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CarsonJetX2 'vs' The Disciple
Rules Good Luck Both |
Oh good....he said summin smart to me today.
I'll be glad to shut him up. ;) Link- http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=153078 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1649626 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1651093 |
^lol........check.......
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link........---->http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=153063
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Leave ya Neck Rattled Ya Verze was Garbage and you had no punches shows ya Chest's Fragile.....
Kid's got Audio and Text comfused Wack Muhfuckah pickin up a MIC ina Text Battle..... Shit Talkin at 46-15 Ima leave this Bitch Chalked..punches make ya ReFraze ya Verze like takin back ya Lip Talk..... Dancin to the Next Round ya Wack kid so take this L..Cause my punches will make this Crip Walk..... I Bless Geeks..Make ya Chest Bleed...And Im takin you outa round one...So i can just battle the Next Weak..... You Bring Less Heat then a Pawn as a Chess Peice...So Watch how i get Siminilla for eatin this fuckin Fresh Meat..... This battle is like Bush vs. Afghanistan, You bringing knifes while I’m Packing rockets..... Cuz Carson quick to Lose matches like Smokers with Holes in their pockets...... Its Been three hours since I took the call-to-blaze and no longer do I fall-to-haze..... Like wanting calendars near toilets...., you wont show,.... just stall-for-days..... |
^thats ten..........
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I could Lag lines, Rewind, And still your behind...
Your the reason RV look's like the Dolphin's FrontLine- Just leave, Trigga...your a waste of DNA stream's.. Everyone agree's, It's like you an Thuglife traded IP's- Bitch please, Don't "LOL" at me. We all can read your drop- Get half way down...turn around...all agree, and stop- Just like your Glocks....Desciple your "ghosted"... I'm still tryna figure the logic, In why you posted- If you figured win...You must have mixed your division... Cross-multiplied your thought's, an hoped sum dik'rider's listen |
The Disciple
Leave ya Neck Rattled Ya Verze was Garbage and you had no punches shows ya Chest's Fragile..... Kid's got Audio and Text comfused Wack Muhfuckah pickin up a MIC ina Text Battle..... HMM, SET UP SEEMED LIKE THIS WAS PREWRITTEN, PUNCH WAS WHACK Shit Talkin at 46-15 Ima leave this Bitch Chalked..punches make ya ReFraze ya Verze like takin back ya Lip Talk..... Dancin to the Next Round ya Wack kid so take this L..Cause my punches will make this Crip Walk..... OMG THIS IS STRECHED BARS AT ITS FINEST, WHACK PUNCH AGAIN I Bless Geeks..Make ya Chest Bleed...And Im takin you outa round one...So i can just battle the Next Weak..... You Bring Less Heat then a Pawn as a Chess Peice...So Watch how i get Siminilla for eatin this fuckin Fresh Meat..... STRECHED, BAD PUNCH This battle is like Bush vs. Afghanistan, You bringing knifes while I’m Packing rockets..... Cuz Carson quick to Lose matches like Smokers with Holes in their pockets...... EHH IT WAS IIGHT BUT NOT WORDED WELL, AND BASICALLY SIMPLE Its Been three hours since I took the call-to-blaze and no longer do I fall-to-haze..... Like wanting calendars near toilets...., you wont show,.... just stall-for-days..... THINK ABOUT IT AND IT DOESNT MAKE SENSE, SORRY BASICALLY, YOU WERE STRECHED, WITH BAD PUNCHES AND IT LOOKED PREWRITTEN SO THATS NOT LIKE COOL DUDE...LOL. BUT FOR REAL IVE SEEN MUCH BETTER CarsonJetX2 I could Lag lines, Rewind, And still your behind... Your the reason RV look's like the Dolphin's FrontLine- NAH I DNT LIKE VERY MUCH Just leave, Trigga...your a waste of DNA stream's.. Everyone agree's, It's like you an Thuglife traded IP's- LOL, PRETTY FUNNY, ALMOST BASIC BUT GOOD Bitch please, Don't "LOL" at me. We all can read your drop- Get half way down...turn around...all agree, and stop- LMAO!GOOD JOB, LIKE THE PUNCH Just like your Glocks....Desciple your "ghosted"... I'm still tryna figure the logic, In why you posted- PLAYD LINE FLIPPED IN A WAY TO SOUND NOT PLAYED :NONO: If you figured win...You must have mixed your division... Cross-multiplied your thought's, an hoped sum dik'rider's listen NAH NOT GOOD BASICALLY YOU STARTED GOOD AND FINISHD WHACK BUT YOURS HAD GOOD PUNCHS AND WASN'T STRECHED SO YOU WILL GET THE WIN AND I CAN TELL YOU WERENT EVEN TRYING OR WERE RUSHED V//CARSON |
^wtf...it wasn't prewritten...if it was i would of posted it up early...^lol.....uppin for more votes
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ok this battle was aight i guess
Disciple..........ure flow was ok barely, structure was wack man, wats with all the fuckin stretched lines, that really let ure verse down. but punches are where it counts and i think that u had some nice ones. even though they were stretched they still hit, i understood them all, and the closer that Socrates say makes no sense, well i got the "Stall-for-days" part to it and shit. OVERALL 6.5/10 Carson..........u didnt even try did you. i mean the flow and structure was aight, the punches though were weak man. ure opener was tight, but then u just fell off more and more as you got to the end. i dont know whether it was lack of trying or whether u were rushed, but this verse was pretty weak man from you, i seen u do a lot better. OVERALL 6/10 V/ - Disciple |
^^^^^REMOVE THIS VOTE NOW
He's an empire groupie....and we know how me an empire are.... REMOVE IT. -1 **One more thing. If this is how the tournaments run..... where u drop ur verse and then explain after sum one votes. I dont want a part of it. **Fix this or I just won't drop in round 2. MAKE RULES. |
^^^ i aint an Empire groupie at all.......................fuck u Vanilla Ice!!!
