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J. Luth 07-03-05 12:48 AM

NEW SPUL!!!! ft. Triple_N "Caught Up"
 
aiight some new shit I did wit triple.

I left feed on Triple_N and Senser's Dem Thangs, and SenseRs 20 Grand diss.

www.soundclick.com/spulakareckless

my quality sound fucked cuz I gotta fix shit, but it'll have to do.

aiight:

intro: Triple_N/SPuL
1st verse:SPuL
2nd verse: Trip
Outro: trip


word.....

Paranoid 07-03-05 01:00 AM

i really like the version by s.i n senser and this one really went hot who is this song normally by?
anyway spul you did a good job i can see elevation, good flow nice emotion good tone of the vocals everything was goin good and flowin good nice job.
triple you did somin a lot different then i would expected, but yea elevation comes once you try different things. good emotion nice flow nice smooth tone but i really can see you doin better on a beat like this.

L. Veracity 07-03-05 01:05 AM

diggin' this guys...both ya'll flow is on point, picked a good song Lloyd on the hook was nyce...never heard the original before...

but yeah, this is a hott lil' banger ya'll got here guys...do da damn thang...

Ltizzle 07-03-05 01:09 AM

hmmm...
personally ive never liked this beat, but w/e...
good job keeping the hook, it would've been a complete disaster had you or trip attempted to sing the hook...lmao

spul, your verse was tight
coo flow, nice lyrics
were you tallkin bout B then? :shoot: better not be...
lmao but nah nice verse yo

trip, you shit was hot as well
great flow, i loved your delivery on this shit too...shit was great
outro is kinda coo too
nice shit all around

both you did pretty good
shit wasnt AMAZING but it was good...
weerd :shoot:

Terumoto 07-03-05 01:13 AM

Spul: Niiiice. You just keep elevatin. Flow was on point, lyrics were cool. Everything was mint, you just gotta up your emotion a little. It wasnt bad, but you werent as into it as you should have been. That was the only flaw I heard.

triple: :shocked: FIRE. I'm real sorry but I cant even give constructive feed on ya shit. Just keep doing ya thing... You on a higher level than everyone on this site.

La Cosa Nostra 07-03-05 01:49 AM

Intro: Sounded nice and pro, the chick singing was a real nice edition..

First verse: Spul youve improved, this actually wasnt bad man.. Your flow is starting to sound nice and pro.. Propers for that man..

Triple-- sounds nice as usual, you def got a future in rap..

I actually dont have much critasism at all for this track, was feeling it what can I say..
Good work peeps, def above the regular standard for net emcees..

Key... 07-03-05 04:51 AM

I heard this one T sended to me on aim...when S wusnt online....

Spuly u came hella nice on this no joke am serious, flow was nice...

like i said to Triplenizzle

His voice fitted the beat, it was laid back...he wusnt hyper as his ussual well collab

DQ 07-03-05 07:06 AM

Nice remix right here, I'll break it down...

SPuL: you just keep on improving, you working hard to elevate and the work is definitely paying off cause anyone can notice how you gotten better. Feeling your flow, lyrics were good, delivery was cool for sure. Hope to see even more of this, looking forward to your next joint

Triple N: another solid verse by you, we gettin used to you dropping fire and ya just keep on going. Flow was nice, delivery was good, it's something different you tried here and it sure as hell worked out nicely. Keep it up man!

J. Luth 07-03-05 11:54 AM

aiight thanks to everyone for feed. appreciate it. props to that. And yea, I agree I could have upped the emotion. Prolly gonna redo my verse cuz the quality was a lil fucked up, and prolly improve emotion. but thanks to all for leavin' feed. up.......

J. Luth 07-03-05 02:39 PM

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Sylvester 07-03-05 03:46 PM

gangsta track....... :shoot: :D

Mr.Handicap 07-03-05 03:52 PM

Shit was coo' but fo real ya quality needs 2 be upped....

Dabatos 07-03-05 03:55 PM

..

spul: as always man you be gettin better by everysong you make.. ur quality aint as bad as you sed it?? well i heard this before it was even posted up.. and i actually listend to this song alot.. your voice is really going smooth with the beat.. and thats good.. that shows your using different delivery with everyone new song you make.. its good to have different delivery with everysong you make because it helps ppl not loose interest n elevates u even more..

Trip... well u know wut i think man lol.. but well theres really nothing to say to you to up your skills.. your already the best in the site.. all i could say for you is keep it up and keep surprising us with these amazing skillz of yours..

8/10

J. Luth 07-03-05 04:06 PM

^thanks appreciate feedback man. uppin'.............

