Da Problem Child vs MurDaH187
 

Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting


This guy has been talkin so much shyt, be he's trash. Its time to put him in his place!

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-13-09 at 04:55 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.


DQ'ed.. Godz Child & Da Problem Child

Da Problem Child has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-10-09 04:55 PM.

your mouth is much more confident than your lines, u think?
when you have proved that even with a pen you couldnt MurDah ink
when you dish out shyt to godz it doesn't help
so stop talking back to daddy, im 2 seconds from taking of my belt
you should masterbate your abillities to improve your skills
because even with your finger glued to the trigger, you couldnt kill
i have every right in the handbook to dog-u-son
this dumb fuck has 5 battles in the forums, losing all-but-one
face and understand that you lines are inconsistant and foresakin
time to home run this fake baller, like Bonds in the 8th-in

hurry up lame and get online so you can post your verse

MurDaH187 has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-10-09 11:12 PM.

be happy niggas got me fucked up and out of my battleing self
short'en these bars to show it really didnt need much to beat'em myself....
no punch just facts, remove hes teeth still made'em spit out hes gum rap
get the hunch that, like ex's hoes ya style rv dont really want that...
fuck ya name soppuse to mean?, here let me help u solve'em
you aint da problem child u just a child with a problem....
grow up to the point you show nuts, then i'll part them
if niggas love the beat an dont remember ur speech, guess in rap u was da problem....
and go ahead rap verse say it ^^^^ it was streched
but hes verse uglyer then the strech mark on funk flex.......

nigga that "solve the problem" shit is old, everybody keep sayin that.....be original

Did u notice when I said nigga got me outta my battle mood or u thought that was soppuse to be part of a hot ass bar???......... is u serious..

Voted For: Da Problem Child

Ok murdah 2 bars ending in problem-didnt like that.
Your stucture was 10 times better tho.Funk flex played.Not personal enough.lacked in hard punches.
Ok problem jus took it.
Daddy line laime.You had a personal yay!!
Slightly better verse but still weak.

Voted For: Da Problem Child

i caught murdah bitting "you aint da problem child u just a child with a problem" why bite jadakiss

link is http://www.metrolyrics.com/problem-...s-jadakiss.html

ooooh thats bad.......very bad, c'mon MurDaH!!!!!!

Voted For: MurDaH187

k this was nothing special lines werent dissing him just generic disses the child with a problem line was ya nicest in this battle i dont rate flow cuz its text and has none but structure was cool also

as for problems verse it was a problem basic as hellgeneric punches and not one lines stood you were trying to make shit fit that shouldnt overall this was a horrible battle both of you elevate no hate but if yall ever plan on stepping to a microphone yall have nuff work to do

vote murdah

vote removed for biting.....................................

bro you can't say my verse is weak when im better then you!

Voted For: Da Problem Child

be happy niggas got me fucked up and out of my battleing self
short'en these bars to show it really didnt need much to beat'em myself....
wasnt feelin it
no punch just facts, remove hes teeth still made'em spit out hes gum rap
get the hunch that, like ex's hoes ya style rv dont really want that...
nice flow... where the punch?
fuck ya name soppuse to mean?, here let me help u solve'em
you aint da problem child u just a child with a problem....
ehh simple name play but okay
grow up to the point you show nuts, then i'll part them
if niggas love the beat an dont remember ur speech, guess in rap u was da problem....
simple... same concept as above, dont use the same concept twice
and go ahead rap verse say it ^^^^ it was streched
but hes verse uglyer then the strech mark on funk flex.......
i was feelin the concept untill you came to the punch... i thought this line coulda been way better, this line has some potential


your mouth is much more confident than your lines, u think?
when you have proved that even with a pen you couldnt MurDah ink
simple decent nameplay
when you dish out shyt to godz it doesn't help
so stop talking back to daddy, im 2 seconds from taking of my belt
okay, kind of a played concept
you should masterbate your abillities to improve your skills
because even with your finger glued to the trigger, you couldnt kill
ehh
i have every right in the handbook to dog-u-son
this dumb fuck has 5 battles in the forums, losing all-but-one
coo personal
face and understand that you lines are inconsistant and foresakin
time to home run this fake baller, like Bonds in the 8th-in
not feelin it

This was a close battle but i gotta vote for Da problem for personals... murdah you gettin a lot better though. keep workin on it.

ewwwww biter? why would you bite something so popular.. you bound to get caught, you might as well bite somebody dope from ya town that no one knows about lol.

Better or not its 1-0 to me in battles son, if you win the one thats open now then its 1-1.

I told ya il battle u again soon since you think your so good......

Atm yes you are dropping better but iv been out for along time and even before that i was jus starting out so.

I spend my day making money not riting, rapping etc. I am a true rookie but u aint special son trust. :thumbup:

ya niggas serious i didnt try at all lololol....

that right therer proves what you dudes like in rv....

my strucutre better with a weak verse wtf lol....

no multis, no hard punch, no creativeness just a keystle....

and lets be serious hes name da problem child jadskiss said it in a song not a diss and i didnt even remember he said that but you right he did but it wasnt intentional biting i went off hes name....

dood, you're in love with multies... multies dont mean shit if you're just throwing any two words together to rhyme... that takes no skill. Especially in a battle, multies dont matter, If you got a dope punch and you can throw a mutlie behind it, then thats coo but it's really not a big deal. especially if you multi and the punch is wack... multies dont make your punch better.

Voted For: Da Problem Child

Nice battle.......unlike others but, Child got this one because he diplayed an effective battle verse and nailed Murdah on every exploit....besides one of those lines on MurDah's verse sounded familiar, but i'm not sure yet.....

V/Da Problem Child

dude, the only reason you won the first battle was because some one voted for you on accedent dummy, LOOK AND SEE:........

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...21&page=2&pp=15

actually jadakiss did say that in a diss he was dissing 50 cent you bite that shit so ban him please

Voted For: Da Problem Child

Da Problem Child

your mouth is much more confident than your lines, u think?
when you have proved that even with a pen you couldnt MurDah ink
(lol....funny, good consept)
when you dish out shyt to godz it doesn't help
so stop talking back to daddy, im 2 seconds from taking of my belt
(ok....)
you should masterbate your abillities to improve your skills
because even with your finger glued to the trigger, you couldnt kill
(could have been worded better)
i have every right in the handbook to dog-u-son
this dumb fuck has 5 battles in the forums, losing all-but-one
(funny....and also true..lol)
face and understand that you lines are inconsistant and foresakin
time to home run this fake baller, like Bonds in the 8th-in
(ok ending,,,,,,,)

MurDaH187

be happy niggas got me fucked up and out of my battleing self
short'en these bars to show it really didnt need much to beat'em myself....
(low class opener)
no punch just facts, remove hes teeth still made'em spit out hes gum rap
get the hunch that, like ex's hoes ya style rv dont really want that...
(ok...line)
fuck ya name soppuse to mean?, here let me help u solve'em
you aint da problem child u just a child with a problem....
(heard that before)
grow up to the point you show nuts, then i'll part them
if niggas love the beat an dont remember ur speech, guess in rap u was da problem....
(kind of homo but good)
and go ahead rap verse say it ^^^^ it was streched
but hes verse uglyer then the strech mark on funk flex.......
(weak closer)

DPC wins because hid verse was much more thought over than murdah's and most of his punches were decent

work harder MurDaH....no hate

V/DPC