troublesome06 vs Past Tense
 

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Check in by: 11-19-06 at 02:44 PM

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Past Tense has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-16-06 02:46 PM.

troublesome06 has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-16-06 02:46 PM.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=4678044


this dude thinks i'm wack? he's telling fables
bitch looks like a butler aint u waitin tables
They say pick ur head up and work for respect
He couldn't because his jawlines connected to his chest
You aint a drug dealer u aint even dealt wit weed
is it just me or he look like the servent on mr. deeds
Told me my song was ill as fuck and my flow was hot
Said i'd school anyone u were on my cock
now i'm wack changed up ur mind on the double
your the reason i gotta to skip through mintue two of pick up trouble
Your whole games trash cant even ride the damn beat
Cuz your flows as constiant as stocks on wall street
it wouldn't take 7 days to comprehend that ur weak
I mean who the hell disses people on guitar beats
I heard Rude Shout Outs u wack and nobody doubtin
that shit sounded like a sample off brokeback mountain








http://img1.imagetitan.com/img1/1/35/155.jpg
^^where the fuck is his neck at??

http://img1.imagetitan.com/img1/1/35/troublesomelol.jpg
^^refer back to the bust faster then the dude on ur shirt.....

http://community.rapverse.com/showp...760&postcount=2

you said that i'm wack but then you go off and leave feed on my song like this.....come on dude lol your killing me on this shit!!!

lol damn man u look like that damn butler off of mister deeds


you fake ass bitch

U cant even talk about image....u aint even gotta neck dude

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=4683185


my emotion may be lackin a lil.....i never slept much last night kid had my ass up till 7 am....but itz wutever......
two beats here
lyrics for first beat


Yo past tense u dont need to be pissed……
Exept for tha fact that uve never seen your dick…..
Jelly donut eating bitch….u a crispy cream guy…….
Hows this guy gonna spit even his mics deep fried……..
So u werkin on ya image…but u still a fag…….
But yo Try this number 1 8 00-jenny craig…….
This fake gunit fan….on 50s dick like pubes……
An watch how pissy this pussie get after she gon loose…….
An I aint even gon take no shotz at cha face……
Cause u need a wonder bra to hold ya titties in place……
Ill set tha pace…..an u can follow along……
p.t couldn’t be higher level chillin wit cheech and chong….
But That aint my focus…..imma shoot from tha hip…….
Why does this white kid rap with a gangsta lisp……
Ill make u fall back…. to religion again……..
Cause god and rapverse are ya only friendz……….
An so im on ya nutz….cuz it was better than bucks..?
don’t flatter yourself kid….cause young buck sucks…
u contradict your self every time u speak……
an change ya style of rappin bout once a week……
u need to get a grip…an just be yourself man…….
So a fat kid….chewing onna thanksgiving ham……
drop alota punds….seek tha atkins diet……
Or grab sum lypo suction…com. On dude try it…..
id rearrange ya looks..but already look at cha dome….
Who knew they had cpus in tha mental home

SECOND BEAT LYRICS

Yeah im back…to smack attack an rap this shit up……
Get this skizoprherninc bitch up off of my nutz……
How he talking…like he walkin…it shit wit fat grace….
An when I say dis dude fat.. it aint with a p.h……
One minute of that day hes gonna cop sum heat……
Next day hes bible thumpin lookin for world peace…..
What tha fuck bitch…make up ya mind……
Press rewind in time….an try life one more time…..
Cause im sure u don’t know wut tha fuck u wanna be…..
Mr……gunit fan….reppin black wall street…..
An me being on your nutz…u got them firmly grasped…..
U ride ya dick so much..your nutz are up in your ass…..
U beggin kids on tha internet for fuckin attention…..
But yo mabe its tha fact of too much water retension…..
See his ass up on stage he thinking he rockin tha boat…..
White tee an dis kid is tha miclan man float….
forget about winnin man… yo.im aimin to kill…..
this manz head shaped like tha dude from king of tha hill….
U need to worrie bout cha self havin a heart attack…..
Gon need a triple by pass after one more big mac…..
Mr rap super star sayin u gotta record deal…..
But u still on rv asking kids for appeal….
this shit funyy so humour me for a second…..
Shit my flow even got this porpus two stepping….
U cant fuck wit me..kinda tha same wit cha bitch…..
Cause if she hop on top…she gon get sea sick…..

