Blacksmith__Vs.__`talic
 

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I`m quick to stomp on this fool.. have ya brain`s in-print
You lack talent
So i stay rantin`.. an leave ya buried with a 2 minute stint
Oh you didn`t.. did you? Blacksmith? The fuck is that? A diss?
Another net-whore
Your talent`s questioned more.. than the line above this
An Wacksmith improves to stay level with herb`s
Spare the nuisance
You make less sense.. like startin` ya verse with a blurb
See Admin`s are sure to delete ya script an bin it
The second error
I dissed you twice.. your first mistake was postin` it
I`ll warn ya now.. i`v heard it all before.. you got nothin` new
Cussin` me?
You should quote me.. to have a chance of typin` dope too.

aint done this in a minute so check it..
This guy is just dancing with bad vibes..regular casualty on front line, cos hes prone to bad rhymes.
im a heavy hitter so its best you play a ready quitter..your whole flows a tip of hollow needing heavy fillers.
Im a heavyweight while your just punching thin air...its obvious your transparent, your 'rhymes' just 'aint there'.
reaching up at me is the only time youll reach for the sky..he asked for a battle so hes 'Ready 2 Die'.damn hes 'Unbelivable'
this aitn business so dope rhymes you cant afford..cheap mug doesnt know short dicks 'cum short'.
your method dont kill me, its just your wackness,, your brain caps shattered looks like your spittin in practice
you punch cotton bags while i rush rotten fags...it was inevitable this limp dick was gonna end up last...

pz

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Blacksmith I really like your flow and your style. nice flow all together.
return the favor to: taken over vs. lyrical method (vote taken over)

vote= Blacksmith

Blacksmith you killed. nice floe 7 punches. your mult's were good too. you had anice floe. Casual you flowed alittle too casual. your verse looked a like ah newbe's. step it up.

vote=Blacksmith

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haha 2-0 ..good work phil thought u came real creative here fam
uppin for more votes i guess
holla bk

Fook you.

1-0.

An two wack votes.

:gfy:

I`m quick to stomp on this fool.. have ya brain`s in-print
You lack talent
So i stay rantin`.. an leave ya buried with a 2 minute stint
Good opening
Oh you didn`t.. did you? Blacksmith? The fuck is that? A diss?
Another net-whore
Your talent`s questioned more.. than the line above this
An Wacksmith improves to stay level with herb`s
Spare the nuisance
This is mediocre for a punch
You make less sense.. like startin` ya verse with a blurb
See Admin`s are sure to delete ya script an bin it
The second error
I dissed you twice.. your first mistake was postin` it
Good punch
I`ll warn ya now.. i`v heard it all before.. you got nothin` new
Cussin` me?
You should quote me.. to have a chance of typin` dope too
Aiight closer


aint done this in a minute so check it..
This guy is just dancing with bad vibes..regular casualty on front line, cos hes prone to bad rhymes.
Good opening
im a heavy hitter so its best you play a ready quitter..your whole flows a tip of hollow needing heavy fillers.
Ok punch
Im a heavyweight while your just punching thin air...its obvious your transparent, your 'rhymes' just 'aint there'.
Ha hah ha
reaching up at me is the only time youll reach for the sky..he asked for a battle so hes 'Ready 2 Die'.damn hes 'Unbelivable'
I like this one
this aitn business so dope rhymes you cant afford..cheap mug doesnt know short dicks 'cum short'.
Nice
your method dont kill me, its just your wackness,, your brain caps shattered looks like your spittin in practice
eh, this was kinda......
you punch cotton bags while i rush rotten fags...it was inevitable this limp dick was gonna end up last...
Need a better closing

Aiight I'll show ya how it goes
Casual-8.5
Blacksmith-9

Casual I really wasn't feeling your flow

Oh shit sorry. My voet don't count. It says I need 200 posts to vote. Ya'll gotta say that before You atrt the bettle. DAMN!

LoL@cas-u-hoe..i just realised you changed your name...still aint
gonna hide the fact your loosing mofucca haha..all luv playboy
keep the votes commin peeps

You`re weak Raymond.

Look at who`s voted for you an the quality of their breakdown.

The fuck outta here.

`Lyrical Method` and `taken over` have got the same IP`s.

I hope you haven`t made alias`.

An no it isn`t `all luv`.. watch ya chin Mandela.

I really liked Blacksmith's verse. He used nice multis and hard punches along with enough humor to keep me interested.

"Im a heavyweight while your just punching thin air...its obvious your transparent, your 'rhymes' just 'aint there'."

I particularly liked that line.

Casual had a unique flow - I had to read it twice to be able to say it correctly in my head. He had some good punches but i ust wasn't feelig them as much as Blacksmith's. I did like Casuals closer though:

"I dissed you twice.. your first mistake was postin` it
I`ll warn ya now.. i`v heard it all before.. you got nothin` new
Cussin` me?
You should quote me.. to have a chance of typin` dope too."

