbup:

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Diplosive 12-24-04 05:49 PM

uppin for some more votes

Meta4 12-24-04 06:04 PM

uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn keep da votez coming

Diplosive 12-24-04 11:35 PM

..............................uppin again for votes

Meta4 12-25-04 10:24 AM

uupinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn nn 4 real votez no freeposters

Meta4 12-25-04 06:55 PM

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Diplosive 12-26-04 12:45 AM

uppin this............................................

Meta4 12-26-04 12:19 PM

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Diplosive 12-27-04 12:46 PM

uppin again............................................. ...............

Chuck Low 12-27-04 01:10 PM

Voted For: Diplosive

THIS WAS A REAL GOOD AND CLOSE BATTLE BOTH OF YALL CAME RAW AS FUCK BUT I GOTTA GIVE IT TA DISPLOSIVE GOOD SHIT RETURN THA FAVOR
CHUCKLOW VS. DEATH

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Meta4 12-28-04 01:43 AM

upinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn im getin that vote deleted Chuck Low

Meta4 12-30-04 02:26 PM

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Kyleon 12-30-04 06:15 PM

This was feedback posted for Diplosive
 
checkin dem pollz fam....

Diplosive 01-02-05 03:03 PM

can we get some decent explained votes?...................

Diplosive 01-05-05 09:00 PM

up up up up up up and away!...uppin this shit for tha 100th time

Diplosive 01-07-05 05:04 PM

excuse me, UPPIN GOD DAMMIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...lol

Sik Wit It 02-05-05 04:58 PM

Voted For: ~Logic~

are u mad cus ya get no luv like dem faces in prison?-
its becus I keep ya eyes sharp to da blade like a lasiks incision-
weak opener, punch didn’t really land
ur verses aint even cool-but mine is hard fire-
and i think its time to get ya jaws fenced like barbed wire-
decent punch here
we goin 1 on 1-so why are u in the booth scary-
last time u had a dime on ur bed was from the tooth fairy-
uhhh…kinda weak here, wasn’t feelin it
even if u did have skill-oh you'll lose it-
cus ima get rid of u like F's to an honor roll student-
kinda decent here…
frontin like u got ice and u froze tha spot-
cus playin tetris is the only way u have control of blocks-
closer was opkay, not really hard hittin


This dude *Suck* he's like used bubblegum guys *chewed up*//
*Newb Fuck*his record gonna be like a new Luda collabo *Srewed Up*//
pretty dcent opener, punchwas aight
Imm not Kells but fuck I can make *happy people* *diss on you*//
*Tsk Tsk to you*cuz tha only tyme u see gold is when I *Piss On you*//
punch was okay…wasn’t really hard hittin
*Man* it's an allure I come wit twin guns threw da door//
I told not to *recycle* he threw his pop can on tha floor//
this punch was good, prolly ur best here
Cuz shit dude when a battle it'a simple but hectic motive
Yo career would'nt *blow up* if I *dip* u in plastic expolsives//
decent closer

Overall ~Logic~ took this one…punches were harder and the
Structure + vocab was good with it…but he came harder than
Dip though

M-Eazy 02-05-05 05:16 PM

Voted For: Diplosive

i think displosive took this with a better all around verse. he drops harder punches n mettas in this to make me give him tha win. ur structure was a lil off in this one, but its nuthin, i still think u got it...nice creativitie in this one, and a hard prepared drop.
logic-u had a good verse, but it was not interesting. i think if u wouldve came wit punches n mettas a lil harder, and didnt focus on ur multies so much, u prolly wouldve got tha win. multies is good, but u gotta get some good punches and personal disses in there...
overall-i think this was a good battle, but i think dispolsive came out on top...u got skillz dawg, check out tha NOk thread and drop a tryout sometime, we'll be happy to have u on tha roster...

plz return tha favor on battle link in sig, pick one, and plz make it xplained, cause i took my time to vote on this one and xplaine it....

~1~

Da_Throwdest 02-19-05 12:49 PM

Voted For: ~Logic~

this was an interesting battle 2 look at:
opener: logic
vocab: logic
structure: logic
multis: logic
closer: logic
logic won my vote cuz he came harder & hit wit more punches in this battle then dip did
also return the favor ight

Meta4 02-28-05 12:48 AM

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Red Stroke 02-28-05 12:50 AM

This was feedback posted for ~Logic~
 
Checking The Polls............................................. .

Meta4 03-02-05 06:37 PM

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