ROFL AT U SAYIN I NO SHOWED TWO DAYZ B4 DROP TIME LOL GET OFF YOUR NUTZ SON:THUMBUP:

uppin this shit for sum votes favours will be returned.........
an p.t my neck is very visabel u dumb fuck.......unlike your u fat fuck....an tha jawline shit??wack too......its easiely visabel....so there goes ya two only punches:laugh:
good job:thumbup:

lol dawg you dont have a jawline look at you your face looks all puckerd up and damn your the ugliest fucker on this site lol talkin about me being ugly lmfao dawg just no!!!......and you look like a damn butler

but i'm uppin for votes as well now lets see if one of your dick rides dont vote on this battle

rofl your soo wack.....even prahject said im better than yo ass.....hop off ya nut sack fam.....shit must need sum cream...and butler....why cause i got henny that u aint never seen....thats clever.....an dogg why do i give a fuck if some hammer hawk thinks im ugly....i happy u aint attracted to me faget....keep it that way......but just know iv fucked more fine bitches....than you ever will...........
stop talkin and watch me smoke ya g unit slash black wall street split personality ass

Lol Show Me Where Prahject Said Your Better Than Me Dawg U Sound Like You Got Cancer!!! Lmao Real Talk!! And If Your Fucking Hot Bitches Then Emo Kids Dont Wear Tight Pants!!! Lmao Dawg Just Face It You Aint Even Close To Me!! Now Stop Talkin Lets Let The Voters Decide Fag Boy

Voted For: troublesome06

Aight.....listening

Past Tense is up first. Intro was alright....nothing really special. Didn't really take away or add to the diss. Kinda waiting a little too long for the diss to start. Aight, here it comes. Lots of personals here. This is why I love battles filled with heavy beef. Not too much wordplay, just some straight raw fuck you type shit. Not bad....just wish the actual verse went for a little longer. It seemed like there was more talking than actual rappin.

Troublesome's next. Aight, first thing I noticed was the hiss in the quality. It was pretty annoying. You got a lot of personals in this shit too. Kinda beat the fat thing to death, but the second verse had more diverse punches. That king of the hill punch killed it.....lmao.

Aight...I thought it was pretty close to be honest, but Troublesome had a way longer diss which pretty much sealed the deal for him in my eyes. Definitely a close one though. If PT came with more, I might have had to call it a tie.....lol.

>>>>>>>>>>>PJ Lindsey..I don't know what's better, gettin laid or gettin paid, I just know I'ma gettin one, the other's getting away says:yeah u better than p.t anyway



^^^^yeah thats right fuck wad..............you over hypin ya self son sorry to tell ya

Voted For: troublesome06

hmmm...

to me troublesome gets this cos he had more lines and therefore more space for personals...his punches werent that hard but definitely more than the anount past tense did throw in his own...i didnt like troublesomes first beat and his hi's were too high,the second beat was cool instead,trouble some u didnt really needa talk about ur emotion b4 some1 hears ur stuff cos thats like a minus already,but imo both didnt have that 'battle' emotion...talk about flows?..well that was a tie cos non of both fell off tempo to my hearing..PT u wud have gotten this if only u dropped more bars..

...long story short..troublesome gets this cos re-listening/re-reading both lyrics he had more punches..thats all that makes him get this vote!

he has more punches? he had no personals on me what so ever.....

because my shit wasn't long enough? lol thats some bullshit votes

blah blah blah......................................i had no personals cant u read??
rofl........i knew u would do this rofl:laugh:
funny guy

lol its gonna go farther then this battle my peeps already calling you mister bean!! LOL and how you gonna talk about white kid with gangster lisp? your fuckin white how you gonna diss a white dude lol.....you had nothing on me......

rofl your soo bitch your boyz......u mean ya net buddies.....rofl.......your so cool..........
i believe u said beef will end aftere this.....now its far from over ahahahahaha contradictin ya self again moron
great job

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Voted For: troublesome06

ok i voted from the heart this time no hate on any of u guys


past tense- the intro for me was a time waster , seemed like u were just trying to pass the time so u could meet the time limit
and that was how it was at the end of it too , no hate
as for the lyrics concern they were good , they flowed good and were punching good man ,ill give u props on that,
as for lenthness it wasnt that long but really its about the time and wat u do with that. good job.beat was aight too.

troublesome- ok lets see here beat was koo, lyrics were funny in some places, lol at deep fried mic. lines were great man i did like them they flowed great and a lot of punches were said.
it was good man props.

ok this was a really good battle i liked it u guys were great . but there can only be one winner so i voted for troublesome based on that he had more punches,lines and flowed better.

vt. troublesome

NO HATE ANYONE GREAT BATTLE!!!!!!!!!