u know u didnt even try, i voted on disciple cuz his was better than ures. but in truth, both ures were weak. if u want my vote deleted cuz u think i am then fine but if it is then u can keep yo ass out of my battle bitch!!!! *DELETE THIS POST AFTER YOU READ IT* |
Im not gonna get fair votes in here.
Withdraw me. Arch....you shouldn't have even asked me to do this. I can't handle 15 yr olds with 4 yr old mentality's. I'm Out. |
This was a wack battle from both....Disiple....your structure was horrible, flow was bad, and your punches were decent at best. Didn't really see any personals. vocab was basic, u had a few multies but with lines that long I woulda figured that you'd have more, metas were weak not very creative an you based them on played concepts, your closer was a pure example of what I mean by metas based on played concepts....try to be more original an hard hitting wit the punches an you'll be ah'ight.
Carson u definitely didn't put a lot of effort into your verse, u coulda made it a lil more entertaining at least, cuz your opener was fair, I caught it an saw what u were reaching for but jus wasn't worded in a way to make it hit as hard as it could have. Following bar was funny as hell but again not as hard as it could be, 3rd bar was a monster an it topped his whole verse cuz he had nothing that stood out, the rest of ya verse was like first 2 bars kinda jus there nothing special...but that was a harsh punch an got u win in my opinion. Vote: Carson |
^okay.......2-1..uppin for more votes...
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I dont think we understand.
IM NOT PARTICIPATING IN THIS. I WILL NOT DROP IN ROUND TWO. UNLESS RULES ARE MADE. |
rules are made ass wipe....would you stop being a pussy and shut up...damn...uppin
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Listen. You need to stop worry'in bout me bein a pussy.
And learn to write. Thats the problem with you text heads. Too much, "Im hard shit" Not enough talent. Simply Elevate. Thats all I can say. And when people say your good? Don't take it to heart. Because your HORRIBLE. |
see thats the differince between me and you....people said that i didn't try....but....people say thats how you always SPIT....your fucking wack i would fucking merk the shit out of you hoe....you nothing...a fag...that thinking he could rap...get the fuck of this site.....uppin...
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Voted for CarsonJetX2.
Ok, for starters.. Deciple you had really stretched lines, fitted some good multies and vocab in there and I even noticed a tiny bit of wordplay. But your structure was really fucked because your lines were way too long. At times Id be reading a line quietly saying it and having to take a breath half way through it. Also you have to work on your punches, battles are all about the punchlines. Its all very well that something consistantly rhymes, but it needs to all lead up to something that the reader goes "huh" or "whoa".. Your lines seemed to just be consistantly dissing instead of throwing out dope punchlines. Basic way to say it, quality over quantity. Carson. Your verse was solid. You had decent punches through it, and at one point which i know of, you actually did the opisite to deciple and had a line that was too short to flow, usually when this happens with text, its good to put ~ symbols between your words because they make the reader read slower for some reason. But your structure was a lot better and you used punchlines that worked good. Overall, definatly wasnt the best battle Ive ever seen, but it definatly wasnt the worst. Vote- CarsonjetX2.... |
Leave ya Neck Rattled Ya Verze was Garbage and you had no punches shows ya Chest's Fragile.....