Dabatos 07-03-05 04:19 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by SPuL aka Reckless
^thanks appreciate feedback man. uppin'.............


u still think i sent you the virus??? lol

J. Luth 07-03-05 04:20 PM

iunno yo. But I still have it, is all I kno :shoot:

Reach. 07-03-05 04:21 PM

Ofcourse it's Carson.
Ne Ways,Thanks for the Feed on mine. Here's yours. ;)

(Soundclick's Down Right Now)
Meanin, soon as its up Im hittin this up.-1

J. Luth 07-03-05 04:26 PM

lmao.... aiight that's coo. thanks.....

Reach. 07-03-05 05:10 PM

For Sum Reason My Labtop Works an my Desktop Dont.....

Anyways....
Here's what Jet Thinks.....;)

Kinda Gay. No offense love rap songs aint my thing.
Flow is really on key though.
I dont see any other problem's with it other than I dont like this kind of song.
I definitly like Spul's verse better.
Triple aint got the voice for this kinda shit. u kno?

Latta, -1

Daubs 07-03-05 05:18 PM

WOW, this was a dope collab.

Spul, best i heard from ya, good flow and a lot of emotion involved, trip, you know what i think of ya...was dope man...just ya voice too fuckin deep lmao!!

Ca'lam 07-03-05 07:10 PM

spully spul - yup! elevation :)... flow was good.. lyrics were straight.. you polishin ya shit up :)..


trip - :)... real niec smooth shit.. nice flow and lyrics were good .. really mellow feel.. good shit guys..

J. Luth 07-03-05 08:36 PM

lmao @ Jet. it's all good. thanks for feed. and thanks Daubs. And same to you Hoops. We gotta collab soon. word :cool: but uppin'.....

J. Luth 07-03-05 09:40 PM

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Dabatos 07-03-05 10:01 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by SPuL aka Reckless
iunno yo. But I still have it, is all I kno :shoot:

lol... freal?? damn man..

WICKEDCLOVVN 07-04-05 12:56 AM

aight this shit is fuckin dopeness.... i wasnt expecting that shit from spul but that was fuckin tight as shit... first verse was on point the whole time... good emotion, i liked the lyrics... good voice...

2nd verse... trip... of course shit was tight dawg as always... lyrics were dopeness...


aight spul shit was tight kid... i took the sig down right after ya verse cause your actualy pretty good... this was dopeness and i respect that shit so good looks...

9/10.

shit was HOTT

Denied Truth 07-04-05 01:12 AM


It sucked and so do you basterds....





:thumbup:

Naw lil brah and big dude ya'll dropped dat crack dis tyme very hot..both verses flowed well and Lil Bruh u movin on up wit it..i see ya pimpin...and big dude aka trip yu dropped very excellente lac alwayz...keep it movin
Church
Defyned Truth
Redemption Records

[.:D:.] 07-04-05 01:20 AM

Spul....ya vocals is way to low to me...flow is straight..sound like u got a lisp..lol..and y do u say ya name like dat...o well..

trip...ya joint is straight...voice is kinda deep tho..not like u can change that..lol...flow is on point...lyrics is straight too...emotion i can see where u tryna go wit the mellow joint..

skel 07-04-05 01:59 PM

both mcs shined in there own way. delivery could be improved on both ends though. but all in all this was good shit. keep it up.

J. Luth 07-04-05 02:36 PM

aiight thanks to everyone leavin' feed. And appreciate it wicked, means a lot comin' from someone who had beef wit me. lol But uppin' this.....

Dabatos 07-04-05 02:38 PM

*listens again*

*gets jealous*

nah j/k.. but i am listening to it agen lol

J. Luth 07-04-05 02:54 PM

^lol haha, vote it "hot" if you like it. we at #1,025 on the charts. :cool:

Dabatos 07-04-05 03:59 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by SPuL aka Reckless
^lol haha, vote it "hot" if you like it. we at #1,025 on the charts. :cool:

*Votes*

*Writes a better song*

J. Luth 07-04-05 09:33 PM

^lol word, uppin'... :cool:

WICKEDCLOVVN 07-04-05 11:40 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by SPuL aka Reckless
aiight thanks to everyone leavin' feed. And appreciate it wicked, means a lot comin' from someone who had beef wit me. lol But uppin' this.....


no doubt kid... gotta give credit where credit is due... u know....

J. Luth 07-05-05 09:20 AM

^yea, thanks, yo. stay up. And uppin' this shit......... vote "hot" if you like. 804 right now in charts. :shoot:

Daubs 07-05-05 09:21 AM

I voted hot :cool:

J. Luth 07-05-05 09:26 AM

^word :D and play the song for 1 minute atleast. :cool:

J. Luth 07-05-05 08:56 PM

upp for a lil more feed....

J. Luth 07-06-05 03:34 PM

word.............


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