In the end though, I have to give it to blacksmith for his pucnhes.



http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123621

Is the only line that really stood out inya verse. Had some good ones but this was the best...

Casual, some of what you said was cool, I dont know if it was your format but it was hard to read.. no punches really stood out tho...
good battle

Ima have to go with Blacksmith on this one...

Pz
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Thats my vote anyway but my poll dont count cuz I aint got enough posts,

......Thats gay.... but good job to both
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blacksmith had better punches and the battle wuz pretty close but Blacksmith won with hiz better punchez.
Casual ok verse nothing real special no hard punchez if you work on that and add some multiez and stuff youll really see an increase in your win percentage.

Vote Blacksmith.

my vote doesnt count. .
sorry .

rofl @ illtalic getting no votes against some random herb. this is why i dont go in FL anymore

hey casual, its got to be said, that it was close but i ave to hand it to nelson man.

LoL@cas-u-hoe...
your lucky i aint done for murder yet
lets get some real votes then..if not close this
pz

yo cas, nelsons jus takin the piss get this over n done wit bro

Yo, Blackksmith got this all da way. Ill couldn't come close to them punches... Good job to both doe... Plz return da favor and vote on my battle?...

http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...581#post1286581

Thanx..

Oh yeah Blackk, I would DEFINITELY like to battle you sometime. Holla.

LOL....Blacksmith was hittin harder line to line......battle was ill tho'.......

black had better puchlines and flow......ill had juss wit which i wasnt feelin cuz it had no flow...work on your flow player....

vote= blacksmith

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Fuck you Kitchen. You couldn`t even post a verse.

`Excuse me.. wot`s a Spritzer?` = deek `ed. An fuck a flow. Punches win.

An fuck you weasel.

You wouldn`t know a punch if it hit ya. Bitch. Give your mum my best.

Nelson didn`t once insult me.

Who hasn`t heard `short dicks come short` before?!

It was weak. Faggot said so himself.

Blah.

:fgy:

Nice battle
black-everything was the same with the both of you
You did come harder with the punches though
some was hard only like a few was weak

casual-you had some nice stuff too but the both of you was
the same but he did come harder with the punches
nothing else I can really say is that the both was the saME
except for punches
v/blacksmith

Cas-u-hoe..dont feel bitter about the L..against me your use to it haha..
go back and watch 8 mile little rabbit

Oh my days.

You have MJ as your avatar.

`nuff said.

im a vote casual, i think he woz a touch elevated than blacksmith. blacksmith woz good, it woz a close battle but i think im a give to to casual by a touch. for one i liked his flow. ddnt really feel tha flow to blacksmiths verse. punches were even on both sides and so woz most of it. but to me it came down to flow in tha end and im a give it to casual

vote = casual

hit up ma battle wid n honest vote
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=125237

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Bump.

yo cas u mite as well close dis thread bro, no need for it no more, n where's dis tag team battle we supposed to be havin.............

Casual-Terrific Flow...Nice Punches...Structure Was Easy To Read....

Black-Good Flow....A few Punches....But I Couldnt Read Ya Rhymes Clearly

Casual Taked This Because Of His Structure And Punches

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2-1.

You seein` this Ray?

Deek `ed.

black
Flow 6/10
Rhymes 6/10
Structure 6/10
Punches 6/10
Humor 6/10

iLL
Flow 6/10
Rhymes 7/10
Structure 6/10
Punches 7/10
Humor 7/10

v/ iLLTaLiC

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um ok battle but not all dat Blacksmith got dis one doe he had betta punches den da otha cat it just sounded betta


v/Blacksmith
if u not in a crew check out lyrical legends
holla.

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punches cas:I`m quick to stomp on this fool.. have ya brain`s in-print
You lack talent
So i stay rantin`.. an leave ya buried with a 2 minute stint

metas cas:You should quote me.. to have a chance of typin` dope too.

personals cas:Oh you didn`t.. did you? Blacksmith? The fuck is that? A diss?
Another net-whore
Your talent`s questioned more.. than the line above this

funniness cas:I`ll warn ya now.. i`v heard it all before.. you got nothin` new
Cussin` me?
You should quote me.. to have a chance of typin` dope too.

structure cas: his wasnt stretched

overall i'm voting for casual for having wittiness in his punches


peep mine

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127406

Ga`dunk.

Great battle, both came out swinging hard.... Casual was talkin madd shit like Blacksmith was a b*tch, but Black came out and ripped it. Overall I think Black jus came better and wit more punches.

winner... Blacksmith

blacksmith won this by a close margin .casual came wit some heavy punches but i wasnt feelin half of yo lyrics.........good structure and punchlines......
V/blacksmith


i need votes in return..honest votes..no d/r or hatin'