80 Bars - SevenThird - Hottest Shit on RV no question.
 

This was my battle verse for Avalon, but since he no-showed I want some feedback... u can't download it, but peep the lo-fi and tell me my quality sucks.

www.soundclick.com/seventhird --- top track.

roflmao...no wonder he no showed.....this was the dopest battle verse i've heard here..from beginning to end it was fire...your multies, wordplay, delivery and flow on this track were unbeatable fam and i love how your voice switched up to make the track more enjoyable to listen to, since it was more then 7 minutes long..lol..great job, lookin forward to these albums comin out.1

I gotta point out this line...."Fucka Text, jus cuz u write a joke dat rhymes don't make u rappers"<------I was waiting for your OHHHHHHHH!!!!!LINE an dat was it to me, you had a nice blend of bragging an punches & personals.....usually I'd rather every line be a diss to opponent but no one got 7 mins worth of disses, so good job wit dat, only things bad was it was kinda mellow in beginning, lacking energy somewhat but den when u got to the coutdown part..ya know the 1!!2!!3!! part it really picked up...I didn't like the effect u put on the bridge tho, it was hollow sounding prolly shoulda dubbed it or change the settings on the effect to more dry instead of more wet, you had some nice personals in there an u had some clever punches...the lyricism was tight, I like the try-ing...ly-ing drags....those were nicely timed switch ups in ya flow....an you blended multies in ya flow without sacrificing lyricism, it was a really tight drop son..........def. would make alot of people no show, stay up.....1

Yeah.....I secretly peeped it when I saw you dropped in the battle. That shit was nice. I think you would have won just for spittin so much...lol. Anyway, good job man :thumbup:

thats my mans and dem YA HEARD seventheezy cuz its to fuckin easyyyyyy

This was coo.... a bit boring...but its a long battle verse thats expected... I like your voice....I dont like the beat....wow that part where u say "seven is the best" whatever effect u used.. dont do that again lol.... You have a cool energy on the track...You got mad potential... Some of the lyrics are real hard and then some just seem like some filler shit....Im feelin this, but ima have to cut this off.. not keepin my attention... but pretty good shit.. coulda cut the filler and made it stronger.. PZ

I agree this was dope, some real dope lyrics, lmao at the dreamteam diss on rated. i thought alot of this was dope, i like where your breaking down the rules. a little long, you could of condensed this and hit alot of cats real hard. dope drop 7/3, i was impressed. cut the effects on the first chorus, you dont need it.

i rapped to this beat before...so i like it


the flow was nice with the beat...

but, you advertised this as 80 bars, as if being 80 bars would make it dope.

80 bars makes it long...it was good...but this would have been just as good with 40 bars


lyrics were good


delivery fine...but I agree that some lyrics did not hold my attention


pretty good



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thanks for feedback... i recorded this shit right when I woke up, so I thought everyone would notice how its slow for the first minute or two then picks up- looks on the too wet part too, 1.

some pronounciation problems in this one but this was Fire. no doubt on that. Good vocab and multi's is on fire. maybe one of the dopest shit on RV but not TOP TOP. i think ive seen better but this is real nice! props

8.4/10

ight this shit was sick... nice flow and nice attack wow shit was hot... see this is why I dont battle... I do my own thing but you got somthing here for sure keep doing your thing you got skillz

lol i heard ir first you know i think its dope seven and ^^^^^^^funny he aint catch the line *i already killed a bowy now im upping the tragets* lol lil kids can be so dumb these days :nono:

:).... Rise Up....

-Listening

Beat is coo....punches come by too quick to catch alot of them...but still some of them are good....flow is good and delivery is decent...and your fucking crazy if you think Im going to listen to this whole thing....only thing you need to do is work on your ability to stress a punch to make it more legible and harder....nothing else....overall pretty good track...

Rating:
7.5/10

hmmm.....dopest audio head ive peeped on rv.....nice multis and punches n shit.....i was feelin it

Lord Have Mercy shit was crazy

....plays track....

quality wont that bad...but neway..on to da lyrics....u had a strong vocab on this shit...feelin ya lyrical style...ya flow wuz bananas on dis...beat was hard...nice punches...overall this wuz a pretty strong battle track...EarlY!

this was dope man.. no wonder he aint show na mean.... i told you how dope dope it was on aim.. but still showin love na mean.... track is hott like fresh pancakes

wen i herd the 1st 30 seconds i knew u was bringin tha pain...3 words i have for this is dis-gus-ting..flow wordplay multis and more...keep pimpin' these ho's he was smart ta no-show..even thjo it was a bitch move at least this an't bein wasted

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it was dope -_-

ahh i was gonna use that beat

simply fire...i dont see how you can say anything diff. make that shit MP3 so i can dl that shit, id bump that at one of my partys

LMAO... this is the first time I listened to this... but I couldn't show... I told you I'd try and do it by the time... but anyway on to this...


A. this'd been a ok diss track...

B. 80 bars... for a net battle..? You have waaaaaaaaaaay to much time on your hands...

C. the punches you actually used... on me... were blah... atleast get some personals... shit...

D. Good flow... that I was actually impressed by...

Basically... this is a decent diss track... not a good battle track... had you cut it down to lets say... a min and a half TOPS... since I'm not sure if you know... 99% of all real battles are that... on a stage and... 3 mins tops online... *shrugs shoulders* You'd have had a pretty good joint... but either way...




Av...

Um...DAYUM...this was fire seven when you get on aim holla :thumbup:

wow im really impressed seven..honestly i aint think you had it in you to come wit several different styles in one track..im lovin it..tight work son...if you try half of what you did on this track on all yall tracks you may have prominence and potential in this rap game be...keep'em comin be iight holla 1ne..

P.s. i got some new shit i've been droppin peep it when you can man..

yo...this is the first time i ever listened to ya shyt and this was straight fiya!!!! it's good to see that there really are some real emcees on this site... hey.. i may need some help with my quality if you ever get a chance.. i'm just starting audio... i know how to throw down with a mic but i ain't never actullay had to do my own tracks before... again.. good shyt yo... the best i've heard on here so far