Kid's got Audio and Text comfused Wack Muhfuckah pickin up a MIC ina Text Battle..... ^ Hmmm, no real punch here Shit Talkin at 46-15 Ima leave this Bitch Chalked..punches make ya ReFraze ya Verze like takin back ya Lip Talk..... Dancin to the Next Round ya Wack kid so take this L..Cause my punches will make this Crip Walk..... ^ Crip lines = played. Not a very good punch at all I Bless Geeks..Make ya Chest Bleed...And Im takin you outa round one...So i can just battle the Next Weak..... You Bring Less Heat then a Pawn as a Chess Peice...So Watch how i get Siminilla for eatin this fuckin Fresh Meat..... ^ Mediocre wordplay, you mispelled salmonela, not even recognizable This battle is like Bush vs. Afghanistan, You bringing knifes while I’m Packing rockets..... Cuz Carson quick to Lose matches like Smokers with Holes in their pockets...... ^ Afghanistan line is retarded, smokers thing aight Its Been three hours since I took the call-to-blaze and no longer do I fall-to-haze..... Like wanting calendars near toilets...., you wont show,.... just stall-for-days..... ^ An okay closer I could Lag lines, Rewind, And still your behind... Your the reason RV look's like the Dolphin's FrontLine- ^ Aight NFL punch Just leave, Trigga...your a waste of DNA stream's.. Everyone agree's, It's like you an Thuglife traded IP's- ^ I don't get it, but I'm relatively new to RV Bitch please, Don't "LOL" at me. We all can read your drop- Get half way down...turn around...all agree, and stop- ^ Heh, an audio kind of punch, but good Just like your Glocks....Desciple your "ghosted"... I'm still tryna figure the logic, In why you posted- ^ Nice punch here If you figured win...You must have mixed your division... Cross-multiplied your thought's, an hoped sum dik'rider's listen ^ Nice closer Disciples verse wasn't that good, he had weak punches and nothin that made my jaw drop. He needs some elevation on his wordplay and metas. Carson's verse was more audio-oriented but he had much better and much stronger punches. Vote- Carson |
^okay if you don't understand the personals or punches then don't vote.....no hate just saying....
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Once AGAIN.
SHUT UP. If you can't handle it. Leave. Im not droppin in Round 2 anyways. Unless Arch does summin about people like u. |
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^ Hmmmmmmmmmm You are a moron I've probably been at this longer than you It's not a problem of understanding, it's a problem of them being horrible Stop talking immediatly. Do not vote on my battles |
The Disciple
Leave ya Neck Rattled Ya Verze was Garbage and you had no punches shows ya Chest's Fragile..... Kid's got Audio and Text comfused Wack Muhfuckah pickin up a MIC ina Text Battle..... *installs wider monitor*...now that i can see the end of your lines...i think perhaps you were a little stretched here... Shit Talkin at 46-15 Ima leave this Bitch Chalked..punches make ya ReFraze ya Verze like takin back ya Lip Talk..... Dancin to the Next Round ya Wack kid so take this L..Cause my punches will make this Crip Walk..... Lip talk?<--forced...the crip walk thing doesnt really make sense with the punch that you used it with... I Bless Geeks..Make ya Chest Bleed...And Im takin you outa round one...So i can just battle the Next Weak..... You Bring Less Heat then a Pawn as a Chess Peice...So Watch how i get Siminilla for eatin this fuckin Fresh Meat..... stretched but good wordplay with the "next weak"...that was nice...fresh meat thing was gay though... This battle is like Bush vs. Afghanistan, You bringing knifes while I’m Packing rockets..... Cuz Carson quick to Lose matches like Smokers with Holes in their pockets...... decent punch here...not worded that hard but pretty good... Its Been three hours since I took the call-to-blaze and no longer do I fall-to-haze..... Like wanting calendars near toilets...., you wont show,.... just stall-for-days..... you tried to make it work but it didnt...just too much of a stretch... streeeeeeeeeeeeeeched...ive seen you rip it up way better than this...this wasnt on your level... CarsonJetX2 I could Lag lines, Rewind, And still your behind... Your the reason RV look's like the Dolphin's FrontLine- setup was blah...good punch though...dolphins offensive line is fucking terrible... Just leave, Trigga...your a waste of DNA stream's.. Everyone agree's, It's like you an Thuglife traded IP's- rolls with your verse...nothing special but ok... Bitch please, Don't "LOL" at me. We all can read your drop- Get half way down...turn around...all agree, and stop- lmao... Just like your Glocks....Desciple your "ghosted"... I'm still tryna figure the logic, In why you posted- wasnt feelin this...it was filler and the flow was off... If you figured win...You must have mixed your division... Cross-multiplied your thought's, an hoped sum dik'rider's listen umm...decent with the math vibe but not too strong of a closer your verse wasnt that great but hey it was better than his... v/Carsonjet... |
You misunderstood that.
My plan is to win this. And then not drop in the 2nd round. Because he does not belong in this anyways. So.... Line by Line it. And if he happens to win in your eyes. Re-Vote him. |
Diciple- struc was wack.......your punches we're ok none that i really
liked but meh you had some at least. your overall flow was barley there some parts i was like wtf.... 6.0/10 Carson- i think you took this bc you had better punches and punches win battles and thats why you take this..even though some were meh you had better punches than disciple. 6.5/10 v/carson |
Ok stop bitching now.
im back and taking no shit. Don beef in the battle thread. Pz. |
Wait....
who's don? lmao. If it's trigga.... Ive beaten u on my alias. lmao. |
yo this wasnt a great battle, carson took this with better wordplay and better punches. disciple your shit was stretched and no real hard hitting punches. not your best carson, but good enough to take this.
vote- carson |
CarsonJetX2 your not funni man :rolleyes:
CarsonJetX2 wins and ill make sure no hate votes happen. |
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