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Voted For: Past Tense

Past Tense got this with no problem.

Troublesome's didnt even have a battle type feeling. Alot of lame lines aswell "this man shaped like dude from king of the hill" wtf? and troublesome had alot of lines like that that was very corny and wack. He also lacked delivery which he even said himself. If you dont feel 100% confident in your verse why drop it? How you goin diss someone for changin their style up? thats a GOOD thing! duh. Bad verse from Troublsome, it was long as hell and not impressive at all.

Past Tense, immediately I feel like its a battle. lmao @ the jawlines connected to your chest line. Yeah, the picture clearly shows that. Delivery is decent. Past Tense is wins this on delivery alone
v/Past Tense.

^^^^^^^^stfu homo..................................go have sum tea faget............

aight upppin for some more votes!! LETS GET IT POPPIN!

Voted For: Past Tense

Listenin'....

Troublesome damn mayne ya vocals too high and the qual is hurting my ears dawg errr mayne lyrics are nice but yo fa real this quality rlly fucking wiht my ears..ill try keep listening..fat jokes is nice...some good personals here...cuda been done better...like..

u need to get a grip…an just be yourself man…….
So a fat kid….chewing onna thanksgiving ham……
drop alota punds….seek tha atkins diet……
Or grab sum lypo suction…com. On dude try it…..

nah mean?.....cuda been set up better nah mean....but had the personals..

I dont like the 2nd beat choice ya shit was nice tho...mr gunit fan repping black wall st.....ride ya dick line was hot....had some decent flow on there....however sumtimes packing too much in there..still nice sea sick line was nice..some hot lines personals good...quality made my ears like die lol...delivery good flow was not as good as I hoped..and cuda been delivered better and some lyrics set up better but still went pretty hard..7.3/10

now PT..

lol at ya intro...OH SNAP this beat is one of my favourites..aight nice choice at beat...

quality is nice....nice delivery made it more funny u tried humiliating dude as troublesome came raw underground style u came mixtape himilation type..lol at stocks at wall street mayne haha that was nice..wudnt take 7 days to comprehend that u weak..that's hot...

both came hard..troublesme raw shit..PT some real nice lines there ima hve to be real this one goes to PT in my opinion jus by a lil way I jus prefer the way he delivered..it was a nice battle tho

Voted For: troublesome06

Past Tense
Yo dude first thing I looked at ya lyrics and was like where the fuck are they? you shoulda wrote a bit more. Your intro was way to long as well, you should just went right into the rappin man and at least wrote another 16. Anyway you had some decent lines but you was more self glorified, it was kinda weird cause it seemed like you were feedin off the punchlines he used on you. But anyway decent job.

Troublesome:
You got this one hands down, Past Tense coulda made it more interesting but nah he didn't hardly try. You talk about nuts to much you fuckin squirel:thumbup: anyway your punches were there more and you took the effort to write a little bit more. I realized somin coo for my elevation in rap superstar as I went through ya lyrics but anyway nice job man you got my vote.

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hey paranoid i gotta question

how do you feed off a battle that you drop first in?

please explain to me on this?

and how was mine self glorified? i didn't say IM SO GREAT I GOT RIMES SPINNING..i think you need to learn how to vote

your officially a fucking retard

and forget about me dropping on that sogn

Voted For: Past Tense

checkin polls...too cool with pt to vote but just looking.0


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why are you flippin dude? holy man, I was just being honest. I meant you were being self glorified cuz you'd mention yourself like how eminem did in 8 Mile. how he uses his own personals against him it kinda sound like that. ut I guess this means you really weren't gonna finish that verse for me, your a chump.

I"M a chump? whos the one that said i was feeding on a verse when I dropped b4 him

Voted For: troublesome06

For an Overall Battle

When It Comes down 2 Lyrix and Disses

ima have to go with Trouble on this 1

this is a Battle....so disses are whats needed

its about who makes u laugh..and i laughed @ troubles shit

Past....u need 2 up ya batteling game fam

or leave it alone

v/Trouble

Voted For: troublesome06

Okay, you got talent man....you ripped him....flow was mad........outshined him deffinately in flow.....you sound professional, no d/r.....

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well forgive me for thinkin you did, cuz it sure sounded like it, regardless.

to ths top letz get this closed peoples...............

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Voted For: troublesome06

HAHAHAHHA...troublesome...that shit was fuckin sooo hot...i was crackin up so hard...

hahahahah

u burned him sooo hard with all the fat jokes...hahahahhaha